Hi there~
[General]
[General]
- I like the linear based slider designs :3 Good job on that!
- Offset +6ms, perhaps?
- Have you guys thought on making some kind of storyboard? Just that background seems way too... Monotonous :/
- Ok since I like the slider design, I will be quiet picky about symmetry so that they look even better~
- 14:764 (5) - When making symmetrical sliders, there's a little trick to it:
You see, the "trick" here is to make the first slider point and the last slider point symmetrical. After that, you move the other points in the middle (of course, the second should be symmetrical with the previous to the last one, and so on) so that the last slider point is exactly in the middle of the circle. That was, you'll have sliders that will be much more accurately symmetrical.
You can see it in the next examples: - 16:364 (1) - Actually it makes me sad how this is overlapped by (5) and (6). But, a more symmetrical form of the slider would be:
- And so on. I won't make much more emphasis on that, I think that if you like the advise you should practice it~
- 15:964 (6) - Watch the spacing - this should be like two grids down.
- 21:964 (4) . Could you please move this and perhaps make it horizontal, so that it isn't overlapped by (2) and (3) ;_;?
- 48:364 (1) - The Distance Snapping here is not the same as before... Maybe you could change the pattern a little to make it look like this.
- 01:02:764 (3) - Maybe center this? And the second slider point isn't on the same vertical line as the first one~
- 01:07:564 (2) - For this to be symmetrical to (1) it should be one more grid down and one more grid to the right.
- 01:17:164 (3) - Maybe center this?
- 01:34:764 (1) - This is not properly stacked under (3)'s end. Use DS x0 if necessary.
- 01:58:764 (3) - There were millions of ways to do a slider here but why did it have to be overlapped D:? Could you please re-design this so that it isn't overlapped?
- This confused me a little, to be honest, and it is a Normal . I'm guessing it is a Normal of course (well actually it has 4,20 Star rating which would be WAY too much for a Normal). But anyway, I don't think this is a problem but I'm mentioning just for you to keep it in mind.
- 25:170 (2) - This change of speed is a little too sudden. This is the second most easy difficulty after all. I suggest making this a 2/1 long slider (that is to remove the repeat an make it longer).
- 35:370 (3,4) - These are somewhat overlapped by (1)'s hitburst. Consider moving them down a little or redesigning the pattern a bit.`
- 01:04:170 (5) - Mmm I didn't like how this stack played... Could you unstack this?
- Well yeah the mod on this difficulty was going to be longer but I think they were all things that weren't worth mentioning them.
- 25:964 (1) - As I said earlier I don't like that kind of overlaps...
- 01:15:564 (1-8) - This pattern is WAY too confusing. And the spacing isn't nice at all. Please re arrange it somehow to make it more consistent and readable.
- 01:29:964 (1-8) - I don't know, I think this is adding artificial difficulty. Plus, this is a Hard and that seems way too hard for that difficuly level. Please re arrange this.
- 01:59:764 (6) - Consider adding a new combo here.
- Heh, nice diff name!
- Ok I just noticed you're using grid level 3, consider using grid level 4 to always make your sliders more symmetrical and pretty~
- 34:364 (2) - Mmm this jump seems pretty pointless to me, it has no basis on the music ;_; Make it shorter, please~
- 01:53:164 (7-10) - Again, these jumps have no basis on the music in my opinion. I think they shouldn't be crescent jumps - if you want to make this jumpy, simply use a little bigger DS but don't make it crescent. Please.
- Hey, I actually enjoyed playing this!