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Inspector K - Disconnected Hardkore (CanBlaster Remix)

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Snow Note
是嗎...其實我做normal diff的時侯都做得很辛苦的說...
一首難歌要把它變得容昜
真的不容昜阿~ :o
wmfchris
taiko mod

[general]
the preview time is not unique, please fix that.

-> failed, in the fast part (BPM 200+), 1/6 should not be put in the song while I don't hear 1/6s drums in those part.

00:07:157 - k
00:37:315 - just follow the drum sound, kkkddddkkkkkd would be weird
00:39:743 - d
00:59:743 - D--D--D-D to emphasize the lowered tone
01:02:029 - ^
01:17:029 - BPM 210, 1/3 = BPM 140 1/4, I don't think a finish would be acceptable there, espacially after a long stream.
01:24:001 - same here, maybe you can consider a short slider
01:24:572 - ^
01:50:140 - While the ending isn't really strong, you can try to increase the SV gradually to 2.0x instead of increasing suddenly.

6.5/10

(囧中,見圖勿O嘴,打圖被屈機 救命~~~
NatsumeRin
好图,现在要出去,留星等回来看。

Edit:

[Normal]
00:10:394 (1,2) - 我觉得Normal不需要下这个节奏,需要下的话,1换circle后面用折返slider可能好一点
00:20:394 (2) - 尾加clap?
00:46:172 (3) - ^
00:57:743 - 加音?

[Hard]
没啥可说的

[Taiko]
good enough.

[Insane]
00:03:596 (2,7) - 试试加whistle?
00:04:783 (11) - 第二个折返加whistle,和上面一起。
00:08:344 (2,3,4) - 主张都加上或者加3的。。。只有1和5有点单薄?
00:51:315 (3) - 个人建议是叠到4上
01:15:886 (1) - 这一串建议间距大一点曲折一点,主要是别让人当1/4打下去


很不错啊……继续加油
Garven
I blame Rin for showing this to me.

Really impressive mapping on the Insane, though I recommend that you line up all of your timing amongst ALL of your difficulties. Normal currently has different timings.
Topic Starter
Snow Note
謝謝NatsumeRin~! :)

SPOILER

NatsumeRin wrote:

好图,现在要出去,留星等回来看。

Edit:

[Normal]
00:10:394 (1,2) - 我觉得Normal不需要下这个节奏,需要下的话,1换circle后面用折返slider可能好一点<---OK
00:20:394 (2) - 尾加clap?<---OK
00:46:172 (3) - ^<---OK
00:57:743 - 加音?<---OK

[Hard]
没啥可说的

[Taiko]
good enough.

[Insane]
00:03:596 (2,7) - 试试加whistle?<---OK
00:04:783 (11) - 第二个折返加whistle,和上面一起。<---OK
00:08:344 (2,3,4) - 主张都加上或者加3的。。。只有1和5有点单薄?<---OK
00:51:315 (3) - 个人建议是叠到4上<---OK
01:15:886 (1) - 这一串建议间距大一点曲折一点,主要是别让人当1/4打下去<--做了1個大的1/2圓


很不错啊……继续加油<--THANK! :)

Also Thank you Garven for remind~
Verdisphena

wmfchris wrote:

taiko mod
Sorry but nothing changed, thanks
eldnl
[Normal]

00:01:329 (1) Remove new combo, isn't necessary.
00:08:668 (1) Move this slider below, because looks bad ...
00:12:984 (2) Add whistle in the middle.
00:31:601 (1) Remove new combo.
00:38:172 (1) ^ Same
00:39:315 (1) Very short spin. It's the easier difficulty, please remove.
00:40:743 (1) Very close to the spin.
01:06:743 (1) Very short spin again.
01:08:172 (1) Very close to the spin.
01:41:323 (1) Remove new combo.

[Hard]

00:38:188 (1,2) Make them symmetrical.
01:25:159 (1) I'm not sure of this spin.
01:54:058 (1) Remove finish.

[Insane]

01:00:743 (1) Remove new combo.
01:07:601 (1) ^
01:17:029 (1) ^
01:54:058 (1) Remove finish.


Really good job ! Star. :)
Topic Starter
Snow Note
Thank you eldnl for mod! :)

eldnl wrote:

[Normal]

00:01:329 (1) Remove new combo, isn't necessary.<--OK
00:08:668 (1) Move this slider below, because looks bad ...<--OK
00:12:984 (2) Add whistle in the middle.<--OK
00:31:601 (1) Remove new combo.<--OK
00:38:172 (1) ^ Same<--OK
00:39:315 (1) Very short spin. It's the easier difficulty, please remove.<--OK
00:40:743 (1) Very close to the spin.<--OK
01:06:743 (1) Very short spin again.<--OK
01:08:172 (1) Very close to the spin.<--OK
01:41:323 (1) Remove new combo.<--OK

[Hard]

00:38:188 (1,2) Make them symmetrical.<--OK
01:25:159 (1) I'm not sure of this spin.
01:54:058 (1) Remove finish.<--OK

[Insane]

01:00:743 (1) Remove new combo.<--Something chenged
01:07:601 (1) ^<--Something chenged
01:17:029 (1) ^ <--Something chenged
01:54:058 (1) Remove finish.<--OK


Really good job ! Star. :)
Leorda
NI HAO, sorry for taking so long

General
* I have 2 OSB in your mapset, remove them all
* Artist : Inspecktor K remixed by CanBlaster
* BPM : 300 | Offset 77.601 <- Remove this timing points, since this timing points is place at breaks (I am not sure if this useless......)

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Normal

* Try use Approach Rate +1, if you see the middle of song, you'll see the song going to fast
*Make sure the slider trace is visible, hidden slider trace are hard to read for beginners (e.g. 00:01:329 (2))
*Since this song is too fast, try avoiding the object that place in red ticks. Otherwise, beginners would confuse while gameplay. I can't find something wrong......

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Hard

* Use Approach Rate +1? The middle of song is fast, so increase it (maybe)

01:15:886 (1,2,3,4) - Pretty confusing for this..... (suggestion)
01:22:858 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:24:001 (1) - ^
01:24:572 (1) - ^

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Insane
* As far as I know, overmapped this diff is not allowed and it's unrankable, because some players are difficult to make Full Combo for this diff. I suggest you to remap it. Otherwise, I guess this map is for approval (I am pretty not sure). That's all I can see

------------------------------------------------------------------------

don't hate me >.<
Topic Starter
Snow Note
Thank you Leo for Mod~

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO, sorry for taking so long

General
* I have 2 OSB in your mapset, remove them all<--Ok
* Artist : Inspecktor K remixed by CanBlaster<--is "Inspector K remixed by CanBlaster"
* BPM : 300 | Offset 77.601 <- Remove this timing points, since this timing points is place at breaks (I am not sure if this useless......)<--Ok,Removed

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Normal

* Try use Approach Rate +1, if you see the middle of song, you'll see the song going to fast <--AR+1 will be too hard for noob(?)...I think
*Make sure the slider trace is visible, hidden slider trace are hard to read for beginners (e.g. 00:01:329 (2))<--This is visible for now
*Since this song is too fast, try avoiding the object that place in red ticks. Otherwise, beginners would confuse while gameplay. I can't find something wrong......

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Hard

* Use Approach Rate +1? The middle of song is fast, so increase it (maybe)<--Ok

01:15:886 (1,2,3,4) - Pretty confusing for this..... (suggestion)<--This is Okay for now
01:22:858 (1) - Remove new combo?<--ok
01:24:001 (1) - ^<--ok
01:24:572 (1) - ^<--ok
------------------------------------------------------------------------

Insane
* As far as I know, overmapped this diff is not allowed and it's unrankable, because some players are difficult to make Full Combo for this diff. I suggest you to remap it. Otherwise, I guess this map is for approval (I am pretty not sure). That's all I can see
(I Think this is not overmapped,This diff should be is difficulty,This problem need MAT/BAT to Think.)
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don't hate me >.<
No,I won't hate you. 8-)
Curisu
mod
[NM]
00:53:458 (3) - 延后1/2
01:12:172 - whistle?
01:23:715 (1) - 移前一拍

[HD]
00:51:886 - whistle
00:52:315 - ^
00:52:743 - ^
00:53:101 - ^
00:53:601 - ^
00:53:886 - ^
01:15:315 - ^
01:15:886 - ^
01:16:172 - ^
01:16:458 - ^
01:16:743 - ^
01:17:029 (5) - only finish

[IS]
00:19:273 - whistle?
01:00:886 - remove new combo
01:21:143 (1) - vol-15
最后爆发段好猛..

shoot
Topic Starter
Snow Note
謝謝你的mod和星~ :D

yangzd88 wrote:

mod
[NM]
00:53:458 (3) - 延后1/2<---OK
01:12:172 - whistle?
01:23:715 (1) - 移前一拍

[HD]
00:51:886 - whistle
00:52:315 - ^
00:52:743 - ^
00:53:101 - ^
00:53:601 - ^
00:53:886 - ^
01:15:315 - ^
01:15:886 - ^
01:16:172 - ^
01:16:458 - ^
01:16:743 - ^
01:17:029 (5) - only finish<---OK

[IS]
00:19:273 - whistle?
01:00:886 - remove new combo
01:21:143 (1) - vol-15<---OK
最后爆发段好猛.

shoot
Hyguys
LOL
LOL
LOL
LOL
Mod.
Normal
00:05:646 (1) - Not enough time after spinner
00:23:138 (3) - Move control point to x349 y151
00:46:172 (3) - Remove clap at end
01:50:140 (1) - Remove NC

Hard
-1AR
01:05:029 (1) - Remove NC
01:09:315 (1) - ^

Insane
Nothing

LOL
Topic Starter
Snow Note
LOL,Thank you for mod...

All Fixed
Shiki
Hi~ Let's go!

[Normal]
Fine, imo

[Hard]
00:18:898 (1,2) - 这两个的边缘有些重叠,把他们分开
00:38:743 (2) - 复制(1)然后ctrl+h
00:53:458 (3,4) - (3)的末尾whistle, (4)的头尾whistle
01:43:650 (1,2) - 头加whistle?
01:45:609 (1,2) - ^
01:47:568 (1,2) - ^
01:49:650 (1,2) - ^

[Insane]
00:53:601 (1,3) - 加whistle?
01:42:670 (2) - 头部加whistle
01:43:038 (1,2) - ^
01:43:772 (1,2) - 加whistle
01:44:629 (2) - 头加whistle
01:45:609 (1,2) - ^
01:46:589 (2) - 头加whistle
01:49:282 (2) - 好大的一个跳
Insane我只能跟上前面一段 ;_; 后面就完全点不到了

~☆
Topic Starter
Snow Note
Thank you for mod!

Shiki wrote:

Hi~ Let's go!

[Normal]
Fine, imo

[Hard]
00:18:898 (1,2) - 这两个的边缘有些重叠,把他们分开<--小小的話沒有問題吧...
00:38:743 (2) - 复制(1)然后ctrl+h<---OK
00:53:458 (3,4) - (3)的末尾whistle, (4)的头尾whistle
01:43:650 (1,2) - 头加whistle?
01:45:609 (1,2) - ^
01:47:568 (1,2) - ^
01:49:650 (1,2) - ^

[Insane]
00:53:601 (1,3) - 加whistle?
01:42:670 (2) - 头部加whistle
01:43:038 (1,2) - ^
01:43:772 (1,2) - 加whistle
01:44:629 (2) - 头加whistle
01:45:609 (1,2) - ^
01:46:589 (2) - 头加whistle
01:49:282 (2) - 好大的一个跳<---拉近了少少
Insane我只能跟上前面一段 ;_; 后面就完全点不到了

~☆
音效方面我打算不再修改.因我觉得目前己经很好.
spboxer3
[General]
全部的map難度沒有一個低於3星基本上是unrankable((除非MAT和BAT都沒看到...

[Hard]
01:14:743 (1,3) - 堆疊!!

[Verdi's Taiko Oni]
01:24:001 (685,689) - 不允許的排法 在1/4拍的時間間距下大圓是不允許出現的!!((雖然說你那地方真的做的很好!!

star~Nice map!!
Topic Starter
Snow Note
Thank You for Mod.

spboxer3 wrote:

[General]
全部的map難度沒有一個低於3星基本上是unrankable<這個我知道,但不一定3星以上是Unrankable,因為我見有一些ranked beatmaps的最低難度是高於3星的

[Hard]
01:14:743 (1,3) - 堆疊!!<---Fixed

[Verdi's Taiko Oni]
01:24:001 (685,689) - 不允許的排法 在1/4拍的時間間距下大圓是不允許出現的!!((雖然說你那地方真的做的很好!!

star~Nice map!!
Roddie
Hi.

General
  1. I'm pretty sure that "In The Groove 3" goes into the source, not the tags, man.
  2. Add "Roxor Games" in the tags?

Normal
  1. 00:46:172 (3)-Remove the clap from the end. I don't think it sounds fitting. :/ Maybe replacing that clap with a whistle instead?

Hard
  1. 00:10:826 (1)-Remove new combo.
  2. 00:12:552 (1)-^

Verdi's Taiko Oni
  1. 01:17:801-This note isn't snapped. :P Fix it.

Insane
  1. I think an approach rate of 8 is more fitting than 9...

Nice work. :P

Star.
Topic Starter
Snow Note

Roddie wrote:

Hi.

General
  1. I'm pretty sure that "In The Groove 3" goes into the source, not the tags, man.<---This song is from CanBlaster,not in this game,so I think should not put in source
  2. Add "Roxor Games" in the tags?<---Added

Normal
  1. 00:46:172 (3)-Remove the clap from the end. I don't think it sounds fitting. :/ Maybe replacing that clap with a whistle instead?<---Okay

Hard
  1. 00:10:826 (1)-Remove new combo.<--Okay
  2. 00:12:552 (1)-^<--Okay

Verdi's Taiko Oni
  1. 01:17:801-This note isn't snapped. :P Fix it.Fixed

Insane
  1. I think an approach rate of 8 is more fitting than 9...<---Too slow for high BPM song

Nice work. :P

Star.
oh,I can't see your star. :(
Roddie
I thought I did give out a star. I guess not.... My bad.
rustbell
nice
volely
cool!
HakuNoKaemi
[Normal]
01:06:743 (3,4) - Ctrl + R is better /( Ctrl + R 01:07:030 (4) - after )
Well... you need a diff under <3 and this is near so... read the spoiler for some suggestion to lower it
SPOILER
01:48:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - substitute with this pattern
01:50:507 (1) - Move it to 01:50:384 (1) -
00:12:984 (2) - you could simply map this as a 1/1 Slider with no repeats
01:32:479 (1) - end it at 01:34:466, so delete 01:34:466 (1)
01:15:886 (1,2,3) - Substitute them with a spinner that start at (1)'s Start and end at (3)'s end
00:39:029 (5) - Delete this
01:06:458 (2) - ^
Those changes made the diff 2,97.
- That will be nazi
01:38:384 (1) - Nazi it, [ur=http://puu.sh/3xHsl]so it blanket bettter[/url]

[Hard]
00:19:460 (2) - make this an arch?
The rest seem good

[Insane]
Some jumps patterns seemed random, though it's good

It's welldone for someone with 1 rank :3
Topic Starter
Snow Note
KD Star<3

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Normal]
01:06:743 (3,4) - Ctrl + R is better /( Ctrl + R 01:07:030 (4) - after )
Well... you need a diff under <3 and this is near so... read the spoiler for some suggestion to lower it<---Fixed
SPOILER
01:48:180 (1,2,3,4,5) - substitute with this pattern
01:50:507 (1) - Move it to 01:50:384 (1) -
00:12:984 (2) - you could simply map this as a 1/1 Slider with no repeats
01:32:479 (1) - end it at 01:34:466, so delete 01:34:466 (1)
01:15:886 (1,2,3) - Substitute them with a spinner that start at (1)'s Start and end at (3)'s end
00:39:029 (5) - Delete this
01:06:458 (2) - ^
Those changes made the diff 2,97.
- That will be nazi
01:38:384 (1) - Nazi it<---Okay

[Hard]
00:19:460 (2) - make this an arch?<---Fixed
The rest seem good

[Insane]
Some jumps patterns seemed random, though it's good

It's welldone for someone with 1 rank :3
Thank you for your mod,The Normal Diff is 2.97 star now.

Very useful mod,Kudosu!~
- Rche -
what i can do is just a late star...
JauiPlaY
hihi~ :)
maybe 4th beatmap in creator's words?

[General]
fine. but for me, the hitsounds is a bit loud here. imo 45% sound volume is enough.

[Normal]
00:03:272(4) - hard to read for a normal, remove this note?
00:20:394(2) - clap on the end of this slider.
00:25:601(3) - ^
00:46:172(3) - ^

[Hard]
00:00:466(2,3) - a slider here? the rhythm may be confusing for the beginning of the map.
00:48:458(1,2,3,4) - i guess it's looks better.
01:25:143(1) - starts at 01:25:001.

[Insane]
00:09:747(4) - clap.
00:10:178(2) - ^
00:12:067(T) - useless timing point.
00:14:819(1) - the spinner is too short imo, so maybe remove it and add a note at 00:15:574?

cool.
so
star~
Dark_Ai
[Hard]
00:08:668 (1) - delete new combo
00:09:099 (2) - new combo
00:47:315 (1) - delete new combo
00:59:743 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:04:135 (6) - new combo (?)


Okay look fine ;D

Get a Star ~
Snowy Dream
[Hard]
01:50:140 (1) - 最好換個位置。


[Insane]
01:09:743 (2) - 感覺2跟3的位置換下最好
01:26:286 (x) - 加個note
-------------------------------------------------
Very nice.
沒什么大問題了.
Star~☆
Topic Starter
Snow Note
SPOILER

JauiPlaY wrote:

hihi~ :)
maybe 4th beatmap in creator's words?<---Ok

[General]
fine. but for me, the hitsounds is a bit loud here. imo 45% sound volume is enough.

[Normal]
00:03:272(4) - hard to read for a normal, remove this note?<---Ok
00:20:394(2) - clap on the end of this slider.
00:25:601(3) - ^
00:46:172(3) - ^

[Hard]
00:00:466(2,3) - a slider here? the rhythm may be confusing for the beginning of the map.
00:48:458(1,2,3,4) - [attachment=0:e8bcf]fasrfa.PNG[/attachment:e8bcf]i guess it's looks better.<---Ok
01:25:143(1) - starts at 01:25:001.<---Ok

[Insane]
00:09:747(4) - clap.<---Ok
00:10:178(2) - ^<---Ok
00:12:067(T) - useless timing point.<---Fixed
00:14:819(1) - the spinner is too short imo, so maybe remove it and add a note at 00:15:574?<---Ok


cool.
so
star~



SPOILER

Dark_Ai wrote:

[Hard]
00:08:668 (1) - delete new combo
00:09:099 (2) - new combo
00:47:315 (1) - delete new combo
00:59:743 (1) - ^<---Fixed

[Insane]
00:04:135 (6) - new combo (?)


Okay look fine ;D

Get a Star ~


SPOILER

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Hard]
01:50:140 (1) - 最好換個位置。<---換了


[Insane]
01:09:743 (2) - 感覺2跟3的位置換下最好
01:26:286 (x) - 加個note
-------------------------------------------------
Very nice.
沒什么大問題了.
Star~☆
Thank All~ :)
indyinyou
[Hard]

00:56:743 : clap
00:57:172 : ^
01:23:715 : remove fin add clap
01:24:286 : ^
01:24:858 : ^

they're just suggestions

it good map
Topic Starter
Snow Note

indyinyou wrote:

[Hard]

00:56:743 : clap<---Ok
00:57:172 : ^<---Ok
01:23:715 : remove fin add clap
01:24:286 : ^
01:24:858 : ^

they're just suggestions

it good map
Thank you for mod~
Hanyuu
oh my god the taiko diff XD crazy

Star~
:)
Aleks719
Insane
00:11:689 (3,4,5,6) - add whistles?
00:13:847 (3) - add finish

Hard
00:54:172 (1) - add finish
01:42:670 (2) - add whistle to the start, add slider whistle
01:43:038 (3) - add whistle to the start, add slider whistle
01:43:405 (4) - add whistle
01:44:629 (2,3,4) - ^ (2,3,4) as before
01:46:589 (2,3,4) - ^ similar places

Taiko
Taiko diff has another kiai time~

Normal
00:21:805 (1,2) - make symmetrically?
00:32:458 (1,2) - make them parallel?
01:14:743 (1) - maybe without overlap?
01:42:303 (1) - add whistle to the end
01:44:262 (1) - add whistle to the reverse
01:46:221 (1) - add whistle to the end
01:48:180 (1) - add whistle to the 1st reverse
01:49:650 (2,3) - imo, will be better:

Star'd~
Topic Starter
Snow Note

Aleks719 wrote:

Insane
00:11:689 (3,4,5,6) - add whistles?
00:13:847 (3) - add finish

Hard
00:54:172 (1) - add finishchanged
01:42:670 (2) - add whistle to the start, add slider whistleSomething changed
01:43:038 (3) - add whistle to the start, add slider whistleSomething changed
01:43:405 (4) - add whistlechanged
01:44:629 (2,3,4) - ^ (2,3,4) as before
01:46:589 (2,3,4) - ^ similar places

Taiko
Taiko diff has another kiai time~<---Ok,I Fixed this.

Normal
00:21:805 (1,2) - make symmetrically?<---Ok
00:32:458 (1,2) - make them parallel?<---Something changed
01:14:743 (1) - maybe without overlap?<---Ok
01:42:303 (1) - add whistle to the end<---Ok
01:44:262 (1) - add whistle to the reverse<---Ok
01:46:221 (1) - add whistle to the end<---Ok
01:48:180 (1) - add whistle to the 1st reverse<---Ok
01:49:650 (2,3) - imo, will be better:

Star'd~
Thank you for mod~ :)

Many hitsound are changed~
Zelos
Folder:
That Taiko bg has an pixel ratio.

Normal:
Wow nothing wrong here. Amazing normal.
I highly approve of this.

Hard:
00:19:460 (2) - this is touching the HP bar. generally you shouldn't do this.

Verdi's Taiko Oni:
Lovely use of don kats here.
Nothing wrong here.

Insane:
Just as amazing as the rest.

Star + pink + favorite
Shiirn
your mp3 still acts strange, you probably cut it badly

hard
01:23:858 (4,2) - there are no beats here since this section uses 1/3


insane:
01:09:886 (3) - this jump feels bad, consider moving it somewhere else?
01:16:458 (7,13) - new combos?
01:21:143 (1) - this goes to 1/6, not 1/8
01:49:282 (2) - put where the next (4) will be?

as always excellent map
Topic Starter
Snow Note
SPOILER

Zelos wrote:

Folder:
That Taiko bg has an pixel ratio.

Normal:
Wow nothing wrong here. Amazing normal.
I highly approve of this.

Hard:
00:19:460 (2) - this is touching the HP bar. generally you shouldn't do this.<---Fixed

Verdi's Taiko Oni:
Lovely use of don kats here.
Nothing wrong here.

Insane:
Just as amazing as the rest.

Star + pink + favorite<---Thank you! :)


SPOILER

Shiirn wrote:

your mp3 still acts strange, you probably cut it badly<--I catch this song in O2Madia,Not cut this song,so they are same.

hard
01:23:858 (4,2) - there are no beats here since this section uses 1/3<---Fixed


insane:
01:09:886 (3) - this jump feels bad, consider moving it somewhere else?<---I like this jump.
01:16:458 (7,13) - new combos?<---no
01:21:143 (1) - this goes to 1/6, not 1/8<---Fixed
01:49:282 (2) - put where the next (4) will be?<---no

as always excellent map<---Thank you for mod&Star! :)
NatsumeRin
你再不快点找MAT BAT让人低阶了,我可救不了你
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NatsumeRin wrote:

你再不快点找MAT BAT让人低阶了,我可救不了你
我知道了,我現在立即去找MAT/BAT...~
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