*･3･*

ヽ( ゜ 3゜)ノ

kami

(つ∀-)fight~~!!

fight>w</

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。・、・。

star~ >w</

quintitem wrote:

star~ >w</

SPOILER

hmmm offset 1403 (-10ms for current) maybe better? xD

thankyou!!!

くちびる慣れない紅さして貴方が待つ日本橋へ

隅田川。それはとっても隅田川。

All Suggestion!
[Story Board]
Fade等に少し違和感があるのでこのように書き換えてみてはどうでしょう

変更前
変更後

あと同じようなSBを
00:04:069
00:57:069
01:18:736
01:40:069
02:11:736
02:54:403
に追加するのもいいかも？
ただし追加する場合は
下記のScaleの変動をもう少しだけ小さくする(endの数値を下げる)とよいかもしれません。


[BASIC]
good.

ADVANCED
Great!
fine to me:D

[EXTREME]
01:54:069 (3) - 右に5grid、上に2grid
03:29:736 (1) - と03:31:736 (4) - の座標を入れ替えて03:30:736 (1) - RNC

Star

Edit:sbbの画像を800x600にしてこの画像を用いたSBのScaleのstartを0.8にするともっと綺麗になるかも。これもSuggestion。

> ~<

faito nanodesu!

ｓてｒ～

star wasuretetaaa

woo!

starstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstarstar

隅田川夏戀歌~~~
I like this!!!



star~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Yuzuki ♥ Mizuki

>a</ like this map so much!

Good lcuk >w</

KanaRin wrote:

Yuzuki ♥ Mizuki

>a</ like this map so much!

Good lcuk >w</

thank you

[Advanced]
00:14:069 (5) - This note's position is not such good
このnoteの位置はよくないと思う
02:09:069 (4,5) - Are they on purpose?
こちのspacingはわざなの？

02:51:736 (3) - Why is this without New combo?
どうしてこちにはnew comboがいない...?

[Extreme]
00:04:652 (3) - a bit different spacing between 2 and 4
00:29:652 (3) - ^
02:36:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think they're really hard to read...how about use new combo with 02:36:069 (1,3,5,7) ?
ここの順序はちょっと読みにくいから、1357をNew Comboしてほしい

02:44:403 (3) - add whistle at the end
02:49:903 (2) - add whistle
02:51:069 (2) - add whistle at the end
03:05:903 (4,6) - add whistle

I think this map's diff spread is not such good...maybe you need add a 4 star's diff< this is just personal opinion , you can ignore it

goodbye wrote:

[Advanced]
00:14:069 (5) - This note's position is not such good
このnoteの位置はよくないと思う
02:09:069 (4,5) - Are they on purpose?
こちのspacingはわざなの？

02:51:736 (3) - Why is this without New combo?
どうしてこちにはnew comboがいない...?

[Extreme]
00:04:652 (3) - a bit different spacing between 2 and 4
00:29:652 (3) - ^
02:36:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think they're really hard to read...how about use new combo with 02:36:069 (1,3,5,7) ?
ここの順序はちょっと読みにくいから、1357をNew Comboしてほしい

02:44:403 (3) - add whistle at the end
02:49:903 (2) - add whistle
02:51:069 (2) - add whistle at the end
03:05:903 (4,6) - add whistle

I think this map's diff spread is not such good...maybe you need add a 4 star's diff< this is just personal opinion , you can ignore it

arigato!!!

this map is so hentai :O

goooooooooood!

I want to make diff
but already fulled

gj!

PS : /me is dksslqj

Nakagawa-Kanon wrote:

goooooooooood!

I want to make diff
but already fulled

gj!

PS : /me is dksslqj

sorry;_;

thanks!

Natteke wrote:

this map is so hentai :O

natteke is hentai

Sorry I'm slooooow

[General]
Add mizuki to tags so it's easier to find it by your name
02:11:736 - No strobe here? Especially since you rekiai. If not, I'd remove the rekiai so it has a stronger feeling at the end of the song. Though tbh I almost prefer the kiai to start with that big boom instead of when the singer starts.
I really think that first break is really awkward. You just start playing, and then you have a break. Just feels like it's interruptive of play.

[BASIC]
00:38:736 (3) - I don't recommend really short repeating sliders like this in an easy difficulty.
00:58:069 (1) - Since it's so soon after a spinner, maybe have this start nearer the center?
02:24:402 - That's a really long break. May as well start mapping again where the other difficulties start up.

[ADVANCED]
00:41:403 (1,2) - Kinda looks bad with the hitcircle parts overlapping each other like that.
00:44:403 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo
00:51:319 (6,7) - Move down and right a grid or so to adjust for stacking
01:59:069 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo
02:05:986 (6,7) - Same as earlier
02:12:402 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo
02:13:736 (1,1,1) - ^
02:15:402 (1) - ^
Geez, waaay too many new combos in this section. Tone them down.
02:48:653 (2,3) - Same as earlier
Gaaah, fix all those super-short combos. There's a ton of them and they're kinda :/ Makes the map artificially easy.
03:11:736 (3) - Left one grid
03:12:069 (1) - right one grid
03:29:403 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Might work better as soft whistles

[EXTREME]

yuzuki:
01:41:736 (7) - Add clap
01:53:902 (2) - Eh, just do as normal hits instead of a slider.

mizuki:
02:18:069 (1,2,3,4) - I was kind of expecting this to be angled higher. It flows better that way imo. Rotating about 45 degrees worked pretty well.

Good stuff~

Garven wrote:

Sorry I'm slooooow

[General]
Add mizuki to tags so it's easier to find it by your name
02:11:736 - No strobe here? Especially since you rekiai. If not, I'd remove the rekiai so it has a stronger feeling at the end of the song. Though tbh I almost prefer the kiai to start with that big boom instead of when the singer starts.
I really think that first break is really awkward. You just start playing, and then you have a break. Just feels like it's interruptive of play.

[BASIC]
00:38:736 (3) - I don't recommend really short repeating sliders like this in an easy difficulty.
00:58:069 (1) - Since it's so soon after a spinner, maybe have this start nearer the center?
02:24:402 - That's a really long break. May as well start mapping again where the other difficulties start up.

[ADVANCED]
00:41:403 (1,2) - Kinda looks bad with the hitcircle parts overlapping each other like that.
00:44:403 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo
00:51:319 (6,7) - Move down and right a grid or so to adjust for stacking
01:59:069 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo
02:05:986 (6,7) - Same as earlier
02:12:402 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo
02:13:736 (1,1,1) - ^
02:15:402 (1) - ^
Geez, waaay too many new combos in this section. Tone them down.
02:48:653 (2,3) - Same as earlier
Gaaah, fix all those super-short combos. There's a ton of them and they're kinda :/ Makes the map artificially easy.
03:11:736 (3) - Left one grid
03:12:069 (1) - right one grid
03:29:403 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Might work better as soft whistles

[EXTREME]

yuzuki:
01:41:736 (7) - Add clap
01:53:902 (2) - Eh, just do as normal hits instead of a slider.

mizuki:
02:18:069 (1,2,3,4) - I was kind of expecting this to be angled higher. It flows better that way imo. Rotating about 45 degrees worked pretty well.

Good stuff~

ありがとー
fix!

[General]
Set source to Jubeat Ripples
I still think the kiai start times would be better one white tick back (00:46:402 - 00:57:069 - 02:01:069 - 02:11:736 - 02:43:736 - and 02:54:402 - )

[BASIC]
00:58:069 (1) - I still would rather this be closer to the center so that it is easier to hit after the spinner. This IS the easiest difficulty of the set.
01:52:736 (1) - ^
02:55:403 (1) - ^
03:29:403 (1,2,3) - Having these as the soft hit sound set would work better (like in the other two difficulties)

[ADVANCED]
02:48:069 (1,2,3) - Maybe like this?
02:51:069 (1) - Remove new combo
02:51:403 (1) - ^
02:51:736 (1) - ^
03:20:736 (1) - ^

[EXTREME]
02:36:402 (1) - Remove new combo
02:37:069 (1) - ^
02:49:736 (1) - ^
02:50:403 (1) - ^ (I'm almost inclined to say keep both of those patterns as one combo)