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Katakiri Rekka - metaphor of paradise

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HeatKai
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined April 2010
HeatKai
Got request from Crimmi's Queue.

So here's the mod ;)

[easy]
00:09:530 (3) - one grid right

[normal]
01:05:476 (6) - remove it to other place
01:36:895 (x) - add note

[Gow's hard]
00:05:476 (4) - remove finish
00:06:895 (4) - delete. and check the slider length
01:00:611 (1) - this slider should end at the red tick before
01:56:557 (3) - delete , the spinner should start from here :)

[mforever's insane]

nice :)
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
mod~ >w<

[Insane]
00:39:226 (2) - clap?
00:45:713 (2) - ^
00:55:746 (7,1) - up 1 grid
00:57:368 (4) - clap?
01:05:172 (2) - ^
01:11:963 (9,10,11) - clap - whistle - clap
01:45:713 (2) - clap?
01:46:017 (1,5) - no clap on (1), clap here?

[gow's Hard]
00:28:179 (1) - left 1 grid?
01:24:936 (4) - remove clap at beginning, finish+clap at ending
01:57:773 (3) - this tick is too quiet?
nice~

[Normal]
00:09:530 (2) - whistle at beginning?
00:21:692 (3,4,5) - left 1 grid
00:26:152 (7) - clap
01:34:260 (2,3,4,5) - up 1 grid

star~
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Tony
awsome map :)
the offset is a bit late. ask a timer to check it :)
eldnl
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
2,930 posts
Joined March 2010
eldnl
[Easy]

  1. Overall Difficulty 2 ?
  1. 00:14:395 (3) Sliders with more than 1 repeat are difficult to read for new players.
  2. 00:29:800 (1) ^
  3. 00:56:963 (6) ^ (What makes it difficult to read is the combination of sliders with 1 repeat and others with two.)
  4. 01:45:206 (6) Stacked notes are hard to read for new players. (More if they are under a slider)
  5. 01:55:341 (3) ^.

[Normal]

  1. 00:17:436 (1) Start the spin here ?
  2. 01:13:584 (2~) Please use this pattern for claps. Pattern
[gow's Hard]

  1. Overall Difficulty 6
  1. 01:11:152 (6~) This stream for a hard ?
  2. 01:18:246 (1~) ^.
  3. 01:38:719 (1~) ^.
This is a hard or an insane diff ? ._.

[MForever's Insane]

  1. 00:20:071 (x) Please map the break ...
  2. 01:53:111 (1) Remove new combo.
Nice mapset. Star.
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
swish
> Tonoicutzu
thanks :3

> HeatKai, wmfchris, eldnl
thanks for mod~ :)

some fixed >.<
namazun
namazun
:)
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
;)
Muya
2,355 posts
Joined August 2009
Muya
:D
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
swish
> namazun, Nymph_, Muya
thanks :oops:
Zelos
1,111 posts
Joined May 2010
Zelos
Folder:

all good here.

Please note any mod I post is only a suggestion and can be freely ignored.

Easy:
00:09:530 (3) - move to the left 2 grid points to make the triangle more symmetrical.

Normal:
fine here.

Gow's Hard:
nothing wrong here.

Mforever's insane:
nothing wrong here.

No kudosu.
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
swish
> Zelos

fixed~
thanks in advice~ :)
JoJo
1,177 posts
Joined July 2010
JoJo
8-)
PeaChick
196 posts
Joined December 2009
PeaChick
(。・ε・`。)
VellSain
3 posts
Joined June 2010
VellSain
:idea:
Rusty
170 posts
Joined April 2009
Rusty
Download: Katakiri Rekka - metaphor of paradise (swish) [MForever's Insane].osu

全部直した！
おくれてごめんーー
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
swish
> Joshua Lost, ChickeN, VellSain
hoshi arigatou~ :)

> MForever

ありがと！ updated~
subarasikibuta
559 posts
Joined May 2009
subarasikibuta
片雾～
Asagiri Mai
118 posts
Joined May 2010
Asagiri Mai
rekka
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
swish
>3kinnagi, Asagiri Mai
片霧烈火 :O
thanks~~ >.<
FutakiKanata
180 posts
Joined July 2008
FutakiKanata
(´;ω;｀)ﾌﾞﾜｯ
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
swish
> Kanata-n
(´；ω；｀)ﾌﾞﾜｯ　　ありがとー
Suzully
osu! Alumni
2,446 posts
Joined July 2010
Suzully
modリクエストどうもです～ :)

[General]

  • InsaneだけPreviewTimeが違うので統一してくださいー。
[Easy]

  • Fine~
[Normal]
  1. 00:39:530 (1,2,3) - ここで単発を重ねるなら00:39:327にもノートを置いて重ねた方が良いと思います。
  2. 00:59:800 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 01:36:287 (7,8) - ここまで単発の重ねは1/8拍で使ってきているので、ここで1/4拍だと戸惑うノーマルプレイヤーもいると思います。スライダーに変えた方がいいかも？
[gowwwさんのHard]

  • OD-1?(SVが低くHPが5というのと、InsaneもOD7なので)
  1. 01:56:557 (3) - 折り返しを1回減らして、01:57:773からスピナーを開始？
[MForeverさんのInsane]
  1. 00:12:758 (6,1) - 前の(1-6)のスペーシングが広いので、もう少し離した方がスッキリするかもしれません。
  2. 00:41:339 (3) - Grid level4で 1grid 上＆右？
  3. 00:42:758 (1) - 1grid右？
  4. 01:11:948 (9) - New combo?
  5. 01:34:650 (6) - 前の(1-5)でスペーシングを広げていっているので、ここでnew comboを入れたほうが綺麗に見えると思いますー。
どのdiffも素晴らしいです :oops:

既に星投げてた＾ｑ＾
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
swish

Suzully wrote:

modリクエストどうもです～ :)

[General]

  • InsaneだけPreviewTimeが違うので統一してくださいー。
[Easy]

  • Fine~
[Normal]
  1. 00:39:530 (1,2,3) - ここで単発を重ねるなら00:39:327にもノートを置いて重ねた方が良いと思います。
  2. 00:59:800 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 01:36:287 (7,8) - ここまで単発の重ねは1/8拍で使ってきているので、ここで1/4拍だと戸惑うノーマルプレイヤーもいると思います。スライダーに変えた方がいいかも？
[gowwwさんのHard]

  • OD-1?(SVが低くHPが5というのと、InsaneもOD7なので)
  1. 01:56:557 (3) - 折り返しを1回減らして、01:57:773からスピナーを開始？
[MForeverさんのInsane]
  1. 00:12:758 (6,1) - 前の(1-6)のスペーシングが広いので、もう少し離した方がスッキリするかもしれません。
  2. 00:41:339 (3) - Grid level4で 1grid 上＆右？
  3. 00:42:758 (1) - 1grid右？
  4. 01:11:948 (9) - New combo?
  5. 01:34:650 (6) - 前の(1-5)でスペーシングを広げていっているので、ここでnew comboを入れたほうが綺麗に見えると思いますー。
どのdiffも素晴らしいです :oops:

既に星投げてた＾ｑ＾
> すずりさん
thanks mod!!　 kudosu star ありがとう ;__;
Norn_NNN
203 posts
Joined February 2011
Norn_NNN
star~ :)
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
swish
> Norn_NNN
arigato~ :)
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare
:oops:
indyinyou
887 posts
Joined June 2009
indyinyou
My suggestions:

[Normal]
00:16:017 : make like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/99514
00:41:557 : add silder to 00:41:963
00:42:368 : add silder return to 00:42:773
00:44:395 : delete silder add note here
00:44:800 : add silder to 00:45:206 + 1 reverse arrow?
00:46:017 : fin
00:52:503 : ^
00:54:530 : i think no return silder good better >:(
01:02:638 : add note
01:05:882 : ^
01:13:584 : remove clap add fin
01:20:071 : ^
01:26:557 : ^

[Hard]
00:17:436 : add note and move spin to 00:17:638
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
swish
> R a r e
ari~ :D


indyinyou wrote:

My suggestions:

[Normal]
00:16:017 : make like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/99514
00:41:557 : add silder to 00:41:963
00:42:368 : add silder return to 00:42:773
00:44:395 : delete silder add note here
00:44:800 : add silder to 00:45:206 + 1 reverse arrow?
00:46:017 : fin
00:52:503 : ^
00:54:530 : i think no return silder good better >:(
01:02:638 : add note
01:05:882 : ^
01:13:584 : remove clap add fin
01:20:071 : ^
01:26:557 : ^

[Hard]
00:17:436 : add note and move spin to 00:17:638

> indyinyou
thanks for mod :) some fixed~
Nivra
13 posts
Joined February 2011
Nivra
star
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
swish
> Akch
arigato~ :)
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Takos
素晴らしい
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
~~~
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
swish
> Takos, banvi
thanks~ :)
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
Nice map 8-)

btw,offset should be 3848?I feel little bit off of the previous offset 3855.
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
swish

kanpakyin wrote:

Nice map 8-)

btw,offset should be 3848?I feel little bit off of the previous offset 3855.
OK :)
change to offset 3848

thanks KPY ~ >.<
Rigeru_old
426 posts
Joined January 2009
Rigeru_old
8-)
Beren
961 posts
Joined September 2009
Beren
★
Melancholy
175 posts
Joined August 2010
Melancholy
ok~
paimanlol
11 posts
Joined October 2010
paimanlol
nice map!
swish
1,194 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
swish
> Rigeru, Beren, Melancholy, Paiman
thanks :3
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