loveFantasy wrote:

winber1 wrote:

00:06:764 (1,2) - wow this really bothers me that they are perfectly vertical to each other i don't see the issue having them symmetrical

winber1 wrote:

LOL. OOPS TYPO
that they aren't perfectly symmetrical. at least last time i check this, they weren't perfectly aligned across the x-axis.
wow lololol. i looked really stupid when i said that.

Yomeiro wrote:

Sorry for the "late" mod >_>
Went to sleep yesterday when you solved a riddle in my queue, was pretty late already at my place though .,.

Maniac

Seems fine to me o.o

Hard

00:43:964 (2) - Combo-Burst from 00:43:164 (5,6) make this slider hard to see~, I would reccomend you to space either 00:43:164 (5,6) different or this slider a different way. fixed
01:09:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part is confusing if you don't read how the circles come but when you listen to the music >-<
I see how 2,4,6 and 8 approach, but I actually hit them earlier since I always think, they are at the blue ticks directly after them sliders.
Change this maybe... .,. yaeh fixed..
01:15:564 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is an interesting pattern but a bit confusing probably~ (just pointing this out)
01:53:964 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe add soft-whistle at the beginning of those sliders like you did at Maniac? :3 (sounds better in my opinion~) done

That's all for Hard~

Easy

Those parts seem like they are missing something, because of the slow AR, they are ok though~
01:04:364: You could probably add a spinner here, which ends at 01:05:564~ hmm..i think a short spinner is a bit hard for beginner..
01:49:564: You could probably add a slider here, ending at 01:50:364~ a bit soon..

Well nothing much to say here, nice diff as well.

Nice mapset, can't complain much about it and awesome song~
Have this star~ (but next time read the rules of my queue~ :3)

Yomeiro wrote:

lF Style
Not sure if loveFantasy would mind but...:
01:53:964 (1,2,3,4) - Same as Hard~ maybe add soft-whistles to those notes~ no for hitsound consistency
That's all~ :3

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Taiko]
Raise sample volume to at least 80. okay

Good job, though the small 1/6 parts don't seem to fit, or be used much... Didn't delete those before submitting, sorry orz

HeatKai wrote:

Got Request from TBRT queue.
So here's the mod ~

Oo Mekadon taiko :33333333

[general for taiko only]

Slider tick rate : 1 Doesn't affect anything, so no

[taiko]
Don't make saitama D: ! B...but there aren't any saitama reference...
I know it's your mapping style but
00:17:564 (46,47,48,49) - Overmapped Nah. I love this one more. Besides it follows the rhythm
00:31:030 (119,120,121) - not following any rhythm :3 Fix'd
01:00:864 (303,304,305,306) - Overmapped * can use 1/4 Same as 00:17:564 (46,47,48,49)
01:04:364 (1) - make it longer until 01:05:564 ok
01:55:164 (25,26,27,28) - Overmapped Also same reason
01:51:497 (3,4) - use 1/4 Done

Good luck ~

ouranhshc wrote:

Hey, just stopping bye. i was glancing at you map and I noticed that on Maniac, 01:50:764 was missing kiai.

DeeN wrote:

星球大战！（卧槽这坑爹的中文名字翻译）

haha just kidding

one of my favourite song in djmax series

SPOILER

<Easy>
nice silder :3

<lF style>
nothing found
and nice hitsounds i like it <3333

<Hard>
00:15:764 (3,4,5) - 3 4重叠吗 我的建议是4 5 Reverse selection一下
[attachment=2:b55ef]1.jpg[/attachment:b55ef]
4再摆下来一点？ yes
00:24:364 (1,2,3,4) - soft-clap? 替换成soft-finish怎么样（或者3换成soft-whistle 1 2 4 soft-finish?) 我记得这里是段custom hitsounds..
01:15:564 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nice但是或许读起来有些困难 试着用Newcombo标示一下？ x_x
01:36:364 (5) - 不合适> . > x_x
02:02:864 (4,5,6,1) - 5 6 1重叠？试着这样怎么样 daijobu
[attachment=1:b55ef]2.jpg[/attachment:b55ef]

<Manic>
00:49:964 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 第一个part的1 2 3 4 12（间距较小）-34（间距增大） 第二个part的reverse selection怎么样
类似这种感觉 keep it :3
[attachment=0:b55ef]3.jpg[/attachment:b55ef]
别的没什么了:3

YGOkid8 wrote:

modding at 4:13am ftw

Overall a pretty difficult mapset, but it's alright I think. Maniac was pretty fun, although, I personally would've liked to see more streams in, but that's a personal preference.

The only think that really should be changed is Maniac's hitcircle size. Make it smaller by 1, it's unnecessarily large atm. I also suggest increasing the OD by 1 as well.

soulfear wrote:

建議:
總體來說HITSOUND太小聲了...特別是MANIAC的那2段連打 加點鈴聲也好吧...加在紅線上

MANIAC:
00:17:564 (13) - 改成NOTE吧... 不想改了..
00:30:964 (3) - 結尾加鈴 added
00:31:264 (4) - 去掉鈴 done
00:58:364 (2,4) - 鈴改成紅線和白線...藍線取消掉... done
建議,用不用看你自己吧.

karenying wrote:

taken by #modreqs
Maniac
00:25:164 (6) - 头finish ?
01:05:564 (1) - 只是意見,01:05:464 (4,1) - 这里距離都x1.56了,不如干脆这串里每个NC渐加距離这样?(即是(4,1)加距離) no 不过改了点
01:05:964 (1) - 头finish k
01:20:364 (5) - NC k
01:50:764 (1) - 加finish如何? k

Hard
这难度的tick音是故意的?感觉不好听 oops忘记改回来了 fixed
01:18:764 (5) - finish k

没用的话不用给kd

Rukarioman wrote:

Easy:
- Okay Tick Rate 2 is way too spammy for Easy. I'd suggest using Tick 1 for Easy. Okay
00:35:564 (1,1) - Having notes so close after spinners in an Easy diff is difficult for beginners. Changed
01:29:964 (3) - The slidertick being in the hitcircle looks a bit ugly. lol

lF Style:
- Why is this Slider Velocity smaller than in Easy? Next time watch out with Guest diffs.
00:50:364 (5) - Maybe move this one 1/4 tick later? Nope

Hard:
01:10:964 (7,8) - Why use a different spacing for this all of a sudden? x.x fixed

Maniac:
01:04:364 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why do you have a different spacing in all these streams? fixed
01:11:164 (3) - This slowdown is pretty hard to predict.It's a little longer than others..Though it's hard to read at playing

Kytoxid wrote:

[IF Style]

I assume this is Normal?

00:24:364 (1,2) - I recommend not having identical sliders with different speeds on any difficulty.
i understand, but the music leads me to map with a fast slider+a slow slider, so i really want to keep it.
00:40:564 (1,2,3,4) - For the first iteration, changing this to two sliders will help the player actually read the pattern.
i sacrifice readability here because the instrument stand out the most here so i think circles fit more (the similar paragraph at 43:764 and 46:964, that instrument is less obvious so mapped in different way)
01:09:164 (1,2,3,4) - Identical sliders shouldn't have different numbers of repeats consecutively either.
you're right, change (4) to 2 sliders
01:38:764 (1) - Dunno what this doublets part is following...
remapped a bit

other fix done:
01:37:164 (4) - left a grid
01:44:564 (1) - hitsound change to S:normal
Eh, it's a bit hard for a Normal, but not too hard that I'd be concerned, since you have an Easy.

Kytoxid wrote:

Taking over for the poor Rukarioman.

[General]

IF Style has a different source(fixed), and a random kiai fountain in the middle that the other diffs don't have.
Hard is missing mekadon in tags. fixed

The bright blue hurts the eyes a bit in kiai. Errr..

[Easy]

Can't say I'm a fan of the weird-shaped linear sliders.

00:09:964 (1,2) - I'd silence these two ticks, they're really loud. done
01:02:764 (3) - Make this symmetrical? Follow the rhythm so nothin change

It's structurally fine, but I didn't really like the looks.

[IF Style]

I assume this is Normal?

00:24:364 (1,2) - I recommend not having identical sliders with different speeds on any difficulty.
00:40:564 (1,2,3,4) - For the first iteration, changing this to two sliders will help the player actually read the pattern.
01:09:164 (1,2,3,4) - Identical sliders shouldn't have different numbers of repeats consecutively either.
01:38:764 (1) - Dunno what this doublets part is following...

Eh, it's a bit hard for a Normal, but not too hard that I'd be concerned, since you have an Easy.

[Hard]

00:06:764 (1) - This opener is really cool. :O
00:14:764 (1) - This part felt a bit messy, since the notes start appearing under hitbursts. fixed
01:09:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Space these out a bit, maybe even as jumps; this is really hard to read. fixed

This was a bit hard for a Hard too, at parts, but it played really well. I think it should be okay.

[Maniac]

00:16:364 (1) - I don't recommend having a stream like this. :P

Good, other than the fact that I can't FC it.

Kytoxid wrote:

lF style's source is still different. Please check over that.

Also, the maps in general are a bit too soft, especially sections at 30% or under, imo, since the hitsound blends into the music a bit too much.

Everything else looks okay.