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Love the song and the insane was top notch, +1
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Pendになったら綺麗に容量収まってるよ:pPSPDS Eddie wrote:
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Hi~ there 
You have a really great fade-in at intro part. Good job.
OK, I have just few suggestions, bcuz maps are pretty nice.
[General]
I suggest extend length of the last spinner to 03:56:081. Then add finish.
[Insane]
00:09:927 (4) - Little bit hard to see return arrow. Uhm... It's border line, I don't know.
03:03:416 (1) - Try to start this spinner from 03:03:664. You may put a note or add one return to previous slider if you fix it.
03:50:229 (1) - Start from 03:50:806 ?
[Suzully's Hard]
01:48:828 (3) - 1/8 slider is not really neccsary at this time. I think just 1/4 is okay.
[Kit's Normal]
Everything is fine to me.
Good luck! ლ( ╹ ◡ ╹ ლ)
You have a really great fade-in at intro part. Good job.
OK, I have just few suggestions, bcuz maps are pretty nice.
[General]
I suggest extend length of the last spinner to 03:56:081. Then add finish.
[Insane]
00:09:927 (4) - Little bit hard to see return arrow. Uhm... It's border line, I don't know.
03:03:416 (1) - Try to start this spinner from 03:03:664. You may put a note or add one return to previous slider if you fix it.
03:50:229 (1) - Start from 03:50:806 ?
[Suzully's Hard]
01:48:828 (3) - 1/8 slider is not really neccsary at this time. I think just 1/4 is okay.
[Kit's Normal]
Everything is fine to me.
Good luck! ლ( ╹ ◡ ╹ ლ)
Topic Starter
So fast ykcarrot sensei:oykcarrot wrote:
Hi~ there
You have a really great fade-in at intro part. Good job.
OK, I have just few suggestions, bcuz maps are pretty nice.
[General]
I suggest extend length of the last spinner to 03:56:081. Then add finish. Done~
[Insane]
00:09:927 (4) - Little bit hard to see return arrow. Uhm... It's border line, I don't know.Fixed!SPOILER03:03:416 (1) - Try to start this spinner from 03:03:664. You may put a note or add one return to previous slider if you fix it.Done~[attachment=0:f0988]screenshot317.jpg[/attachment:f0988]
03:50:229 (1) - Start from 03:50:806 ?okey,Done~
[Suzully's Hard]
01:48:828 (3) - 1/8 slider is not really neccsary at this time. I think just 1/4 is okay.No change
[Kit's Normal]
Everything is fine to me.
Good luck! ლ( ╹ ◡ ╹ ლ)
thanks for the quick modding!
Little IRC Mod in case you decide to kudosu. It's fine if you don't kudosu
Fantastic map.
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19:22 <Patchouli> : play thank you~ XDD
19:22 <Faust> : np
19:31 <Faust> : mm, maybe the AR is a bit too high
19:34 <Patchouli> : hmm...
19:38 <Patchouli> : I prefer playing it with AR9 and also AR9 excite players more than AR8 imo
19:38 <Faust> : true. top-tier players seem to like AR9
19:38 <Faust> : lol, just spin 423 rpm
19:38 <Faust> :
19:38 <Patchouli> : lol
19:58 <Faust> : 01:23:856 - http://puu.sh/3D73 Suggestion.
19:59 <Faust> : 02:07:290 - Uneven spacing lol
20:02 <Faust> : That's all for your diff.
20:03 <Patchouli> : >>01:23:856 nice idea. I change it
20:03 <Faust> : On Suzully, I think it'll be nice to put a note on 00:07:620 -
20:03 <Faust> : 00:18:169 - Note here as well.
20:05 <Patchouli> : 02:07:290 - fixed~
20:08 <Faust> : Hmm, silent slidertick?
20:11 <Faust> : 01:16:521 - On Kit's Normal. Shift the inherited timing section 1/4 before.
20:12 <Faust> : 02:31:685 - ^
20:15 <Faust> : I think that's it. Really good map >:3
20:16 <Patchouli> : thank you for modding >.< Sorry poor English;_;
20:16 <Faust> : you're welcome, and np
20:18 <Faust> : Wow, 5 pages of star only.
20:18 <Faust> : and 1 mod.
19:22 <Faust> : np
19:31 <Faust> : mm, maybe the AR is a bit too high
19:34 <Patchouli> : hmm...
19:38 <Patchouli> : I prefer playing it with AR9 and also AR9 excite players more than AR8 imo
19:38 <Faust> : true. top-tier players seem to like AR9
19:38 <Faust> : lol, just spin 423 rpm
19:38 <Faust> :
19:38 <Patchouli> : lol
19:58 <Faust> : 01:23:856 - http://puu.sh/3D73 Suggestion.
19:59 <Faust> : 02:07:290 - Uneven spacing lol
20:02 <Faust> : That's all for your diff.
20:03 <Patchouli> : >>01:23:856 nice idea.
I change it20:03 <Faust> : On Suzully, I think it'll be nice to put a note on 00:07:620 -
20:03 <Faust> : 00:18:169 - Note here as well.
20:05 <Patchouli> : 02:07:290 - fixed~
20:08 <Faust> : Hmm, silent slidertick?
20:11 <Faust> : 01:16:521 - On Kit's Normal. Shift the inherited timing section 1/4 before.
20:12 <Faust> : 02:31:685 - ^
20:15 <Faust> : I think that's it. Really good map >:3
20:16 <Patchouli> : thank you for modding >.< Sorry poor English;_;
20:16 <Faust> : you're welcome, and np
20:18 <Faust> : Wow, 5 pages of star only.
20:18 <Faust> : and 1 mod.
Fantastic map.
Insane:
AR 8 fits the map and song a lot better IMO. It's not a fast song, and this map doesn't have the "fast" feel needed to make AR 9 feel good. AR 8 also makes this map a lot more accessible.
Nothing wrong with the map itself though; just that AR 9 doesn't fit it very well. Good map otherwise.
Hard:
03:46:026 (2,4,5) - (4,5)'s stacking makes the overlap here from (2)'s hitburst look really ugly. Fine otherwise.
Normal:
Nothing; probably 'cuz this map's been modded to death already.
Have your star
AR 8 fits the map and song a lot better IMO. It's not a fast song, and this map doesn't have the "fast" feel needed to make AR 9 feel good. AR 8 also makes this map a lot more accessible.
Nothing wrong with the map itself though; just that AR 9 doesn't fit it very well. Good map otherwise.
Hard:
03:46:026 (2,4,5) - (4,5)'s stacking makes the overlap here from (2)'s hitburst look really ugly. Fine otherwise.
Normal:
Nothing; probably 'cuz this map's been modded to death already.
Have your star
good map !!!
すごい楽しかったです！
star~☆
すごい楽しかったです！
star~☆
Topic Starter
thank you for modding!Ekaru wrote:
Insane:
AR 8 fits the map and song a lot better IMO. It's not a fast song, and this map doesn't have the "fast" feel needed to make AR 9 feel good. AR 8 also makes this map a lot more accessible.
Nothing wrong with the map itself though; just that AR 9 doesn't fit it very well. Good map otherwise.
Hard:
03:46:026 (2,4,5) - (4,5)'s stacking makes the overlap here from (2)'s hitburst look really ugly. Fine otherwise.fixed!
Normal:
Nothing; probably 'cuz this map's been modded to death already.
Have your star
ナ、ナイスマップ！ 
ミンナニ ナイショダヨ
ミンナニ ナイショダヨ
SPOILER
数字はmsです
歌詞の違い
39268 屋上の塀に立ち→屋上の縁に立ち
45202 消えてなくなる→消えて無くなる
47345 言葉に溢れてる→言葉にあふれてる
89378 空を埋め尽くすよ→空をうめつくすよ
93449 世界を創り直すんだ→世界を作り直すんだ
106356 世界で沈み→世界が沈み
114762 水を掻き分けて→水をかきわけて
164543 空気のようにただ→空気の様にただ
167180 さぁ吐き出す→さぁはきだす
172784 だから今だけは→だからいまだけは
209707 消滅をつかさどる鳥たち→消滅を司る鳥たち
歌詞の実際の区切りと違い(ここに挙げたもの以外はあっています、参考になれば)
49817 さぁ飛び出せ 羽ばたけ私の翼よ 今
114762 水をかきわけて行くんだ
158114 そばに立ち見つめていたいの
176411 空気力学少女と少年の詩を聞かせて
225202 きっと 届くはずさ 今
歌詞と区切り両方の違い
120037 あなたに届く力で 飛ぶんだ→あなたに届く力で､飛ぶんだ
168664 勇気を 好きという言葉→勇気を｢好き｣と言う言葉。
【届く力で、】の句読点と、【｢好き｣】の鉤括弧は、半角で印字されています
歌詞の違い
39268 屋上の塀に立ち→屋上の縁に立ち
45202 消えてなくなる→消えて無くなる
47345 言葉に溢れてる→言葉にあふれてる
89378 空を埋め尽くすよ→空をうめつくすよ
93449 世界を創り直すんだ→世界を作り直すんだ
106356 世界で沈み→世界が沈み
114762 水を掻き分けて→水をかきわけて
164543 空気のようにただ→空気の様にただ
167180 さぁ吐き出す→さぁはきだす
172784 だから今だけは→だからいまだけは
209707 消滅をつかさどる鳥たち→消滅を司る鳥たち
歌詞の実際の区切りと違い(ここに挙げたもの以外はあっています、参考になれば)
49817 さぁ飛び出せ 羽ばたけ私の翼よ 今
114762 水をかきわけて行くんだ
158114 そばに立ち見つめていたいの
176411 空気力学少女と少年の詩を聞かせて
225202 きっと 届くはずさ 今
歌詞と区切り両方の違い
120037 あなたに届く力で 飛ぶんだ→あなたに届く力で､飛ぶんだ
168664 勇気を 好きという言葉→勇気を｢好き｣と言う言葉。
【届く力で、】の句読点と、【｢好き｣】の鉤括弧は、半角で印字されています
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