AdRon Zh3Ro wrote:

Irc mod

1. I think it's best to remove the letterbox. The black bar on top is covering some of the writing during breaks.
2. Both "ShaggoN Knew" and "Collab" doesn't have preview points.

1. 00:24:913 (2)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.
2. 00:34:556 (2)-This is screaming for a finish on the beginning. Oh, and fix this timing point that starts off the Kiai Time. Snap it correctly on the white tick.
3. 01:32:842 (2)-Just add a finish on the beginning.
4. 02:24:270 (2)-^
5. 02:37:985 (1)-Add a finish.

1. 00:34:556 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning. Also, fix this timing point that starts off the Kiai Time. Snap it correctly on the white tick.
2. 00:56:842 (4)-Add a finish on the beginning, please.
3. 01:32:842 (2)-^
4. 01:34:556 (6)-Put a new combo here?
5. 01:46:556 (6)-Add a finish.
6. 00:24:270 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning.
7. 02:55:128 (1)-^
8. 02:57:699 (5)-Add a finish on the end.
9. 02:59:842 (3)-^

1. 01:17:413 (7)-Put a new combo here.
2. 01:18:699 (5)-Remove new combo.
3. 01:19:556 (6)-Put a new combo here.
4. 02:24:270 (5)-^?

Roddie wrote:

Hi Hey <3

General:

1. I think it's best to remove the letterbox. The black bar on top is covering some of the writing during breaks.
2. Both "ShaggoN Knew" and "Collab" doesn't have preview points.

hmm, okay for me (about the letter boxes in breaks) but i'm gonna wait for the opinion of the other mappers ^-^ about the preview point, totally forgot about that T^T

Relaxing:

1. 00:24:913 (2)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. wahh, my mistake >< fixed
2. 00:34:556 (2)-This is screaming for a finish on the beginning. Oh, and fix this timing point that starts off the Kiai Time. Snap it correctly on the white tick. added the finish, but i'm not sure about what you meant about the kiai time D: guess it's fixed
3. 01:32:842 (2)-Just add a finish on the beginning. done
4. 02:24:270 (2)-^ ^
5. 02:37:985 (1)-Add a finish. done

Collab:

1. 00:34:556 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning. Also, fix this timing point that starts off the Kiai Time. Snap it correctly on the white tick. done
2. 00:56:842 (4)-Add a finish on the beginning, please. ^
   
   The next ones are for bitter and shaggon, so I won't change it >_<"
3. 01:32:842 (2)-^
4. 01:34:556 (6)-Put a new combo here?
5. 01:46:556 (6)-Add a finish.
6. 00:24:270 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning.
7. 02:55:128 (1)-^
8. 02:57:699 (5)-Add a finish on the end.
9. 02:59:842 (3)-^

ShaggoN Knew:

1. 01:17:413 (7)-Put a new combo here.
2. 01:18:699 (5)-Remove new combo.
3. 01:19:556 (6)-Put a new combo here.
4. 02:24:270 (5)-^?

That's it, I suppose.

Good luck getting this ranked!

Sta-- Oh wait, I already give this map a star. x)

AdRon Zh3Ro wrote:

Collab:
01:36:669 (12) Ele não está acabando no vermelho, mas sim um pouco antes. oops. fixed~
02:45:270 (1) Empilhe-o corretamente. Nazi D: done, aniueis >w<
02:49:985 (7) ^ ^ DDD:

Roddie wrote:

01:32:842 (2)-^ done
01:34:556 (6)-Put a new combo here? hmmm, why not ~
01:46:556 (6)-Add a finish. 'kay x3
00:24:270 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning. uhn, its yours, kiwii~
02:55:128 (1)-^ done
02:57:699 (5)-Add a finish on the end.done
02:59:842 (3)-^ yeah, done~

Bittersweet wrote:

Roddie wrote:

00:24:270 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning. uhn, its yours, kiwii~ ff >.< sounds weird like that, will keep it how it is D:

Kiwii, cê pode mudar as coisas ai por si mesma ou mais tarde quando tu acordar te passo a diff o3o Tu que sabe.x3 E tb é ok por mim sobre remover a letterbox~ Acho que não esqueci nada, neah? o3o
Tirando te mandar tomar no cu pela descrição gay no mapa, mas dai eu teria que te mandar tomar no cu por existir <3 como se vc nunca tivesse feito isso aehoaiuhaeoiaue

edit blablawhiskassache http://puu.sh/1AT2 nao mudei o trem la que é da sua parte, checa <3 prontenho gatz, uploadado <3

Katsuri wrote:

SPOILER

00:24:913 (2) -



seu nazi do caralho ok, acho que arrumei o-o'


00:30:485 (5) -



prefiro do jeito que tá agora :v

00:39:056 (1,2,3,4) - Está assim



Acredito que o som ficaria melhor assim, mas você quem sabe :3



nah, acho esse tipo de spacing feio D:

00:45:699 (1,2,3,4,5) - Seria bom fazer algo do tipo...




E depois você faz o desenho que quiser.

realmente, boa sugestão ^-^


00:54:699 (4) - Add hitcircle com Clap ou Whistle *sigh* okok

01:22:985 (1) - Alinhe com 01:21:913 (5) - parte da bitter <3

02:36:056 (3) - Porque ponto vermelho ? wuut? o-o' isso não faz diferença alguma no mapa >_>"

Bom mapa Wiinter, Estrela~ obrigada pela star e pelo mod ^-^

Katsuri wrote:

01:22:985 (1) - Alinhe com 01:21:913 (5) - Não vi sentido, então vou manter como tá o3o

Hyguys wrote:

Collab
01:05:842 ok primeiro slider : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/78861 segundo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/78862 - feito (nazi)
01:11:199 (4,5,6) que tal triangulo nessas beats :C? http://puu.sh/1Ezd - k (frescura)
01:21:485 ow mano que jump é esse :c - que jump manolo
01:22:986 alinha com o 5 anterior- k (fescura yay)
01:27:270 whistle - kiwii, checa preu?
01:28:770 :CCCC http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/78869 - fiz diferente mas funfa. nazi do caralho
01:33:699 como voces duas mappearam no ritmo da vocal , acho melhor deletar isso - eu discordo
01:42:699 ow po , ninguem vai ver esse slider reverse chegando , acho melhor reduzir um - wuuuut o3o noway
01:52:128 (3,4,5,6) http://puu.sh/1Ezs - oicaras, você é chato :v
02:39:056 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/78877 - ta, ta. u.u'
02:43:556 clap no incio e no fim - kiwii, meu chuchuzim, zoia preu? C:
02:57:699 >___________________________> - CCCCC:

Parte da bitter : ficou muito bom pra quem nao mappeia frequentemente XD - puxa-saco :v

Hyguys wrote:

mod random
Relachante ariair
00:30:485 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/78884 kay
00:43:128 FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/78887 namoral me chupa fiz o melhor que pude =w="
00:52:342 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/78888 meh, frescurite aguda. deixei assim mesmo >_>
01:09:485 distance snap. :< k
01:11:199 distance snap. :<^
01:52:342 1 grid pra esquerda nazi e-e ok
02:21:270 meu deus mano http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/78891 meu deus mano, pare de me encher o saco com meus sliders. mudei mas de um jeito diferente


Collab
00:28:770 Whistle? prefiro como tá agora
00:47:199 PORRA WIINTER UM WAVE DESSE JEITO? http://puu.sh/1EyV fica melhor :CC sim, um wave diferente do que vc considera bonito. problem sir? (;
01:27:270 whistle - kiwii, checa preu? chequei, e preferi manter como tá agora
02:24:270 puta que pariu. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/78875 entao no 02:25:985 ctrl c no primeiro e ctrl v nesse , dpeois ctrl h aquele shape foi proposital, não vou mudar
02:32:854 1 grid pra cima e dois pra direita mudei, mas seguindo o distance snap
02:43:556 clap no incio e no fim - kiwii, meu chuchuzim, zoia preu? C: hai ^-^ fica melhor assim


Ok
Parte da wiinter: ficou legal , apesar de algumas sliders meia-boca e *apanha* namoral? antes fazer sliders meia boca do que mapsets que tão há um semestre em pending sem ter sequer uma bubble
btw viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194&st=0&sk=t&sd=a&hilit=sliders&start=30 pra voces AIRIRIAIRIA http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=439 pra você ver se consegue rankear alguma coisa ^__^ #wiinter/bitter <3

Bittersweet wrote:

edit: Nova star2 yay *-* yay <3

poisonchan wrote:

Nomnomnom, collab deliça <3

gimmeastar for sb help ;3;

AdRon Zh3Ro wrote:

ShaggoN Knew:

00:28:342 (2,3,4) - ctrl+r for those sliders Err...what for?
00:29:413 (3) - since it's a slow part, this jump isn't really cool Sorry, but who said it's a slower part? o.o
00:34:128 - timing section could start at 00:34:556, since it's when the volume actually goes louder (changing soft hitsounds to normal ones) I was thinking about it, but no. Listen to the drums.
00:38:628 (2) - keep a straight shape for this slider is better, unless you turn 00:34:128 in a shape to the right (kinda like a mirror of the one in 00:38:628) Good point. Fixed.
Raise a bit the volume for on the chorus (all of them) I'd rather decrease them. o.o Well i'll leave it as it is.

Roddie wrote:

ShaggoN Knew:

1. 01:17:413 (7)-Put a new combo here. Uhum.
2. 01:18:699 (5)-Remove new combo. Yup.
3. 01:19:556 (6)-Put a new combo here. Ok.
4. 02:24:270 (5)-^? I did, and also i removed new combo from 02:23:413 (1).

Lizbeth wrote:

Hi~ Sorry for the delay >....<U np <3

Collab
Only thing that really catch my attention in this diff is that after Wiinter's part, Bittersweet changed the distance between notes compared to Wiinter's and after this spot: 01:21:270 the spacing is again as it is in Wiinter's part, is still playable, but I think it would be better to keep consistence, is up to you what to do about it. rawr, chu, quando tu voltar de viagem a gente vê isso direito EDIT: ok, fixed
Very nice diff as well, I would have follow more to the music instead of vocals, but that's just me, good job~ <3 haha, I'd map following the music instead, but I sorta suck at this :v

Relaxing
I didn't like much the tiny breaks here and there, but since is the easier diff I guess it doesn't matter. hmm, yeah you're right D: those ones are kinda annoying >_<" mapped most of them (just kept the longer ones)
All good~

Star~

1. Relaxing and Collab felt really empty during the verses due to the lack of claps, I know that the "soft-hitclap" doesn't completely fit this song but you can try with customs. (or just use the default ones)
2. I feel that there are places during the chorus where the song screams "Place a Finish here!" like: 00:34:556 - " if SOMeone!" // 00:36:270 - "THREE" // 00:41:413 - "I STAnd". Add those finishes, It will help to spice the chorus a bit. (This goes mainly for Relaxing and Collab)
3. Relaxing seems like an easy-NORMAL so it's ok, but I still feel that adding an [Easy] would be the best for this mapset.
4. Unlike the other diffs Letter-boxing is disabled for [Relaxing], enable it.
5. The BG looks really odd. To be honest I don't like it, It looks like if you just grabbed some random BG and added some lyrics. Perhaps, try this one instead?
   
   SPOILER

   
6. Lovely Mapset <3

1. 00:49:985 (X) - I expected a note here (+ Finish) It sounds quite nice, The rhythm on 1/1 is really noticeable I'll list other places where you can add circle (+ Finish) to spice up the rhythm a bit.
2. 00:51:699 (X) - ^
3. 00:55:128 (X) - ^
4. 00:56:842 (X) - ^
5. 01:54:913 - The Kiai time should end here, re-snap it
6. 00:58:128 - You should make this break rhythmical (Drag the beginning of the break to 00:58:556, like this), that kind of effect suits this song perfectly.
7. 01:28:770 (3) - Lovely, but if you want to make it smoother try this
8. 01:46:556 - Apply the same suggestion as before for this chorus, I'll say it again those missing notes sound SO good that if you don't add them, you'll make me and the map cry ;_; (Add the notes here: 01:48:270 - 01:49:985 - 01:53:413 - )
9. 01:54:913 (1) - The rhythm of this spinner starts 1/2 later.
10. The same suggestions about the circles (+Finish) for the last chorus.
11. 01:54:913- The Kiai time should end here, re-snap it please :3

1. Like Relaxing, some Kiai ends are not correctly placed, check them and re-snap them please.
2. 00:23:628 (3,4) - (3) looks odd, stack it properly.
3. 01:49:985 (X) - Add a circle here to fit the rhythm.
4. 02:23:842 (1,2) - As you can see, these notes are too close to the last ones before the little break. Move these away, it feels like a wrong placed anti-jump.
5. 03:01:128 (5) - You should end this diff using a Finish too.

1. AR+1 suits better this diff.
2. 00:28:342 (2,3) - This jumps is not intuitive enough, I suggest to either reduce it or simply use normal spacing.
3. 01:10:128 (3,4) - This pattern kills the flow imo, Why don't you reverse (3)? It would be much better.
4. 02:34:556 (1) - Well, this spinner get 3k Bonus, but still feels like a Ninja Spinner imo, It doesn't suit this part too weel, Use a slider instead.
5. 02:40:558 (7) - This slider is unsnapped
6. 02:57:699 (7,8,9,10) - IMO these jumps doesn't fit this part, It feels like if you're trying to force the difficulty at the end of the map.
7. Really nice diff! (Just some trollish jumps :P)

Lizbeth wrote:

ShaggoN Knew
AImod found a unsnapped object, please re-snap all notes. Done.
Great diff, I really enjoyed, nothing more to point out. Thanks. :3

Gonzvlo wrote:

[ShaggoN Knew]

1. AR+1 suits better this diff. Good point. Changed.
2. 00:28:342 (2,3) - This jumps is not intuitive enough, I suggest to either reduce it or simply use normal spacing. Changed only a little.
3. 01:10:128 (3,4) - This pattern kills the flow imo, Why don't you reverse (3)? It would be much better. Nope sorry. It's good imo.
4. 02:34:556 (1) - Well, this spinner get 3k Bonus, but still feels like a Ninja Spinner imo, It doesn't suit this part too weel, Use a slider instead. Spinner is longer now.
5. 02:40:558 (7) - This slider is unsnapped Yeah yeah i know. Fixed.
6. 02:57:699 (7,8,9,10) - IMO these jumps doesn't fit this part, It feels like if you're trying to force the difficulty at the end of the map. There was same jump between some sliders in whole map o.o
7. Really nice diff! (Just some trollish jumps ) Thanks <3

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]

1. Relaxing and Collab felt really empty during the verses due to the lack of claps, I know that the "soft-hitclap" doesn't completely fit this song but you can try with customs. (or just use the default ones) I get what you mean here. Buut, since I don't have any idea of which custom hitsounds I could use, and since I think the default ones really sound weird here, I'll keep it for now
2. I feel that there are places during the chorus where the song screams "Place a Finish here!" like: 00:34:556 - " if SOMeone!" // 00:36:270 - "THREE" // 00:41:413 - "I STAnd". Add those finishes, It will help to spice the chorus a bit. (This goes mainly for Relaxing and Collab) Done
3. Relaxing seems like an easy-NORMAL so it's ok, but I still feel that adding an [Easy] would be the best for this mapset. I don't really like to name it easy. There are some maps that the easy is called Relaxing, so I'll keep this one
4. Unlike the other diffs Letter-boxing is disabled for [Relaxing], enable it. Done
5. The BG looks really odd. To be honest I don't like it, It looks like if you just grabbed some random BG and added some lyrics. Perhaps, try this one instead? You totally got what I did here ._.' I tried to find some P!nk wallpaper for it, buut I totally failed, so I got this one cuz I tought it was cute blablabla. Well, not that I don't like yours, but that kind on the left is just.. meh D: But thanks for the suggestion <3
   
   SPOILER

   
6. Lovely Mapset <3

Thank you! <3

[Relaxing]

1. 00:49:985 (X) - I expected a note here (+ Finish) It sounds quite nice, The rhythm on 1/1 is really noticeable I'll list other places where you can add circle (+ Finish) to spice up the rhythm a bit. Doone
2. 00:51:699 (X) - ^ ^
3. 00:55:128 (X) - ^ ^
4. 00:56:842 (X) - ^ ^
5. 01:54:913 - The Kiai time should end here, re-snap it ^
6. 00:58:128 - You should make this break rhythmical (Drag the beginning of the break to 00:58:556, like this), that kind of effect suits this song perfectly. Good idea, I didn't even know about this effect XD
7. 01:28:770 (3) - Lovely, but if you want to make it smoother try this I'll keep this one >_<
8. 01:46:556 - Apply the same suggestion as before for this chorus, I'll say it again those missing notes sound SO good that if you don't add them, you'll make me and the map cry ;_; (Add the notes here: 01:48:270 - 01:49:985 - 01:53:413 - ) Added again
9. 01:54:913 (1) - The rhythm of this spinner starts 1/2 later. Fixed
10. The same suggestions about the circles (+Finish) for the last chorus. Done
11. 01:54:913- The Kiai time should end here, re-snap it please :3 wut, again? XD

[Collab]

1. Like Relaxing, some Kiai ends are not correctly placed, check them and re-snap them please. color=#8080FF]Done, but only in one Kiai, since the other one you mentioned was the same of the previous one XD[/color]
2. 00:23:628 (3,4) - (3) looks odd, stack it properly. color=#8080FF]It was because of the distance/grid snap. Fixed anyways[/color]

Sorry for the delay, I've been really busy with tests these 2 last weeks. Don't worry.

Good job, Girls and ShaggoN :3 Thanks <3

dkun wrote:

Relaxing
01:28:770 (3) - Very pretty. Thanks <3
03:01:985 - the inherited timing section here isn't snapped to anything. oops :v fixed that one

Collab
00:49:770 (3,4,5,6) - either add more notable hitsounds or remove it, please. it doesn't make sense with the music There was only one in (6). Changed it to a whistle, guess it sounds better
02:08:199 (3) - A bit nazi, but maybe you should make this slider symmetrical. I'm not sure what you mean here.. like this http://puu.sh/1WPe ? If yes, I'll keep it how it is now ><
02:28:556 (3) - This slider length doesn't make sense to me. But, maybe that's just me. I kinda like this one. Gonna wait for someone else's oppinion here
02:32:842 (3) - ^ ^
03:01:985 - the inherited timing section here isn't snapped to anything, as well. fixed here as well

Overall
Take a star, good job!
Very nice song choice, by the way. mhm..