1. Hum.You need a new timing point at the end of song.You may follow this or find another on to check it :
   BPM:96 Offset:204900
2. Your offset is obvious off.The offset should be 16951 or 3293.
   (However,please check the mod before you change your timing)

1. I recommend you use Slider tick:1 in easy diff.
2. 00:42:779(7)-Be honest,Newbie don't know here has a slider speed changed.Also,if you keep using tick rate0.5,
   you can't see any change in this slider so everyone don't know here has a speed change.
3. 01:04:730(3.4)-I'm against doing like this in easy.Think about this difficulty is an easy diff!Well,you decide it change or not.
4. 01:54:486(1)-Add a default finish here?
5. Why you didn't add any hitsound starts from 02:06:682 to 02:38:389?Default whistle is a good hitsound and it is deserve to use in this map.
6. 03:03:267(3.4)-Extremely confused due to speed change.
7. 03:15:950(2)-Newbie cannot read the notes like this.Make sure you follow the distance snap when you arrange the easy diff.

1. 00:42:779(9)-Add a new combo here.
2. 01:09:365(x)-Move this break to 01:07:901.That's fair enough.
3. 01:41:804(4.5.1)-Inconsistent spacing.(4) and (5) is not the same spacing with (1)-
4. 02:37:413(5.6.7)-I don't like this pattern if it's following a sqare.
5. 03:06:682(1-5,1-5)-This pattern is extremely confuse.First,the spacing is too squeeze here,so some of the notes will hidden by the skin also the players cannot read it 1/1,1/2 or 1/4.For me,I misunderstand (5) and (1) is 1/1.
6. 03:21:804(2.3.4)-I have seen this pattern in easy diff already.Maybe change another pattern?

kanpakyin wrote:

As per your request:

[General]

1. Hum.You need a new timing point at the end of song.You may follow this or find another on to check it :
   BPM:96 Offset:204900 yeah this helps a lot.. I am confused about the slider at the end of the song.
2. Your offset is obvious off.The offset should be 16951 or 3293. I don't think timing is wrong? new timing just made me miss a lot.
   (However,please check the mod before you change your timing)

Other general stuff seem fine~

[Easy]

1. I recommend you use Slider tick:1 in easy diff.Ok gotcha~
2. 00:42:779(7)-Be honest,Newbie don't know here has a slider speed changed.Also,if you keep using tick rate0.5,
   you can't see any change in this slider so everyone don't know here has a speed change.
3. 01:04:730(3.4)-I'm against doing like this in easy.Think about this difficulty is an easy diff!Well,you decide it change or not. I really think this slider is slow enough and little speed change makes me feel good and doesn't bother me at all, so maybe just keeping this for now.
4. 01:54:486(1)-Add a default finish here? yeah this is a good idea.
5. Why you didn't add any hitsound starts from 02:06:682 to 02:38:389?Default whistle is a good hitsound and it is deserve to use in this map. I really don't want much hitsounds here I just want this part to be very calm,well... I will add some whistles here.
6. 03:03:267(3.4)-Extremely confused due to speed change. really..? I really think this is ok.
7. 03:15:950(2)-Newbie cannot read the notes like this.Make sure you follow the distance snap when you arrange the easy diff. Then I stack these.

[Hard]

1. 00:42:779(9)-Add a new combo here. I deleted these.
2. 01:09:365(x)-Move this break to 01:07:901.That's fair enough.Ok this is a error..
3. 01:41:804(4.5.1)-Inconsistent spacing.(4) and (5) is not the same spacing with (1)- I particularly made this. 4 5 is jump but I don't think 5 1 needs jump too.
4. 02:37:413(5.6.7)-I don't like this pattern if it's following a sqare. I think this is OK.
5. 03:06:682(1-5,1-5)-This pattern is extremely confuse.First,the spacing is too squeeze here,so some of the notes will hidden by the skin also the players cannot read it 1/1,1/2 or 1/4.For me,I misunderstand (5) and (1) is 1/1. Ok I changed this to other style, maybe it is better now.
6. 03:21:804(2.3.4)-I have seen this pattern in easy diff already.Maybe change another pattern? I don't feel necessary... just keep it.

about hitsound

Be honest,I think you didn't do your best in hitsoundding,This map can have a beautiful hitsound pattern.However I just feel boring and humdrum.For me,I'll use all of the default sound like soft finish and use Normal hitsound in the drum part.Ok thanks very much to judge me at this. I know I am very weak at the hitsounds part, I remake all the hitsounds of this map and I think it is much better now~ anyway I really like simple hitsounds and don't want to make it so complicated.

Star.

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Hey there.

General
You should consider adding more hitsounds. A custom hitclap, maybe even a finish would work great in here. All I can hear is that occasional whistle, which is kinda boring. Ok hitsounds remapping done~ I think it is better now, cause I suck at hitsound part..

02:36:925 (4,5,6,7) - add a crescendo? yeah I agree with this.
03:29:121 (1) - consider adding a decrescendo (slowly decreasing volume) for this spinner) don't really agree with this, just silence it is fine~


Hard
02:14:974 (4) - add repeat don't feel like this

Normal
01:04:730 (3,4) - those 2 sliders get on my mind. They're both about the same length, but one is much slower. Not that it matters, but consider setting both the same speed, to avoid confusion. The same goes for other speed changing sliders in this diff. I really want to keep these even though I know this is a easy diff..

02:35:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - check the spacing in here, doesn't look that great if it gets cramped up a bit. I think these are OK
03:04:730 (4) - flip this vertically? ok

Pretty nice and simple maps. Just add some more hitsounds, and it's perfect.

300,176,66194,2,0,B|264:177|231:198|222:239|232:276,1,135

p3n wrote:

Such a beautiful song.

[Easy]
Pretty much perfect map. Only a few cosmetic things (nothing important):
00:42:291 (6,7) - move both to 297/219 to fix the somewhat ugly gap to (5), also adjust (8) afterwards by [Ctrl]-snapping it not quite sure about this... maybe changed
01:06:194 (4) - Can be curved nicer around (3):

300,176,66194,2,0,B|264:177|231:198|222:239|232:276,1,135

ok~

[Hard]
01:39:852 (1) - I'd prefer this slider @0,75x speed (just like 01:45:706 (1)), as this would perfectly match the smaller spacing of the circle triplets before (01:43:267 (2,3,4) & 01:44:730 (6,7,8)) ok~nice


Ok there is nothing that has to be "fixed" in this mapset but I hope my mostly cosmetic suggestions help at least a bit. Very good work!
~star

thanks very much~

KSHR wrote:

moding


General
Preview Point - 00:46:194 better imo I prefer mine~ sorry
Tags - add "Eucliwood Hellscythe" (character's name) ? Ok..I don't know how to spell Yuu's full name..this helps a lot.


Easy
HP : +1 at least (b/c I think too low.. ><) don't want to... I really want to -1. T T

02:09:121 (3) - add whistle at beginning ?
02:50:096 (2) - ^
02:53:023 (4) - ^
02:58:877 (5) - ^
03:04:730 (4) - ^
03:09:121 (3) - ^ yeah these above all fixed and I add sth more myself.
03:29:121 (1) - end = 03:35:525 ? remove finish ? This spinner ended according to BPM 123 not the second BPM, so I am not quite sure about this.. about the finish hitsound I really rather keep it~


Hard
03:29:121 (1) - end = 03:35:525 ? remove finish ?


these are all suggestions!
If you fix nothing, please dont give me kds

1. need a Normal? to fill the gap between Easy and Hard imo

1. 00:50:584 (7) - New combo
2. 00:51:072 (1) - Remove Newcombo
3. 01:04:730 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/2OUr like this

1. 00:54:486 (5) - whistle
2. 01:37:901 (3) - 1gird up

Snowy Dream wrote:

:)
妮姆芙神mapper~
------------------------------------------------
[General]
BPM: 122.97
offset: 16936 不确定啊...ACC打不高


[Easy]
00:43:749 (x) - add a note.
00:48:627 (2) - 这个结尾感觉很奇怪
01:00:334 (2) - ^
01:05:700 (x) - add a note. 还是想保留自己的


[Hard]
AR-1
OD-1
(只是感觉AR快了 OD减不减无所谓>.>) 好吧 AR-1
01:49:121 (1) - 有点被重合了 和前面的slider 分开 哎好吧
02:07:657 (3) - 左右不对称=A= ...这个已经尽最大努力了...
02:14:974 (4) - 加个回转 ...都让我在这里加回转...我不加 T T
02:34:486 (6,7,8) - 和后面的(2)部分重合了 分开..这个就这样吧
------------------------------------------------
剩下问题不大
主要把BPM和offset调整下。
乃听听看>.> 不知道我测的对不
Star~☆

S o r d a wrote:

sorry for late=A=

[overall]:

1. need a Normal? to fill the gap between Easy and Hard imo

Really don't think so...this hard seems more like a normal...OK I will use a custom diff name..

[Hard]:

1. 00:50:584 (7) - New combo
2. 00:51:072 (1) - Remove Newcombo I think it is not necessary
3. 01:04:730 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/2OUr like this

yeah..I prefer mine.

[Easy]:

1. 00:54:486 (5) - whistle Don't want to do this
2. 01:37:901 (3) - 1gird up then the Y is different..

nice map>_<

spboxer3 wrote:

[Relaxing]
臥槽~這難度太蛋疼啦0.87顆星
難以挑毛病阿(誤
All Nice

[Yuu~]
同上來著>_>(喂


結論:nice song! 果然是神mapper來著
star~~

王长喜才是神MAPPER 谢MOD~

wmfchris wrote:

diff name changed? o_o

[Normal]
00:36:925 (7) - looks better if we put the note at around (212,288)? seems not much difference..but ok~
01:00:340 (3) - flip vertically? I think it is just fine.
02:31:072 (5,6) - [Nazi] left 1 grid lv4 no difference
03:25:525 (4) - not sure about this, seems the slider ends slightly faster than the point sound. I am not sure either..

[Easy]
00:28:145 (1,2) - adjust the last fixing point of slider down 1 lv 4 grid so that it ends at y:80. (2) right 1 grid lv4.ok
no problem for me~

star~

Sonnyc wrote:

General:

-- Preview point at 02:44:243 I prefer mine.

Relaxing:

01:00:340 (2) : Symmetry it is ok I think

Star

hez wrote:

很美的一首歌

Magical Pokie wrote:

先Star

easy 圈大點吧，歌詞對的太多，把部分節奏換成音樂吧…… 我觉得还好啊
relax2：16：925 這幾個太擠了…… 还好..
2：50：096 0.75x 合適？这几个是一样速度的
2:09:121 0.5x合適？ 本来就是0.5吧
個人覺得這個難度有Kai最好 不要....闪死了

最後的96BPM總感覺不需要 这个必须要 最后一个SLIDER就是在这个BPM走的
雖然只有短短一些，但你必須遵守契約，獻出kudo1個(捂臉

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

My diff:
[attachment=0:3a11a]Tsukimiya Midori - Sugao (Nymph_) [Miu's Hard].osu[/attachment:3a11a]

Plus some mods:
Overall
Looks like your custom skin is not complete, it would be ugly if it was overlapped with another skin.

Make sure to have the full set listed below

Hitcircle:
hitcircle.png
hitcircleoverlay.png
approachcircle.png

Spinner:
spinner-background.png
spinner-circle.png
spinner-approachcircle.png
spinner-metre.png

Spinner Hints:
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
spinner-osu.png

Countdown:
ready.png
count3.png
count2.png
count1.png
go.png

Cursor:
cursor.png
cursortrail.png

Scorebar:
scorebar-bg.png
scorebar-colour.png

Hitbursts:
hit0.png
hit50.png
hit100.png
hit100k.png
hit300.png
hit300k.png
hit300g.png

Scorebar Ki:
scorebar-ki.png
scorebar-kidanger.png
scorebar-kidanger2.png

Slider scores:
sliderpoint10.png
sliderpoint30.png

Hitcircle numbers:
default-0.png
default-1.png
...
default-9.png

Score numbers:
score-0.png
score-1.png
...
score-9.png
score-comma.png
score-dot.png
score-percent.png
score-x.png

Section Markers:
section-pass.png
section-fail.png

Quoted from: http://osu.ppy.sh/p/faq# (10. Map Design Issues)

Ok but I can't get all of these, I think these skins are OK.
Add Kiai for diffs? If not, just add a kiai fountain just like what I've do for my diff at some places. yeah I prefer not. I hate Kiai in slow and calm song.
I strongly suggest you to use waltz timing (Time signature: 3/4) [Refer to my diff] yeah ok. Actually I don't know what 34 44 means..

[Relaxing]
01:06:194 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105358 instead? Looks nicer for me~ People said it is confusing, so I changed to this one.

[Yuu~]
00:38:389 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + H? (Because (7) and (1) are too close) all right
00:54:486 (1) - Finish or Whistle?I prefer neither.
01:42:779 (1) - Distance Snap... x:320 y:128? (http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105367) didn't see much difference?

Lovely~

Clare wrote:

[General]:
好美的歌SB也不錯:D
02:35:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這個地方有offset偏 建議找人看看 TIMING苦手 等MAT或者BAT来提吧


[Relaxing]:
01:47:169 (8) - 用normal hit-normal? 嗯
後面很多類似的重音 換成normal hit-normal會比較好其实初衷是想让歌曲很安静 没想用许多CLAP的
03:14:730 - 這裡之後音量也太小了吧 打起來幾乎沒有聲音 很奇怪改成15%怎麼樣? 可能我耳机比较吵？5我也能听清 那改成10好了

[Yuu~]:
多加點音效進去吧 好空 ...确实不喜欢特别多的音效
01:37:413 (2,3,4) - 這是為什麼呢?這麼近? 要不疊一起要不跟前面一樣遠
01:38:877 (6,7,8) - ^
01:43:267 (2,3,4) - ^
01:44:730 (6,7,8) - ^ 应该无影响吧?暂时保留
03:14:974 - 同Relaxing




Top diff:Yuu~

star

BakaHuang wrote:

= =又是催眠曲

winber1 wrote:

gah slow songs D:

General

--Offset should actually be 16438 (one white tick earlier than what it is right now)
--There's no kiai time in Yuu~ or Relaxing..


Miu's

--02:09:121 - i really don't see the point of this kiai fountain. It doesn't fit imo. I would rather just end the kiai time here.

00:58:877 (2) - delete the clap and whistle at the end of slider
02:26:681 (1,2,3) - if you want the finishes to sound loud, then ok, but you sould make the rest of the notes softer to match the rest of the song
02:37:413 (4,5,6) - unstack? it seems kinda boring as it stands right now
03:10:096 (1) - this kinda touches the hp bar :/

Yuu~

00:23:755 (3) - add whistle
00:35:462 (5) - add whistle?
00:41:316 (5) - ^
00:53:023 (1) - ^
01:26:682 (2) - ^
03:29:121 (1) - end spinner on white tick. it ends in the middle of nowhere right now lol. All fixed

Relaxing

--use same whistle suggestions?
--this is definitely not the only relaxing difficulty lol >_>

01:38:389 (4) - add whistle
01:44:243 (4) - ^
03:21:804 (2,3,4) - even if these notes are so far apart, i still wouldn't use this spacing :/ I'd separate them more, but still maintain that triangular shape. It also looks better that way imo, cuz the notes aren't cramped in the middle. don't have good spacing ideas for now..so just keeping it.

Nice map! :3