ouranhshc wrote:

Maniac
01:11:164 (3) - this slowdown was not expected follow music :3
01:34:764 (1) - hidden repeat fixed

Hard
01:15:764 (2,4,6,8) - maybe increase the spacing between these so they can be seen better? done

LF Style
what kind of diff is this, is this a normal or a hard or etc
normal+..?

Easy
nice sliders~ XD

rEdo wrote:

[Easy]
0:18:764 (2) - delete whistle from its end, sounds a bit better imo done
0:26:764 (3) - move it one grid higher, so it's move consistent with the rest of the pattern?done
0:28:364 (6) - turn on the grid snap 4 and move it by one grid lower, to keep the perfect symmetry in this pattern ^
0:45:164 (1) - delete whistle from its end, sounds a bit better imo done
1:02:764 (1) - delete new combo done
1:34:764 (1) - i'm not sure if this is an error or not, but this slider is not snapped properly with (3) slider's end. :O

[Hard]
0:25:564 (5) - this note is placed too close to (3,4), i was pretty sure it's only 1/2 later re-set them
0:37:964 (2) - ctrl + r? :O
0:59:364 (7) - i'd place two notes there rather than 1/4 silder :OO
1:34:564 (7,8,1) - inconsistent spacing done
1:59:764 (6,7,8) - just like before, i'd rather put a stream there finally,change to stream..
2:03:564 (1) - innecessary new combo it's okay

[Maniac]
1:05:164 (1) - innecessary new combo ^
1:10:964 (1,2,3) - oh, this was confusing a lot. extend that slider! done
2:03:164 (1) - delete new combo? +65535


yep, that's it. good luck!

1. Fine

1. 00:22:764(x)-Add a whistle on this spinner?Seem good for me
2. 01:04:364(x)-It's sounds weird if you make a break here.Continue to map here or make a spinner until 01:05:564-
3. 01:25:164(1.2.3.4)-Confused pattern here!It will make confuse to newbie also.(4)-will hidden by skin!
4. 01:34:764(1)-Please stack with (3) properly?
5. 01:47:564(x)-IMO,Continuation to use spinner will make tired and broing to newbie.
6. 02:01:964(x,x)-^ Same.

1. 00:44:764(4)-Add a reverse here?Make it to 5 plet.
2. 00:46:964(1.2)-Some spacing issue you need to fix here.
3. 00:50:164(4.5)-I don't like this arrangemen personally.My opinion only.You may decide to solve it or not

1. 00:12:564(5)-Don't stack here please.It's quite hard to read.
2. 00:40:364(5)-New combo here due to follow a good game flow.
3. 00:43:564(7)-^ Same.
4. 01:15:564(1-8)-Extremely hard to read!Don't make the pattern like this in Hard difficulty!
5. 01:17:164(1.2.3.4.5)-Also 1/4 jump is not appropriate in Hard difficulty.
6. 01:55:564(5)-New combo here.
7. 01:59:764(6-1)-Oay attention here!This is the only long stream in Hard?To consistent the difficulty,Remove it or change it to 1/4 slider.

1. 沒人吐遭你其他diff用大圈...Insane diff反而用胖圈嗎? .__.
2. 00:12:464(x)-I prefer add a note here.
3. 01:02:264(4)-I suggest you can increase the spacing here.
4. 01:41:164(1-10)-Weird jump at all!!

1. I like the linear based slider designs :3 Good job on that!
2. Offset +6ms, perhaps?
3. Have you guys thought on making some kind of storyboard? Just that background seems way too... Monotonous :/

1. Ok since I like the slider design, I will be quiet picky about symmetry so that they look even better~
2. 14:764 (5) - When making symmetrical sliders, there's a little trick to it:
   
   SPOILER

   
   You see, the "trick" here is to make the first slider point and the last slider point symmetrical. After that, you move the other points in the middle (of course, the second should be symmetrical with the previous to the last one, and so on) so that the last slider point is exactly in the middle of the circle. That was, you'll have sliders that will be much more accurately symmetrical.
   You can see it in the next examples:
3. 16:364 (1) - Actually it makes me sad how this is overlapped by (5) and (6). But, a more symmetrical form of the slider would be:
   SPOILER

   
4. And so on. I won't make much more emphasis on that, I think that if you like the advise you should practice it~
5. 15:964 (6) - Watch the spacing - this should be like two grids down.
6. 21:964 (4) . Could you please move this and perhaps make it horizontal, so that it isn't overlapped by (2) and (3) ;_;?
7. 48:364 (1) - The Distance Snapping here is not the same as before... Maybe you could change the pattern a little to make it look like this.
8. 01:02:764 (3) - Maybe center this? And the second slider point isn't on the same vertical line as the first one~
9. 01:07:564 (2) - For this to be symmetrical to (1) it should be one more grid down and one more grid to the right.
10. 01:17:164 (3) - Maybe center this?
11. 01:34:764 (1) - This is not properly stacked under (3)'s end. Use DS x0 if necessary.
12. 01:58:764 (3) - There were millions of ways to do a slider here but why did it have to be overlapped D:? Could you please re-design this so that it isn't overlapped?

1. This confused me a little, to be honest, and it is a Normal . I'm guessing it is a Normal of course (well actually it has 4,20 Star rating which would be WAY too much for a Normal). But anyway, I don't think this is a problem but I'm mentioning just for you to keep it in mind.
2. 25:170 (2) - This change of speed is a little too sudden. This is the second most easy difficulty after all. I suggest making this a 2/1 long slider (that is to remove the repeat an make it longer).
3. 35:370 (3,4) - These are somewhat overlapped by (1)'s hitburst. Consider moving them down a little or redesigning the pattern a bit.`
4. 01:04:170 (5) - Mmm I didn't like how this stack played... Could you unstack this?
5. Well yeah the mod on this difficulty was going to be longer but I think they were all things that weren't worth mentioning them.

1. 25:964 (1) - As I said earlier I don't like that kind of overlaps...
2. 01:15:564 (1-8) - This pattern is WAY too confusing. And the spacing isn't nice at all. Please re arrange it somehow to make it more consistent and readable.
3. 01:29:964 (1-8) - I don't know, I think this is adding artificial difficulty. Plus, this is a Hard and that seems way too hard for that difficuly level. Please re arrange this.
4. 01:59:764 (6) - Consider adding a new combo here.

1. Heh, nice diff name!
2. Ok I just noticed you're using grid level 3, consider using grid level 4 to always make your sliders more symmetrical and pretty~
3. 34:364 (2) - Mmm this jump seems pretty pointless to me, it has no basis on the music ;_; Make it shorter, please~
4. 01:53:164 (7-10) - Again, these jumps have no basis on the music in my opinion. I think they shouldn't be crescent jumps - if you want to make this jumpy, simply use a little bigger DS but don't make it crescent. Please.
5. Hey, I actually enjoyed playing this!

ThePal wrote:

SPOILER

Hello there!

Red: Major issue, you should properly change this.
Green: Minor issue.
Gray: Just a suggestion, no need to change here if you think something else.
Black: Other.

[Easy]
Beautiful, The Song Setup is just too easy. Else it's great!
HP Drain Rate: 3 d
Circle Size: 1 d
Approach Rate: 2
Overall Difficulty: 3 -1

[Hard]
Very nice! Great flow and nice constant of difficulty.
01:31:464 (9) Too hard it seems, Insane in my opinion. changed it
01:37:964 - 01:40:964 This is way too hard for Hard diff! Make it more constant as with the rest of the map. i think it's okay x_x

[Maniac]
I love it! Great job! thank you!
00:37:164 (1,2,3,4) Increase spacing? done

Amazing map overall, I can't wait to see this ranked!
Star~

kanpakyin wrote:

SPOILER

Yeah..Sorry for being so long

[General]

1. Fine

[Easy]

1. 00:22:764(x)-Add a whistle on this spinner?Seem good for me added
2. 01:04:364(x)-It's sounds weird if you make a break here.Continue to map here or make a spinner until 01:05:564- ...no
3. 01:25:164(1.2.3.4)-Confused pattern here!It will make confuse to newbie also.(4)-will hidden by skin! oops fixed
4. 01:34:764(1)-Please stack with (3) properly? done
5. 01:47:564(x)-IMO,Continuation to use spinner will make tired and broing to newbie. hmm..let me think 4 some days(runs
6. 02:01:964(x,x)-^ Same. ^

[Hard]

1. 00:12:564(5)-Don't stack here please.It's quite hard to read. done
2. 00:40:364(5)-New combo here due to follow a good game flow. done
3. 00:43:564(7)-^ Same. ^
4. 01:15:564(1-8)-Extremely hard to read!Don't make the pattern like this in Hard difficulty! 懒得改了..
5. 01:17:164(1.2.3.4.5)-Also 1/4 jump is not appropriate in Hard difficulty. done
6. 01:55:564(5)-New combo here. done
7. 01:59:764(6-1)-Oay attention here!This is the only long stream in Hard?To consistent the difficulty,Remove it or change it to 1/4 sliderdone.

[Maniac]

1. 沒人吐遭你其他diff用大圈...Insane diff反而用胖圈嗎? .__.
2. 00:12:464(x)-I prefer add a note here. no
3. 01:02:264(4)-I suggest you can increase the spacing here. done
4. 01:41:164(1-10)-Weird jump at all!!done

Star

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi there~

[General]

1. I like the linear based slider designs :3 Good job on that!
2. Offset +6ms, perhaps? changed it for 3 times..i'm really tired about it x_x
3. Have you guys thought on making some kind of storyboard? Just that background seems way too... Monotonous :/.....

[Easy]

1. Ok since I like the slider design, I will be quiet picky about symmetry so that they look even better~
2. 14:764 (5) - When making symmetrical sliders, there's a little trick to it:
   
   SPOILER

   
   You see, the "trick" here is to make the first slider point and the last slider point symmetrical. After that, you move the other points in the middle (of course, the second should be symmetrical with the previous to the last one, and so on) so that the last slider point is exactly in the middle of the circle. That was, you'll have sliders that will be much more accurately symmetrical. :O useful trick!thanks a lot!
   You can see it in the next examples:
3. 16:364 (1) - Actually it makes me sad how this is overlapped by (5) and (6). But, a more symmetrical form of the slider would be:
   SPOILER

   
   yeah fixed
4. And so on. I won't make much more emphasis on that, I think that if you like the advise you should practice it~ XD
5. 15:964 (6) - Watch the spacing - this should be like two grids down. done
6. 21:964 (4) . Could you please move this and perhaps make it horizontal, so that it isn't overlapped by (2) and (3) ;_;? maybe i like overlap..?
7. 48:364 (1) - The Distance Snapping here is not the same as before... Maybe you could change the pattern a little to make it look like this. done
8. 01:02:764 (3) - Maybe center this? And the second slider point isn't on the same vertical line as the first one~ o.o fixed
9. 01:07:564 (2) - For this to be symmetrical to (1) it should be one more grid down and one more grid to the right. o.o
10. 01:17:164 (3) - Maybe center this? yes
11. 01:34:764 (1) - This is not properly stacked under (3)'s end. Use DS x0 if necessary. done
12. 01:58:764 (3) - There were millions of ways to do a slider here but why did it have to be overlapped D:? Could you please re-design this so that it isn't overlapped? give up...finally remake it to a ugly strange shape

[Hard]

1. 25:964 (1) - As I said earlier I don't like that kind of overlaps... i like o.o
2. 01:15:564 (1-8) - This pattern is WAY too confusing. And the spacing isn't nice at all. Please re arrange it somehow to make it more consistent and readable. done
3. 01:29:964 (1-8) - I don't know, I think this is adding artificial difficulty. Plus, this is a Hard and that seems way too hard for that difficuly level. Please re arrange this. done
4. 01:59:764 (6) - Consider adding a new combo here done.

[Maniac]

1. Heh, nice diff name!
2. Ok I just noticed you're using grid level 3, consider using grid level 4 to always make your sliders more symmetrical and pretty~
3. 34:364 (2) - Mmm this jump seems pretty pointless to me, it has no basis on the music ;_; Make it shorter, please~ done
4. 01:53:164 (7-10) - Again, these jumps have no basis on the music in my opinion. I think they shouldn't be crescent jumps - if you want to make this jumpy, simply use a little bigger DS but don't make it crescent. Please. let me keep it ;_;
5. Hey, I actually enjoyed playing this!

Ok that's all for me. Have a star.

ThePal wrote:

[IF Style]
00:45:364 (1,2) Delete and put slider, looks better and gives better flow.
00:45:964 (3,4)^
^ fixed, other not fixed

kanpakyin wrote:

[lF Style]

1. 00:44:764(4)-Add a reverse here?Make it to 5 plet. fixed in another way
2. 00:46:964(1.2)-Some spacing issue you need to fix here. i don't think it's hard to read/play
3. 00:50:164(4.5)-I don't like this arrangemen personally.My opinion only.You may decide to solve it or not for layout, no change

narakucrimson wrote:

[IF Style]

1. This confused me a little, to be honest, and it is a Normal . I'm guessing it is a Normal of course (well actually it has 4,20 Star rating which would be WAY too much for a Normal). But anyway, I don't think this is a problem but I'm mentioning just for you to keep it in mind.
   you're right, but i'll leave it as it was due to following reason:
   1. star system is only for reference
   2. the mapset has an easier diff
   3. song from another music game should be harder than from anime/pop/touhou (same diff) IMO
   4. i find massive players (with low skill) to testplay and they do well on their 2nd~5th (vary from person) play
2. 25:170 (2) - This change of speed is a little too sudden. This is the second most easy difficulty after all. I suggest making this a 2/1 long slider (that is to remove the repeat an make it longer). solid suggestion, but that will make my layout ugly and less fun
3. 35:370 (3,4) - These are somewhat overlapped by (1)'s hitburst. Consider moving them down a little or redesigning the pattern a bit.` re-designed
4. 01:04:170 (5) - Mmm I didn't like how this stack played... Could you unstack this? unstacking break my layout symmetry and i don't see a reason to unstack them
5. Well yeah the mod on this difficulty was going to be longer but I think they were all things that weren't worth mentioning them.

Kanon wrote:

我又来了>.<
general
没什么问题，是不是弄个简单的闪光SB会老外会喜欢一点？
周末研究一下 XD

easy
没发现问题

Hard
01:09:164 (1) - 从这里开始后面4个滑条可以像http://puu.sh/2cZJ这样试试，去掉中间NOTE,我觉得这样更符合歌曲一点，如果改的话排列稍微变动一下比较好. 图挂了?

Maniac
01:14:164 (4) - 这个滑条HITSOUND去掉 :O
01:53:164 (7,9) - 这里叠一起好一点？不然有点坑爹 FIXED
01:53:364 (8,10) - ^ ^

就这么多，很好的图，接下来找MAT或者BAT看比较好。

☆~~

Kanon wrote:

IF STYLE
貌似他没有UPDATE你修改的版本，我就自己载了来看
首先赞一下，的确是做的很认真的GD
00:19:764 这里的HITSOUND有点突兀，换成C1 FINISH?
00:35:964 这里和紧接着后面的Panel音量减小一些会比较好？
00:41:164 这里加NOTE?
后面排列没有问题，但是我不是很喜欢后半部分C2 的SLIDERTICK 音效，有点刺耳，不想换的话音量稍微减小一点比较好?

winber1 wrote:

IF Style
--Is this supposed to be a normal or something? it's a normal, a hard one though
00:06:764 (1,2) - wow this really bothers me that they are perfectly vertical to each other i don't see the issue having them symmetrical
00:24:364 (1,2) - i would be consistent with spacing. that will kill my layout
00:38:764 (5) - new combo no
00:38:964 (1) - remove combo this new combo declare the start of red(weak) beat paragraph
01:46:764 (1) - end spinner here i'll see if fanzhen agree to change his diff to keep mapset consistency

winber1 wrote:

Sorry it took so long

Maniac

Circle size +1? n

01:05:164 (1) - remove combo? stream is a little long..

fine other than that

Hard

01:09:564 (2,4,6) - I would move these three notes back 1/4 tick and fix spacing. i don't like how it is right now :/ dont want to change it :3
01:25:164 (1) - *nazi* up one grid ww
01:46:764 (1) - end spinner here (be consistent with maniac) ok

Easy

I would avoid all these crunched sliders and stuff in easy difficulties. It may confuse beginners, but i guess it's not a problem.

00:53:164 (2,3) - not perfectly stacked done
01:47:564 (1) - start spinner here done
01:50:364 (1) - end spinner here? need a rest for beginners

Nice map! :3

Star~

loveFantasy wrote:

winber1 wrote:

00:06:764 (1,2) - wow this really bothers me that they are perfectly vertical to each other i don't see the issue having them symmetrical

winber1 wrote:

LOL. OOPS TYPO
that they aren't perfectly symmetrical. at least last time i check this, they weren't perfectly aligned across the x-axis.
wow lololol. i looked really stupid when i said that.

Yomeiro wrote:

Sorry for the "late" mod >_>
Went to sleep yesterday when you solved a riddle in my queue, was pretty late already at my place though .,.

Maniac

Seems fine to me o.o

Hard

00:43:964 (2) - Combo-Burst from 00:43:164 (5,6) make this slider hard to see~, I would reccomend you to space either 00:43:164 (5,6) different or this slider a different way. fixed
01:09:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part is confusing if you don't read how the circles come but when you listen to the music >-<
I see how 2,4,6 and 8 approach, but I actually hit them earlier since I always think, they are at the blue ticks directly after them sliders.
Change this maybe... .,. yaeh fixed..
01:15:564 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is an interesting pattern but a bit confusing probably~ (just pointing this out)
01:53:964 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe add soft-whistle at the beginning of those sliders like you did at Maniac? :3 (sounds better in my opinion~) done

That's all for Hard~

Easy

Those parts seem like they are missing something, because of the slow AR, they are ok though~
01:04:364: You could probably add a spinner here, which ends at 01:05:564~ hmm..i think a short spinner is a bit hard for beginner..
01:49:564: You could probably add a slider here, ending at 01:50:364~ a bit soon..

Well nothing much to say here, nice diff as well.

Nice mapset, can't complain much about it and awesome song~
Have this star~ (but next time read the rules of my queue~ :3)

Yomeiro wrote:

lF Style
Not sure if loveFantasy would mind but...:
01:53:964 (1,2,3,4) - Same as Hard~ maybe add soft-whistles to those notes~ no for hitsound consistency
That's all~ :3

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Taiko]
Raise sample volume to at least 80. okay

Good job, though the small 1/6 parts don't seem to fit, or be used much... Didn't delete those before submitting, sorry orz

HeatKai wrote:

Got Request from TBRT queue.
So here's the mod ~

Oo Mekadon taiko :33333333

[general for taiko only]

Slider tick rate : 1 Doesn't affect anything, so no

[taiko]
Don't make saitama D: ! B...but there aren't any saitama reference...
I know it's your mapping style but
00:17:564 (46,47,48,49) - Overmapped Nah. I love this one more. Besides it follows the rhythm
00:31:030 (119,120,121) - not following any rhythm :3 Fix'd
01:00:864 (303,304,305,306) - Overmapped * can use 1/4 Same as 00:17:564 (46,47,48,49)
01:04:364 (1) - make it longer until 01:05:564 ok
01:55:164 (25,26,27,28) - Overmapped Also same reason
01:51:497 (3,4) - use 1/4 Done

Good luck ~

ouranhshc wrote:

Hey, just stopping bye. i was glancing at you map and I noticed that on Maniac, 01:50:764 was missing kiai.

DeeN wrote:

星球大战！（卧槽这坑爹的中文名字翻译）

haha just kidding

one of my favourite song in djmax series

SPOILER

<Easy>
nice silder :3

<lF style>
nothing found
and nice hitsounds i like it <3333

<Hard>
00:15:764 (3,4,5) - 3 4重叠吗 我的建议是4 5 Reverse selection一下
[attachment=2:b55ef]1.jpg[/attachment:b55ef]
4再摆下来一点？ yes
00:24:364 (1,2,3,4) - soft-clap? 替换成soft-finish怎么样（或者3换成soft-whistle 1 2 4 soft-finish?) 我记得这里是段custom hitsounds..
01:15:564 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nice但是或许读起来有些困难 试着用Newcombo标示一下？ x_x
01:36:364 (5) - 不合适> . > x_x
02:02:864 (4,5,6,1) - 5 6 1重叠？试着这样怎么样 daijobu
[attachment=1:b55ef]2.jpg[/attachment:b55ef]

<Manic>
00:49:964 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 第一个part的1 2 3 4 12（间距较小）-34（间距增大） 第二个part的reverse selection怎么样
类似这种感觉 keep it :3
[attachment=0:b55ef]3.jpg[/attachment:b55ef]
别的没什么了:3

YGOkid8 wrote:

modding at 4:13am ftw

Overall a pretty difficult mapset, but it's alright I think. Maniac was pretty fun, although, I personally would've liked to see more streams in, but that's a personal preference.

The only think that really should be changed is Maniac's hitcircle size. Make it smaller by 1, it's unnecessarily large atm. I also suggest increasing the OD by 1 as well.

soulfear wrote:

建議:
總體來說HITSOUND太小聲了...特別是MANIAC的那2段連打 加點鈴聲也好吧...加在紅線上

MANIAC:
00:17:564 (13) - 改成NOTE吧... 不想改了..
00:30:964 (3) - 結尾加鈴 added
00:31:264 (4) - 去掉鈴 done
00:58:364 (2,4) - 鈴改成紅線和白線...藍線取消掉... done
建議,用不用看你自己吧.