1. Most of the timing sections are doubled.
2. Some of the speed changes are too drastic and rather surprising... Try to even out the slider speeds, or at least make the speed changes less harsh.
3. I find the rhythms you used quite unintuitive. The difficulty left a weird feeling after playing it and while playing. I had to sightread the diff instead of trying to guess the rhythms through the song.
4. 00:24:724 (3) - Too close to previous object.
5. 00:25:924 (1) - This spinner is too short for an Easy.

1. Most of the timing sections are doubled.
2. I think you shouldn't stack notes under sliderends because it looks bad most of the time due to stacking, and in this particular case, the BPM changes very often, so the timing of the stacked notes will be very unclear.

1. I find this rather difficult for a Hard, but blame the BPM, I guess. You should just reduce AR by one tick imo.
2. 00:43:774 (1,3) - These sliders completely threw me off. I couldn't see the track well because of the fast AR and because they are right at the bottom of the map, so I didn't expect them to go up again, and it confused me.
3. 01:07:624 (4,1) - Very confusing jump because the spacing looks exactly like the 2/1 beats right before.
4. 01:10:024 (4,1) - Same.
5. 02:24:422 (4,1) - Same.
6. 02:26:822 (4,1) - Same.
7. 02:51:858 (3) - This slider's end is hidden under (1)'s track.

1. 00:26:524 (5,1,2) - I'd consider this is a spacing error... I threw me off every single time I played it (and you were watching =p)
2. 01:22:924 (3) - why this here D: it makes no sense D:
3. 01:41:431 (10) - This note is very surprising and hardly visible under the other beats
   --- LILAC PART ---
4. 01:52:906 (4,5,6) - Spacing issue ?
5. 01:53:806 (1,2,3,4) - This plays and looks extremely weird
6. 01:57:706 (1,2,3,4) - This stack after such fast streams is mean D:
   --- GARVEN PART ---
7. 02:46:608 (3) - this right when the singer goes "haarto ha" :3 clever
8. 03:01:614 (3) - Change its location to even out the spacing ?

Odaril wrote:

Easy

1. Most of the timing sections are doubled. What the hell... how did that happen?
2. Some of the speed changes are too drastic and rather surprising... Try to even out the slider speeds, or at least make the speed changes less harsh.
3. I find the rhythms you used quite unintuitive. The difficulty left a weird feeling after playing it and while playing. I had to sightread the diff instead of trying to guess the rhythms through the song. It's been awhile since I critically looked at this diff. I'll change things up. Might be a while though.
4. 00:24:724 (3) - Too close to previous object.
5. 00:25:924 (1) - This spinner is too short for an Easy. HAH both taken care of in one deft swoop.

Dis' Normal

1. Most of the timing sections are doubled. >///<
   
   Insane
   
   1. 00:26:524 (5,1,2) - I'd consider this is a spacing error... I threw me off every single time I played it (and you were watching =p) It's, uh, different from when you played before. I still like it the way it is though - and it's more tame than it was before.
   2. 01:22:924 (3) - why this here D: it makes no sense D: r-r-riku~ Bleh, you're the second to complain about it though, so just changed to a boring normal note.
   3. 01:41:431 (10) - This note is very surprising and hardly visible under the other beats I feel that it's fairly visible - especially with the contrasting combo colors.
   4. 02:46:608 (3) - this right when the singer goes "haarto ha" :3 clever I do it in the easy too, but it's a little more subtle. <3
   5. 03:01:614 (3) - Change its location to even out the spacing ? I've tried before, but it tends to not work out so well. What is there plays fairly well considering the spacing wonkiness though.

People are going to rage at the slider speeds. :3

No wai. Everyone loves speeeeeeeed

Odaril wrote:

Colin's Hard

1. I find this rather difficult for a Hard, but blame the BPM, I guess. You should just reduce AR by one tick imo. I tried, but I failed 3 times after I did that, AR7 makes there be too many notes at the same time and quite confusing.
2. 00:43:774 (1,3) - These sliders completely threw me off. I couldn't see the track well because of the fast AR and because they are right at the bottom of the map, so I didn't expect them to go up again, and it confused me. The track is clear enough and as a slider, you don't need to do the same moving with the ball, try stay your mouse at that area and prepare for the next note, that's what I want.
3. 01:07:624 (4,1) - Very confusing jump because the spacing looks exactly like the 2/1 beats right before. AR8 and the music provide a good support to this, the appearing time is quite different from the 2/1 notes.
4. 01:10:024 (4,1) - Same.
5. 02:24:422 (4,1) - Same.
6. 02:26:822 (4,1) - Same.
7. 02:51:858 (3) - This slider's end is hidden under (1)'s track. OK, now more like a slider.

xierbaliti wrote:

some suggestions here :3

-Insane-
01:35:206 (3,4) - move the two notes a bit left? like this?: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/114670 Ah, sure.
02:26:522 (4) - don't understand why a small jump here ._. It's a strong emphasis right before the band kicks in again with the くす. Felt good to me. D:
03:18:714 (5,6) - move the two notes a bit up? a example here: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/114678 Okay~

so crazy :cry:

Combo1 : 231,31,31
Combo2 : 67,73,148
Combo3 : 227,87,87
Combo4 : 224,205,139

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! Random modding ~

o/

General;
- Slider tick 2 for all diffs, makes the speed changes more easier to read It's up to the mappers - I liked mine at 2.
- Try these colors ?

Combo1 : 231,31,31
Combo2 : 67,73,148
Combo3 : 227,87,87
Combo4 : 224,205,139

They were a little too blending to me, sorry.

Easy;
- 00:44:374 (1,2,3) >> Move all to the previous white tick Nah
- 02:02:956 >> Aling with (3) I'm not sure what you mean. ;_;

Garven wrote:

lovhin456 wrote:

I'll throw kudosu if you can clarify the easy mod and I agree, or if a guest adds something in. Thanks!

SPOILER

1. Your .mp3 file has a bitrate of 320 kb/s. The maximum allowed is 192 kb/s. Get a new .mp3 file or fix the current one.

1. Tick rate 2 please.
2. Circle size +1 (?)

1. Tick rate 2 please.

GladiOol wrote:

[General]

1. Your .mp3 file has a bitrate of 320 kb/s. The maximum allowed is 192 kb/s. Get a new .mp3 file or fix the current one.

I'm getting a different value here. Windows gives some weird kbps readings when it's VBR.

SPOILER

[Insane]

00:23:524 (7) - Add a new combo here, because you've done it here 00:25:924 (1) also. k
00:27:274 (2) - Please increase the spacing on this one. I really, really expected (and would love to see) a jump on this one, but instead it's a sort of anti-jump. I dunno, but I don't like it. A jump would suit way better. Stacking it under (1) would also fit better imo. Hmm, toyed with the jump since this pattern was originally very different from this tamer iteration.
00:48:274 (1) - Remove new combo. Oops, that shouldn'ta been there. Did the next two as well.
00:48:574 (6) - Add new combo.
00:49:174 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:57:706 (1) - ^ I think I'll leave this one though.

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

suggestions here as well :3

Hard:
Rhytmn feels kinda weird at places at the beginning... Its like you were trying to follow 10 things at once.. I'm just trying to map the rhytmn in my brain :3
For example..
- 00:46:924 (1) - Start following the vocals here.. then jump to drums here 00:48:574 (6), then back to vocals here 00:49:324 (7).
- 01:01:024 (1) - Start following vocals.. 01:02:674 (4)/01:03:124 (6).. random rhytmn change...
Anways...
- 03:11:814 (6) - Dunno if its like this anywheres, but nazi hitsound find... whistle on the sliderslide oops, fixed

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi! Random modding ~

Colin's Hard;
- AR -1 no
- 00:03:877 (1,2,3,4) >> Spacing between (1,2) is not the same as (2,3) (3,4) done!

GladiOol wrote:

[Colin's Hard]

1. Tick rate 2 please. no.
2. Circle size +1 (?) no

00:17:222 (1) - Add a whistle on this note, because you did it here 00:14:697 (1) on the spinner also. k
02:57:114 (1) - Remove new combo. this is to make the 'し' look more specific.
03:17:514 (1) - This is really, REALLY ugly D: Please reshape it to something more appealing. Besides, such slider doesn't even fit with the music at that moment. no
03:22:322 (1) - Remove new combo. offset shift

416,332,113806,6,0,B|428:276|372:240,1,95,2|0
264,188,114106,2,0,B|252:244|308:280,1,95
388,156,114406,2,0,B|400:100|344:64,1,95,2|0
224,32,114706,2,0,B|212:88|268:124,1,95
312,16,115006,1,2
420,16,115156,2,0,B|496:88|471:210,2,190,2|2|4
136,64,116056,5,0
104,76,116131,1,0
84,104,116206,1,0
80,136,116281,1,0
96,168,116356,1,0
124,184,116431,1,0
156,180,116506,1,0
256,152,116656,1,0
256,152,116806,1,0
256,152,116956,1,0
360,196,117106,5,0
381,222,117181,1,0
383,256,117256,1,0
369,285,117331,1,0
338,304,117406,1,0
306,302,117481,1,0
281,282,117556,1,0
232,224,117706,2,0,B|188:256|204:316,2,95
484,236,118156,6,0,B|488:116|360:72,1,190,4|0
300,56,118606,2,0,B|244:32|176:64,1,95,2|0

James2250 wrote:

Colin's Hard:
-Try HP Drain +1 to make it greater than Normal? done!
00:47:974 (4,5,6) - move around so the repeat doesn't get hidden eh, I've never thought this to be a problem, cuz this slider is already really short, with this bpm, mostly spacing/approaching circle is used for reading, and 00:49:324 (7) is also on the direction which the final repeat goes. (another example: 00:53:224 (6) - we can't clearly read the reverse arrow, but we can hit it :P)