I very badly know English but i think all fixedEkaru wrote:
General:
-The spinner's skinning is off; the spinner's circle and its approach circle don't match up
-Check with a good timer to see if that second timing point is needed; you might just have a .98 or .02 BPM and don't need that second timing section.
Insane:
00:07:208 (4,6) - Make these sliders more similar to each other, for a more symmetrical effect
00:09:149 (7) - Making it flat horizontal would make it look more organized
00:11:266 (2) - Looks like it's going to collapse on its left side
00:18:502 (4,6) - Make these two look neater, please
00:21:325 (2,5) - See 07:208
00:30:325 (4) - In grid level 3, move this down 1 grid and right 1 grid. It'll look neater
00:58:031 (11) - Move the end away from (1), for neatness
01:16:403 (8) - Smooth this out, please
Hard:
00:07:208 (1,2) - This overlap is ugly
00:11:796 (6,7) - Line these up better; if it was a straighter line it would flow better
01:04:031 (4) - Make this smoother, please
Also, the second kiai section should be removed; it doesn't fit, and isn't on the other difficulties.
Normal:
Some nasty overlapping going on here, I'll just point out the worst offenders.
00:08:972 (1) - The overlap from (5)'s hitburst looks ugly
00:42:502 (1) - Finish, please
00:49:913 (1,2,3) - The hitburst from the earlier (4) overlaps this combo so badly
01:03:325 (4) - Partially overlaps (5), which doesn't look pretty
'K, star
Ps Bpm and offset determined pro.So...i don't want write to another timer