Wee, first mod~
Nway, here you go:
Sorry bout the wall of text, guess I went nazi on the hitsounds and combos =.=
Short, simple and sweet, and the different BGs are nice, so your first star~
All the best!
EDIT: Erm, are you planning to add an Easy diff? If so, can I make one for you? =3
Nway, here you go:
kurohacker's mod (Warning!)
[General]
In the tags, change Ryuta Kazuka to Ryota Kozuka, that's the real spelling.
[Normal]
I suggest reducing the hitsound volume to 50%, it's a bit too loud for my liking.
0'01''635 - Add a whistle at the end.
0'02''453 - Try removing the whistle here, though you can leave it also.
0'06''408 - Add a whistle here, and...
0'06''817 - Remove the whistle at the and, and add one at the beginning instead, it'll sound better.
0'11''180 -> 0'15''270 - Try this hitsound pattern at the end of all sliders [1]-[8] : normal, clap, whistle, whistle, normal, clap, whistle, whistle.
0'19''361 - Move this to 0'19''497, to follow the piano. Also, add a whistle here.
0'22''633 - New combo here, and...
0'23''452 - Remove the new combo here. Also, add a whistle at the beginning.
0'28''633 -> 0'32''451 - Same advice as in 0'11''180.
0'36''950 - Maybe add a clap here?
0'40''086 - Start new combo here, and...
0'40''632 - Remove the one here.
0'41''314 - Maybe add a clap here, too?
Gosh, this is the first time I advised someone to add so many whistles in his map.
Placement of notes are nice and simple, so I focus more on the hitsounds. Nice map!
[Hard]
0'03''135 - New combo here.
0'04''226 - Remove the new combo here, and remove the whistle.
0'05''180 - New combo here.
0'07''632 - Maybe you should move the whistle hitsound from the end of the slider to the reverse instead?
0'08''453 - ^
0'09''544 - I highly recommend swapping places between [1] and [2] here, to suit the beat better. Also, if you choose to
do the above two mods, apply it at the slider here, too.
0'11''180 - Start new combo here, and..
0'11''998 - Remove the one here.
0'14''043 - The piano here actually plays 1/3 notes, so you need to remove this and add two notes 1/6 beats before and after this point.
i.e. Add a circle at 0'13''998 and 0'14''089.
0'19''906 - Remove new combo here, and...
0'20''588 - Add it here instead.
0'26''042 - I think it sounds better at 0'25''906 instead.
0'28''633 - Add new combo here, and..
0'29''724 - Remove the one here.
0'31''360 - Same case as in 0'14''043; change the slider to 1/6 beat long and reverse it two times.
0'35''450 - Maybe remove the whistle here.
0'39''814 - Remove the new combo here.
0'40''086 - Start here instead.
In the tags, change Ryuta Kazuka to Ryota Kozuka, that's the real spelling.
[Normal]
I suggest reducing the hitsound volume to 50%, it's a bit too loud for my liking.
0'01''635 - Add a whistle at the end.
0'02''453 - Try removing the whistle here, though you can leave it also.
0'06''408 - Add a whistle here, and...
0'06''817 - Remove the whistle at the and, and add one at the beginning instead, it'll sound better.
0'11''180 -> 0'15''270 - Try this hitsound pattern at the end of all sliders [1]-[8] : normal, clap, whistle, whistle, normal, clap, whistle, whistle.
0'19''361 - Move this to 0'19''497, to follow the piano. Also, add a whistle here.
0'22''633 - New combo here, and...
0'23''452 - Remove the new combo here. Also, add a whistle at the beginning.
0'28''633 -> 0'32''451 - Same advice as in 0'11''180.
0'36''950 - Maybe add a clap here?
0'40''086 - Start new combo here, and...
0'40''632 - Remove the one here.
0'41''314 - Maybe add a clap here, too?
Gosh, this is the first time I advised someone to add so many whistles in his map.
Placement of notes are nice and simple, so I focus more on the hitsounds. Nice map!
[Hard]
0'03''135 - New combo here.
0'04''226 - Remove the new combo here, and remove the whistle.
0'05''180 - New combo here.
0'07''632 - Maybe you should move the whistle hitsound from the end of the slider to the reverse instead?
0'08''453 - ^
0'09''544 - I highly recommend swapping places between [1] and [2] here, to suit the beat better. Also, if you choose to
do the above two mods, apply it at the slider here, too.
0'11''180 - Start new combo here, and..
0'11''998 - Remove the one here.
0'14''043 - The piano here actually plays 1/3 notes, so you need to remove this and add two notes 1/6 beats before and after this point.
i.e. Add a circle at 0'13''998 and 0'14''089.
0'19''906 - Remove new combo here, and...
0'20''588 - Add it here instead.
0'26''042 - I think it sounds better at 0'25''906 instead.
0'28''633 - Add new combo here, and..
0'29''724 - Remove the one here.
0'31''360 - Same case as in 0'14''043; change the slider to 1/6 beat long and reverse it two times.
0'35''450 - Maybe remove the whistle here.
0'39''814 - Remove the new combo here.
0'40''086 - Start here instead.
Sorry bout the wall of text, guess I went nazi on the hitsounds and combos =.=
Short, simple and sweet, and the different BGs are nice, so your first star~
All the best!
EDIT: Erm, are you planning to add an Easy diff? If so, can I make one for you? =3