Leorda wrote:

fix some, but I can't see the lyric because of this http://puu.sh/2jfH

Faust wrote:

Lightness doesn't need anything.

Grayness: Little IRC suggestion to increase the AR by 1 tick.

Darkness: Wow. This is a pretty smooth difficulty, it's got a very a nice constant going for it.

- 00:48:169 - For this section, I have a suggestion for rhythm:

SPOILER

- 00:58:545 - I personally like this section the most. Very nicely done.

- 01:45:011 - Uneven?

- 03:16:139 - Pretty good, it's subtle but it's fitting.
Good usage of slow running slider, followed by a note to finish off.
I'll say the same for the ending as well, the closure came and went pretty nicely, nothing abrupt and
nothing out of place.

Very solid in the sense that there aren't any issues technical-wise. The fluidity of the mapping is something I will commend.

Pretty good map, all the best for ranking.

Lilac wrote:

[Darkness]
00:23:357 (1,2) - Starting off with a jump like that seems a bit unfair too me but I dunno. It's depending on vocal
01:39:597 (1,2) - The silder's return arrows are hidden underneath the hit.png of 1 which makes this map unrankable Because I have no choice, I replace this into spinner

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Storyboard] ALL FIXED
The file Black Ball.png isnt used anywhere on the storyboard.
The image mini light.png goes over the Storyboard size restrictions: 640x480 in both directions.


[General]
Make your kiai consistent? Done
The final spinner is covering some SB action, take this in mind. I know the final spinner is covering some SB action, but it wouldn't hurt if you play CTB..... doooooonnnn't hate me!

[Darkness] ALL FIXED
01:20:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Can you make the curve align better with the slider curve like you do with 01:22:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8).
01:34:184 (5) - Hard to predict because the slider tick cant be seen at all, during gameplay.
01:42:304 (1) - This slider isnt perfectly circular.
02:18:394 (1) - Can you make this slider not have sharp edges?
02:56:289 (5) - New combo.

[Grayness] ALL FIXED
00:49:522 (2,3) - Move these down a bit so they dont touch the hp bar?

[Lightness] ALL FIXED
01:39:597 (4) - Please dont use kick sliders on the easiest difficulty.

Pretty nice map, call me back for a recheck when you've fixed

James2250 wrote:

*climbs out of gift box* How did I get here? Oh well, happy birthday!

-"Mini Light" in the folder shouldn't really need to go over the sb dimension limits in either direction. Either resize it to 800x600/1200x480 and scale it instead? Sakura corrected me, it should be ok in this case as a scrolling image

Lightness:
-Pretty high stats for the easiest difficulty, I recommend at least -1 HP/AR

All of the maps look good, call me back after fixes and I should be able to rank~

Faust wrote:

Congratulations.

Nice to see this ranked after a few weeks/months.

I still recall modding this.

osuplayer111 wrote:

Uh, I was going to check this later, but seems that I'm late.

Happy Birthday Leorda and congrats!

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

gratz Leorda ~

and...

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Hika wrote:

Happy birthday, just teach me how to stream 136BPM & we're cool. >u<

Jkjk, nice map though. c:

Nivalis wrote:

Ranked on birthday orz...
Grats Leo ~

Elly-chan wrote:

Yay Rumia o/ Happy B-day

Kite wrote:

Congratulations on the rank, sweet song :3
Happy birthday as well!

Tony wrote:

Congrats Leo and Happy Bday