eldnl wrote:

I try to find any probem, but is perfect.

BounceBabe wrote:

eldnl wrote:

I try to find any probem, but is perfect.

YAY \o/

1. "Star2.png" exceeds the max size (52x50). Re-size it, please.
2. Storyboard: The pulses during the chorus are way too fast imo, consider adding a few more ms to the fade out effect.
3. Tags: "Trance" Music genres shouldn't be used as tags imo, I guess you can keep it if you reeaaally want it.

1. Some combo's length are way too long for [Easy] imo, 3 stanzas seems acceptable but 4 seems too much when the combo includes lots of circles and sliders. I'll point out some of them,mainly the ones that really need to split up:
2. 00:45:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
3. 00:53:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
4. 01:22:384 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
5. 01:29:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
6. 02:20:899 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)
   Nothing else worth pointing out~

1. 00:14:270 (1) - This circle would be way more intuitive here: 00:13:813 - than it's current position, consider moving it.
2. 00:15:185 (3) - I wouldn't suggest to silence this slider-ends. That kind of effect tend to be a bit disorienting, even more if it's used in diffs like this one, perhaps 50~60% with soft-override?
3. 00:46:270 (2) - Perhaps, NC here?, the kiai just started so there's clearly a musical change.
4. 01:44:327 - This part feels a bit weird while playing, probably because all the objects are on red ticks, I strongly suggest to don't leave circles by themselves because it might be a bit hard to hit them for [Normal] players. Some easy solutions:
5. 01:47:756 (1) - You should remove this circle and then add a repeat to the last slider.
6. 01:50:042 (4,5) - Perhaps, replace these ones with a slider? if you don't want to break the symmetry then you can easily copy the slider and paste it here: 01:52:099 (2,3) -
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7. 02:25:013 (1) - Perhaps, use an horizontal flip to improve the flow a bit?
8. 02:30:042 (1) - ^
9. 02:35:527 - The rhythm seems way more noticeable so I guess there's no problem here~
10. 02:35:527 (1,2) - These objects felt rather normal and unexpected here Try something more intuitive, perhaps something like this?

1. 00:04:441 (3,4) - (4) needs to be more spaced otherwise the spacing won't make sens and it'll kill the flow of the pattern.
2. 00:13:356 (2) - A bit nazi but blankets are not supposed to overlap with the other object, try to improve it a bit like this. I'll leave the code if you want to use it.
   

   124,56,13356,2,0,B|81:51|37:103|56:149,1,135,8|0

3. 00:15:184 (2) - Same for this one ^
   

   392,332,15185,2,0,B|428:332|460:308|472:268|460:236,1,135,8|0

4. 00:29:356 (3,4) - Increase the spacing of these objects so the spacing is even and easy to follow
5. 00:33:242 (2) - Is this jump really necessary? The same rhythm has played for the last patterns but you didn't use a jump for those. I strongly suggest to remove this jump, moving (1) around should be enough.
6. 01:28:327 (6,7,8) - These objects completely threw me off while playing. I didn't expect sudden 1/1, those objects are killing the flow, I suggest to either keep mapping the 1/2 rhythm or increase the spacing between those objects.
7. 01:35:870 (1,2,3,4) - An horizontal flip would increase the flow and avoid some objects getting hidden by hit-bursts, consider applying it.
8. 01:52:099 (3) - The second repeat arrow is completely covered by the previous hit-burst, that's considered unrankable. Try unstacking it or re-arranging the pattern. (This applies even if it's a kick slider)
9. 01:52:556 (4) - ^
10. 01:53:927 (3) - ^
11. 01:54:384 (4) - ^
12. 01:56:213 (5) - ^
13. 01:59:413 (3) - ^
14. 01:59:870 (4) - ^
15. 02:01:242 (3) - ^
16. 02:01:699 (4) - ^
17. 02:03:070 (2) - ^
    Am I overreacting D:? If you're not sure about this, feel free to ask around to some BATs. I've already asked Derek about many issues like this one before, I don't feel like bothering him again :<
18. 02:19:756 (3) - Why the sudden spacing decrease D:? Increase this spacing please.
19. 02:30:727 (3) - ^
20. 02:34:613 (3) - The slider-track is getting covered by the previous slider, this can be easily fixed by using an Horizontal Flip (CTRL+H), try it.
21. 02:48:784 (1) - This anti-jump/sudden-reduced-spacing felt quite unexpected, it throw me off a bit. Try using a Reverse Selection (CTRL+R) to fix this. (Don't forget to fix the spacing of the next objects)
22. 02:49:927 - I strongly suggest to make this diff end here, the song ends here. I see that you silenced the last slider-end, you did that because there aren't beats after that point (02:49:927) so there's no reason to place a slider-end there.

1. 00:06:042 (4) - This last objects is really hard to see while playing, perhaps modify the pattern a bit to make it more visible?
2. 01:09:813 (7) - Perhaps, start the next NC here? This is where the musical change happens.
3. 01:51:413 - Why is the spacing between the 1st and the 2nd stream wider than the one used between the 2nd and the 3rd stream? All of them are 1/4 apart so the spacing should be even, reduce the spacing between the 1st and the 2nd one please.
4. 02:46:727 (1) - This slider-body is right under the last one thus this object seems like a circle at first glance, I strongly suggest to move this somewhere else.

Gonzvlo wrote:

Sorry, I'm a bit late :<

[BounceBabe's Hard]

1. 00:04:441 (3,4) - (4) needs to be more spaced otherwise the spacing won't make sens and it'll kill the flow of the pattern.
2. 00:13:356 (2) - A bit nazi but blankets are not supposed to overlap with the other object, try to improve it a bit like this. I'll leave the code if you want to use it.
   

   124,56,13356,2,0,B|81:51|37:103|56:149,1,135,8|0

3. 00:15:184 (2) - Same for this one ^
   

   392,332,15185,2,0,B|428:332|460:308|472:268|460:236,1,135,8|0

4. 00:29:356 (3,4) - Increase the spacing of these objects so the spacing is even and easy to follow
5. 00:33:242 (2) - Is this jump really necessary? The same rhythm has played for the last patterns but you didn't use a jump for those. I strongly suggest to remove this jump, moving (1) around should be enough.
6. 01:28:327 (6,7,8) - These objects completely threw me off while playing. I didn't expect sudden 1/1, those objects are killing the flow, I suggest to either keep mapping the 1/2 rhythm or increase the spacing between those objects.
7. 01:35:870 (1,2,3,4) - An horizontal flip would increase the flow and avoid some objects getting hidden by hit-bursts, consider applying it.
8. 01:52:099 (3) - The second repeat arrow is completely covered by the previous hit-burst, that's considered unrankable. Try unstacking it or re-arranging the pattern. (This applies even if it's a kick slider)
9. 01:52:556 (4) - ^
10. 01:53:927 (3) - ^
11. 01:54:384 (4) - ^
12. 01:56:213 (5) - ^
13. 01:59:413 (3) - ^
14. 01:59:870 (4) - ^
15. 02:01:242 (3) - ^
16. 02:01:699 (4) - ^
17. 02:03:070 (2) - ^
    Am I overreacting D:? If you're not sure about this, feel free to ask around to some BATs. I've already asked Derek about many issues like this one before, I don't feel like bothering him again :<
18. 02:19:756 (3) - Why the sudden spacing decrease D:? Increase this spacing please. No >w<
19. 02:30:727 (3) - ^ ^
20. 02:34:613 (3) - The slider-track is getting covered by the previous slider, this can be easily fixed by using an Horizontal Flip (CTRL+H), try it.
21. 02:48:784 (1) - This anti-jump/sudden-reduced-spacing felt quite unexpected, it throw me off a bit. Try using a Reverse Selection (CTRL+R) to fix this. (Don't forget to fix the spacing of the next objects)
22. 02:49:927 - I strongly suggest to make this diff end here, the song ends here. I see that you silenced the last slider-end, you did that because there aren't beats after that point (02:49:927) so there's no reason to place a slider-end there Damned no.. >w< it destroys my mapping rythm.

1. Change the artist name to: Kat DeLuna Ft. Busta Rhymes ? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fhsHOlliExk
2. Add "pop" at the tags? o:
3. In your .osu file "Nice One" isn't being used, delete it.

1. The same as gonz's said, it needs more changes of new combo. But it's your decision .

1. 00:34:842 (4) - Add new combo, then 00:36:670 (1) - Remove new combo, and then 00:38:042 (4) - Add new combo. am I explaining? it should be like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:43:985 (1) - Remove this new combo and add new combo here: 00:46:270 (6).
3. 01:11:413 (4) - The same as in the first point.
4. 01:20:556 (1) - The same as in the second point.

1. 01:09:585 - Lower the volume up to 60% ?
2. 01:23:299 (6) - Clap.
3. 01:24:670 (4) - ^
4. 01:31:985 (4) - ^
5. 01:50:727 (2) - Add clap in the beginning.

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1. Don't forget to fix the title.
2. Seems clean~

1. I still think that the New Combo issue should be sorted out, I can try to do it without messing the 'colorhax' if you want.
2. 01:29:699 - The other choruses have a fountain here, why didn't you use in this one?

1. 01:29:699 - Same as [Easy], Why didn't you use a kiai fountain here?
2. 02:35:527 (X) - I see that you modified the pattern but I think that there's gotta be an object here to "introduce" the new rhythm you're following.

1. Is there any special reason to use Tick Rate: 0.5 here? If there's not, please use '1' like all the other diffs.
2. I'm a bit worried about the lack of spinners in this diff, it's always good to have at least one to sort out the scores. Try to add one if it's possible.
3. 01:29:242 (X) - Perhaps add a circle here to improve the flow? this feels a bit empty.
4. 01:29:699 - Same as [Easy] and [Normal], no kiai fountain here?
5. 01:58:042 - I suggest to use the same effect created in the other diffs using the soft-override.
6. 02:03:070 (2) - I see that the other repeat arrows are bit more visible now, I guess is enough. This is still unrankable, tho
7. Well you didn't follow some of my suggestions to improve the map, I guess it's about personal taste. The major problems are sorted out tho.

1. Same thing about the kiai, that's all

vivere wrote:

Change the artist name to: Kat DeLuna Ft. Busta Rhymes ?

Capitalize "L", please. While you're at it, you should use "ft." instead of "Ft."

Gonzvlo wrote:

While you're at it, you should use "ft." instead of "Ft."

Gonzvlo wrote:

Why the Tick Rate didn't change on [Hard]? I still don't see any reason to keep it at 0.5...

Oh well...Sorry if I took too long, Andrea. I wish you could have waited some more hours.
Good luck with the ranking! <3

James2250 wrote:

People are getting more annoyed with what nightcore maps are allowed to get away with in the PG 13+ area, after talking about it with several BATs/MATs everyone basically said the same thing, it probably isn't unrankable but it would be nicer if a more suitable background could be found to be on the safe side. See what you can do about quickly replacing your first background and the "Music" one if possible.

All the maps check out nicely so I should be able to rank if that gets sorted out

osuplayer111 wrote:

James2250 wrote:

People are getting more annoyed with what nightcore maps are allowed to get away with in the PG 13+ area, after talking about it with several BATs/MATs everyone basically said the same thing, it probably isn't unrankable but it would be nicer if a more suitable background could be found to be on the safe side. See what you can do about quickly replacing your first background and the "Music" one if possible.

All the maps check out nicely so I should be able to rank if that gets sorted out

Thanks for checking into the map but the BG is totally fine to my eyes and I'm not gonna changing it.

If I'll change it also the SB would need to be adjusted and I don't really feel like doing it since that BG isn't really unrankable, like you said.

Gomen >_<

osuplayer111 wrote:

James2250 wrote:

People are getting more annoyed with what nightcore maps are allowed to get away with in the PG 13+ area, after talking about it with several BATs/MATs everyone basically said the same thing, it probably isn't unrankable but it would be nicer if a more suitable background could be found to be on the safe side. See what you can do about quickly replacing your first background and the "Music" one if possible.

All the maps check out nicely so I should be able to rank if that gets sorted out

Thanks for checking into the map but the BG is totally fine to my eyes and I'm not gonna changing it.

If I'll change it also the SB would need to be adjusted and I don't really feel like doing it since that BG isn't really unrankable, like you said.

Gomen >_<