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PSPDS Eddie
Thank you for your star~
Holoaz
MeLLoN
Patchouli
swish
MiLu
Nyan_p
R a r e
Rigeru
quintitem
ykcarrot

>A<
I waiting mod~
Muya
ごす☆でり
Orgol
~ :arrow:
Topic Starter
PSPDS Eddie
Thank you for your star~

Muya
Lunet

Easy was added, and this map is completed by this.
Please give me mod/MAT/BAT ~ ></
banvi
腹減った

[Easy]
at least HP +1 . AR +1 . OD +1
00:46:156 (T) この緑線不要?
00:54:627 (1) remove new cmombo
00:57:450 (3) new combo
01:03:097 (8) new combo

[Normal]
00:46:156 (T) この緑線不要?
00:52:509 (2,3) spacingがちょっと狭いかな?
01:18:450 (3,4) ^
01:36:627 (T) この緑線不要?
01:41:215 (T) ^

[Hard]
00:26:391 (7) new combo
01:35:215 (T) この緑線不要?
01:36:627 (T) ^
01:36:979 (T) ^

[Insane]
00:35:921 (4) move 1 grid left & 1 grid down?
00:44:568 (5) move 1 grid left & 1 grid up?
01:22:685 (5) move 1 grid left

イイ譜面>~</
good luck ;)
Topic Starter
PSPDS Eddie

banvi wrote:

腹減った

[Easy]
at least HP +1 . AR +1 . OD +1
00:46:156 (T) この緑線不要?
00:54:627 (1) remove new cmombo
00:57:450 (3) new combo
01:03:097 (8) new combo

[Normal]
00:46:156 (T) この緑線不要?
00:52:509 (2,3) spacingがちょっと狭いかな?
01:18:450 (3,4) ^
01:36:627 (T) この緑線不要?
01:41:215 (T) ^

[Hard]
00:26:391 (7) new combo
01:35:215 (T) この緑線不要?
01:36:627 (T) ^
01:36:979 (T) ^

[Insane]
00:35:921 (4) move 1 grid left & 1 grid down?
00:44:568 (5) move 1 grid left & 1 grid up?
01:22:685 (5) move 1 grid left

イイ譜面>~</
good luck ;)
All Fix~
Thank you for mod banvi~ ><
Takos
;)
Garven
Sorry I took so long. -_-
Anyway, as per your request:

[Easy]
Wow, distance snap is very very low. I'd almost say too low. Those first sliders made me click very early due to the distance.
00:29:215 (1) - Return arrow pointing strange.
00:44:744 (4) - ^
There's not much really wrong, per se, but the super-low distance snap makes for a really dull map since you don't really... move around much.

[Normal]
00:13:685 (4,1,2) - Got small overlap occurring here.
Eh, not much wrong, but the general rhythm gets really bland. For the most part, you're just playing the beat. Over and over and over and over. zzz If you could vary up the rhythm a bit - even having small spots where you stop playing for a beat - would make this more satisfying aurally.

[Hard]
There's a bunch of tiny overlaps that I didn't like too much, but for the most part this is okay.
00:16:156 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - This rhythm... just doesn't feel right to me. It plays fine, but it feels like you're filling in beats where they really aren't needed.
00:18:979 (3,4,1,2,3) - ^

[Insane]
The slower part of the song feels a little bit too difficult considering the music, but I can hear what parts you're following. Just feels weird that the soft part is just about as intense as the kiai/chorus section.
Topic Starter
PSPDS Eddie
Thank you for star,Takos !
Thank you for mod and star Garven! :D

[Easy]
Fix Return arrow and DS 0.6 → DS 0.8
[Normal]
00:13:685 Fix
It is as you say.
This Normal was taking the place of Easy first because In this map, there was no Easy.
Therefore, this Normal might be too easy.
remake of map in the first half was tried.

I want to ask for the check on Normal that changed the rhythm.
[Hard]
00:16:156 (3,4,5,6,1,2)
00:18:979 (3,4,1,2,3)
erases 4
[Insane]
Because it is TVSise
The difference was not so put on the difficulty.
The big change was not able to be added so much
because there was a part not suitable for the taken rhythm when stream was erased.
However, Fix was done a little.
Mercurius
8-)
Garven
Aaand I'm back~

[Easy]
This difficulty plays muuuch better now - thank you so much for taking the time to changes things around!
00:44:744 (4,1) - Slight overlap, if you want to address that.
01:15:097 (1,2) - ^

[Normal]
00:32:038 (5) - New combo?
00:41:215 (2) - Maybe make this normal circles like you did with 00:42:627 (2,3) - ?
00:36:274 (1) - Remove new combo
00:39:097 (1) - ^
00:41:921 (1) - ^
00:43:332 (4) - New combo
01:33:803 - Add a note and move things around like this?

To be honest, though, I'd rather it be one long spinner but this alternative works better than what you have now, to me.

[Hard]
Kind of strange that Hard and Insane have the same slider velocity.
There are some weird combo progressions during the beginning of this map. I'm especially looking at the really short combos like 00:28:685 (1) - and 00:34:509 (1,2,3) - , though it was weird to see 00:39:803 (6) - as part of the other combo and aaaaaa
Try to make things more consistent with your other difficulties. :3
01:31:156 (1) - This slider plays kind of awkwardly because you play four single beats with the strong vocal, then this straight slider with the leading vocal into the hold note in the music that's heading towards the resolution, and there feels like there's a missing beat. Maybe make it curved so it's not leading into a hitburst and add a note at 01:31:685 - ?
01:31:685 (1) - End this at 01:33:979 - and add a finish and start the next spinner at 01:34:156 -
01:41:215 - Make this timing section use soft hitsound set so it doesn't have that small ぱ noise at the end.

[Insane]
01:33:980 (1) - Hmmm, maybe end this at 01:35:450 - ? (1/3 snap)
01:41:215 - Make this timing section use soft hitsound set so it doesn't have that small ぱ noise at the end.
Topic Starter
PSPDS Eddie
[Easy]
Fixed All

[Normal]
01:33:803 - Change to one spinner

[Hard]
Kind of strange that Hard and Insane have the same slider velocity.
slider velocity1.7→1.4 Foooooooo
There are some weird combo progressions Maybe fix
01:31:156 (1) - Maybe Fix
01:31:685 (1) - It did not change it because it became a strange rhythm IMO when changing rhythm. sorry
01:41:215 - Fix

[Insane]
01:33:980 (1) I think that spinner end of 1/3snap is strange and too difficult rhythm.
01:41:215 - Fix
Garven
Everything looks much better; thanks for taking in my suggestions - the set feels much more balanced!

:U
Topic Starter
PSPDS Eddie
Thank you for very detailed mod. :3
And Thank you for bubble !
Alace
<All diffs>
00:46:509:there are 2 timing lines on the same timing point, delete one with no kiai

<Easy>
00:12:274 (1) - add a new combo here

nicely done
Topic Starter
PSPDS Eddie

Alace wrote:

<All diffs>
00:46:509:there are 2 timing lines on the same timing point, delete one with no kiai

<Easy>
00:12:274 (1) - add a new combo here

nicely done
All Fix~
gdeath
:)
Alace
yoshi~
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Cyril Scarlet
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Topic Starter
PSPDS Eddie
Thank you for your star gdeath :D
Thank you for rank Alace <3

>S i R i R u
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Teras
I've been working on this map for a very long time. Then I look here, and I find this ;_;

Luckily enough, i'm mapping the full vers :V
Late congratz on rank
Topic Starter
PSPDS Eddie
Thanks and good luck~ Teras
:)
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