1. Hopeless (5 stars, 890 notes)

TKiller wrote:

I really like this style. I usually get angry at wide triples, whic you use a lot, but they fit in the overall mapping.



01:10:062 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - these sound great if you put a non-custom softwhistle on every repeat arrow tick; your custom ones are great, but don't fit this moment // Sound cool. Added.

same applies for similiar moment later

02:39:782 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this would sound cool if you added some osu! whistles, but you'll need to lower their volume so they won't be annoying // I won't add any whistle in this stream.

02:43:146 (1,2) - I'd add a 1,15 or 1,2 section for these and rotated these a bit like osu.ppy.sh/ss/159626 // Added green line, but not rotated.

02:53:660 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - man man man man, no hitsounds just don't fit this section, it's really emotional even if only vocal; it can even use normal sliderwhistles if you lower the volume enough on them // Added some soft whistle

03:10:062 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - I know that this is for approval, but it's really surprising that these are 1/3 if you don't know the song. Seriously, a lot of people are gonna think these are 1/4 since you use wide spacing for the whole map. Replace first 3 or 6 notes with a kickslider and the problem is almost gone! // As always, triplet has come suddenly. Anyway that spacing is cleary different to spacing of 1/4. Leave them as they are.

gj

1. I find the bitrate of MP3 file is 254kbps,it seems you need reduce it.
2. a unnecessary .osb file

1. 00:56:885 (1) - finish
2. 01:05:857 (1) - ^
3. 01:39:081 (9) - ^
4. 01:57:445 (1) - ^
5. 02:06:417 (1) - finish at first circle
6. 02:49:034 (1) - finish

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue
sorry,I can't even pass this beatmap and not yet mod any app song.So here's just my opinion.

General

1. I find the bitrate of MP3 file is 254kbps,it seems you need reduce it. // Oops, changed the MP3
2. a unnecessary .osb file // You don't need to point the .osb out anymore even it isn't used. Anyway I removed it due to I had to full submit again.

Hopeless

1. 00:56:885 (1) - finish
2. 01:05:857 (1) - ^
3. 01:39:081 (9) - ^ // Added
4. 01:57:445 (1) - ^
5. 02:06:417 (1) - finish at first circle
6. 02:49:034 (1) - finish

Others are not added

I'm so weak.>///<

Bobo wrote:

Yo, modded on request.

-Hopeless-

Alrighty...

00:22:609 (5) - 8 grids down? // OK
01:21:137 (5) - Why not space these out like (1,2,3,4)? // It will look odd due to the space is different from others. I chose stacking.
01:29:128 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/180349 ? // Fixed appropriately
02:21:698 (3) - The points look a little off to me. // Hmm?
02:53:030 (2) - Delete the note? // Nope

Really nice map.
Good luck on getting this approved.
Take a star!

kissfly wrote:

Hopeless
01:20:716(4)(5) - not in a straight line

Other look fine.
Good App

banvi wrote:

00:33:473 (3) - add whistle on silder's body?
00:56:464 (4) - ^
01:57:025 (4) - ^
02:38:520 (1) - ^
02:39:081 (3) - ^

Hmm, I can't find anymore...
GJ