Raging Bull wrote:

Hi!

General:
Put CherryCherry and Patchouli in tags please.
Um. Kinda bad mapset. You have 3 insane and 1 easy. Can you try to make Hard little easier? >.<

Normal:
02:02:057 (1) - Slider appears fast after spinner. Might be hard on normal. How about this?

03:17:281 (1) - Same as ^.

Hard: (More like insane o.o)
Lots of streams and jumps for a hard. Please make it easier or change normal to easy and map normal? Up to you.

03:05:416 (1) - Can you do another pattern? Previous slider blocks out half of this slider.

Or some other pattern you like ^^

03:12:580 (1) - ^
03:17:953 (1) - ^
03:25:117 (1) - ^

Cherry:
00:53:326 - Make this have 40% volume? Really hard to hear anything at this part.
Nothing else. Lots of streams :3

Patchouli:
01:48:849 (7) - Fix return arrow :3. Move bottom line up two times.

02:11:013 (2) - ^ But bottom line move 4 grid up
02:11:684 (3) - ^
03:08:774 (8) - ^ Move right line left 3 grid.
Nothing else. Jumpy map. :3

One streamy insane one jumpy insane >.<

Starred good luck!

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[General]

- Add easy difficulty your normal seems too hard for newbie players.
- 03:31:834 end last kiai section here.
- Map every difficulty till the end let every kind of players enjoy whole song.
- Set same duration and same count of kiai sections in ALL difficulties.
- Do Not use 100% volume of hitsounds, reduce every section with such volume at least by 10%
- Delete Countdown on all difficulties, or remove on all difficulties.

[Normal]

AR+1 or +2. OD +1 or +2.
I noticed tones of ugly and hard readable stack notes, with such low AR it's harder. And most of them looks really ugly (00:14:819 (1,2,3) - 00:16:610 (4,5,6) - etc)
00:31:386 (4) - looks so ugly. I highly suggest to remap this part 00:29:147 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
01:58:475 (1,2,3) - move this away from previos pattern to avoid ugly overlaps
03:01:386 (2,3,4,5) - do not use many kind rhythm patterns in one stacked place <_< Move 5 away
03:07:879 (4,1,2,3) - ^ same
01:28:028 (4) - spacing

Overall in my opinion difficulty is bad. Stacky spacing, too much stacked notes and odd overlaps, which are not easy to read.

[Hard]

HP +3, OD +2, AR+1

00:07:859 - this object is not snapped
00:11:237 (1,2) - 1 grid left to avoid ugly overlaps.
00:11:237 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - uh. ugly overlaps, i tried to make this pattern better, please take a look

240,72,11237,6,0,B|304:72|312:136,1,80
368,160,11684,2,0,B|344:198|301:191,1,80,0|2
232,152,12132,1,0
240,72,12356,2,0,B|168:72|144:120|144:184,1,160,0|0
176,248,13028,2,0,B|217:272|245:223,1,80
256,152,13475,1,0
256,152,13699,1,2

00:38:102 (1) - use something else instead of this spinner
00:55:789 (6,7,1) - http://puu.sh/2Rw7 seriously, how to read? Re-make this pattern, i already showed you an example, so fix yourself, it's your map.
01:15:714 - add a not with finish hitsound, feel empty here.
01:32:729 (1,2,3,4) - such antispacing might confuse players, because you used nearly same spacing in 1/4 streams
01:17:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - random mini jumps ._.
01:49:296 (2,1,1) - spacing, spam of new combo and ugly sliders. Fix everything. Such pattern also might be unrankable
01:56:460 (2,1,1) - ^
02:02:057 (1,1) - and so on
02:14:707 (1) - start 1/4 later
02:34:296 (4,1,2,3,4) - no one knows where are such slow sliders, they are unreadable 02:34:296 (4,1,2,3,4,3,4) - uh...
02:47:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - remake this pattern. with such low AR and stacked notes it plays and looks horrible ;_;
03:03:625 (1) - move away
03:05:416 (1) - this might be unrankable, i thought that it was short slider
And so on, please remove all slowdowns
03:29:931 (1) - start 1/4 later

I don't like this difficulty more then previous. Random slowdows,stacks and a bit crooked sliders made me think like that.

[Cherry's Insane]

HP + 3 or +4.
This difficulty is overmapped. Too much useless streams.
More then 3 unique slider speeds are in this difficulty
00:16:610 (1) - reduce spacing.
00:27:356 (6) - unexpected slowdown, please remove it.th
00:32:281 (4) - this slider might be hard to read, please do not overlap
00:38:550 (5) - more patterns, more fantasy, more creativity instead of boring repeat sliders.
00:54:222 (1) - use finish hitsound instead of whiste.
00:57:804 (1,2,3,4) - keep consistency.
00:57:804 (1,2,3,4,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:07:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why jumps?
01:33:849 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i understand it's cool pattern and you wanna have it on your difficulty, but this pattern should fit with rhythm. It's looks random
01:08:550 - add a note with finish hitsound.
01:46:498 (2) - delete
02:42:580 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - no comments.
03:35:416 (1) - nah
03:35:416 (1,1,1) - random spinners
04:45:997 - and here you became very lazy, your aim was just to finish difficulty. Well at least finish it here 04:43:475

Don't like this difficulty too, overmapped, and full of random patterns

[Patchouli's Insane]

00:19:296 (1,2,1,2) - reduce these jumps
00:30:938 (1,2,3,4) - unexpected slowdowns, please remove them
00:38:102 (1) - ^
00:30:938 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - reduce jumps
00:43:252 (2,3) - it's random and ridiculous, please do not use jumps if you can't use them. I will not point out jumps anymore. Same as slowdows
01:06:759 (1,1,2,3) - consistency-consistency

Tones of random jumps, random slowdows, I don't like this difficulty too.


Well, this map still needs more and more moddings, song is awesome, i like it. So i think i can star this.~