xierbaliti wrote:

-General-
offset: 24550 Fixed

-Insane-
you always following the vocal but not following the rhythm =_= following the vocal is good, but you must following the rhythm too!
such as:
00:38:234~00:41:128 - in this part, make your rhythm like this will be better imo: Good idea

SPOILER

also, it's a insane diff. long slider(such as 00:51:392 (6) ) is too easy here I think. how about try this: Fixed

SPOILER

00:36:918 (5) - this jump looks strange ~_~ No jump bro
01:29:813 (5,1) - remove the to notes and add a circle at 01:29:944 it looks so strange ):

-Normal-
first, check your spacing. i see many wrong spacing in this mapset.
for example: 01:18:234 (6) , 02:20:339 (4) etc. FIXED

next you need fix the random notes like the Insane diff. following the rhythm or make your own rhythm, don't following the vocal all the time.


just point out the mistakes(or my suggestions) that i have found. you'd better recheck your whole mapset, and make your map better.

good luck.

EDIT:999th post

Thanks for modding, I thing my map is good, but it you decides

1. Why don't you add at least another diff ? The mapset would be a lot better...
2. Your map is really very long .-.

1. 00:30:865 (4,5,1) - Spacing issue: they are spaced the same way but the time gap isn't the same.
2. 00:58:234 (1,2,3) - Such rhythms are quite hard to catch for new players... So you should use sliders at least a few times before using circles, so that the player gets used to the rhythm.
3. 01:04:550 (4) - This slider is rather nice =o but you can make it a perfect blanket (that's very nazi of me though but I like perfection =p)
4. The kiai needs more hitsounds imo... It really sounds bland right now.
5. 01:27:707 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is very confusing: the spacing of the circles is very similar, but the rhythm isn't. Try using a repeat slider for the first three circles.
6. 01:53:234 (1) - Nice slider again, but you can make it perfect =o (yes I'm nazi). Place a hitcircle in the center, then using 1/8 snap divisor, move the circle in the timeline so that the approach circle matches the inner border of the slider, and move the sliderpoints to make the curve perfect.
7. 02:07:707 (2,3) - The idea is nice and the pattern flows well, but I really hate this overlap, it looks bad ingame...
8. 02:28:365 (2) - Isn't this note misplaced ? Nothing in the song requires a beat here, it should be on the previous red tick.
9. 02:36:918 (4,1) - Very bad spacing idea: I understand the slow down and stuff, but the spacing here looks like the notes are 1/2 apart, when they aren't. What you should do is space (4) and (1) normall, then replace (1,2) with a slider to show the slowdown and make the spacing after it less confusing.
10. 02:40:339 (6,7,1) - Spacing issue: they are spaced the same way, but the time gap isn't the same.
11. 03:13:234 (5) - Nice elbow =o

1. This difficulty overuses anti-jumps (and they aren't even well placed in my opinion), so it makes the actual spacing hard to read (mainly the 1/4 - which don't make sense to the song either imo).
2. Set tick rate 2 so that the speed changes are readable. (03:22:971 (1,6) - these)
3. 00:32:181 (5) - A new combo to mark the spacing shift would be nice.
4. 01:27:707 (3,4,5) - Confusing and unexpected anti-jumps, especially with this weird rhythm.
5. 03:57:444 (4) - Add a new combo ?

Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General

1. Why don't you add at least another diff ? The mapset would be a lot better... Will think about it.
2. Your map is really very long .-.

Normal

1. 00:30:865 (4,5,1) - Spacing issue: they are spaced the same way but the time gap isn't the same. Fixed
2. 00:58:234 (1,2,3) - Such rhythms are quite hard to catch for new players... So you should use sliders at least a few times before using circles, so that the player gets used to the rhythm. Okay
3. 01:04:550 (4) - This slider is rather nice =o but you can make it a perfect blanket (that's very nazi of me though but I like perfection =p)
4. The kiai needs more hitsounds imo... It really sounds bland right now. :3
5. 01:27:707 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is very confusing: the spacing of the circles is very similar, but the rhythm isn't. Try using a repeat slider for the first three circles. Fixed
6. 01:53:234 (1) - Nice slider again, but you can make it perfect =o (yes I'm nazi). Place a hitcircle in the center, then using 1/8 snap divisor, move the circle in the timeline so that the approach circle matches the inner border of the slider, and move the sliderpoints to make the curve perfect. Made it!
7. 02:07:707 (2,3) - The idea is nice and the pattern flows well, but I really hate this overlap, it looks bad ingame... Changed Patterns
8. 02:28:365 (2) - Isn't this note misplaced ? Nothing in the song requires a beat here, it should be on the previous red tick. Okay
9. 02:36:918 (4,1) - Very bad spacing idea: I understand the slow down and stuff, but the spacing here looks like the notes are 1/2 apart, when they aren't. What you should do is space (4) and (1) normall, then replace (1,2) with a slider to show the slowdown and make the spacing after it less confusing. Sorry, fixed
10. 02:40:339 (6,7,1) - Spacing issue: they are spaced the same way, but the time gap isn't the same. Fixed.
11. 03:13:234 (5) - Nice elbow =o

Thanks :3

Insane

1. This difficulty overuses anti-jumps (and they aren't even well placed in my opinion), so it makes the actual spacing hard to read (mainly the 1/4 - which don't make sense to the song either imo). Will work on it.
2. Set tick rate 2 so that the speed changes are readable. (03:22:971 (1,6) - these) Okay :3
3. 00:32:181 (5) - A new combo to mark the spacing shift would be nice. Added
4. 01:27:707 (3,4,5) - Confusing and unexpected anti-jumps, especially with this weird rhythm. LOL, fixed.
5. 03:57:444 (4) - Add a new combo ?

Added :3

This map needs some more work. It's not there yet, but it can become a good map with enough mods. Keep trying ! I'll double check it, learned more patterns, will apply on my map! Thanks Odaril.

HellDawn wrote:

General
Your map is really very long OMG Don't ever look back <3

Truth

00:30:865(start)> 00:31:918(end)
00:35:339 > move to>00:35:076
00:35:865 > move >00:35:865
00:36:128 > Circle here ?
00:43:760 > move >00:43:497
00:44:286 > Move >00:44:023
00:44:550 > Circle here.
01:58:248 > Circle here
02:49:550 > I dont like slider :S
02:56:128 > Circle here

Sorry Im bored cuz very long map

Star

Lizbeth wrote:

Hi, and sorry for the delay

Lie - Insane
I think you overused slow downs. While playing I was totally lost due to this. I dont really like them >:
00:59:023 (3,4) - doesn't match with the music, what about something like this: http://puu.sh/2rWo
01:33:234 (2,3,4,5) - How about stack each pair?
01:40:602 (5) - it would be good if you add new combo here
01:50:865 (1,2,3,4) - (1,2,3) - messy combo there, perhaps you could find better positions for those sliders.
01:54:286 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - I think this should be in the same combo
01:58:497 (4,5,6,1,2) - same here
02:00:865 (3) - is confusing when you use slow downs like this, cuz the length and shape of the slider is exactly the same of previous sliders that are in normal velocity. To make a slow down more predictable you can either add a new combo and change the shape of the slider, or do both for better results ^^
02:23:497 (9,1) - this jump doesn't fits, it would fit if you jump from here: 02:23:234 to here: 02:23:497, listen to the song and you will understand why.
02:56:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest to keep consistence in distance here, a jump from this combo to the other could be great thou ^^
Remove the kiai from break time
04:10:865 - 04:19:286 - I think you should have follow the main voice in this part, not the BG voice
fun map <33

Truth - Normal
00:30:865 (4) - end in next white tick?
00:35:339 (1,2) - doesn't really fit well with the music in my opinion, move it half beat later
00:43:760 (1,2) - same here
01:20:602 (1) - the start point of this slider doesn't match with the music, I missed it ;_;
01:44:813 (2) - same ><
02:00:865 (5) - the end of the slider doesn't match the song >:
02:03:497 (1,2) - why not do here, what you did here: 02:14:023 (6) - fits a lot better
02:17:707 - add note?
02:29:550 (4) - fix the spacing there, it noticeable while playing
02:41:128 (1) - wrong distance, should be closer, I totally messed up there
02:43:234 (5) - same
03:08:497 (5,6,7) - spinner till: 03:10:339? :3
04:14:550 (1) - too close from prev note, look at time line, it should be farther

False - Easy
02:17:444 (3,4,5,6) - confusing pattern for an easy
01:29:813 (5,6) - move half beat later, i think sounds better, same for the other like this
02:26:392 (7) - move to next white tick? do this for all cases like this
02:37:181 (1) - not sure about this with x0.5 velocity ;_; is endless @.@ I was like: please end!! I like it, but if somebody say something like that after I'll change
04:14:549 (4,1,2) - 4 should be in the same combo with 1 and 2

Also what's up with the difficulties name? why not just False, Truth and Lie, and specified in the main post which one is what~~ ><

cya~~

1. Timing looks alright to me
2. For the tags, perhaps put the full titles for the medley songs in there? So it would be like "Love The Way You Lie Dynamite Teenage Dream"
3. The difficulties go Easy / Normal / Insane. Maybe change the Insane to hard? sounds like it would make sense.
4. Just my opinion, but I think actually, Normal(Easy) / Hard(Normal) / Insane fits the difficulties better. They would be on the easy side but I think it suits that better

Something a lil' like this

Doomsday wrote:

Oh hey

1. Timing looks alright to me
2. For the tags, perhaps put the full titles for the medley songs in there? So it would be like "Love The Way You Lie Dynamite Teenage Dream" Love the way you lie is still the name of the map and a tag for it is not necessary
3. The difficulties go Easy / Normal / Insane. Maybe change the Insane to hard? sounds like it would make sense.
4. Just my opinion, but I think actually, Normal(Easy) / Hard(Normal) / Insane fits the difficulties better. They would be on the easy side but I think it suits that better

Little thing with the diff names: From Easy / Normal / Insane, it goes False / Truth / Lie. It's like Lie / Truth / Lie. Sounds odd. Maybe change it to Easy - Truth / Normal - False / Hard - Lie?

[EASY]

This is nice, has some nice rhythms and has got some interesting patterns and sliders going on. Some are a little bit dodgy but it's interesting at least, and fun

02:37:181 (1) - Maybe you could make this slider shorter? (Or make it 1xBPM and add a repeat? makes it more interesting.), because this slider looks nice, but it goes on for 13 seconds. It drags since it's so slow. 1.0x and reverse arrow
03:51:655 (6) - The way this slider moves and overlaps looks quite ugly, and is a bit confusing since I can't see how it goes. Maybe remake this slider? If you wanted to keep this kind of slider you could do something like this: changed

Something a lil' like this

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[NORMAL]

Nicely done. those 1/2 streams seems a bit too tough for a normal I think, but they play nicely (If you take my earlier suggesting about the diff names, Hard suits this one better anyway I think, heh)

01:16:392 (1,2,3,4) - Stack these maybe? (Nothing big. Just think it looks prettier). I don't think it's necessary
04:18:234 (1) - Could be just me, but I don't think a short spinner fits here too well. Maybe map something else here? Fixed

[INSANE]

This difficulty gets a little dull sometimes, since where there are some nice bits in the song to map to, you put 1/2 beats down (parts like 01:30:076 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8), and 03:31:918 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) sprung to mind), and after a while it becomes a little boring. A few of the jumps irked me too, but I'm pretty harsh with those kinds of jumps anyway. It's not bad though, it's still nice on the whole and has some nice bits, even if those sudden jumps are rather harsh.

For the jumps, a few examples:
00:45:339 (7,1) -
01:01:918 (1,2) -
01:25:339 (3,1) -
01:40:602 (1,2,3,4) - etc. They just felt random and out of place. Doesn't feel like the kind of song that needs these kinds of jumps to me.

Fixed all jumps

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