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Sakakibara Yui - Himitsujikake no Apple (Short Ver.)
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[General]
01:45:716 end kiai there?
also set kiai time same in all difficulties!
[xxheroxx's easy]
the easiest difficulty and AR4 with OD3. hmm not quite sure.
01:14:373 - better like this, this slider looks odd in front of others http://puu.sh/34Ac :3
[Normal]
02:00:045 (1) - add whistle as on easy?
[Vicho's Hard]
OD - 1
01:59:933 (1) - start 1/4 later and add whistle
[Insane]
01:59:933 (1) - start 1/4 later and add whistle
00:50:642 (2,3) - uh, i suggest to do something unlike this. Plays kinda odd :/
funny to see different slider shapes. Awesome map star!
01:45:716 end kiai there?
also set kiai time same in all difficulties!
[xxheroxx's easy]
the easiest difficulty and AR4 with OD3. hmm not quite sure.
01:14:373 - better like this, this slider looks odd in front of others http://puu.sh/34Ac :3
[Normal]
02:00:045 (1) - add whistle as on easy?
[Vicho's Hard]
OD - 1
01:59:933 (1) - start 1/4 later and add whistle
[Insane]
01:59:933 (1) - start 1/4 later and add whistle
00:50:642 (2,3) - uh, i suggest to do something unlike this. Plays kinda odd :/
funny to see different slider shapes. Awesome map star!
Easy
Hp drain-1 OD-1?
01:25:567 (4,5) -
01:27:582 (1,2) -
01:29:373 (4,5) - Imo you should not stack so frequently in easy. also its a 1/2 beat
01:50:642 (2,3) - ^
01:51:985 (4,1) - ^
Normal
00:29:597 add note?
00:31:388 add note?
Hard
all fine
Insane
Nice diff
Hp drain-1 OD-1?
01:25:567 (4,5) -
01:27:582 (1,2) -
01:29:373 (4,5) - Imo you should not stack so frequently in easy. also its a 1/2 beat
01:50:642 (2,3) - ^
01:51:985 (4,1) - ^
Normal
00:29:597 add note?
00:31:388 add note?
Hard
all fine
Insane
Nice diff
Mod4Mod ^^
[Easy]
01:17:507 and 01:46:164- maybe a bit hard for beginners, if the note is so close to the slider...
01:08:104 (2) spacing
kiai-time is a bit shorter as the others
[Normal]
00:41:239 (4,5) make 5 and the end of the previous slider overlap exacly (now it's spacing 0,1x)
00:50:642 (2,3) like above, but slider 3 must overlap end of slider 2 ^^
00:52:433 (6,7) ^ hehe
01:08:776 (1,2) ^
01:12:134 (1,2) ^
01:13:253 (2,3) ^
01:26:462 (2,3) ^
01:41:910 (1,2) ^
[Hard]
00:08:776 (2,3) like in normal, make overlap exacly
00:10:231 (5,6,7) ^
00:11:686 (2,3) ^
00:13:030 (5,6) ^
00:52:433 (1,2) ^
00:58:030 (4,5) ^
00:59:597 (8,9) ^
01:03:850 (6,7) ^
01:19:298 (5,6) ^
01:22:880 (7,8,9) ^
01:32:283 (2,3) ^
01:46:612 (1,2,3) ^
01:47:843 (1,2,3) ^
01:55:007 (1,2,3) ^
[Insane]
00:10:119 (7,8,9) like in Hard and Normal ^^
00:29:597 (3,4) ^
00:33:179 ( 4,5) ^
00:47:507 ( 1,2) ^
00:51:089 (2,3) ^
01:06:761 (9,10) ^
01:21:537 (2,3) ^
01:31:836 (4,5) ^
01:39:224 (5,6) ^
01:46:612 (1,2,3) ^
01:53:776 (1,2) ^
01:56:127 (8,9,10) ^
nice song^^
i have already given a star, so good luck ^^
[Easy]
01:17:507 and 01:46:164- maybe a bit hard for beginners, if the note is so close to the slider...
01:08:104 (2) spacing
kiai-time is a bit shorter as the others
[Normal]
00:41:239 (4,5) make 5 and the end of the previous slider overlap exacly (now it's spacing 0,1x)
00:50:642 (2,3) like above, but slider 3 must overlap end of slider 2 ^^
00:52:433 (6,7) ^ hehe
01:08:776 (1,2) ^
01:12:134 (1,2) ^
01:13:253 (2,3) ^
01:26:462 (2,3) ^
01:41:910 (1,2) ^
[Hard]
00:08:776 (2,3) like in normal, make overlap exacly
00:10:231 (5,6,7) ^
00:11:686 (2,3) ^
00:13:030 (5,6) ^
00:52:433 (1,2) ^
00:58:030 (4,5) ^
00:59:597 (8,9) ^
01:03:850 (6,7) ^
01:19:298 (5,6) ^
01:22:880 (7,8,9) ^
01:32:283 (2,3) ^
01:46:612 (1,2,3) ^
01:47:843 (1,2,3) ^
01:55:007 (1,2,3) ^
[Insane]
00:10:119 (7,8,9) like in Hard and Normal ^^
00:29:597 (3,4) ^
00:33:179 ( 4,5) ^
00:47:507 ( 1,2) ^
00:51:089 (2,3) ^
01:06:761 (9,10) ^
01:21:537 (2,3) ^
01:31:836 (4,5) ^
01:39:224 (5,6) ^
01:46:612 (1,2,3) ^
01:53:776 (1,2) ^
01:56:127 (8,9,10) ^
nice song^^
i have already given a star, so good luck ^^
Hi.
Nice work. Star.
xxheroxx's Easy
- 00:10:791 (1)-Add a whistle on the end?
- 00:49:298 (4)-Add a whistle here?
- 01:08:104 (2)-The way you left this slider there might be a bit hard for an Easy. I think you should create this kind of formation instead. http://puu.sh/34Bf
- 01:10:567 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning.
- 01:34:074 (1)-Put a new combo here?
- 01:45:492-I think it would be better if you end the kiai time on 01:45:716.
Normal
- 00:13:925 (2)-Add a whistle on the beginning.
- 01:45:045-I know you want to put in a Normal sample set here but I just don't think ending the kiai time here is quite fitting. ): You could Keep the kiai time going by turning it on for this timing point and on the next one, which is 01:45:492, have it end on 01:45:716.
Vicho's Hard
- 00:06:313 (4)-Add a whistle here?
- 00:13:365 (7)-Put a new combo here?
- 00:55:791 (6)-I think it's better to put a new combo here.
- 00:56:462 (1)-Remove new combo here.
- 00:57:582 (1)-Put a new combo here.
Insane
- 01:45:045-The same thing I mentioned about the kiai time problem on Normal. Keep the kiai time going by turning it on for this timing point and on the next one, which is 01:45:492, have it end on 01:45:716.
Nice work. Star.
Topic Starter
Thanks guys
star.
star for andrea~ >w</
Mod4Mod =] Link here :http://osu.ppy.sh/s/31057 (Wait for my bubble ><)
- SB
00:53:552 This could can be remove it faster in the last. (Move it out of the Background in 00:54:895)
01:34:074 The cloud is working for...? ORZ
- Insane
00:58:477 (6) - New combo right? (Change from song and Distance)
01:59:970 (1) - Suggest you to open 1/6 to stop with the spinner. Just think that is not the right place.. ~.~
01:37:433 (3-1st) - Wistle
Not that much... Orz
- Vicho's Hard
00:41:015 (4) - New combo
01:30:716 (8-1st) - Finish
01:55:343 (4-1st) - ^
01:59:933 (1) - Mention in Insane
- Normal
00:34:522 (4) - Suggest put it on 00:34:746
01:15:045 (3) - Finish?
- xxheroxx's Easy
00:10:343 (5) - New combo and remove 00:10:791 (1)
01:14:373 (4-2nd) - Remove wistle and Finish?
- Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni
00:25:791 (66) - Big Red?
00:26:910 (70) - Change it to 00:26:686 (69)
01:26:686 (64) - Big Red?
01:29:373 (78) - Big Blue?
01:40:791 (138) - ^?
- All
Lovely and MOE <3
STAR and Good luck
- SB
00:53:552 This could can be remove it faster in the last. (Move it out of the Background in 00:54:895)
01:34:074 The cloud is working for...? ORZ
- Insane
00:58:477 (6) - New combo right? (Change from song and Distance)
01:59:970 (1) - Suggest you to open 1/6 to stop with the spinner. Just think that is not the right place.. ~.~
01:37:433 (3-1st) - Wistle
Not that much... Orz
- Vicho's Hard
00:41:015 (4) - New combo
01:30:716 (8-1st) - Finish
01:55:343 (4-1st) - ^
01:59:933 (1) - Mention in Insane
- Normal
00:34:522 (4) - Suggest put it on 00:34:746
01:15:045 (3) - Finish?
- xxheroxx's Easy
00:10:343 (5) - New combo and remove 00:10:791 (1)
01:14:373 (4-2nd) - Remove wistle and Finish?
- Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni
00:25:791 (66) - Big Red?
00:26:910 (70) - Change it to 00:26:686 (69)
01:26:686 (64) - Big Red?
01:29:373 (78) - Big Blue?
01:40:791 (138) - ^?
- All
Lovely and MOE <3
STAR and Good luck
Topic Starter
Thanks everyone for the stars ^.^
Easy ~
Experienced Mappers don't need any suggestions
- Nothing i would change
Normal ~
00:03:179 - Add a circle? :s
00:06:761 - ^
00:30:045 (3,4,5) - Maybe... place them here 00:29:597 - and add a circle at 00:31:388 -
00:34:074 - Add a circle?
00:47:507 - ^
01:03:627 (5) - New combo
01:04:074 (1) - Remove new combo
01:07:656 (5) - ^
01:08:776 (1) - New combo
01:11:686 (1) - Remove new combo
01:16:164 (1) - ^
01:16:836 (2) - New combo
01:32:731 (1) - Remove new combo
01:34:074 (2) - New combo
01:44:149 (1) - Remove new combo
01:45:716 (3) - New combo
01:46:164 (1) - Remove new combo
01:58:925 (2) - Move this circle to 01:58:701 - ?
01:59:373 (3) - Move this slider to 01:59:149 - ?
01:59:821 - Add a circle?
Hard ~
00:06:313 (4) - Add whistle
00:55:791 (6) - Add new combo
01:37:433 (1) - Remove new combo
01:38:104 (2) - Add new combo
01:45:045 (5) - Add new combo?
Insane ~
00:06:313 (4) - Add whistle?
00:46:612 (5) - New combo
00:47:059 (1) - Remove new combo
00:58:701 (7,8,9,10) - uhhm.. symmerical but bit confusing dont you think?
01:09:000 (7) - New combo
01:09:671 (1) - Remove new combo
01:38:104 (4) - New combo?
Nicely done as expected!
Experienced Mappers don't need any suggestions
- Nothing i would changeNormal ~
00:03:179 - Add a circle? :s
00:06:761 - ^
00:30:045 (3,4,5) - Maybe... place them here 00:29:597 - and add a circle at 00:31:388 -
00:34:074 - Add a circle?
00:47:507 - ^
01:03:627 (5) - New combo
01:04:074 (1) - Remove new combo
01:07:656 (5) - ^
01:08:776 (1) - New combo
01:11:686 (1) - Remove new combo
01:16:164 (1) - ^
01:16:836 (2) - New combo
01:32:731 (1) - Remove new combo
01:34:074 (2) - New combo
01:44:149 (1) - Remove new combo
01:45:716 (3) - New combo
01:46:164 (1) - Remove new combo
01:58:925 (2) - Move this circle to 01:58:701 - ?
01:59:373 (3) - Move this slider to 01:59:149 - ?
01:59:821 - Add a circle?
Hard ~
00:06:313 (4) - Add whistle
00:55:791 (6) - Add new combo
01:37:433 (1) - Remove new combo
01:38:104 (2) - Add new combo
01:45:045 (5) - Add new combo?
Insane ~
00:06:313 (4) - Add whistle?
00:46:612 (5) - New combo
00:47:059 (1) - Remove new combo
00:58:701 (7,8,9,10) - uhhm.. symmerical but bit confusing dont you think?
01:09:000 (7) - New combo
01:09:671 (1) - Remove new combo
01:38:104 (4) - New combo?
Nicely done as expected!
Topic Starter
Thanks for mod :3
xxheroxx's Easy
01:07:209 (1,2) - This pattern seems confusing for an Easy
01:42:358 (1,2) - Pattern seems confusing too. I suggest remove one repeat and add a note instead.
Normal
00:06:313 (5) - Don't anti-jump this.
Vicho's Hard
00:06:313 (4) - Don't anti-jump this? It's fair enough since this is a Hard, but I suggest removing it for the map's flow.
00:07:209 (1) - Same as above.
00:08:776 (3) - Don't place this under the slider. Most of it is hidden under the slider.
Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni
Looks fine for me.
Insane
I don't like the Endpoint Slider Jumps and the Symmetry jumps, but it's fine I guess.
That's all.
Edit: Bubbled
01:07:209 (1,2) - This pattern seems confusing for an Easy
01:42:358 (1,2) - Pattern seems confusing too. I suggest remove one repeat and add a note instead.
Normal
00:06:313 (5) - Don't anti-jump this.
Vicho's Hard
00:06:313 (4) - Don't anti-jump this? It's fair enough since this is a Hard, but I suggest removing it for the map's flow.
00:07:209 (1) - Same as above.
00:08:776 (3) - Don't place this under the slider. Most of it is hidden under the slider.
Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni
Looks fine for me.
Insane
I don't like the Endpoint Slider Jumps and the Symmetry jumps, but it's fine I guess.
That's all.
Edit: Bubbled
Topic Starter
@yamao0404: Thanks for your star!
@NoHItter: Thanks for your mod and for the bubble <3
@Genkishi: Thanks for your star to you too!
@NoHItter: Thanks for your mod and for the bubble <3
@Genkishi: Thanks for your star to you too!
Oh,it's bubbled!
Edit:
Oh,it's Ranked,Congrats
Edit:
Oh,it's Ranked,Congrats
Ranked.
Topic Starter
Thanks a lot Takuma! <3
And also thanks to everyone for always helping and supporting my maps! ^.^
And also thanks to everyone for always helping and supporting my maps! ^.^
moe 
I don't like white!
why did u censor already censored stuff orz