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KOTOKO - Leaf ticket (Short Ver.)

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kanpakyin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年9月27日 at 17:13:06

Artist: KOTOKO
Title: Leaf ticket (Short Ver.)
Source: Parfait ~Chocolat Second Brew~
Tags: i've sound lovefantasy GIGA
BPM: 118
Filesize: 17562kb
Play Time: 02:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.18 stars, 93 notes)
  2. Hard (4.8 stars, 291 notes)
  3. LF's Normal (3.98 stars, 192 notes)
  4. Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 522 notes)
Download: KOTOKO - Leaf ticket (Short Ver.)
Download: KOTOKO - Leaf ticket (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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KOTOKO - Leaf Ticket
Love this song!
Special thanks to kodomonoyume for the skin and JoJo for the spinner!

Mapset:
Easy - Done
Normal - (by lovefantasy)- Done
Hard - Done
Taiko - Done


O .O人O. O
S o r d a
1st 8-)
swish
KPY >_<
Dustbox
star~
loveFantasy
打個星順便預約SC2..

EDIT2: all done

Download: easymap.rar
_Kiva
8-)
Gottwald
kotoko
JoJo
去屎吧神mapper! =A=
KanaRin
tags: loveFantasy
Irc modded
Suzully
神曲 :D
PeaChick
KOTOKO!!!!w star ~ ☆ミ
Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.= ="
Akemi_Homura
KOTOKO~~!
Parfait~~~!!
star~!
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* My Pending Map *
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Snowy Dream
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grvyd
Nice song and maps!!!!! Why is WIP?

[General]
Title:Leaf Ticket (Short Ver.) Probably need.
Add tags 'GIGA' (Company was selling Parfait)

[Easy]
01:29:105 (1,2,1) - Suggestion. http://puu.sh/4wc5 because 01:30:630 (2,1) is too difficulty.

[LF's Normal]
01:12:833 (3,1) - I felt slightly uncomfortable in the spacing.
01:14:867 (3,1) - ^

[Hard]
Very nice map.

I like slider and hitsound in all diff.I hope for Easy's hitsound. :D
And to be Ranked!
loveFantasy
fix something.

Your message is too short etc.

Download: KOTOKO - Leaf Ticket (kanpakyin) [LF's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

flatps wrote:

Nice song and maps!!!!! Why is WIP?

[General]
Title:Leaf Ticket (Short Ver.) Probably need.
Add tags 'GIGA' (Company was selling Parfait) OK.

[Easy]
01:29:105 (1,2,1) - Suggestion. http://puu.sh/4wc5 because 01:30:630 (2,1) is too difficulty.
X
Thanks!
Sandpig
Hard

00:31:393 (4,1) - 这个跳跨度太大了,前边1234没有感觉出有距离加大的趋势。
00:51:477 - 这地方应该有个clap。这里用slider带过有点不能理解(既没有配合歌词也没有配合节奏)
01:01:647 - 同上
01:02:664 - 原曲里这里是有个clap的否则后面那三下太突然
01:05:715 - clap
01:19:444 (6,7,8) - 后面两个放到其它地方好点,01:20:206 (8,1) - 这个跳感觉完全没必要
01:53:384 - 加个note做成三连


Easy

00:03:172 (3,4,5) - easy建议不要遮这么多
00:34:189 (3) - 折回部分把下一段的切入点00:35:715带过去了
00:55:037 (5) - 不知道为什么这么喜欢用长的repeat slider(降星还是省事?),很多重要的note就这么没了(00:56:562)
00:58:088 (1) - 同上(00:59:613)
01:01:139 (3) - 不理解为什么要用白-红-白这样,既没有配合歌词也没有配合节奏
01:15:884 (2) - 切入点又没了
01:24:528 (1) - 高潮一上来就拖这么长的slider不太符合歌曲的感觉
01:31:393 (1) - easy难度里插这么一个不算长的spinner只会增加难度,另外感觉并不合曲
01:35:715 (4) - 偷懒slider


在我来看EASY难度很难做到两星以下。note太少是对原曲节奏的不尊重,而且一旦脱离了原曲的节奏反而还会增加难度。
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

Sandpig wrote:

Hard

00:31:393 (4,1) - 这个跳跨度太大了,前边1234没有感觉出有距离加大的趋势。 //縮短了一下
00:51:477 - 这地方应该有个clap。这里用slider带过有点不能理解(既没有配合歌词也没有配合节奏)//好.
01:01:647 - 同上 //這裏踩紅線反而是想突出01:01:901 - .
01:02:664 - 原曲里这里是有个clap的否则后面那三下太突然 //不會啊..這裏沒CLAP阿..clap了反而覺得奇怪..
01:05:715 - clap //orz..漏了..
01:19:444 (6,7,8) - 后面两个放到其它地方好点,01:20:206 (8,1) - 这个跳感觉完全没必要 //為甚麼你覺得沒必要? o.o? 從這裏開始音程高了半度,而後面以半度的音程慢慢提高,所以這個跳還是有一定的作用.
01:53:384 - 加个note做成三连 //可.


Easy

00:03:172 (3,4,5) - easy建议不要遮这么多 //..誤操作= =
00:34:189 (3) - 折回部分把下一段的切入点00:35:715带过去了//這個暫時不改
00:55:037 (5) - 不知道为什么这么喜欢用长的repeat slider(降星还是省事?),很多重要的note就这么没了(00:56:562)//暫時不改..
00:58:088 (1) - 同上(00:59:613) 同上.
01:01:139 (3) - 不理解为什么要用白-红-白这样,既没有配合歌词也没有配合节奏 //01:01:901 - 這個踩歌詞,01:02:664 - 這個踩鼓點.
01:15:884 (2) - 切入点又没了//有規定一定要踩長白線的嗎?= =
01:24:528 (1) - 高潮一上来就拖这么长的slider不太符合歌曲的感觉 //改成1拍了.
01:31:393 (1) - easy难度里插这么一个不算长的spinner只会增加难度,另外感觉并不合曲 //可.
01:35:715 (4) - 偷懒slider//讓我繼續偷懶= =


在我来看EASY难度很难做到两星以下。note太少是对原曲节奏的不尊重,而且一旦脱离了原曲的节奏反而还会增加难度。//如果Easy塞滿1/1和1/2那還叫easy嗎?相反的,也要考慮到newbie的能力,如果太難對他們有什麼意思?那倒不如去玩normal算.這只是我的個人意見.
謝謝modding.
rEdo
i can't really find anything, so let me just point some suggestions ><

[Easy]
0:28:088 (4) - sliders like those might be kinda confusing for newbies, because of that sliderarrow. i think. .-.
1:04:189 (1), 1:06:223 (3), 1:08:257 (1), 1:10:291 (2), 1:11:308 (1), 1:14:359 (1), 1:17:410 (1) - louder finishes, perhaps?

[LF's Normal]
add some more volume to your timing sections. also, you should de-silence some of the notes. the whole map sounds null, when those hitsounds are this quiet.
0:02:400 (3) - add a whistle at its end?
0:06:722 (4) - add a whistle?
1:39:518 (3) - move the last sliderpoint by one/two grids lower?

[Hard]
0:02:664 (5,6,7) - imo this would sound quite better if you would add a whistle at (5)'s end, delete it at (6) and again add at (7)'s end.
0:17:410 (4) - rorate by 4° CCW, so it's quite symmetral?
1:11:816 (3) - a bit inconsistent spacing, move it a little to the left-bottom
1:08:257 (1), 1:12:325 (1), 1:15:884 (5), 1:18:427 (5) - aren't they too quiet?
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

rEdo wrote:

[Easy]
0:28:088 (4) - sliders like those might be kinda confusing for newbies, because of that sliderarrow. i think. .-. //Fixed this.
1:04:189 (1), 1:06:223 (3), 1:08:257 (1), 1:10:291 (2), 1:11:308 (1), 1:14:359 (1), 1:17:410 (1) - louder finishes, perhaps? //I make them on purpose because I follow the music.

[Hard]
0:02:664 (5,6,7) - imo this would sound quite better if you would add a whistle at (5)'s end, delete it at (6) and again add at (7)'s end. //ok
0:17:410 (4) - rorate by 4° CCW, so it's quite symmetral? //It don't make a big different,so keep this for now
1:11:816 (3) - a bit inconsistent spacing, move it a little to the left-bottom //ok
1:08:257 (1), 1:12:325 (1), 1:15:884 (5), 1:18:427 (5) - aren't they too quiet? //Same as easy.
Thanks for modding.

Edit:
Update!
loveFantasy

rEdo wrote:

[LF's Normal]
add some more volume to your timing sections. also, you should de-silence some of the notes. the whole map sounds null, when those hitsounds are this quiet.
i think the volume is okey, and i mostly only silence slidertick and spinner end
0:02:400 (3) - add a whistle at its end?
0:06:722 (4) - add a whistle?
the whistles at prelude part follow lower (left hand) part of piano
1:39:518 (3) - move the last sliderpoint by one/two grids lower?
yes o.o also rearrange some spacing of similar slider/circle pattern
thank you <33

Download: KOTOKO - Leaf Ticket (Short Ver.) (kanpakyin) [LF's Normal].osu
Hellzero
Here is my noob mod ;w;
It's good map so some nazi only

Hard
00:12:452 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - spacing so close imo 0.4x will be better
00:18:427 (5) - move little right? 00:19:189 (2,3) - some ^

LF's Normal
00:27:569 (1) - 1 grid left and 2 up (with mod: Hard Rock it will look better)
00:59:095 (3) - move little right? (also maybe copy-paste (2) slider? )
Easy
Nothing~

Star btw :3
loveFantasy
@Hellzero: thanks for testing it in Hardrock~
move thing around and now it looks better both in no mod & Hardrock mod

Download: KOTOKO - Leaf Ticket (Short Ver.) (kanpakyin) [LF's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
kanpakyin
>Hellzero
Fixed something but not all of them.

>LF
uploaded!
Magicphoenix
Yo !
[Hard]
AR - 1
it's only 118 BPM and i don't see the reason for having AR 8 on [Hard], also the map doesn't is as hard as to make the AR faster for better readability

00:53:511 (3) - Replace slider end finish with a whistle
01:38:766 (1) - Replace with finish? And remove here 01:40:800
01:42:833 (1) - Deepen the slider path curve?


[LF's Normal]

00:14:095 (2) - Remove clap on start
00:14:857 (3) - Add clap
00:17:908 (2) - Remove clap on slider end
00:22:230 (3) - Remove clap at slider start
00:23:501 (1,2,3,4) - Do the pattern like this : 00:24:010 (2) - Remove clap
00:28:586 (2) - Copy pasta it with (1) ?
00:57:061 (2,3) - Do the slider like this : 01:15:112 (1) - Embrace the (3) better?
02:05:196 (1) - End slider 1/8 later

[Easy]

~~


~Good luck on rank =3
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

Magicphoenix wrote:

Yo !
[Hard]
AR - 1 //k
it's only 118 BPM and i don't see the reason for having AR 8 on [Hard], also the map doesn't is as hard as to make the AR faster for better readability

00:53:511 (3) - Replace slider end finish with a whistle //Did something here.
01:38:766 (1) - Replace with finish? And remove here 01:40:800 //X,I think my way is much better.
01:42:833 (1) - Deepen the slider path curve? //X
Thanks for modding!
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