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narakucrimson
Hi there ykcarrot!

[General]
  1. Nothing to say here~ Great job!
[Easy]
  1. Congratulations ok making one of the most fun-to-play, issueless Easy difficulties ever!
    That means I've nothing to say here as well :P
[Normal]
  1. 40:364 (1) - I'd say that the new combo should go on he next slider. It seems consistent with Hard, too :P Not with Insane, because in Insane you mapped this in a totally different way D:
  2. 01:12:698 (2) - Idk, I don't think a clap sounds good here. Even a whislte would do better imo~
  3. 01:47:031 (1) - For consistency with my first suggestion, remove this new combo and add it to the next slider.
  4. 02:29:198 (3,4, 1) - Mmm this isn't so intuitive imo. I'd suggest to remove (4).
  5. 02:58:864 (1,2,3,4) - This, as before, don't play so good imo. I'd suggest that you try somthing like this in the timeline:
  6. 03:01:698 (1) - And also I'd place this at 03:01:531 (1/2 before)
  7. That's all I think :P
[Hard]
  1. 03:698 (1) - Why new combo? I think that having it without a new combo doesn't affect much.
  2. Awesome >w<
Meh, this has been polished quiet a lot, so that might be the main reason for the poor mod. Anyway, have my star~
Topic Starter
Sure

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi there ykcarrot!

[General]
  1. Nothing to say here~ Great job!
[Easy]
  1. Congratulations ok making one of the most fun-to-play, issueless Easy difficulties ever!
    That means I've nothing to say here as well :P
[Normal]
  1. 40:364 (1) - I'd say that the new combo should go on he next slider. It seems consistent with Hard, too :P Not with Insane, because in Insane you mapped this in a totally different way D: // I see, fixed. And yes, Insane is in different way to others.
  2. 01:12:698 (2) - Idk, I don't think a clap sounds good here. Even a whislte would do better imo~ // I used that clap in every diff.
  3. 01:47:031 (1) - For consistency with my first suggestion, remove this new combo and add it to the next slider. // Fixed
  4. 02:29:198 (3,4, 1) - Mmm this isn't so intuitive imo. I'd suggest to remove (4). // No, I followed bass drum in this section.
  5. 02:58:864 (1,2,3,4) - This, as before, don't play so good imo. I'd suggest that you try somthing like this in the timeline: // ^
  6. 03:01:698 (1) - And also I'd place this at 03:01:531 (1/2 before) // ^
  7. That's all I think :P
[Hard]
  1. 03:698 (1) - Why new combo? I think that having it without a new combo doesn't affect much. // Removed~
  2. Awesome >w<
Meh, this has been polished quiet a lot, so that might be the main reason for the poor mod. Anyway, have my star~
Thanks for mod! :)
Luvdic
General:

I really don't understand why people insist on using high slider tick, and then silence them with a custom slidertick hitsound. If anything, this just makes easy/normals harder to play for newbies cause they have a hard time learning how tofollow an slider. Also, this is pretty much unrankable cause all gameplay elements (in this case, slider ticks) must be visible/be heard. So you will have to find a more lenient mat/bat.

Hard:

00:53:531 (1) - Nazi: move this tick (http://puu.sh/2gow the one after the first red tick) 1 grid to the right
00:54:031 (2) - Same as before, but it would be 1 tick to the left.
02:25:698 (1) - Extend by 1/6th tick

A great map nevertheless, had lots of fun when I test played it.
Topic Starter
Sure

ErufenRito wrote:

General:

I really don't understand why people insist on using high slider tick, and then silence them with a custom slidertick hitsound. If anything, this just makes easy/normals harder to play for newbies cause they have a hard time learning how tofollow an slider. Also, this is pretty much unrankable cause all gameplay elements (in this case, slider ticks) must be visible/be heard. So you will have to find a more lenient mat/bat.
// I don't use high slider tick rate for making map harder and earning more score. I followed the music as it is.
As you told using high slider tick rate will be harder, but I'm sure about slider tick rate 2 is really fit at this music.
However it isn't fit at the section where I use mute slider tick.
Every music doesn't have consistent rhythm(not mean BPM), this is a reason why we sometimes use silenced slider tick.
Please read this thread, if you free. Thank you.

Allow different slidertick rate for a new timing section


Hard:

00:53:531 (1) - Nazi: move this tick (http://puu.sh/2gow the one after the first red tick) 1 grid to the right // Fixed
00:54:031 (2) - Same as before, but it would be 1 tick to the left. // ^
02:25:698 (1) - Extend by 1/6th tick // No, that slider should be snapped by 1/3 BSD

A great map nevertheless, had lots of fun when I test played it.
Thanks for mod. :)
Luvdic
Oh, never mind aboutt he slider tick, it was completely my bad. :T

And I will insist about snapping that sldier to 1/6th.

Besides, that mod post totally don't worth 2 kudos... if possible, deny it please.
Topic Starter
Sure
Denying kudosu isn't my power, ask BAT please if you don't want to take kudosu.

And I'd prefer reserve your opinion about that slider until other modder point it out.
Shiro
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game :)

General
  1. Hitsounds are too low. I could hardly hear them while testplaying.
Easy
  1. The tick rate is too high and leads to invisible ticks (for instance 00:05:031 (3) - ). Change tick rate to 1.
  2. 01:06:198 (3,4,5) - These surprised me - I didn't expect them to be on red ticks and completely failed to click the rhythm here.
  3. 03:27:531 (3,4,5) - Same.
Normal
Seems fine, although I think it's a bit hard.

Hard
This plays like an Insane, not a Hard (mainly because of the many jumps and streams).
  1. 02:47:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This rhythm was extremely surprising - does it match anything in the song ? I'd suggest you ised at least sliders
Insane
... insane =(

lepidon! - Taiko Oni
That's rather hard =(

Not much to say about the map, except that Hard should be renamed Insane.
brikel
★★★☆☆☆
별이 추가로 더왔으유 ㅋ
Topic Starter
Sure

Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game :)

General
  1. Hitsounds are too low. I could hardly hear them while testplaying. // Normal-whistle is too loud to me, if I increase audio volume of hitsound.
Easy
  1. The tick rate is too high and leads to invisible ticks (for instance 00:05:031 (3) - ). Change tick rate to 1. // No, invisible tick is a problem of osu. It can't be a reason for change.
  2. 01:06:198 (3,4,5) - These surprised me - I didn't expect them to be on red ticks and completely failed to click the rhythm here. // Although they are in red ticks, but they fit at vocal. I didn't make this diff for absolute beginners.
  3. 03:27:531 (3,4,5) - Same.
Normal
Seems fine, although I think it's a bit hard.

Hard
This plays like an Insane, not a Hard (mainly because of the many jumps and streams). // I asked some players, they said it's not really hard for Hard diff.
  1. 02:47:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This rhythm was extremely surprising - does it match anything in the song ? I'd suggest you ised at least sliders // It does. And I don't like 2 beats 1/4 slider.
Insane
... insane =( // Yes, the word as it is. >_<

lepidon! - Taiko Oni
That's rather hard =(

Not much to say about the map, except that Hard should be renamed Insane.
Anyway thanks for mod. :)

EDIT : No change at all.


브리켈님 분홍별 고마워요 <3
Diasios
[Easy]

  • • 00:45:364 (2,1) - Move the circle at 00:45:698 and start the spinner at 00:46:198
    • 01:52:031 (2,1) - ^
    • 03:05:698 (3,1) - Same thing here; end the slider at 03:07:031 and start the spinner at 03:07:531
Nice map.
Topic Starter
Sure

xxheroxx wrote:

[Easy]

  • • 00:45:364 (2,1) - Move the circle at 00:45:698 and start the spinner at 00:46:198
    • 01:52:031 (2,1) - ^
    • 03:05:698 (3,1) - Same thing here; end the slider at 03:07:031 and start the spinner at 03:07:531
// Hmm, I feel strange at spinner what you suggested. I won't change.
Nice map.
Thank you anyway. :D
Norn_NNN
nice map~~ :)
Lizbeth
Easy
00:45:364 (2) - This was hard to hit, maybe you can add slider from here: 00:44:364 to here: 00:45:364
01:52:031 (2) - same~

that's it, awesome map set <3<3
Topic Starter
Sure

Lizbeth wrote:

Easy
00:45:364 (2) - This was hard to hit, maybe you can add slider from here: 00:44:364 to here: 00:45:364 // As you told, a slider will be fine. Fixed
01:52:031 (2) - same~

that's it, awesome map set <3<3
Thank you, Liz :)
NatsumeRin
[General]
slider tick rate: 1 for the first 3 diffs plz. you muted the slidertick, and there's no speed change or nearly no speed change (only a 0.75x timing section in Hard), so the only thing slidertick to do is increase the score, but this is just stupid. especially for Hard, 16M 1-PC-FC score is not a good thing either.

[Easy]
02:12:198 (3) - there is a drum voice in the music at about 02:12:781, 1/4 before the slider's end, so it sounds really weird when playing (it's a Easy anyway), could you try someway to rearrange this part?
02:58:864 (1) - sounds strange.
03:27:531 (3) - same problem with 02:12:198 (3)

[Normal]
02:58:864 (1) - i don't understand why you suddenly change beatplacements at this part (maily follow the vocal for the other part, but i could only conclude this part as "original") also the beat placements sounds not so good to me (i've noticed you use nearly the same beats in Hard but i'll keep my opinion)
03:19:531 - add a note to fit the drum?

[Taiko]
00:15:364 (29,30) - k
00:30:031 (22) - k
01:22:031 (29,30) - k

[Hard]
01:38:031 (4) - stack with 6?
02:32:364 (1,2,3) - it's highly recommended not to stack these notes, also you could find some better placements for 4-8. this part is still "moving"
02:47:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a little harsh in this hard?

[Insane]
01:11:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - would be cool i guess...?

Topic Starter
Sure

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
slider tick rate: 1 for the first 3 diffs plz. you muted the slidertick, and there's no speed change or nearly no speed change (only a 0.75x timing section in Hard), so the only thing slidertick to do is increase the score, but this is just stupid. especially for Hard, 16M 1-PC-FC score is not a good thing either. // I didn't use slidertick rate 2 for increasing score.

[Easy]
02:12:198 (3) - there is a drum voice in the music at about 02:12:781, 1/4 before the slider's end, so it sounds really weird when playing (it's a Easy anyway), could you try someway to rearrange this part? // I can't find drums in that blue tick.
02:58:864 (1) - sounds strange.
03:27:531 (3) - same problem with 02:12:198 (3)

[Normal]
02:58:864 (1) - i don't understand why you suddenly change beatplacements at this part (maily follow the vocal for the other part, but i could only conclude this part as "original") also the beat placements sounds not so good to me (i've noticed you use nearly the same beats in Hard but i'll keep my opinion) // It is hard to ignore bass drum sound in this part. So I didn't follow vocal.
03:19:531 - add a note to fit the drum?

[Hard]
01:38:031 (4) - stack with 6? // OK. Also I fixed 01:35:531 (4)
02:32:364 (1,2,3) - it's highly recommended not to stack these notes, also you could find some better placements for 4-8. this part is still "moving" // Fixed
02:47:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a little harsh in this hard? // Replaced by a spinner

[Insane]
01:11:698 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - would be cool i guess...? // Sorry, I hate overlapping.
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Thanks for mod. :)
lepidopodus

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Taiko]
00:15:364 (29,30) - k
00:30:031 (22) - k
01:22:031 (29,30) - k
Hmm, sorry, I just want to keep those dons in that part as many as possible. Thanks for modding anyway~
AisamaDX
nice map~ :)
Topic Starter
Sure
Thanks for star, Aisama :D
Nyar
star :)
Topic Starter
Sure
Nyar <3


I want yyy!
yeahyeahyeahhh
hmmm... I guess I'm not surprised I found no errors with this many stars and since the map is by yourself O_O;.

The diff spread is real good, though Insane is kinda way harder than hard, its really well made man ^^

Also, loved the spaces streams in Insane, totally fitting.

Insane:
- 00:24:364 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ♥♥♥
- 03:33:364 (5) - Maybe add a whistle on here on the start and slider, you're call. Don't kudo for this if done :3

Sorry if I kept you waiting and I didn't find anything ORZ. You should pesters MATs and BATs :3
Topic Starter
Sure
Thanks yyy <3
I added that whistle.

I didn't notice that you resigned from MAT. o_o
Lizbeth
Sorry I took so long to re-check ;^;
All looks good for me so...
bubble #1
Topic Starter
Sure
Thank you Liz <3 :)
Flute
fun!!!!!
Hinacle
= =+
Topic Starter
Sure
Thanks for stars, Flute and Hinacle :D
Shiirn
mods for ranking, just consider them if they're not in red. if they're in red you -need- to fix before ranking

folder check OK

General
It's very hard to hear your notes since the song is so loud. Raise to 80-90%? the slider ticks are also inaudible as-is.
0% volume timing sections are not allowed as they now require .osu editting (unless this hasn't been fortified as a rule?)

easy
normal
hard
ok
insane
01:12:698 (10) - new combo?
02:29:698 (1,18) - find some way to newcombo this?
02:42:031 (2) - using crumpled nodes to change the speed of the slider is unrankable now iirc
02:47:531 (10) - ^ also, these aren't using rednodes so they are clearly linear, but you can't use linear anymore without .osu editting... might just wanna change em
03:33:364 (5) - i fucking love you

taiko
>lepidon
i don't need to check it


epic map
Topic Starter
Sure

Shiirn wrote:

mods for ranking, just consider them if they're not in red. if they're in red you -need- to fix before ranking

folder check OK

General
It's very hard to hear your notes since the song is so loud. Raise to 80-90%? the slider ticks are also inaudible as-is.
0% volume timing sections are not allowed as they now require .osu editting (unless this hasn't been fortified as a rule?)
// Whistle was annoyed on over 80% audio volume, so it was decreased.
02:25:698 - Mute slider tick is used only at this part. Because tick rate 2 doesn't fit at this part. Others are fine.
I have made Insane diff since Sep 2010. Setting 0% volume timing was possible in editor at that time.
By the way 0% never works as mute. So I think it's an insignificant problem.


easy
normal
hard
ok
insane
01:12:698 (10) - new combo? // nope
02:29:698 (1,18) - find some way to newcombo this? // Hmm, I set new comboing pattern to time length.
02:42:031 (2) - using crumpled nodes to change the speed of the slider is unrankable now iirc // Think about its shape. Feel the electric guitar! I really don't see why you thought it's an unrakable slider.
02:47:531 (10) - ^ also, these aren't using rednodes so they are clearly linear, but you can't use linear anymore without .osu editting... might just wanna change em // Making linear slider was possible when I started mapping Insane diff. If there is differece between linear and red dots, I'll fix. But they are same. Yeah, I'm lazy.
03:33:364 (5) - i fucking love you

taiko
>lepidon
i don't need to check it


epic map
Thanks for checking.
Let us wait and see.
Shiirn
while it's correct that you made this back when those rules were not in effect, they are now, so you should just fix what you agree with (and leave it unsubmitted) and check with the ranking bat~

There was a big discussion on 0% vs 5%, but i think even if you did it before you should change it to 5% since 0 is now against the rules, and it's not hard to change anyway (takes a few seconds of work, and there's less drama)


Much luck towards ranking!
Topic Starter
Sure
OK, that 0% green line will be fixed at next update.

my message is too short!
Sakura
Only problem i have is the spinner length, it should be fine for everything but easy, as i doubt newbies have the strength and stamina to spin that long.

Other than that, map looks pretty fine i could try to help you get a BAT for this.

Edit: Mapper self-popped to fix the timing section from Shiirn's mod post, so returning the bubble
this is once again Bubble #1
James2250
All checks out nicely, one of the more organized approval difficulties I have seen
Have another bubble for Insane

Bubble #2~

(Btw I can tell the future and this map will be approved by Garven)
Garven
[Easy]
00:48:698 (1) - Kind of iffy on how soon this is after a spinner for an easy. Perhaps a simpler rhythm like this?

01:06:864 (5) - End this at 01:08:198 -
01:55:364 (1) - Same thing going on here as earlier
02:06:364 (2) - This flows better if h-flipped (of course, h-flip a bunch of the later stuff too if you do this)
02:13:531 (5) - End this at 02:14:864 -
03:10:031 (1) - Same as earlier
03:17:031 (3) - Poking into HP bar if you care
03:28:198 (5) - End at 03:29:531 -

[Normal]
Yeesh, I had to set stack leniency all the way down so that 00:03:031 (1,2,1) - wouldn't stack. Bleh.
01:06:948 (1) - End this at 01:08:198 -
02:13:614 (1) - End this at 02:14:864 -
03:28:281 (1) - End this at 03:29:531 -

[Hard]
01:06:948 (1) - End this at 01:08:198 -
02:13:614 (1) - End this at 02:14:864 -
03:28:281 (1) - End this at 03:29:531 -

[Insane]
01:06:948 (1) - End this at 01:08:198 -
02:13:614 (1) - End this at 02:14:864 -
03:28:281 (1) - End this at 03:29:531 -

Let me know what you think of these suggestions~

James2250 wrote:

(Btw I can tell the future and this map will be approved by Garven)
:x
Topic Starter
Sure

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
00:48:698 (1) - Kind of iffy on how soon this is after a spinner for an easy. Perhaps a simpler rhythm like this? // Previous spinner is long enough, players can clear the spinner easily if they don't spin until the end of the spinner. Also next note isn't far from center. I think it's fine. // EDIT : OK, fixed appropriately. There is no spinner now.

01:06:864 (5) - End this at 01:08:198 - // Fixed
01:55:364 (1) - Same thing going on here as earlier
02:06:364 (2) - This flows better if h-flipped (of course, h-flip a bunch of the later stuff too if you do this) // Fixed
02:13:531 (5) - End this at 02:14:864 - // Fixed
03:10:031 (1) - Same as earlier
03:17:031 (3) - Poking into HP bar if you care // Fixed
03:28:198 (5) - End at 03:29:531 - // Fixed

[Normal]
Yeesh, I had to set stack leniency all the way down so that 00:03:031 (1,2,1) - wouldn't stack. Bleh. // I don't care. They are not ugly.
01:06:948 (1) - End this at 01:08:198 - // Fixed
02:13:614 (1) - End this at 02:14:864 - // ^
03:28:281 (1) - End this at 03:29:531 - // ^

[Hard]
01:06:948 (1) - End this at 01:08:198 - // ^
02:13:614 (1) - End this at 02:14:864 - // ^
03:28:281 (1) - End this at 03:29:531 - // ^

[Insane]
01:06:948 (1) - End this at 01:08:198 - // ^
02:13:614 (1) - End this at 02:14:864 - // ^
03:28:281 (1) - End this at 03:29:531 - // ^

Let me know what you think of these suggestions~

James2250 wrote:

(Btw I can tell the future and this map will be approved by Garven)
:x
Those end points are much better than before. Thank you. :)

EDIT : I'm waiting for Garven.
L i a
:)
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Garven
Sorry for the wait. Looks good. Ranked!
KRZY
yaaaay \:D/
brikel
Congraturation ~~~ :) :) :) :)
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