Jap-Kenji wrote:

advice.

[Hard]
01:50:313 - up 2 grid and left 2 grid.
01:50:468 - down 1 grid and right 1 gird.

[Chung's Lunatic]
01:11:267 - right 1 grid
01:11:344 - ^
01:11:421 - ^
01:11:499 - ^

01:12:426 - left 1 grid
01:12:504 - ^
01:12:581 - ^
01:12:658 - ^

good job nice map.

all fixed.Thx for your mod and star!

Regou wrote:

你不用放touhou在tag裏的~
不過,記得放下chungskale到tag裏去,因為他/她幫你作diff了~

suraimu_su_ wrote:

star~

I love Kraster!

I wish you success!!

Chungskale's Lunatic:
00:08:715 (1,2,3) - Adjust so it makes an equilateral triangle?
00:09:952 (1) - Remove this note; doesn't fit music
00:47:993 (6,7,8) - make this like 00:47:375 (3,4,5) - ? all fixed

This was a bit out of my comfort zone in terms of difficulty so the mod wasn't as in-depth as I would have liked it to be. Anyways, I enjoyed the music and mapping, starred!

fanzhen0019 wrote:

我艹屯了快半个小时的MOD被弹窗刷掉了尼玛以后开记事本然后复制FFUU

好歌o.o
just suggestions
[Hard]
00:09:334 (3) - whistle k
00:09:643 (5) - remove whistle k
00:10:261 (7) - new combo k
00:24:179 - clap k
00:25:416 - ^ k
00:26:653 - ^ k
00:28:355 - clap? k
00:29:127 - clap k
00:30:365 - ^ k
00:30:828 - 这段用soft大丈夫?
如果一定要用
绿线移到这里 - 00:31:292 (4) - new combo & 00:30:828 (1) - remove new combo+remove whistle kk
00:30:984 (8) - clap k
00:31:602 (1) - whistle k
00:32:221 (3) - 没叠好 请把DS调成0然后按住shift重新叠一次.also add whistle k
00:32:530 (4) - 变spacing了 new combo&add finish?
↑↑
如果不用,改成NC2然后把上面提到的whistle改成clap
00:33:767 - 这段不用NC2? 用的话先移掉00:33:767到00:43:663所有的whistle k
00:34:076 - clap k
00:34:694 (3) - ^ k
00:35:313 (5) - ^ k
00:35:932 (7) - ^ k
00:36:550 - ^ k
00:37:169 - ^ k
00:37:633 - ^ k
00:38:096 - ^ k
00:39:024 - ^ k
00:39:643 (2) - ^ k
00:40:261 - ^ k
00:40:880 (6) - ^ k
00:41:499 - ^ k
00:42:118 (9) - ^ k
00:51:395 - clap k
00:52:633 - ^ k
00:54:643 (4) - slider开头去掉clap k
00:55:725 (1) - clap k
00:57:272 - 莫名的哨音? (艹..原来是歌里的)
00:58:200 (1) - clap k
00:58:509 - remove clap k
00:58:818 (3) - clap k
00:59:127 (4) - remove clap k
00:59:437 (5) - remove finish&add clap
01:00:055 - clap k
01:00:674 (3) - clap k
01:01:292 (5) - remove clap k
01:01:911 - clap k
01:02:220 (3,4) - spacing ？
01:02:684 (5,6) - remove clap k
01:03:148 (1) - slider开头加clap k
01:03:767 (3) - ^ k
01:04:386 (1) - clap k
01:05:390 (6,7) - clap k
01:05:622 - 突然变哨声了?改回来?
这段感觉很乱..怎么办你自己定吧 fixed
01:13:823 - remove clap k
01:13:973 (3) - clap k
01:14:437 - 不加note吗? 感觉差不多
01:30:983 (5) - clap k
01:31:447 (7) - clap k
01:34:077 - 和前面一样..
这一段就不看了保持现在这样貌似也可以。。

01:54:488 - clap k
01:55:107 (4) - slider开头clap k
01:55:416 (5) - slider末clap k
01:56:344 (8) - 开头clap k
01:58:818 (1) - 去掉末的clap k
01:59:282 (2) - 末clap k
01:59:746 (4) - 去掉开头的clap k
02:00:365 (6) - 去掉clap k
02:00:674 (8) - 开头加clap k
02:00:983 (9) - 去掉clap k
02:01:293 (1,2) - clap k
02:01:602 (3) - 去clap k
02:01:756 (4) - 末clap k
02:02:529 (7) - 开头clap k
02:03:303 (10) - clap? k
02:03:612 (1) - clap k
02:05:004 (4) - clap k
...
剩下的懒得看了..
音效你可以参考lkp的难度 这里给的仅仅是参考
声音有点小 适当加大吧 k

Chungskale's Lunatic没看见呢 嘛，，这个不提了。。
接受Normal diff吗? o.o
go for rank!

1. why Works In Progress? Change Pending map
2. BG 1024x768 better change Please
3. why two osb? Delete and Full submission
4. Difficulty P's Lunatic ?? Change lkp or lkp's Lunatic
5. add tags fanzhen0019

• 00:52:787 (6) - move 00:52:942 - sound better?

1. 02:12:272 (4) - 1grid up
2. 02:48:020 - unused timing section
3. 03:00:983 (1) - Short spinner ._. Auto Play spinner 2000Bonus↑ better

1. 00:29:746 (2) - 1gird up
2. 00:48:535 - unused timing section

S o r d a wrote:

[fz's Normal+]:

1. 00:29:746 (2) - 1gird up :O fixed
2. 00:48:535 - unused timing section deleted

S o r d a wrote:

thanks reqs~

[overall]:

1. why Works In Progress? Change Pending map i am planing to make sb for the map,so...
2. BG 1024x768 better change Please i'll deal with it when i make sb
3. why two osb? Delete and Full submission fixed
4. Difficulty P's Lunatic ?? Change lkp or lkp's Lunatic it's his decision to use the name XD
5. add tags fanzhen0019fixed

[Hard]:

• 00:52:787 (6) - move 00:52:942 - sound better?

1. 02:12:272 (4) - 1grid up
2. 02:48:020 - unused timing section
3. 03:00:983 (1) - Short spinner ._. Auto Play spinner 2000Bonus↑ better

[Easy]:
HP,AR,OD-1
HARD AND EASY ALL FIXED

Nymph_ wrote:

我来打酱油 0 0

Hard:
都改了
Normal+:
Personal advice: even thouth this is a normal+ I stll think Hp drain is a little high. maybe hp drain -1?
others fine to me~ 我就帮他改掉好了。。如果fanzhen兄看到了觉得不需要我在改回来，不然又要麻烦你重新POST了XD

Easy:
sv1.0我个人觉得还是有点快 因为BPM太高了..改成0.8了 重新排列了下
01:01:292 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个长白线开始更舒服吧..再有人提我在改 现在长白线节奏就有点紧张了
不打算MAP完嘛 可能后面会有人挑刺的 嘛 先这样吧~因为做完有3分钟 对新手来说194BPM 3分钟太辛苦了。参考其他图也有只做这么多的，所以。。。这个难度也只是听歌而已- - 其他DIFF都MAP完了

1. Please map this diff to 02:20:158 same Normal diff.

1. 00:01:602 (1) Add Finish
2. 00:06:550 (1) ^
3. 00:09:334 (6) This slider don't follow the rhythm because is mapped in 1/6. Please fix.
4. 00:43:663 (1) Finish
5. 00:49:540 (6) Remove whistle don't sounds good.
6. 00:51:086 (1,2,3,4) Stacked notes are hard to read for new players and more if they are not at the same distance of time.
7. 00:52:323 (2) Remove finish
8. 00:56:035 (1) Finish
9. 01:01:292 (1) Clap at the start and end.
10. 01:02:529 (2) ^.
11. 01:05:004 (4) Remove finish
12. 01:05:932 (2) Finish
13. 01:11:189 (1) Clap at the start and end.
14. 01:12:426 (2) ^
15. 01:15:828 (1) Use a soft finish + whistle? I think sounds better.

1. Approach Rate 5
2. HP Drain Rate 4
3. Slider Tick Rate 1

1. 00:38:715 (1) Remove new combo
2. 00:53:560 (1) ^

1. If you change the mentioned change the "Normal+" for only "Normal" because the difficulty is due to high bpm. It's really easy.

1. HP Drain Rate 5
2. Approach Rate 7
3. Use the same pattern of hitsounds of the easy diff.

1. 00:08:406 (7) Fix this slider. looks bad.
2. 00:28:200 (6,7,8) Spacing
3. 00:36:241 (1,2,3,4) ^
4. 00:44:901 (1) Remove new combo.
5. 00:53:251 (8) 1 Grid Left.
6. 01:01:292 (5,6,7) Spacing
7. 01:02:529 (4,5,6) ^
8. 01:34:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) ^
9. 02:06:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6) ^
10. 02:14:127 (1) Remove new combo.
11. 02:15:365 (1) ^.
12. 02:38:096 (3,4,5) Spacing
13. 03:09:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6) ^
14. 03:11:189 (3) Remove 1 Repeat.
15. 03:16:447 (6) New combo
16. 03:20:468 (1) Remove new combo.

1. This is only a hard difficulty, please don't make a insanity pattern and follow the spread :d

1. 03:27:117 (1) Extend the spinner to 03:31:911.

eldnl wrote:

[Easy]

1. Please map this diff to 02:20:158 same Normal diff.

OK.i'll map it later.

1. 00:01:602 (1) Add Finish nice
2. 00:06:550 (1) ^ i'll try
3. 00:09:334 (6) This slider don't follow the rhythm because is mapped in 1/6. Please fix. fixed
4. 00:43:663 (1) Finish nice
5. 00:49:540 (6) Remove whistle don't sounds good. i'll remake this patern
6. 00:51:086 (1,2,3,4) Stacked notes are hard to read for new players and more if they are not at the same distance of time. i'll remake this pattern
7. 00:52:323 (2) Remove finish i think its okay,if other modder found this, i'll correct it
8. 00:56:035 (1) Finish nice
9. 01:01:292 (1) Clap at the start and end. okay
10. 01:02:529 (2) ^. okay
11. 01:05:004 (4) Remove finish okay
12. 01:05:932 (2) Finish nice
13. 01:11:189 (1) Clap at the start and end. okay
14. 01:12:426 (2) ^ okay
15. 01:15:828 (1) Use a soft finish + whistle? I think sounds better.okay

[Hard]

1. HP Drain Rate 5
2. Approach Rate 7 i'll try
3. Use the same pattern of hitsounds of the easy diff.[/color]

you mean the finish add in easy? ok

1. 00:08:406 (7) Fix this slider. looks bad. fixed
2. 00:28:200 (6,7,8) Spacing fixed
3. 00:36:241 (1,2,3,4) ^ i think its okay to increase distance here
4. 00:44:901 (1) Remove new combo. fixed
5. 00:53:251 (8) 1 Grid Left. fixed
6. 01:01:292 (5,6,7) Spacing fixed
7. 01:02:529 (4,5,6) ^ fixed
8. 01:34:385 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) ^ i think its okay to increase distance here
9. 02:06:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6) ^ ^
10. 02:14:127 (1) Remove new combo. fixed
11. 02:15:365 (1) ^. fixed
12. 02:38:096 (3,4,5) Spacing fixed
13. 03:09:024 (1,2,3,4,5,6) ^ i think its okay to increase distance here
14. 03:11:189 (3) Remove 1 Repeat. fixed
15. 03:16:447 (6) New combo
16. 03:20:468 (1) Remove new combo.

• 
  

1. This is only a hard difficulty, please don't make a insanity pattern and follow the spread :d
   i am always trying to make it easy and fun

Great song. I hope to see this map ranked. Star.

winber1 wrote:

Generally, I hate having a map that has an easier diff end earlier than the harder ones. They should all be the same length. Sometimes it's ok for certain guest diffs since I know it's a different person mapping, but still, in this beatmap set, I truly would like to have Easy and Normal mapped to the end. i decide to map easy with the same length as normal. easier diff has less playtime cus the song got 194BPM and 3min30 length. it's hard for new player to play so long.

Hard

--this isn't all that much easier than lunatic lol. Everything is perfectly readable, but it's just too hard to be considered a hard imo D:
I've tried to make it easy. Since the song has 194 BPM , its hard for me to do this. if anyone can have specific idea to make it easy, i would be very grateful
01:28:663 (x) - add note k
01:39:179 (1) - remove combo k
01:39:334 (2) - new combo k

Easy

00:10:262 (7,8) - i would move these 1/1 tick back and fix hitsounds and spacing if needed. It just plain confusing to beginners to have the beats placed like that imo. k
[
00:30:364 (x) - add note? no
00:30:983 (x) - ^ no
]do these two together. sounds better imo.
00:41:189 (4) - new combo k

kanonr wrote:

:D 哥哥www

eldnl wrote:

[Normal]

1. Approach Rate 5
2. HP Drain Rate 4 okay
3. Slider Tick Rate 1[/color] ^

1. 00:38:715 (1) Remove new combo dont want to change it..
2. 00:53:560 (1) ^ okay

1. If you change the mentioned change the "Normal+" for only "Normal" because the difficulty is due to high bpm. It's really easy. finally._.

darck360 wrote:

Hey ~

[Easy]
Slider Tick Rate in 2
00:02:839 : Finish
00:04:076 : ^
00:07:787 : ^
00:09:024 : ^
00:09:643 : ^
00:11:189 : Grid down
00:27:890 : Clap
00:55:725 : The kiai start here > 00:56:035
01:15:828 > 03:42:426 : All this not going to end? ._.

[Hard]
00:02:839 : Finish
00:04:076 : ^
00:07:787 : ^
00:09:024 : ^
00:09:643 : ^
00:55:725 : The kiai start here > 00:56:035
01:44:282 : Fix this slider like this
01:58:818 : The kiai start here > 01:59:127
02:18:921 : The kiai finish here > 02:17:684
02:20:158 : Finish
03:01:911 : The kiai start here > 03:02:220
http://osu.ppy.sh/images/star-user.png[/img:c8098]

1. 00:58:509 (5) - New combo?
2. 01:14:591 (1) - Would sound better with normal-finish instead of soft-finish.
3. 02:17:684 (1) - ^

1. All fine!

1. 00:50:159 (4,5) - Set the same spacing as 00:49:850 (3,4) and move the timing 0.5x till the new combo.
2. 02:10:262 (6,7,8) - Would sound better with fading out
3. 03:27:117 (1) - Would sound better with normal-finish instead of soft-finish.

1. 00:52:633 (1,2) - HP Bar touched, move down a little?
2. 01:43:045 (4,5) - ^
3. 01:53:870 (7,8) - ^
4. 01:57:736 (4,5) - ^
5. 03:02:684 (x) - add a note?