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Katakiri Rekka - metaphor of paradise

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namazun
:)
Nymph
;)
Muya
:D
Topic Starter
swish
> namazun, Nymph_, Muya
thanks :oops:
Zelos
Folder:

all good here.

Please note any mod I post is only a suggestion and can be freely ignored.

Easy:
00:09:530 (3) - move to the left 2 grid points to make the triangle more symmetrical.

Normal:
fine here.

Gow's Hard:
nothing wrong here.

Mforever's insane:
nothing wrong here.

No kudosu.
Topic Starter
swish
> Zelos

fixed~
thanks in advice~ :)
JoJo
8-)
PeaChick
(。・ε・`。)
VellSain
:idea:
Rusty
Download: Katakiri Rekka - metaphor of paradise (swish) [MForever's Insane].osu

全部直した!
おくれてごめんーー
Topic Starter
swish
> Joshua Lost, ChickeN, VellSain
hoshi arigatou~ :)

> MForever

ありがと! updated~
subarasikibuta
片雾~
Asagiri Mai
rekka
Topic Starter
swish
>3kinnagi, Asagiri Mai
片霧烈火 :O
thanks~~ >.<
FutakiKanata
(´;ω;`)ブワッ
Topic Starter
swish
> Kanata-n
(´;ω;`)ブワッ  ありがとー
Suzully
modリクエストどうもです~ :)

[General]

  • InsaneだけPreviewTimeが違うので統一してくださいー。
[Easy]

  • Fine~
[Normal]
  1. 00:39:530 (1,2,3) - ここで単発を重ねるなら00:39:327にもノートを置いて重ねた方が良いと思います。
  2. 00:59:800 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 01:36:287 (7,8) - ここまで単発の重ねは1/8拍で使ってきているので、ここで1/4拍だと戸惑うノーマルプレイヤーもいると思います。スライダーに変えた方がいいかも?
[gowwwさんのHard]

  • OD-1?(SVが低くHPが5というのと、InsaneもOD7なので)
  1. 01:56:557 (3) - 折り返しを1回減らして、01:57:773からスピナーを開始?
[MForeverさんのInsane]
  1. 00:12:758 (6,1) - 前の(1-6)のスペーシングが広いので、もう少し離した方がスッキリするかもしれません。
  2. 00:41:339 (3) - Grid level4で 1grid 上&右?
  3. 00:42:758 (1) - 1grid右?
  4. 01:11:948 (9) - New combo?
  5. 01:34:650 (6) - 前の(1-5)でスペーシングを広げていっているので、ここでnew comboを入れたほうが綺麗に見えると思いますー。
どのdiffも素晴らしいです :oops:

既に星投げてた^q^
Topic Starter
swish

Suzully wrote:

modリクエストどうもです~ :)

[General]

  • InsaneだけPreviewTimeが違うので統一してくださいー。
[Easy]

  • Fine~
[Normal]
  1. 00:39:530 (1,2,3) - ここで単発を重ねるなら00:39:327にもノートを置いて重ねた方が良いと思います。
  2. 00:59:800 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 01:36:287 (7,8) - ここまで単発の重ねは1/8拍で使ってきているので、ここで1/4拍だと戸惑うノーマルプレイヤーもいると思います。スライダーに変えた方がいいかも?
[gowwwさんのHard]

  • OD-1?(SVが低くHPが5というのと、InsaneもOD7なので)
  1. 01:56:557 (3) - 折り返しを1回減らして、01:57:773からスピナーを開始?
[MForeverさんのInsane]
  1. 00:12:758 (6,1) - 前の(1-6)のスペーシングが広いので、もう少し離した方がスッキリするかもしれません。
  2. 00:41:339 (3) - Grid level4で 1grid 上&右?
  3. 00:42:758 (1) - 1grid右?
  4. 01:11:948 (9) - New combo?
  5. 01:34:650 (6) - 前の(1-5)でスペーシングを広げていっているので、ここでnew comboを入れたほうが綺麗に見えると思いますー。
どのdiffも素晴らしいです :oops:

既に星投げてた^q^
> すずりさん
thanks mod!!  kudosu star ありがとう ;__;
Norn_NNN
star~ :)
Topic Starter
swish
> Norn_NNN
arigato~ :)
Rare
:oops:
indyinyou
My suggestions:

[Normal]
00:16:017 : make like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/99514
00:41:557 : add silder to 00:41:963
00:42:368 : add silder return to 00:42:773
00:44:395 : delete silder add note here
00:44:800 : add silder to 00:45:206 + 1 reverse arrow?
00:46:017 : fin
00:52:503 : ^
00:54:530 : i think no return silder good better >:(
01:02:638 : add note
01:05:882 : ^
01:13:584 : remove clap add fin
01:20:071 : ^
01:26:557 : ^

[Hard]
00:17:436 : add note and move spin to 00:17:638
Topic Starter
swish
> R a r e
ari~ :D


indyinyou wrote:

My suggestions:

[Normal]
00:16:017 : make like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/99514
00:41:557 : add silder to 00:41:963
00:42:368 : add silder return to 00:42:773
00:44:395 : delete silder add note here
00:44:800 : add silder to 00:45:206 + 1 reverse arrow?
00:46:017 : fin
00:52:503 : ^
00:54:530 : i think no return silder good better >:(
01:02:638 : add note
01:05:882 : ^
01:13:584 : remove clap add fin
01:20:071 : ^
01:26:557 : ^

[Hard]
00:17:436 : add note and move spin to 00:17:638

> indyinyou
thanks for mod :) some fixed~
Nivra
star
Topic Starter
swish
> Akch
arigato~ :)
Takos
素晴らしい
banvi
~~~
Topic Starter
swish
> Takos, banvi
thanks~ :)
kanpakyin
Nice map 8-)

btw,offset should be 3848?I feel little bit off of the previous offset 3855.
Topic Starter
swish

kanpakyin wrote:

Nice map 8-)

btw,offset should be 3848?I feel little bit off of the previous offset 3855.
OK :)
change to offset 3848

thanks KPY ~ >.<
Rigeru_old
8-)
Beren
Melancholy
ok~
paimanlol
nice map!
Topic Starter
swish
> Rigeru, Beren, Melancholy, Paiman
thanks :3
Goisuke_old
nice map!
loli_milk
kami kami kami kami
I LOVE YOU
star-----------------------------------------------------------☆
Faust
Hmm.

Easy & Normal are good to go!

gow's Hard: Quite an engaging Hard diff. I thought it was easy to read and intuitive even though the spacing was somewhat tight.

- 00:57:969 - End this spinner on the white tick. I don't think you should drag the spinner longer than that.

- 01:38:712 - Nice hammer-stack. 8-)

MFoever's Insane: Good difficulty, not overmapped, and neat to play. Some suggestions though.

Personally, I think 0.6 DS would work better on the streams since the DS spacing between notes and the SV is moderately high, and the current streams are a bit compressed together so it makes the player slow down and it can be difficult to adjust.

I also think 0.6 would make the streams run better since the song is quite paced. Starting from - 00:13:172 - .

If you use 0.6 some patterns need to be shifted accordingly but it shouldn't be a problem unless it starts at the far end and reaches out the playfield.

So you might want to adjust some parts like this for example:

Before:
After:
No kudosu is fine.
Topic Starter
swish
> Goisuke, loli_milk
thanks star~ :D

> Faust
fixed a little. thanks for modding \:D/
winber1
MForever's

00:03:848 (1,2,3,4,5) - omg this star... orz. if you want, you could always copy paste a note and rotate around 72 degrees, then copy paste that note and rotate 72 degrees, and etc. 5 times. and then you can Ctrl+shift+S to scale it however much you want. this star shape is just really bothering me lol.
00:33:341 (x) - some reason i want to add a note here. it just sounds better to my ear. idk about you
00:36:584 (x) - ^

i guess that pattern doesn't really work so well later on cuz of the jumps lol.

00:55:739 (7) - new combo and remove combo on the next note? follows the music a little more
01:00:604 (4,5,6) - it could make the map a little more interesting if you followed the vocals here imo.
01:18:847 (1) - remove combo
01:39:320 - y so quiet ._. make it louder? D:
01:54:118 (1,1) - honestly i would replace these two spinners with something else, i would keep the last one tho. thats just my preference tho. I don't like having these consecutive spinners :/


gow's

00:40:942 (1,2,3) - i wuoldn't put finishes on these notes, but ok.
00:50:672 (1,7) - ^
00:52:293 (1) - add finish at end of this slider?
01:07:699 (8) - I like it a lot better if this was not silenced at the end
01:12:260 (2) - i like it better if this was just one note, not a kick slider
01:16:212 (6) - i would like it better if you extended this note 1/4 tick longer and turned 01:16:618 (1) - that note into a circle at 01:16:820. That even makes the combos follow the music a little more :D

Normal


00:14:388 (4) - new combo?
00:20:875 (1) - move this note 1/2 tick back and adjust spacing?
00:37:699 (5) - could confuse players a bit, since the previously stacked notes are 1/2 tick apart. I would unstack these notes
00:59:591 (1) - i would not use this anti-spacing
01:13:577 (2) - new combo?
01:26:550 (3) - ^

Easy

00:42:766 (5) - new combo?
00:50:064 (5) - new combo?
01:13:577 (2) - new combo and add finish
01:26:550 (1) - add finish
01:33:037 (2) - ^
01:49:253 (4) - um... looks really weird and may confuse beginners a bit.
01:54:118 (2) - i would extend this slider to 01:55:334 and delete combo 3.

Nice map! :3
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