Hi wcx sorry for the late reply
at first I thought Miku is hugging kyubei
[General]- I found that the combination of the kiai and the BG color make the combo color kinda too bright (but I just woke up so it's probably because of that)
[sherrie's Easy]01:41:404 (1,2) - I'm agree with kanpakyin here. The rhythm fits the music but it didn't play nice for new player. I suggest to change the whole slider into 2 circle on 01:41:404 & 01:42:293
01:59:182 (4) - NC this then remove NC from 02:00:515
02:31:182 (2) - probably remove 1 repeat so it'll follow the vocal?
02:47:182 (1) - same as 01:41:404 (1,2), but for this one I suggest using a slider like this
http://puu.sh/3gZr02:54:293 (x) - use an iNiS break right here
03:00:959 (T) - decrease the volume for this timing section to around 60%
03:08:515 (1) - then add another timing section to bring the volume back to 80% here
03:11:182 (5) - NC this
03:19:182 (5) - and maybe NC this too
03:26:293 (1) - could you please move this to somewhere else? the current position is disorienting as it's near 03:24:515 (1). Normal player could probably have no problem with this but for player who are new to the song and the map, will be a little confused
03:28:959 (1,2) - same as 01:41:404 (1,2), I suggest to change 1 into 1/1 beat slider from 03:28:959 to 03:29:404
03:31:626 (4) - NC this too
03:44:070 (3) - ^
03:49:404 (1,2) - ditto, try the same slider like
http://puu.sh/3gZr[Normal]00:46:293 (T) - the increase on the volume should start at this timing section. if you think that the finish is too loud, then just increase it by 10% (45% is too low for the volume transition here)
01:13:293 (1) - kinda cruel for normal here, but cause there the music to follow maybe it's ok
01:14:737 (T) - same as 00:46:293 (T) moreover that this is kiai time so I highly suggest to increase it and while you're at it increase all the timing section with 45% volume on this kiai. It's not contrast with the 85% volume timing section
02:10:293 (2,3) - unfortunately this is not a good overlap
02:25:848 (T) - same as 00:46:293 (T)
03:29:848 (T) - yes~
[Hard]00:46:293 (T) - same timing section issue as above
01:32:959 (2,3,4,5,6) - sounds very weird cause you break the double note like 01:20:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8). Highly suggest to change this following those previous patterns (it sounds better too)
01:34:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as above. It's easily fixed by moving 4 to 01:35:182 & 6 to 01:35:515
02:25:848 (T) - ditto, timing section~
02:46:737 (5,6,7,8) - maybe add clap for all of them?
02:48:515 (3,4,5,6) - ^
that's all I guess
Good luck with the map and Star