looks really interesting, my star for this map
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lol BASARA 2
Star cuz I like how the map sounds overall~
Star cuz I like how the map sounds overall~
Topic Starter
Thanks for Stars guys >w<
(。≖ˇｪˇ≖｡)
[Easy]
00:35:272 - 00:38:909 - aw! add a break there
00:52:363 (1,2) - when i saw the slider (1) i told to me: this is so ugly, but when i saw this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/95052 i said: aah now i see what you tried to do
00:58:181 (1) - the distance is confusing for an easy diff
[Normal]
00:17:090 (5) - remove the clap from start and add a clap at this slider finish 00:17:818 (6)
00:17:818 (6) - NC
00:25:454 (3) - aw god! so ugly. try something like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/95055
00:26:181 (4) - NC
00:29:090 (7) - ^^
00:35:272 - 00:38:909 - aw! add a break there
00:43:272 (9) - NC
[Hard]
00:27:090 (2) - inconsistent distance
00:35:272 - 00:38:909 - aw! add a break there
00:42:909 (6) - the end of this slider is not stacked very well with the end of the previous slider move it to (x153 y199)
00:56:181 (4) - no stacked well move it to (x129 y333)
01:07:090 (10) - NC
[Chaos]
Basara2 or Basara x2 Fast
nice work. love the song and the taiko sounding. i didn't mod the taiko diff. Have a Star
00:35:272 - 00:38:909 - aw! add a break there
00:52:363 (1,2) - when i saw the slider (1) i told to me: this is so ugly, but when i saw this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/95052 i said: aah now i see what you tried to do
00:58:181 (1) - the distance is confusing for an easy diff
[Normal]
00:17:090 (5) - remove the clap from start and add a clap at this slider finish 00:17:818 (6)
00:17:818 (6) - NC
00:25:454 (3) - aw god! so ugly. try something like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/95055
00:26:181 (4) - NC
00:29:090 (7) - ^^
00:35:272 - 00:38:909 - aw! add a break there
00:43:272 (9) - NC
[Hard]
00:27:090 (2) - inconsistent distance
00:35:272 - 00:38:909 - aw! add a break there
00:42:909 (6) - the end of this slider is not stacked very well with the end of the previous slider move it to (x153 y199)
00:56:181 (4) - no stacked well move it to (x129 y333)
01:07:090 (10) - NC
[Chaos]
Basara2 or Basara x2 Fast
nice work. love the song and the taiko sounding. i didn't mod the taiko diff. Have a Star
Great map! Mustaash
Topic Starter
Thanks for your mod, all fixed and thanks starring 
God, we finished at the same time LOLFirce777 wrote:
i love this song
still Musty j'vais faire un BG pour les taikos
Lavalà mais j'ai fait que pour la mienne. orz.
ez stuff
General
- Renomme le "æ¥î█î©éÚïS.png" en quelque chose de plus normal ... Fullsubmit après
- Essaye d'avoir ton BG en 1024x768, la miniature que l'on voit avec osu! direct ou dans la liste de maps n'aura pas de bordure blanche comme ça
- 00:18:181 (7) - Ajoute un new combo, ça fait franchement bizarre qu'il n'y en ai pas un seul pendant ~13 secondes :/
- 00:18:909 (8) - Cette note est en dehors du playfield, même si moins de la moitié du circle est en dehors, ça reste chiant car comme c'est sur le bord haut, ça peut être caché par la lifebar
- 00:20:363 (10) - Je verrais bien ce slider se terminer 1/1 plus tôt, ça sonne plus agréable à l'oreille et c'est surtout plus lisible pour les nouveaux joueur.
- 00:34:909 (4) - Mais voyons, un finish s'impose clairement ici :>
- 00:45:090 (2) - Ajoute un new combo ici, ca fera plus agréable du fait que 00:39:272 (1) ai son propre new combo, donc comme 00:42:181 (1) est son symétrique, il est logique qu'il doit aussi avoir son propre new combo.
- 00:48:363 (1) - Commence ce spinner 1/2 plus tôt, il est plus logique qu'il commence sur une gros "DUM" que sur là où tu l'as fait commencer.
- 00:55:272 (2) - Ce pattern est beau, mais la trajectoire de (2) est bien cachée par celle de (1), ce qui est pas bien ...
- 00:58:181 (1) - Cette note est en dehors du playfield, même si moins de la moitié du circle est en dehors, ça reste chiant car comme c'est sur le bord haut, ça peut être caché par la lifebar
- 01:20:727 (7) - Ce slider est bien trop près du précédant, les anti-jump sont pas très conseillé en easy :/
- 01:25:090 (1) - Commence ce spinner à 01:24:545, sinon on a l'impression qu'il commence sur rien :/
- Le HP drain est un peu trop élevé pour une normal, baisse le d'un tick~
- 00:29:818 (2) - Cette note est trop en dehors du playfield, c'est Unrankable !
- 00:34:909 (7) - Un finish s'impose ici.
- 00:40:363 (4) - Un peu trop en dehors du playfield du bord haut, évite de prendre cette habitude de mettre des note qui dépasse le playfield, c'est mal. :/
- 01:14:909 (8) - Plus de la moitié du reverse de ce slider est en dehors du playfield, Unrankable
- Il n'y a aucun BG de mis sur cette diff ...
- 00:21:000 (3,4) - Il n'y a rien musicalement qui justifie ces deux notes, elle sont mise sur "rien", je te conseille de les supprimer et d'ajouter une note à 00:21:090.
- 00:22:909 (7,8) - Décale ces notes de 1/4 vers la droite pour suivre la musique, tu verras que ça fera largement mieux
- 00:34:909 (10) - Comme pour les autre diffs, ajoute un finish.
- 00:49:454 (7) - Ajoute un new combo ici sinon le combo est trop long :/
- 00:49:454 (5) - Ce circle est trop en dehors du playfield, Unrankable
- 01:18:909 (4,5,6) - J'aime pas trop ce triplet, il sonne bizarre, je pense que tu devrais supprimer (5) et (6)
Topic Starter
All Fixed, thanks
General:
- Add Firce777 and _Gezo_ in the tags, as for they made guest diffs
- Use the same Kiai on the Taiko diffs?
Easy:
01:04:363 (1) - Short sliders with more than one repeat, are hard to predict for newer players.
Chaos:
00:44:242 - Add a note here?
Choas reminded me a lot of basara^^
- Add Firce777 and _Gezo_ in the tags, as for they made guest diffs
- Use the same Kiai on the Taiko diffs?
Easy:
01:04:363 (1) - Short sliders with more than one repeat, are hard to predict for newer players.
Chaos:
00:44:242 - Add a note here?
Choas reminded me a lot of basara^^
<3
Topic Starter
All Fixed Thanks Rukario >w<
<3Astom wrote:
<3
LOL first play of map ever.
Also starred.
Also starred.
Topic Starter
lol, it's easy i mean xD
Great Job! Starred! XD
Hello,
[Easy]
00:48:181 (1) - Increase Beat Snap Divisor to 1/8 and then resnap all notes, so that you snap the end of this spinner to the yellow tick.
01:13:454 (1) - Rather undo new combo here and then new combo here:01:15:636 (3) - OR 01:15:636 (2) - Add a new combo here.
[Normal]
00:33:818 (4) - New combo to match the previous patterns.
00:48:181 (1) - Increase Beat Snap Divisor to 1/8 and then resnap all notes, so that you snap the end of this spinner to the yellow tick.
01:12:727 (5) - New combo to match the previous patterns.
[Hard]
00:16:000 (6) - New combo, then undo new combo here: 00:16:545 (1) -
00:21:818 (7) - New combo, then undo new combo here: 00:22:000 (1) -
00:22:909 - Totally add a beat here to make it less confusing and better to play. Put it on top of the (8)
00:26:181 (9) - New combo, then undo new combo here: 00:26:727 (1) -
00:40:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too much white, new combo here: 00:42:181 (5) - All of these patterns will finish at (4) if you do it.
01:02:545 (7) - New combo, then undo new combo here:
01:04:000 (6) - New combo, then undo new combo here:
[Chaos]
I suggest to use Approach Rate 8. 9 is just pushing it.
00:22:727 -(1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - For a long stream like this one, I suggest using the same new combo style from the beginning, up to the very last beat. You decided to use a new combo on top of every whistle at the beginning, then keep doing it till the very end. This will make the pattern more consistent.
Good luck!
[Easy]
00:48:181 (1) - Increase Beat Snap Divisor to 1/8 and then resnap all notes, so that you snap the end of this spinner to the yellow tick.
01:13:454 (1) - Rather undo new combo here and then new combo here:01:15:636 (3) - OR 01:15:636 (2) - Add a new combo here.
[Normal]
00:33:818 (4) - New combo to match the previous patterns.
00:48:181 (1) - Increase Beat Snap Divisor to 1/8 and then resnap all notes, so that you snap the end of this spinner to the yellow tick.
01:12:727 (5) - New combo to match the previous patterns.
[Hard]
00:16:000 (6) - New combo, then undo new combo here: 00:16:545 (1) -
00:21:818 (7) - New combo, then undo new combo here: 00:22:000 (1) -
00:22:909 - Totally add a beat here to make it less confusing and better to play. Put it on top of the (8)
00:26:181 (9) - New combo, then undo new combo here: 00:26:727 (1) -
00:40:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too much white, new combo here: 00:42:181 (5) - All of these patterns will finish at (4) if you do it.
01:02:545 (7) - New combo, then undo new combo here:
01:04:000 (6) - New combo, then undo new combo here:
[Chaos]
I suggest to use Approach Rate 8. 9 is just pushing it.
00:22:727 -(1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - For a long stream like this one, I suggest using the same new combo style from the beginning, up to the very last beat. You decided to use a new combo on top of every whistle at the beginning, then keep doing it till the very end. This will make the pattern more consistent.
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Sir Minelli
Sir Minelli wrote:
Hello,
[Easy]
00:48:181 (1) - Increase Beat Snap Divisor to 1/8 and then resnap all notes, so that you snap the end of this spinner to the yellow tick. ok01:13:454 (1) - Rather undo new combo here and then new combo here:01:15:636 (3) -OR 01:15:636 (2) - Add a new combo here. 'k
[Normal]
00:33:818 (4) - New combo to match the previous patterns.
00:48:181 (1) - Increase Beat Snap Divisor to 1/8 and then resnap all notes, so that you snap the end of this spinner to the yellow tick.
01:12:727 (5) - New combo to match the previous patterns.
[Hard]
00:16:000 (6) - New combo, then undo new combo here: 00:16:545 (1) -
00:21:818 (7) - New combo, then undo new combo here: 00:22:000 (1) -
00:22:909 - Totally add a beat here to make it less confusing and better to play. Put it on top of the (8)
00:26:181 (9) - New combo, then undo new combo here: 00:26:727 (1) -
00:40:727 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too much white, new combo here: 00:42:181 (5) - All of these patterns will finish at (4) if you do it.
01:02:545 (7) - New combo, then undo new combo here:
01:04:000 (6) - New combo, then undo new combo here:
ok all fixed
[Chaos]
I suggest to use Approach Rate 8. 9 is just pushing it.
00:22:727 -(1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - For a long stream like this one, I suggest using the same new combo style from the beginning, up to the very last beat. You decided to use a new combo on top of every whistle at the beginning, then keep doing it till the very end. This will make the pattern more consistent.
no sorry
Good luck!
Thanks!
very nice map , was alot of fun to play
Topic Starter
thanks gecko :b
Topic Starter
thanks TTTL, [Ghost] and tsuka
A few tiny irc suggestions and now Bubbled.
irc
20:09 <Rukarioman> : you here?
20:09 *Rukarioman is editing (ParagonX9 - Chaoz Japan)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/31115]
20:10 <Rukarioman> : anyways, if I find something I'll write it here
20:10 <Rukarioman> : I really think newgrounds should be in the tags and not the source
20:14 <Rukarioman> : 00:44:242 (7) - Chaos, where you added this note here. It's pretty confusing on how you placed it
20:15 <Rukarioman> : Maybe place it somewhere in the middle of that circle of beats
20:15 <Rukarioman> : that would be all, I can bubble after these fixes
20:19 <Mustaash> : ok i'm back from dinner
20:20 <Mustaash> : All fixed
20:20 <Rukarioman> : what about newgrounds
20:20 <Rukarioman> : it should be in the tags not the source
20:21 <Mustaash> : changed
20:21 <Mustaash> : oh fu
20:21 <Mustaash> : not in everydiff
20:21 <Mustaash> : i fix
20:22 <Mustaash> : Well
20:22 <Mustaash> : FIXED
20:25 <Rukarioman> : bubbled
20:09 *Rukarioman is editing (ParagonX9 - Chaoz Japan)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/31115]
20:10 <Rukarioman> : anyways, if I find something I'll write it here
20:10 <Rukarioman> : I really think newgrounds should be in the tags and not the source
20:14 <Rukarioman> : 00:44:242 (7) - Chaos, where you added this note here. It's pretty confusing on how you placed it
20:15 <Rukarioman> : Maybe place it somewhere in the middle of that circle of beats
20:15 <Rukarioman> : that would be all, I can bubble after these fixes
20:19 <Mustaash> : ok i'm back from dinner
20:20 <Mustaash> : All fixed
20:20 <Rukarioman> : what about newgrounds
20:20 <Rukarioman> : it should be in the tags not the source
20:21 <Mustaash> : changed
20:21 <Mustaash> : oh fu
20:21 <Mustaash> : not in everydiff
20:21 <Mustaash> : i fix
20:22 <Mustaash> : Well
20:22 <Mustaash> : FIXED
20:25 <Rukarioman> : bubbled
[Easy]
01:18:545 (5) - New combo.
[Normal]
01:20:000 (3) - New combo.
[Gezo's Taiko Muzukashii]
Disable the unused Countdown.
[Hard]
01:21:454 (7) - There's an extra slider repeat on this slider, please remove it.
[Chaos]
Disable the unused Countdown.
01:11:818 (6,7,8) - This change of spacing is kind of confusing, most probably due to the stacks that you've used.
Fix them all and I'll probably rank this.
01:18:545 (5) - New combo.
[Normal]
01:20:000 (3) - New combo.
[Gezo's Taiko Muzukashii]
Disable the unused Countdown.
[Hard]
01:21:454 (7) - There's an extra slider repeat on this slider, please remove it.
[Chaos]
Disable the unused Countdown.
01:11:818 (6,7,8) - This change of spacing is kind of confusing, most probably due to the stacks that you've used.
Fix them all and I'll probably rank this.
Topic Starter
ALL FIXED
<3 THANKS
( my first insane ranked, wut? xD )
WHY MY MESSAGE IS TOO SHORT?
<3 THANKS
( my first insane ranked, wut? xD )
WHY MY MESSAGE IS TOO SHORT?
Seems to be pretty good now.
Ranked~
Ranked~
gratz Mustymoe :3