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Mapper 31
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[lepidon! - Taiko Oni]

Red : You must fix this
Blue: You should fix this
Green : Suggestion


모딩할 점 전혀 없네요!
패턴도 나쁜게 없고요



쿠도스 주지마세요 이게 무슨 모딩이라고

+스타
Topic Starter
minyeob
samiljul // Thanks for lol modding ><
Louis Cyphre
[Easy]
00:13:444 - add note
00:15:794 - ^
01:10:713 - ^
02:11:946 - delete this timing section
02:19:509 - ^
02:25:750 - ^
02:30:595 - ^

[Normal]
00:12:563 - add note
00:14:399 - ^
00:51:036 - ^

[Hard]
03:58:992 - add note
03:59:286 - remove new combo
03:59:873 - new combo

[Insane]
00:19:318 - new combo
00:26:660 - add note
00:47:071 - ^
00:47:218 - ^
01:01:902 - ^
01:03:958 - cut slider to 01:04:252 and add one repeat
01:06:161 - add note
01:55:353 - new combo
02:00:493 - add note
02:00:640 - ^
02:09:744 - i don't think that this sliders follow the rhythm 3:
02:12:387 - add note
02:13:855 - cut this slider to 02:14:149 and add one repeat
02:20:316 - http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/6497/staryi.png
02:24:428 - add new combo
02:33:532 - add note
02:45:867 - new combo
04:02:810 - add note

nice song star :: )
Topic Starter
minyeob
Louis Cyphre// Maybe our rhythm sense are different each other....... I didn't fix add new note thing.
Thanks anyways :D
gowww
8-)
Topic Starter
minyeob
gowww// wwwww
arien666
I wonder if I can check this song after school orz
Anyway...



3 僕たちの行方
機動戦士ガンダム SEED DESTINY アニメ
太鼓の達人 とびっきり!アニメスペシャル 太鼓の達人7
:3
Interested with Taiko-authentic.
I should check it orz
KanaRin
Star:>
Topic Starter
minyeob
KanaRin// thanks for your support ><
arien666// 버블 줘요 @_@
swish
wow
Topic Starter
minyeob
swish // I'm too lazy to make my ranked map ;_;
mm thanks for support anyways ><
m i z u k i
:oops:
Mapper 31
1년 ㅋ
Topic Starter
minyeob
m i z u k i // :oops:

samiljul // 알켄모딩인줄 알았어요 ㅜㅜ
arien666
[Easy]
00:47:512 (1,2,3) - [Suggestion] I dunno but 0.25x spacing difference would not be good on [Easy] ;_;



Not much to say orz

If you fix this, I'll bubble this mapset orz
:3
Topic Starter
minyeob

arien666 wrote:

[Easy]
00:47:512 (1,2,3) - [Suggestion] I dunno but 0.25x spacing difference would not be good on [Easy] ;_;



Not much to say orz

If you fix this, I'll bubble this mapset orz
:3
lol so pro~

Fixed that, thanks <3
arien666
No Doubt from me orz

Enjoy cookie ;_;
ps. Mod my map<WHAT?
lepidopodus
Wrong barlin-

uh, whatever.
S o r d a
awa!!!
gdeath
2 0 t h S t a r~
banvi
Gundam Seed Destiny <3
Sure


Setting uninherited section for change slider velocity is unrankable.
Moreover actual BPM should be 102.150 not 204.300
Would you please fix them?
Topic Starter
minyeob

ykcarrot wrote:

[attachment=0:0cf06]Screenshot_(2011-05-17_at_11.12.11).png[/attachment:0cf06]

Setting uninherited section for change slider velocity is unrankable.
Moreover actual BPM should be 102.150 not 204.300
Would you please fix them?
추후 수정하겠습니다.

오랜만에 모딩 포스트 받네요 진심으로 감사드려요 ><


gdeath // thank you for reminding me~
banvi // sta taisetsuni~
Topic Starter
minyeob
ok self revival again TAT
and fixed.
arien666
[Easy]
There are lots of unused green lines so remove unused ones orz
01:17:982 - Duplicated green line

[Hard]
01:10:126 - Unused green line
01:23:635 (2) - This slider's end is not snapped well orz
02:11:946 - Unused green line?
03:42:547 - ^

[Insane]
Check about green lines and edit some lines which are not used ;_;
01:22:314 (5) - This slider's end is not snapped well orz
03:43:136 (2) - ^



orz
arien666
Since the things are done, here's pizza <3

And damn 60 letters thing FFF
/me eats Bancho orz

ps. Don't give kudosu for this reply even I said to you about 1 slider thing and source :3
James2250
-With a 4:30 long mp3, Easy really shouldn't have only 1:40 mapped. Beginners might not be able to handle really long maps but it doesn't need to be cut down that much. If you want to do it like that end both Easy and Normal at 2:55:000 instead.
-Your offset sounds slightly late to me right now, try -7 (don't forget to resnap all notes/timing sections)

Easy:
01:18:055 (3) - isn't really a good idea to go from 1.0 to 0.5 slider speed on an Easy as it can confuse beginners, use 0.75 for them instead?

Normal:
00:32:974 - odd place to drag the start of the break to if intentional (All of the other difficulties start the break at 00:32:240)
01:02:783 (3,4) - space these out more
01:43:899 - nazi: drag this break back so it starts directly on the white tick? (Might as well do the same for Hard as well)

Hard:
-Try HP Drain +1 to make it greater than Normal has?
01:18:055 (4,5) - space these out more (+ move 01:20:405 (5,1) - so the repeat on the slider isn't hidden by the previous hitburst)
01:22:314 (4,1) - space these out more
01:36:851 (1) - remove new combo

Insane:
00:50:742 (1,2,3,4,5) - these widely spaced notes are kind of unexpected in my opinion
01:20:405 (1,2) - move this pattern around so the repeat isn't hidden
02:31:770 (5,6,7,9,10) - fix the spacing on these slightly

The maps don't look bad overall, just a few issues to look over on each difficulty. But the ending on Easy should really be extended.
Topic Starter
minyeob

James2250 wrote:

-With a 4:30 long mp3, Easy really shouldn't have only 1:40 mapped. Beginners might not be able to handle really long maps but it doesn't need to be cut down that much. If you want to do it like that end both Easy and Normal at 2:55:000 instead.
-Your offset sounds slightly late to me right now, try -7 (don't forget to resnap all notes/timing sections)
Changed the length of easy

Easy:
01:18:055 (3) - isn't really a good idea to go from 1.0 to 0.5 slider speed on an Easy as it can confuse beginners, use 0.75 for them instead?
Fixed
Normal:
All fixed
00:32:974 - odd place to drag the start of the break to if intentional (All of the other difficulties start the break at 00:32:240)
01:02:783 (3,4) - space these out more
01:43:899 - nazi: drag this break back so it starts directly on the white tick? (Might as well do the same for Hard as well)

Hard:
-Try HP Drain +1 to make it greater than Normal has? it's for E/N/H/I set (Star diff) so I won't change this
01:18:055 (4,5) - space these out more (+ move 01:20:405 (5,1) - so the repeat on the slider isn't hidden by the previous hitburst)
01:22:314 (4,1) - space these out more
01:36:851 (1) - remove new combo
other issue fixed
Insane:
00:50:742 (1,2,3,4,5) - these widely spaced notes are kind of unexpected in my opinion
01:20:405 (1,2) - move this pattern around so the repeat isn't hidden
02:31:770 (5,6,7,9,10) - fix the spacing on these slightly
fixed all
The maps don't look bad overall, just a few issues to look over on each difficulty. But the ending on Easy should really be extended.
mm thank you for modding ><
Sonnyc
General:

-- 볼륨 100은 좀.. 큰듯요
-- 키아이가 없다..? 는 좀 아닌거 같습니다. 01:22:754 에라도 넣으셔야 할듯요

Easy:

00:21:667 (1) - 뒤의 (5) 보다는 여기에 피니시 넣는게 더 어울려요
00:31:065 (1) - 피니시 추가?
01:11:007 (2) - 가운데 휘슬
01:12:769 (3) - 시작과 끝 휘슬 :: (5)만 휘슬 있으니까 앞부분이 허전했습니다.
01:18:055 (3) - 끝에 휘슬은 제거하는게 나은듯
01:22:754 (1) - 이지인데.. 파란 줄에 있다가 하얀줄 나오면 잘 칠수 있을까 모르겠네요 ㅎ..
01:40:375 (5) - 피니시 제거 (소음~)
02:12:681 (1) - 끝에 휘슬
02:15:030 (3) - 시작에 휘슬 (이거도 나치라면..) 완벽한 직선이 아닌듯요 ㅋ
02:18:554 (3) - ^
02:21:491 (2) - 끝에 휘슬
02:22:666 (3) - 중간에 휘슬
02:24:428 (4) - 시작에 휘슬 -- 음악과 잘 맞아요~
02:30:889 (1) - 피니시?
02:36:763 (5) - 가운데에 클랩 제거. 음악에 없네요
02:44:399 (4) - ^ 오히려 (3)에 넣는게 맞을듯요
02:53:062 (2,3,4,5) - 엇박 리듬인데 슬라이더 처리하는게 이지로서는 맞을 겁니다.

Normal:

-- 변속 있으니까 Tick rate 2 고려해보세요

00:20:493 (1) - 변속 NC
00:32:240 (3) - 완벽한 stack 바랍니다.
00:51:330 (6,7) - 클랩-none
01:09:245 (5) - 변속 NC
01:14:531 (7) - ^
01:18:055 (4) - ^
01:20:405 (6) - 삭제하는게 나을듯요. BPM 낮지만 노말에서 1/4은 좀 그런듯요
01:22:314 (4) - 끝에 피니시?
01:26:572 (6) - 클랩 제거, (1)에 추가
01:27:453 (2) - 온통 피니시는 좀 시끄러운듯요
01:36:851 (1,2) - ^
01:36:264 (8) - 다음과 0.9x인데 조정 바라요
02:11:506 (4) - 여기는 클랩 없애세요. 음악에 없으므로..
02:19:729 (5) - 변속 NC
02:30:889 (1,2,3,4) - 1/4 뒤로 미셔야 할듯 lol (4)는 1 리버스 줄이세요
02:38:525 (1,2) - 소음 피니시 좀 줄여보세요~
02:46:161 (3,4,5,6) - (4,6) 말고는 클랩 있으면 안될듯요

Hard:

-- 타임라인 언스냅 확인해주세요
-- 이거도 틱 2?
-- 브레이크 끄셔서 01:43:899 - 에서 시작?
-- 02:54:384 - 에서 브레이크 시작?

00:29:597 (3) - 피니시 제거
01:05:133 (7,8) - (7)에서 시작하는게 음악상 듣기 좋아요
01:14:531 (9) - 변속 NC
01:18:055 (4) - ^
01:33:620 (3) - ?? 여기만 소리를 안낸 이유라도 있으신지..
01:39:200 (1,2,3,4) - 피니시는 (1,3)에서 내는게 나을듯요
01:54:472 (4) - 피니시 제거
02:00:933 (3) - (1) 속에 잘 들어갔으면 더 좋았을듯요
02:30:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? 음악에 맞춰주세요~~
02:46:748 (5) - 클랩 삭제
03:43:723 (3,4,5,6,7) - 이곳이야말로 1/8의 최적 장소인듯요
03:51:800 (5) - 변속 NC?
04:03:400 (2) - 피니시 삭제
04:07:512 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - 중앙에 맞추는게 더 좋을듯요

Insane:

-- 02:54:384 - 에서 브레이크 시작?

00:43:694 (4,5,6,7) - 뒤만 피니시 하는게 좋을듯요
00:45:162 (1,2,5,6) - 소음 피니시 삭제 바라요
00:45:456 (3) - 1x 오른쪽으로 해야 직선이 됩니다.
02:20:316 (4,5,6,7,1) - ctrl+shift+D 사용해서 오각형 작도해 내시는게 더 이쁘게 될겁니다.
02:24:575 (7) - 1/4 뒤로 보내는게 음악상 듣기 좋은거 같아요
02:30:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 여기도 리듬 교정이 필요한거 같습니다
03:21:697 (4,5) - (2,3)처럼 힛사 처리하는게 나을거 같아요
03:36:087 (2,4) - ctrl+H하셔서 더 나은 Flow를..
03:43:723 (3,4,5,6,7) - 1/8?
04:07:512 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 이것들도 중앙으로?

\^3^/
Topic Starter
minyeob

Sonnyc wrote:

General:

-- 볼륨 100은 좀.. 큰듯요 그렇네요, 생각해 보겠습니다.
-- 키아이가 없다..? 는 좀 아닌거 같습니다. 01:22:754 에라도 넣으셔야 할듯요 곡이 키아이 없어도 될 것 같아서 넣지 않았어요

Easy:

00:21:667 (1) - 뒤의 (5) 보다는 여기에 피니시 넣는게 더 어울려요
00:31:065 (1) - 피니시 추가?
01:11:007 (2) - 가운데 휘슬
01:12:769 (3) - 시작과 끝 휘슬 :: (5)만 휘슬 있으니까 앞부분이 허전했습니다.
01:18:055 (3) - 끝에 휘슬은 제거하는게 나은듯
01:22:754 (1) - 이지인데.. 파란 줄에 있다가 하얀줄 나오면 잘 칠수 있을까 모르겠네요 ㅎ..
01:40:375 (5) - 피니시 제거 (소음~)
02:12:681 (1) - 끝에 휘슬
02:15:030 (3) - 시작에 휘슬 (이거도 나치라면..) 완벽한 직선이 아닌듯요 ㅋ
02:18:554 (3) - ^
02:21:491 (2) - 끝에 휘슬
02:22:666 (3) - 중간에 휘슬
02:24:428 (4) - 시작에 휘슬 -- 음악과 잘 맞아요~
02:30:889 (1) - 피니시?
02:36:763 (5) - 가운데에 클랩 제거. 음악에 없네요 음악은 창조 아닐까요 \:D/
02:44:399 (4) - ^ 오히려 (3)에 넣는게 맞을듯요
02:53:062 (2,3,4,5) - 엇박 리듬인데 슬라이더 처리하는게 이지로서는 맞을 겁니다.

Normal:

-- 변속 있으니까 Tick rate 2 고려해보세요
1로 할게요

00:20:493 (1) - 변속 NC
00:32:240 (3) - 완벽한 stack 바랍니다. nazi TAT
00:51:330 (6,7) - 클랩-none
01:09:245 (5) - 변속 NC
01:14:531 (7) - ^
01:18:055 (4) - ^
01:20:405 (6) - 삭제하는게 나을듯요. BPM 낮지만 노말에서 1/4은 좀 그런듯요
01:22:314 (4) - 끝에 피니시? 안 넣었어요
01:26:572 (6) - 클랩 제거, (1)에 추가 놔 두었습니다
01:27:453 (2) - 온통 피니시는 좀 시끄러운듯요
01:36:851 (1,2) - ^
01:36:264 (8) - 다음과 0.9x인데 조정 바라요
02:11:506 (4) - 여기는 클랩 없애세요. 음악에 없으므로.. 없어서 만든 거예요 lol
02:19:729 (5) - 변속 NC
02:30:889 (1,2,3,4) - 1/4 뒤로 미셔야 할듯 lol (4)는 1 리버스 줄이세요 의도 한 박자입니다
02:38:525 (1,2) - 소음 피니시 좀 줄여보세요~
02:46:161 (3,4,5,6) - (4,6) 말고는 클랩 있으면 안될듯요

Hard:

-- 타임라인 언스냅 확인해주세요 확인 후 수정할게요
-- 이거도 틱 2? 1!
-- 브레이크 끄셔서 01:43:899 - 에서 시작? 이제 피가 안 다네요 ㅋㅋ 넣어보죠
-- 02:54:384 - 에서 브레이크 시작?

00:29:597 (3) - 피니시 제거
01:05:133 (7,8) - (7)에서 시작하는게 음악상 듣기 좋아요 역시 의도적으로 만든 거예요. 놔둘게요
01:14:531 (9) - 변속 NC
01:18:055 (4) - ^
01:33:620 (3) - ?? 여기만 소리를 안낸 이유라도 있으신지.. 소리 100%로 하니까 약간 소음같아서 줄였어요
01:39:200 (1,2,3,4) - 피니시는 (1,3)에서 내는게 나을듯요 다 없애버렸습니다
01:54:472 (4) - 피니시 제거
02:00:933 (3) - (1) 속에 잘 들어갔으면 더 좋았을듯요
02:30:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? 음악에 맞춰주세요~~ 역시 의도한 노트
02:46:748 (5) - 클랩 삭제 놔둘게요~
03:43:723 (3,4,5,6,7) - 이곳이야말로 1/8의 최적 장소인듯요 히트로 1/8 넣으면 부담스러울 것 같아서 안 넣었습니다
03:51:800 (5) - 변속 NC? 안 추가했습니다 ._.
04:03:400 (2) - 피니시 삭제
04:07:512 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - 중앙에 맞추는게 더 좋을듯요

Insane:

-- 02:54:384 - 에서 브레이크 시작?

00:43:694 (4,5,6,7) - 뒤만 피니시 하는게 좋을듯요
00:45:162 (1,2,5,6) - 소음 피니시 삭제 바라요
00:45:456 (3) - 1x 오른쪽으로 해야 직선이 됩니다.
02:20:316 (4,5,6,7,1) - ctrl+shift+D 사용해서 오각형 작도해 내시는게 더 이쁘게 될겁니다.
02:24:575 (7) - 1/4 뒤로 보내는게 음악상 듣기 좋은거 같아요 개인 고집으로 만들어 놓은 거예요 lol 놔둘게요
02:30:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 여기도 리듬 교정이 필요한거 같습니다 노말과 같은 이유로 놔둘게요
03:21:697 (4,5) - (2,3)처럼 힛사 처리하는게 나을거 같아요
03:36:087 (2,4) - ctrl+H하셔서 더 나은 Flow를..
03:43:723 (3,4,5,6,7) - 1/8? 놔둘게요
04:07:512 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 이것들도 중앙으로?

\^3^/
수고 많이 하셨네요 ㅎㅎ
현대식 모딩 잘 봤어요~

말 안 넣은 건 fix 한 거예요 :p
Strawberry
x3
hey~ modding here :p

[ General]
 
  1. Clear!!~☆
 
[ Easy]
 
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
     
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:20:493 (5,1) - umm.. somehow i feel that it would be sounds and plays much better if you merge them to a 2/1 long slider.~ primarily there has prolonged sound of vocal and sounds wired and rash with only one circle to end it.. but 1/1 slider may makes the pattern looks a bit intensive. anyway, maybe you can try it with this way?~ making a blanket like this.(and then add a nc on the following slider~ :p
    2. 00:26:366 (1,2) - yea, nearly reasons as above, i know that there has not prolonged sound and diffrent lyric, but same pattern works well here also imo~ it makes the map more conherent not only on sounds but plays when beginners testing..
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    3. 00:39:289 (1) - (emphasis) why not to extend the spinner and ending it at 00:42:225 ? i feel that it can catches and also highlights the downbeat with drum here.. meanwhile it's also not such hard for beginners for only 1/1 break. anyway, it's all depend on you.~ :p
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    4. 00:53:386 - removing this circle? since i think it broke the balance of notes density in the whole map since it just in an part like intro.. also consistent with the part of the same melody such like 00:45:162 -?~
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    5. 00:54:560 (5) - (stronly recommended) from my heard, the 1/1 repeat slider sounds too rigid and not suit this part of the song i think. :3 and also missed a downbeat at 00:56:322 . however, it can be improved easily and just extending the slider to 3/2 repeat slider.~ oh don't forget to regulate the spacings of the following notes.`~ not such hard also~ the rhythem example
    6. 01:15:706 (1) - the looong and straiiight slider seems not very well xD. just make a curve rightward? lol my example
    7. 01:21:726 (3,4) - (emphasis) the pattern of rhythm sounds so confused for beginners.. on the one hand the group of sliders all start at blue ticks but the following circle 01:22:754 (1) is put at white one?! yea it's reasonable on rhythm with that, but the spacing is misleading.. it's just an easy diff so should we lead beginners reading them out on the first try? i think so :p. i'd like to merge slider (3) and (4) to a 1/1 slider. it can make people get the rhythm more clearly and just like this
    8. 01:55:647 (4) - (stronly recommended) same as 00:54:560 (5). i'd perfer to use 3/2 slider here~
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    9. 02:46:161 (3) - the break at 02:46:161 make me feel a bit wired. :d how about to bring forward the slider (3) 1/2 tick and adjust the spacing? also if you think the repeats is excessive, try 1/1 repeat slider :p. also suit the song imo.~
     
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 00:43:988 (2) - the clap sounds too loud and a bit out of the music from my heard.. i'm not clear about that but maybe change the clap to finish or just remove it sounds even better than that for now. :3
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    2. 02:44:105 (3) - be surely the clap should be put on (4) instead (3) for catch the downbeat there..
 
[ Normal]
 
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
     
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:45:750 (2) - the 1/2 slider you set here filled the rhythm.. generally it's fine.. but not suit on this part.. a bit like the place at 00:53:386 on the easy diff.. almost the same reason :p i'd like to convert the slider (2) to a circle and set at x.416 y.104~ it makes the same straight line with slider (3) and spacing is correct.~
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    2. 01:23:341 - (emphasis) ~~since you used the same rhythm as easy(start the sliders at blue ticks), how about to change the circle 01:23:341 (1) as a 1/4 short slider and start at 01:23:195 ? yea i feel it really fit the song and more clearly to read for people(including me) .~ because they are all start at blue ticks(the opening of these two group of notes~) :p oh, also the suggestions about position~
    3. 01:42:578 (4,5) - oh look these~. although it's nice rhythm here but you missed the really cool downbeat at 01:43:899 ~~. i have a think and i think it can solve this equilibrium between the notes and downbeats. :p example:
    4. 02:08:275 (3,4) - it would be sounds much more pretty if you merged them to one 1/1 slider~ the beat at 02:08:569 of the end of slider is needless and sounds wired for now.. so i'd prefer the rhythm like this.~ (also the example for the place of this slider~
     
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 00:51:330 (6) - removing the clap which was set on the red tick? really sounds took off the way that the song original was.. anyway. sounds wired for now. :p
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    2. 02:40:287 (1) - (strongly recommended) the clap you set here is completely enough without the finish.. on the other hand, the finish is much more suitable at 02:42:637 , that slider's start~.
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    3. 02:47:042 (6) - useless clap here imo.. they're so intensive here and the last one is noisy for me.. orz remove that one feels much better anyway~ :3
 
[ Hard]
 
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
     
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:26:073 (2) - (emphasis) the rhythm here was so wired.. idk, but i think it would be a better choice that highlight the downbeat which on 00:26:366 ~ yea, just convert the slider to a circle and 1/2 slider.? :3 and about positions?~ my suggestion.
    2. 01:29:803 (6) - wow, the site is wrong.. one grid left so that it can be stacked with slider (4) and (5).
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    3. 01:33:620 (3) - i'd prefer to curve it upward a bit.~ seems much better than that straight one imo.xD yea, maybe downward is ok either? anyway, just try this. x3
    4. 01:36:851 (1,3) - make something suit this heated song?~ my example x3
    5. 01:42:578 (3,4) - same rhythem suggestions like normal diff~ and example for position~(similarly as the normal diff also~
    6. 02:28:540 (1) - (strongly recommended) umm.. the flow of slider (1,3) is wired to play from my test.. the slider (1) has also the bad chaining with the previous slider (2).. the jump is so large.. i think the best way to solve that is ctrl+g (1) for balance spacing and a better flow~.
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    7. 03:34:178 - sounds like you lost a circle here between (3,4).. for the lyric of vocal, it's such confused and should be fix imo.
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      03:58:848 - same as above~ for the vocal i think it's reasonable to set a circle here, and stack it with (3) is fine enough imo(don't mind if you have the other nice idea).~ :3
     
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 02:02:695 (1) - umm~ strongly recommend to put a finish here~ sounds heated and really fit the song imo.~
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    2. 02:35:294 (8) - same as normal..~ remove the clap here would sounds much more suitable and excited. :3
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    3. 02:40:287 (1) - (strongly recommended) yea~ also here. i'd prefer to remove the finish on that spinner and let it run with only clap.. after that putting the finish on the previous slider (1)'s start~, as normal~ sounds pretty.~
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    4. 03:18:466 (2,4) - adding claps on that repeat sliders' heads? since there has none hitsound and i feel that claps can ornament the song also.~
[ Insane]
 
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
     
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 01:24:516 (7,8) - (emphasis) the rhythm you set here sounds a bit concentrated and off what the song was..how about to merge these two slider to a sole 1/2 slider and a circle 1/4 after? (the rhythm is also consistent with 01:26:866 (8,9)
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    2. 01:29:803 (7) - (emphasis) idk why you would like to put the nc at the slider 01:30:977 (1), but i feel it set off the symmetry of these slider~01:29:803 (7,1) .. also because i think that we should put nc on the white tick instead of 01:30:977 (1).. so just removing it there and add nc at here 01:29:803 (7)? :3
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    3. 01:37:879 - sounds like you have missed the accent from lyric of vocal.. although it is ok for now, but it also can be improved i think. try to delay the slider 1/4 tick and then add a circle at 01:37:732 where the slider was? btw, if you changed the rhythm to what as i said, the stacks of 1/2 circles seems confused.. so i suggest to withdraw (4,5) leftward and make slider(5) has an angle like this~
    4. 01:38:907 - similar as above. the rhythm can be filled better and also plays funnier since it is insane. player will seek the enjoyment from the map.. but the break here (maybe on purpose?) broke this.. it can be promoted easily so how about to try this rhythm?~ :3
    5. 02:30:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - surprising original rhythm here~ but maybe make the beats consistent the pattern you used there 01:20:405 is also fine.~ anyway. just say for. alright. x3
     
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 01:10:713 (4) - i'd prefer to put a whistle on that red tick. since the tone of vocal is gaining, the whistle can make a better effect with the other one you have set on 01:10:419 (2) .~
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    2. 01:24:516 (7) - the clap at red tick is wired especially on this part in every sense.. it would be sounds much better if you move the clap to the head of slider (7) after you changed the rhythm pattern as i wrote above.(same as the pattern of clap you set here 01:26:866 (8) :3
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    3. 02:40:287 (1) - (strongly recommended) yea there~ same as other diff~ i suggest that to change the finish you set here to an clap and add the finish on the following circle 02:42:637 (1) ~. the same reason also~ :p
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    4. 03:18:466 (2,4) - also same as above (the hard diff). you can set claps on repeat (2)'s start and circle (4) also.. would be sounds much better~ :3
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the taiko oni seems fine enough for me. x3 so happy to say that all~
amazing song&nice map!~ good luck with ranking~
B2IN
o/ Hi minyeob ~

  • [General]
  1. 같은이미지에 고화질인데, 괜찮으시면 써주세요~ http://puu.sh/1VJ4a
  2. 태그안에 opening 을 넣어주시면 나중에 맵찾기에 더 유리할거에요.
  3. 그리고 저도 손닉님 의견처럼 사운드100은 약간 크다고 생각해요. 한 70~80 정도가 적당하지 않을까 싶어요.
  4. 타이밍포인트 전체적으로 언스냅된 부분이 조금씩있는데 리스냅 시켜주세요.
  5. 01:17:982 (T) - 타이밍 포인트 두개가 겹쳤어요. 하나 지워주세요.
  6. 음..그리고 이건 제 맵에대한 의견인데, 뭐라해야되지 전체적으로 맵의 노트 동선이 직선(?)스럽다고 해야되나 약간 그런느낌이 있는거 같아요.
    [Easy]
    :arrow: 요즘에는 모든 난이도가 끝나는 곳이 같게하는게 좋은데, 끝까지 맵핑 해보시는게 어떠세요 ? 이건 노말도 해당되요.
  7. 00:28:716 (1,2,3,4,1) - 이 부분을 모양있는 긴 슬라이더 하나로 바꿔보시는게 어떠세요 ? 더 재밌어 질거같아요.00:31:653 이나 00:32:240 까지 오는 걸로요. 만약하시면 슬라이더틱 소리는 줄이는게 좋을거같아요.
  8. 01:20:551 (1,2,3,4) - 이지치고는 살짝 어려운 감이있는 거같아요. 02:30:889 (1) - 여기처럼 스핀으로 바꿔주시는게 어떤가요 ?

    [Normal]
  9. 02:40:287 (1) - 모든 난이도의 이 스핀끝을 보면 어떤건 클랩이 들어가있고 어떤건 안들어가있는데, 한가지로 통일해주면 좋을거 같아요.
    [Hard]
  10. 00:44:281 (4,5) - 4번 노트는 x256 y24, 5번 노트는 x330 y49로 옮기시면 정확한 대칭이 되요.
  11. 01:05:133 (7,8) - 7번을 지우고 그자리에 8번 놓는게 훨씬 더 어울린다고 생각해요. 02:15:618 (8) - 여기처럼요~ // 남은 공간 01:06:014 여기는 서클 노트로 채워주셔도 되구요.
  12. 01:33:620 (3) - 이 부분 소리를 죽인 의도는 잘모르겠는데, 소리나게하는게 더 어울릴거 같아요 ..orz
  13. 01:43:899 (T) - 하드 난이도도 이지, 인세인처럼 이곳에 피니시가 있는 노트를 넣어서 끝내는게 어떠세요 ?
  14. 02:36:763 (4) - 왼쪽으로 1그리드 옮겨서 5,6,7,8이랑 일직선되게 해주세요.
    [Insane]
  15. 00:46:484 (7,8) - 전 노트 패턴들처럼 x축을 맞춰주세요. 8번을 x163 y205로 이동.
  16. 00:48:540 - 보컬에 따르거나 노래 자체에 따랐을때도 여기에 박자가 들어가는게 어울린다고 생각해요. 00:48:540 (3) 이걸 00:48:540 에 놓고 1/4박자 늘려서 끝은 지금 이랑 똑같이 하는게 어떠세요 ?
  17. 01:05:427 (8,9,10) - 8번을 y축 중심에 놓고 8번을 기준으로 9,10번을 01:04:839 (6,7) - 여기에 대칭 시켜보는게 어떠세요? 더 보기 좋아질거같아요.
  18. 02:02:108 (7,8) - 이것도 02:00:933 (2,3) 여기에 대칭시켜주세요.
  19. 02:02:989 (1,2,6,7) - ^
  20. 02:12:093 (1) - 여기부터 시작되는 조용한 파트에서 띵띵? 이라고해되나 그 소리에 맞춰서 휘슬 넣어 보시는게 어떠세요?
  21. 02:48:657 (6,7,8) - 6,7번이 8번슬라이더 끝에 완벽히 겹쳐지게 해주세요.

화팅 ~:D
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