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XepherX3
everything i post are suggestions

[CANDY RAVE]
00:13:048 (*) to 00:13:562 - a 0.5 speed slider maybe
02:07:220 (5,6) - remove these two and place a slider at the place where (6) was {red to white tick}

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that's all

have a kandi :lol:
poisonchan
pff, I don't like you <3 ~



OO:
Ayeen_old
General:
Turn on the Strobbing warning on. My eyes hurt seeing those ~.~

For CDFARAVE :
xDD With the "V" shape slider modified that is :P
Suggestion:
01:19:562 (1) "V" slider Make it likethis

Just a quick mod from me: I cant mod much, since I my eyes cant stand strobbing much this few weeks

This doesn't deserve a kudos :roll:
Samah
[General]
The storyboard is a bit distracting, specifically the rings on the edges (before the first kiai).
I think if you made them slightly more transparent it would be a good tradeoff. You could probably do it to the spinning squares too.
Maybe display the seizure warning? I think the countdown is unnecessary too.

[CDFRAVE!]
Not quite sure why this was on grid level 1. It looks like you've shift-snapped most of the notes anyway.
00:55:905 (2) - Up one with grid level 3.

[BUBBLEGUM RAVE!]
02:08:248 (6,7) - I don't like this big space here. I think you should shuffle (7,1) around a bit to make it even.

[LILYPOP RAVE!]
00:04:819 (4,1) - This gap doesn't look like a jump, so I think it might look better if you moved the stack closer to the 4.
00:04:991 (1,2,3) - This stack would look better if you moved it closer to the previous combo.
00:55:562 (1) - This would sound cool if you left the first hitsound at 66%, but immediately mute and fade in to 66% over the length of the slider.
02:39:105 (1) - Make sure this is properly mirrored with the (2). At the moment it's a little too far left.
02:41:848 (1) - This looks really out of place up here. I think it might look better in the top right corner instead, or maybe even stack it with the end of the slider.

[CANDY RAVE!]
Crazy jumps ahoy! Nice. :)

Starred.
Probably too nazi for kudosu, but eh. ;)
Shohei Ohtani

Samah wrote:

[CDFRAVE!]
Not quite sure why this was on grid level 1. It looks like you've shift-snapped most of the notes anyway.
Becaise Grid Size 1 is >w<~.
Hikato
[CDFRAVE]

Watch those notes, almost off screen.
00:05:505 (2) - New combo
00:16:477 (2) - New combo
00:19:219 (3) - New combo
00:49:734 (3) - New combo
00:52:477 (7) - New combo
01:05:848 (5) - New combo
01:49:734 (1) - Remove new combo
02:00:705 (2) - New combo
02:33:619 (2) - New combo



[BUBBLEGUM RAVE!]

00:33:620 (1) - Remove new combo
00:45:105 (5,6,7,8) - Hm sounds weird.
01:47:162 (2) - 01:55:048 (4) - I see what you're following, but it's weird when playing. Threw me off a little.
02:02:419 (1) - Remove new combo
02:03:448 (4) - New combo
02:41:162 (6) - I think this sounds better 1/2 forward. Not sure if it's too hard for this diff level though?

[LILYPOP RAVE!]

00:11:848 (1) - Remove new combo
00:12:191 (3) - New combo
00:21:962 (1) - This is unexpected.
00:25:905 (5) - New combo
00:39:619 (6) - Hm.. this sounds weird to me.
00:44:934 (5) - New combo
00:45:277 (7) - Unexpected.
01:05:677 (3) - New combo
copy and pasted part refer to ^ (unexpected sliders)
01:38:248 (6) - New combo
01:45:105 (1) - Remove new combo
01:45:448 (4) - New combo
02:21:105 (5) - New combo
02:40:305 (6,7) - This sounds better with the 6 moved to the end of the slider and the slider moved back 1/2. (Move the finish to the 7 aswell if you do this.)


[CANDY RAVE!]

<3

I love it. star~
jericho2442
CDFRAVE!
00:54:877 (1,2,3) - spacing, its only small but these are all too wide spacing, move them closer so they are the same as the rest of the map

00:52:477 (5) - new combo
00:53:848 (1) - remove new combo


BUBBLEGUM RAVE!
(suggestion) 00:36:020 (2,3,4,5) - having (2,3) and (4,5) as stacks even though they are different timings can be a tricky pattern for a normal diff, its best imo to only have one stack timing when they are so close on the easier maps tbh

00:42:362 (1) - remove this newcombo, then add a new combo to 00:43:905 (7) first this helps to keep the combos consistant, and also helps to break it up for the next part what has a tricky rhythm
00:46:648 (6,1) - put the newcombo on the (6)
01:55:391 (1) - this spinner should end on 01:57:962 if im correct?


LILYPOP RAVE!

01:25:048 - i advise to add a note here so it makes it more clear that the map is going to an offbeat pattern, atm its extremely hard to notice and makes the player want to treat this part as a jump.
02:40:477 (7) - should this not be a slowdown slider like the one in the chorus before?, feels very odd having them both different even though they are both the identical slider/timing/and chorus position


CANDY RAVE!

(suggestion) 00:48:019 (7) - i didnt really think this jump suited that good, maybe think about reversing this slider?

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well maps are pretty much perfect, great job <333

Edit due to mod applied: ooook im happy with the amount of mods, and the changes made now sooooooo enjoy your floaty thing
James2250
-I would use soft hitsounds on the final spinner on the last 3 difficulties (even though its at 0% it sounds better with the fade out)
-The offset sounds pretty late to me, get someone to double check if possible~

CANDY RAVE!:
02:44:934 (1) - end at 02:47:334 like the other 2 difficulties?

No other problems that I see (although the sb might annoy some people :P)
Topic Starter
ztrot
SAD FACE :(
YGOkid8
what's with boy and girl in tags?

CDFRAVE:
00:08:238 (1) - The end if offscreen by a bit. Dunno if it matters, but just saying :V

tell me if you fix or not and i'll bubble~
AWESOME map + song, btw :D

EDIT: ~
James2250
Ok all looks good now

Ranked~
Topic Starter
ztrot
WOOOT! RAVE PARTY!
Larto
Mi havas sekso kun vin.


EDIT: Mi estas tarda.
Mitiai
Nice map. Love the song and map ^_^ :)
Topic Starter
ztrot
thank you ^.^
deadbeat
gratz ztrot :D
OnizukaEikichi
<3 DJ S3RL. He's probably one of the best hardstyle mixers in UK. Specially love his songs: Bass Slut and Crazy Ass Bitch.
Topic Starter
ztrot
thanks guys really :D
IkkiMinami
Ok all looks good now

Me I like It :)
Ania chan_old
cool
ricckz
NICE I LOVE IT :D <3
Temee
I want to kill u for 2 last buttons in LILYPOP level(not spinns). Two time i had 100% acc and 2 times i missed that fkin, reatrded, shitty, annoying buttons. Please die.
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