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p3n
Such a beautiful song.

[Easy]
Pretty much perfect map. Only a few cosmetic things (nothing important):
00:42:291 (6,7) - move both to 297/219 to fix the somewhat ugly gap to (5), also adjust (8) afterwards by [Ctrl]-snapping it
01:06:194 (4) - Can be curved nicer around (3):
300,176,66194,2,0,B|264:177|231:198|222:239|232:276,1,135

[Hard]
01:39:852 (1) - I'd prefer this slider @0,75x speed (just like 01:45:706 (1)), as this would perfectly match the smaller spacing of the circle triplets before (01:43:267 (2,3,4) & 01:44:730 (6,7,8))


Ok there is nothing that has to be "fixed" in this mapset but I hope my mostly cosmetic suggestions help at least a bit. Very good work!
~star
Topic Starter
Nymph

p3n wrote:

Such a beautiful song.

[Easy]
Pretty much perfect map. Only a few cosmetic things (nothing important):
00:42:291 (6,7) - move both to 297/219 to fix the somewhat ugly gap to (5), also adjust (8) afterwards by [Ctrl]-snapping it not quite sure about this... maybe changed
01:06:194 (4) - Can be curved nicer around (3):
300,176,66194,2,0,B|264:177|231:198|222:239|232:276,1,135
ok~

[Hard]
01:39:852 (1) - I'd prefer this slider @0,75x speed (just like 01:45:706 (1)), as this would perfectly match the smaller spacing of the circle triplets before (01:43:267 (2,3,4) & 01:44:730 (6,7,8)) ok~nice


Ok there is nothing that has to be "fixed" in this mapset but I hope my mostly cosmetic suggestions help at least a bit. Very good work!
~star
thanks very much~ :)
KSHR
moding ;)


General
Preview Point - 00:46:194 better imo
Tags - add "Eucliwood Hellscythe" (character's name) ?


Easy
HP : +1 at least (b/c I think too low.. ><)

02:09:121 (3) - add whistle at beginning ?
02:50:096 (2) - ^
02:53:023 (4) - ^
02:58:877 (5) - ^
03:04:730 (4) - ^
03:09:121 (3) - ^
03:29:121 (1) - end = 03:35:525 ? remove finish ?


Hard
03:29:121 (1) - end = 03:35:525 ? remove finish ?


these are all suggestions!
If you fix nothing, please dont give me kds
Topic Starter
Nymph

KSHR wrote:

moding ;)


General
Preview Point - 00:46:194 better imo I prefer mine~ sorry
Tags - add "Eucliwood Hellscythe" (character's name) ? Ok..I don't know how to spell Yuu's full name..this helps a lot.


Easy
HP : +1 at least (b/c I think too low.. ><) don't want to... I really want to -1. T T

02:09:121 (3) - add whistle at beginning ?
02:50:096 (2) - ^
02:53:023 (4) - ^
02:58:877 (5) - ^
03:04:730 (4) - ^
03:09:121 (3) - ^ yeah these above all fixed and I add sth more myself.
03:29:121 (1) - end = 03:35:525 ? remove finish ? This spinner ended according to BPM 123 not the second BPM, so I am not quite sure about this.. about the finish hitsound I really rather keep it~


Hard
03:29:121 (1) - end = 03:35:525 ? remove finish ?


these are all suggestions!
If you fix nothing, please dont give me kds
thanks so much~
Snowy Dream
:)
妮姆芙神mapper~
------------------------------------------------
[General]
BPM: 122.97
offset: 16936


[Easy]
00:43:749 (x) - add a note.
00:48:627 (2) - 这个结尾感觉很奇怪
01:00:334 (2) - ^
01:05:700 (x) - add a note.


[Hard]
AR-1
OD-1
(只是感觉AR快了 OD减不减无所谓>.>)
01:49:121 (1) - 有点被重合了 和前面的slider 分开
02:07:657 (3) - 左右不对称=A=
02:14:974 (4) - 加个回转
02:34:486 (6,7,8) - 和后面的(2)部分重合了 分开
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剩下问题不大
主要把BPM和offset调整下。
乃听听看>.> 不知道我测的对不
Star~☆
S o r d a
sorry for late=A=

[overall]:
  1. need a Normal? to fill the gap between Easy and Hard imo
[Hard]:
  1. 00:50:584 (7) - New combo
  2. 00:51:072 (1) - Remove Newcombo
  3. 01:04:730 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/2OUr like this
[Easy]:
  1. 00:54:486 (5) - whistle
  2. 01:37:901 (3) - 1gird up
nice map>_<
_ Kinoko
;) Good job~!
:P
Topic Starter
Nymph

Snowy Dream wrote:

:)
妮姆芙神mapper~
------------------------------------------------
[General]
BPM: 122.97
offset: 16936 不确定啊...ACC打不高


[Easy]
00:43:749 (x) - add a note.
00:48:627 (2) - 这个结尾感觉很奇怪
01:00:334 (2) - ^
01:05:700 (x) - add a note. 还是想保留自己的


[Hard]
AR-1
OD-1
(只是感觉AR快了 OD减不减无所谓>.>) 好吧 AR-1
01:49:121 (1) - 有点被重合了 和前面的slider 分开 哎好吧
02:07:657 (3) - 左右不对称=A= ...这个已经尽最大努力了...
02:14:974 (4) - 加个回转 ...都让我在这里加回转...我不加 T T
02:34:486 (6,7,8) - 和后面的(2)部分重合了 分开..这个就这样吧
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剩下问题不大
主要把BPM和offset调整下。
乃听听看>.> 不知道我测的对不
Star~☆
谢了雪儿神MAPPER~
Topic Starter
Nymph

S o r d a wrote:

sorry for late=A=

[overall]:
  1. need a Normal? to fill the gap between Easy and Hard imo
Really don't think so...this hard seems more like a normal...OK I will use a custom diff name..

[Hard]:
  1. 00:50:584 (7) - New combo
  2. 00:51:072 (1) - Remove Newcombo I think it is not necessary
  3. 01:04:730 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/2OUr like this
yeah..I prefer mine.

[Easy]:
  1. 00:54:486 (5) - whistle Don't want to do this
  2. 01:37:901 (3) - 1gird up then the Y is different..
nice map>_<
thanks~
spboxer3
[Relaxing]
臥槽~這難度太蛋疼啦0.87顆星
難以挑毛病阿(誤
All Nice

[Yuu~]
同上來著>_>(喂


結論:nice song! 果然是神mapper來著
star~~
Topic Starter
Nymph

spboxer3 wrote:

[Relaxing]
臥槽~這難度太蛋疼啦0.87顆星
難以挑毛病阿(誤
All Nice

[Yuu~]
同上來著>_>(喂


結論:nice song! 果然是神mapper來著
star~~
王长喜才是神MAPPER 8-) 谢MOD~
Topic Starter
Nymph
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wmfchris
diff name changed? o_o

[Normal]
00:36:925 (7) - looks better if we put the note at around (212,288)?
01:00:340 (3) - flip vertically?
02:31:072 (5,6) - [Nazi] left 1 grid lv4
03:25:525 (4) - not sure about this, seems the slider ends slightly faster than the point sound.

[Easy]
00:28:145 (1,2) - adjust the last fixing point of slider down 1 lv 4 grid so that it ends at y:80. (2) right 1 grid lv4.
no problem for me~

star~
Sonnyc
General:

-- Preview point at 02:44:243

Relaxing:

01:00:340 (2) : Symmetry

Star
Topic Starter
Nymph

wmfchris wrote:

diff name changed? o_o

[Normal]
00:36:925 (7) - looks better if we put the note at around (212,288)? seems not much difference..but ok~
01:00:340 (3) - flip vertically? I think it is just fine.
02:31:072 (5,6) - [Nazi] left 1 grid lv4 no difference :o
03:25:525 (4) - not sure about this, seems the slider ends slightly faster than the point sound. I am not sure either..

[Easy]
00:28:145 (1,2) - adjust the last fixing point of slider down 1 lv 4 grid so that it ends at y:80. (2) right 1 grid lv4.ok
no problem for me~

star~
thanks~

Sonnyc wrote:

General:

-- Preview point at 02:44:243 I prefer mine.

Relaxing:

01:00:340 (2) : Symmetry it is ok I think

Star

thanks
hez
很美的一首歌
Topic Starter
Nymph

hez wrote:

很美的一首歌
:) 盒子姥爷说得好
Miu Matsuoka
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EDIT: I want to make diff ;w;
Magical Pokie
先Star

:lol: easy 圈大點吧,歌詞對的太多,把部分節奏換成音樂吧……
relax2:16:925 這幾個太擠了……
2:50:096 0.75x 合適?
2:09:121 0.5x合適?
個人覺得這個難度有Kai最好

最後的96BPM總感覺不需要
雖然只有短短一些,但你必須遵守契約,獻出kudo1個(捂臉
Topic Starter
Nymph

Magical Pokie wrote:

先Star

:lol: easy 圈大點吧,歌詞對的太多,把部分節奏換成音樂吧…… 我觉得还好啊
relax2:16:925 這幾個太擠了…… 还好..
2:50:096 0.75x 合適?这几个是一样速度的
2:09:121 0.5x合適? 本来就是0.5吧
個人覺得這個難度有Kai最好 不要....闪死了

最後的96BPM總感覺不需要 这个必须要 最后一个SLIDER就是在这个BPM走的
雖然只有短短一些,但你必須遵守契約,獻出kudo1個(捂臉
你是QP吗..
Magical Pokie
shi QB^
Miu Matsuoka
My diff:
Download: Tsukimiya Midori - Sugao (Nymph_) [Miu's Hard].osu

Plus some mods:
Overall
Looks like your custom skin is not complete, it would be ugly if it was overlapped with another skin.
Make sure to have the full set listed below
Hitcircle:
hitcircle.png
hitcircleoverlay.png
approachcircle.png

Spinner:
spinner-background.png
spinner-circle.png
spinner-approachcircle.png
spinner-metre.png

Spinner Hints:
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
spinner-osu.png

Countdown:
ready.png
count3.png
count2.png
count1.png
go.png

Cursor:
cursor.png
cursortrail.png

Scorebar:
scorebar-bg.png
scorebar-colour.png

Hitbursts:
hit0.png
hit50.png
hit100.png
hit100k.png
hit300.png
hit300k.png
hit300g.png

Scorebar Ki:
scorebar-ki.png
scorebar-kidanger.png
scorebar-kidanger2.png

Slider scores:
sliderpoint10.png
sliderpoint30.png

Hitcircle numbers:
default-0.png
default-1.png
...
default-9.png

Score numbers:
score-0.png
score-1.png
...
score-9.png
score-comma.png
score-dot.png
score-percent.png
score-x.png

Section Markers:
section-pass.png
section-fail.png

Quoted from: http://osu.ppy.sh/p/faq# (10. Map Design Issues)
Add Kiai for diffs? If not, just add a kiai fountain just like what I've do for my diff at some places.
I strongly suggest you to use waltz timing (Time signature: 3/4) [Refer to my diff]

[Relaxing]
01:06:194 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105358 instead? Looks nicer for me~

[Yuu~]
00:38:389 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + H? (Because (7) and (1) are too close)
00:54:486 (1) - Finish or Whistle?
01:42:779 (1) - Distance Snap... x:320 y:128? (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105367)

Lovely~ ;)
R20_old
I love Miu's maps <3
btw good song and maps also~ :D

but no kiai.... :(
Clare
[General]:
好美的歌SB也不錯:D
02:35:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這個地方有offset偏 建議找人看看


[Relaxing]:
01:47:169 (8) - 用normal hit-normal?
後面很多類似的重音 換成normal hit-normal會比較好
03:14:730 - 這裡之後音量也太小了吧 打起來幾乎沒有聲音 很奇怪改成15%怎麼樣?

[Yuu~]:
多加點音效進去吧 好空
01:37:413 (2,3,4) - 這是為什麼呢?這麼近? 要不疊一起要不跟前面一樣遠
01:38:877 (6,7,8) - ^
01:43:267 (2,3,4) - ^
01:44:730 (6,7,8) - ^
03:14:974 - 同Relaxing


Top diff:Yuu~

star
Topic Starter
Nymph

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

My diff:
[attachment=0:3a11a]Tsukimiya Midori - Sugao (Nymph_) [Miu's Hard].osu[/attachment:3a11a]

Plus some mods:
Overall
Looks like your custom skin is not complete, it would be ugly if it was overlapped with another skin.
Make sure to have the full set listed below
Hitcircle:
hitcircle.png
hitcircleoverlay.png
approachcircle.png

Spinner:
spinner-background.png
spinner-circle.png
spinner-approachcircle.png
spinner-metre.png

Spinner Hints:
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
spinner-osu.png

Countdown:
ready.png
count3.png
count2.png
count1.png
go.png

Cursor:
cursor.png
cursortrail.png

Scorebar:
scorebar-bg.png
scorebar-colour.png

Hitbursts:
hit0.png
hit50.png
hit100.png
hit100k.png
hit300.png
hit300k.png
hit300g.png

Scorebar Ki:
scorebar-ki.png
scorebar-kidanger.png
scorebar-kidanger2.png

Slider scores:
sliderpoint10.png
sliderpoint30.png

Hitcircle numbers:
default-0.png
default-1.png
...
default-9.png

Score numbers:
score-0.png
score-1.png
...
score-9.png
score-comma.png
score-dot.png
score-percent.png
score-x.png

Section Markers:
section-pass.png
section-fail.png

Quoted from: http://osu.ppy.sh/p/faq# (10. Map Design Issues)
Ok but I can't get all of these, I think these skins are OK.
Add Kiai for diffs? If not, just add a kiai fountain just like what I've do for my diff at some places. yeah I prefer not. I hate Kiai in slow and calm song.
I strongly suggest you to use waltz timing (Time signature: 3/4) [Refer to my diff] yeah ok. Actually I don't know what 34 44 means..

[Relaxing]
01:06:194 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105358 instead? Looks nicer for me~ People said it is confusing, so I changed to this one.

[Yuu~]
00:38:389 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + H? (Because (7) and (1) are too close) all right
00:54:486 (1) - Finish or Whistle?I prefer neither.
01:42:779 (1) - Distance Snap... x:320 y:128? (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105367) didn't see much difference?

Lovely~ ;)
Ok added~
Topic Starter
Nymph

Clare wrote:

[General]:
好美的歌SB也不錯:D
02:35:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這個地方有offset偏 建議找人看看 TIMING苦手 等MAT或者BAT来提吧


[Relaxing]:
01:47:169 (8) - 用normal hit-normal?
後面很多類似的重音 換成normal hit-normal會比較好其实初衷是想让歌曲很安静 没想用许多CLAP的
03:14:730 - 這裡之後音量也太小了吧 打起來幾乎沒有聲音 很奇怪改成15%怎麼樣? 可能我耳机比较吵?5我也能听清 那改成10好了

[Yuu~]:
多加點音效進去吧 好空 ...确实不喜欢特别多的音效
01:37:413 (2,3,4) - 這是為什麼呢?這麼近? 要不疊一起要不跟前面一樣遠
01:38:877 (6,7,8) - ^
01:43:267 (2,3,4) - ^
01:44:730 (6,7,8) - ^ 应该无影响吧?暂时保留
03:14:974 - 同Relaxing




Top diff:Yuu~

star
谢谢~
winber1
gah slow songs D:

General

--Offset should actually be 16438 (one white tick earlier than what it is right now)
--There's no kiai time in Yuu~ or Relaxing..


Miu's


--02:09:121 - i really don't see the point of this kiai fountain. It doesn't fit imo. I would rather just end the kiai time here.

00:58:877 (2) - delete the clap and whistle at the end of slider
02:26:681 (1,2,3) - if you want the finishes to sound loud, then ok, but you sould make the rest of the notes softer to match the rest of the song
02:37:413 (4,5,6) - unstack? it seems kinda boring as it stands right now
03:10:096 (1) - this kinda touches the hp bar :/

Yuu~

00:23:755 (3) - add whistle
00:35:462 (5) - add whistle?
00:41:316 (5) - ^
00:53:023 (1) - ^
01:26:682 (2) - ^
03:29:121 (1) - end spinner on white tick. it ends in the middle of nowhere right now lol.

Relaxing

--use same whistle suggestions?
--this is definitely not the only relaxing difficulty lol >_>

01:38:389 (4) - add whistle
01:44:243 (4) - ^
03:21:804 (2,3,4) - even if these notes are so far apart, i still wouldn't use this spacing :/ I'd separate them more, but still maintain that triangular shape. It also looks better that way imo, cuz the notes aren't cramped in the middle.

Nice map! :3
Axey
= =又是催眠曲

[Relaxing]
01:06:194(4)-敢不敢弯的再难看一点

[Yuu~]
02:14:974(4)-加个折返

no kds
Topic Starter
Nymph

BakaHuang wrote:

= =又是催眠曲

T T不要吐槽~
Curisu
!
Daiguren
不好意思拖得太久了 ;_;

看了一下没有大的问题

不过有一点.

General
Hard和其他diff的offset和开始时间不一样,这个貌似有的M/Bat很忌讳,,,所以提一下

OK~ Have a star.

no kds for this post ,thank you~
Miu Matsuoka
Update:
Download: Tsukimiya Midori - Sugao (Nymph_) [Miu's Hard].osu

btw about offset problem, it's still best to change offset to around 3267 and set time signature to 3/4, or else it will be very strange when the osu! cookie isn't catching up the waltzing rhythm of the song... :(
You can change it in Song Setup -> Time Signature (metronome) -> 3/4 (waltz)
Topic Starter
Nymph

winber1 wrote:

gah slow songs D:

General

--Offset should actually be 16438 (one white tick earlier than what it is right now)
--There's no kiai time in Yuu~ or Relaxing..


Miu's


--02:09:121 - i really don't see the point of this kiai fountain. It doesn't fit imo. I would rather just end the kiai time here.

00:58:877 (2) - delete the clap and whistle at the end of slider
02:26:681 (1,2,3) - if you want the finishes to sound loud, then ok, but you sould make the rest of the notes softer to match the rest of the song
02:37:413 (4,5,6) - unstack? it seems kinda boring as it stands right now
03:10:096 (1) - this kinda touches the hp bar :/

Yuu~

00:23:755 (3) - add whistle
00:35:462 (5) - add whistle?
00:41:316 (5) - ^
00:53:023 (1) - ^
01:26:682 (2) - ^
03:29:121 (1) - end spinner on white tick. it ends in the middle of nowhere right now lol. All fixed

Relaxing

--use same whistle suggestions?
--this is definitely not the only relaxing difficulty lol >_>

01:38:389 (4) - add whistle
01:44:243 (4) - ^
03:21:804 (2,3,4) - even if these notes are so far apart, i still wouldn't use this spacing :/ I'd separate them more, but still maintain that triangular shape. It also looks better that way imo, cuz the notes aren't cramped in the middle. don't have good spacing ideas for now..so just keeping it.

Nice map! :3

thanks!
Topic Starter
Nymph
Updated
Kotone
General
offset太早了 我测了一下约3308 建議找个MAT/BAT timing一下
tag Miu Matsuoka

Relaxing
最後的音量10%20%什么的太小了听不到
Yuu~同上

Miu'sHard
我想说音乐裹没clap时加clap很违和(00:48:633 - 01:46:681 这段)
02:44:243 (4) - newcombo
02:45:706 (1) - remove newcombo
另外也是5%~10%音量太小了听不到了

实在没什么可MOD的 加油
Leorda
NI HAO

General
* I ask Garven about 3.jpg, and he said is fine, but he recommend to using different one
* I would like to see more unique SB (lyric SB, stuff, etc.) than background image....
* section-pass is cut off because the girl's head
* Offset : 3317

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Relaxing
* Slow slider (e.g. 01:06:194 (4)) can confuse for newbies during gameplay. Try something interesting
* If this a relaxing diff, try add an object and place at red tick. Since, this song is slow (suggestion)

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Yuu~
00:47:657 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:48:633 (4) - New combo?
00:53:023 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:00:828 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think 9 combos are too long for normal diff
02:07:657 (3) - I think the sliderbody is almost offscreen
02:16:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 10 combos are too long for normal diff
02:54:974 (3) - This slider is going to offscreen!!!

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Miu's Hard
02:05:949 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I think 11 combos is too long
03:04:243 (1) - Tail slider is offscreen

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I'm sleepy~
Miu Matsuoka
Topic Starter
Nymph
Miu's hard updated.

My diffs all deleted and remapped.
KayeSara
继续努力,那么多坑。。。填死吧
Topic Starter
Nymph
Remapped something and added some stuff~
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