Tiny stone wrote:

按照别人喜欢的方向，改的我自己都不认识了
越改越挫
我真是自己跑进茅厕找shi吃

Never give up~~

. 3.

ヾ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ゛

neko:
01:24:807 (1,2,3) - 这三个间距太大了 新手反应不过来

Jameskong1's Hard :

00:18:314 在这里加条绿线 volume 80%如何？ 因为声音有点小了= =

02:20:889 (1) - 转盘结束在 02:21:673 或者 删除02:22:120 (1) - 结束在这里？

03:06:673 (1,1,1) - 取消掉new combo吧？ 也没特别的意义呀？

Large:

02:36:897 (5) - NEWCOMBO
02:37:344 (1) - 取消NEWCOMBO
02:38:688 (1) - 取消NEWCOMBO
02:36:897 (1) - finish

Tiny:
00:48:538 (6) - newcombo
01:00:628 (10) - ^
01:51:225 (6) - ^
01:55:926 (11) -^
02:19:882 (12) - ^
02:22:120 (7) - ^
02:24:135 (11) - ^
02:36:673 (7) - ^
03:21:897 (9) - ^
01:51:897 (1) - 取消newcombo
02:19:658 (1) - ^
02:23:688 (1) - ^

bubbled

Sorry to rain on your parade but...



I believe the offset is at least 10ms early.
Might want to add "My Little Sister Can't Be This Cute" to the tags as well.
I don't get these difficulty names.

Tiny:

Using only one type of hitsound for each section (for the most part) of the song seems pretty dull to me. Why not use more to add variety to the beatmap?
00:10:031 (1,2) - I find this jump illogical and largely unnecessary.
00:11:822 (6) - There are no ticks on the sliders before this and that makes the speed change impossible to see coming. You need some kind of warning here. It is easy to imply one by changing the tick rate to 2 and having a slider of 1/1 length or longer before this slow slider.
00:22:792 (1) - Unsymmetrical. Move the leftmost anchor point one more grid to the left and raise the lowest anchor point as high as it can go.
00:47:867 (5) - I find this speed change completely unnecessary and flow-breaking.

Jameskong1's Hard:

HP Drain and Overall Difficulty are set to 4. This difficulty is supposed to be hard, not easy, right? Please raise them accordingly. The other difficulties were a bit lenient with settings as well, but I think it's the biggest problem here.
Again, there is a lack of hitsounds overall, but it's much more prominent here.
00:46:971 (1,2,3,1,2) - Objects here aren't stacked on the slider ends correctly.
00:47:867 (3) - I find this speed change completely unnecessary and flow-breaking. Also, it's unreadable due to lack of slider ticks in this difficulty.
01:27:270 - This would be a more suitable place for kiai time to end. 01:19:434 is too soon.
01:43:837 (6) - Not stacked on slider end.
01:53:911 (1,1,1) - I don't see a reason why these are all on a new combo. Remove the last two.
01:59:508 (1) - Again with the slowdowns...
02:23:911 - Move the kiai end 1/2 forward to match the first chorus.
02:35:777 (4) - Not stacked on slider end.
02:38:911 - Seems more suitable to end kiai time here.
03:21:449 (1,2) - Seems odd to me that you'd place that there considering the overlap with the previous sliders.
03:29:061 - This is a breakdown of the chorus. It seems blatantly wrong to use kiai time here. Leave it off until 03:43:389.
03:43:389 - Soft hitsounds are used here which doesn't match the other choruses. Very odd.

Large:

Again, more hitsound variety would be nice.
01:24:807 (1,2) - I think the spacing between these two notes should match that of 2 and 3.
01:59:508 (6) - Seems pointless to have a silent ending here.
02:38:911 (1) - Soft hitsound on the end would be nice.

Neko:

Once more: variety in hitsounds would benefit this.
I think this is too short. Closing at the bridge like Large did wasn't so bad, but this is insulting to a new player. If they wanted to play a TV Size version of the song, they'd download the TV Size map.

你還真是自爆了=_=
無語

打开这页就看到一张恶心图

嘛……加油._.

TMD 自己的圖都做不好還過來說三道四,有時間在這雞蛋挑骨頭倒不如unrank自己那張垃圾.

kanpakyin wrote:

你還真是自爆了=_=
無語

啊？ 没看懂 =。=

Jarby wrote:

Sorry to rain on your parade but...



I believe the offset is at least 10ms early.
Might want to add "My Little Sister Can't Be This Cute" to the tags as well.
I don't get these difficulty names.

I believe you are wrong

the offset is base on the Rhythm not the Lyric

then about the others

too long no see

Hi, Here's random modding.

* When I downloaded this map, I didn't get a "Large" diff, please try to do a full submit again.
* try offset 1,308

[Tiny]
02:23:016 (4) - add new combo here? -a bit- hard to tell about spacing change, imo

[Large]
02:38:921 (1) - silence last spinner?
- have some parts on this diff use spacing a bit different (some hug etc) but it's not big deal, imo

star'd for now

I wish I could properly understand the lovely comments that've been left behind after I modded this. Google Translate isn't much help and I certainly don't like the look of those angry faces.

小石头~

great

thank you ,guys

star~

Mod Request from Random

If you have PM me to mod,i'll mark the name which PM me to mod it :3
If no,i'll random to mod and use Pink to mark


Before mod please read the meaning represented by the color

Color Help

Red -> Recommended
Orange -> Must to Fixed
Green -> Currect Timing or Move Notes
Blue -> Don't fixed it...
Purple -> If you fixed the one,please fixed the pattern

Taiko

Timing :

00:01:30 134.00 BPM - N - -> OK
00:58:61 1.0x - K - -> Nice
01:30:85 1.0x - N - -> Nice
02:10:25 1.0x - K - -> Nice
02:39:80 1.0x - N - -> Nice

Notes :


Others :

Song Difficulty -
HP Drain - 6 -> OK
Circle Size - 2 -> Max
Approach Rate - 5 -> Max
Overall Difficulty - 5 -> OK

ah...just a suggest...a Guest Difficulty couldn't get a kudosu

桐乃.////. <3

Hello :3

Neko --> nothing to say, pretty good

Large
01:23:248 (7) New combo
01:46:308 - 01:47:651 (2,3,4,5) Aren't these jumps du hard for this diff? :3
02:08:248 (1) Remove new combo here
Overall, this difficulty is also pretty fine

Tiny
00:32:651 (7) Put it 1 field left, because the spacing is a bit strange there for me
00:39:591 (6) New combo
00:42:725 (14) ^
00:46:860 (20) New combo here and then remove new combo from: 00:46:084 (1)
01:14:516 (7) Could you make this slider more symmetrical?
02:50:561 (1) Remove this spinner
03:22:800 - 03:25:487 (2,3,4,5) Can you make these jumps harder? Because there is so mucht time between them
03:55:710 - 03:57:054 (1,2,3,4) This part is also strange, I think because of the spacing?
Keep workin'

Guest Diff
00:12:725 (1) Remove new combo
00:13:173 (2) New combo
00:22:800 (1) This spinner should go only till 00:26:382
00:26:606 Put a spinner here till 00:29:964
02:53:248 I think the break should end here
02:57:278 (3) New combo
03:31:091 (1) Remove new combo
03:32:203 (5) New combo
03:32:651 (1) Remove new combo
This diff is also fine at all, keep workin'

Greez Vortex, I hope it gives you a little lift to the ranking
No Kudosu left for star But i will give you one later^^

Vortex wrote:

Hello :3

Neko --> nothing to say, pretty good

Large
01:23:248 (7) New combo
01:46:308 - 01:47:651 (2,3,4,5) Aren't these jumps du hard for this diff? :3
02:08:248 (1) Remove new combo here
Overall, this difficulty is also pretty fine

Tiny
00:32:651 (7) Put it 1 field left, because the spacing is a bit strange there for me
00:39:591 (6) New combo
00:42:725 (14) ^
00:46:860 (20) New combo here and then remove new combo from: 00:46:084 (1)
01:14:516 (7) Could you make this slider more symmetrical?
02:50:561 (1) Remove this spinner
03:22:800 - 03:25:487 (2,3,4,5) Can you make these jumps harder? Because there is so mucht time between them i think not need
03:55:710 - 03:57:054 (1,2,3,4) This part is also strange, I think because of the spacing?
Keep workin'

Guest Diff
00:12:725 (1) Remove new combo
00:13:173 (2) New combo
00:22:800 (1) This spinner should go only till 00:26:382
00:26:606 Put a spinner here till 00:29:964 i think not need
02:53:248 I think the break should end here
02:57:278 (3) New combo
03:31:091 (1) Remove new combo
03:32:203 (5) New combo
03:32:651 (1) Remove new combo
This diff is also fine at all, keep workin'

Greez Vortex, I hope it gives you a little lift to the ranking
No Kudosu left for star But i will give you one later^^

thanks for your mod . all done except several i think not need.
thx again

我覺得有很多地方不協調，去玩一下已被rank的譜，應該可以找到不錯的擺法
http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist&s=4&r=0?s=7&o=1&q=irony&r=0&g=0&la=0
我mod[Large]這個難度的，其它就沒時間了

我直接給你後我改的譜，位置會有些不正確，主要是時間軸的位置，可以嗎?
或是我新做一個譜來取代[Large]的難度。

star beacause I like it.

Download: ClariS - Irony (sisiJiang) [Large].osu

General:

1. You have to finish all maps, for example the "neko" isn't finished as the others.

Neko:

• It's the easiest map, then Circle Size +1.

1. 00:05:561 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/4MgW Put it so? Sound is better.
   Ehm... It isn't finished.. is it in wip?
   You have to finish it, as the others.. :\

Jameskong1's Hard:

• This 1/2 rhythm is so ripetitive...
  For example instead of the usual 1/2 here:

1. 02:33:322 (2) - you could make a slider that start at 02:33:322 and end at 02:33:770.
2. 02:34:218 (4) - Delete and use a circle
3. 02:35:785 (4) - Move it at x:193 y:362 (don't use grid snap)
4. 02:55:039 (5) - New combo
5. 02:58:621 (6) - ^
6. 03:03:994 (4) - ^
7. 03:11:158 (7) - ^
8. 03:12:502 (1) - No new combo
9. 03:12:949 (2) - New combo
10. 03:18:322 (7) - ^
11. 03:19:666 (1) - No new combo
12. 03:20:113 (2) - New combo
13. 03:21:905 (2) - Delete and start the spinner here
    
    Change the usual 1/2 rhythm, so ripetitive, i don't like it <.<

Tiny:

• Break time that starts at 00:17:875, can you set it as the other diffs please?

1. 00:44:293 (6) - New combo
2. 00:47:875 (5) - End it at 00:48:322?
3. 00:54:591 (8) - New combo
4. 00:58:621 Start kiai time?
5. 02:10:263 (2) - Kiai time
6. 03:03:994 (9) - New combo
7. 03:39:815 (9) - ^
8. 03:40:487 (1) - No new combo
9. 03:43:397 (6) - New combo... and start kiai time..

Then good luck ~

hihi~
下次post請遵守規則

[General]
256kbps的mp3是不能使用的,而且我記得這規則是去年9月開始實行,你傳這圖的時間是十月...所以你恐怕需要換mp3了.
tags里面的anime是不需要的請刪除,因為在ranked之后BAT會把這歌的類別劃到anime里.

[Neko]
00:15:075 (T) - 這條綠線有用...?
00:55:934 (5) - 換成一個00:55:710開始00:56:158結束的slider.

[Large]
01:06:233 (2) - 加clap.
01:48:770 (x) - 加個note.
02:07:128 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 這對個normal而言太難了...去掉(6)(8)(10)比較好.
02:38:919 (1) - 起始于02:38:808.

[Jameskong1's Hard]
為什麼只有這個難度有kiai?請在另外的幾個難度里也加上kiai,或者刪除這個難度的kiai.
00:56:606 (6) - 這slider感覺各種別扭.
01:43:173 (5,6) - 沒重疊好.
02:08:248 (7) - 各種別扭...

[Tiny]
00:10:039 (1) - 合并成一個長slider會比較好.
00:37:128 (x) - 加個note.
02:20:785 (3) - 聽起來很吵...而且這樣一個slider放這也實在不合適.

嘛,仍然需要努力~

thanks all of your mods.
(because of poor english. many things i don't know how to say it. just thank you . sorry

Claris ~

O wow so many stars lol

General:
Set the slider tick rate to 1 for all diffs. having a slider tick rate of .5 is unrankable.

Neko:
00:41:200(5) - NC
00:42:544(2) - get rid of the last repeat and replace it for a circle.
00:51:499(6) - NC
00:52:842(3) - same as 00:42:544
01:09:857(5) - NC
01:11:200(2) - same as 00:42:544
01:16:126(6) - NC
01:17:245(1) - remove NC
02:12:544(2) - ^

Average:
00:46:126(5) - NC
01:00:679(6) - ^
01:24:857(4) - ^
01:51:275(5) - ^
01:53:961(4) - ^
02:26:200(6) - ^
02:56:872(7) - ^
03:04:036(7) - ^
03:18:364(6) - ^
03:30:678(6) - ^
03:34:260(4) - ^
03:41:424(5) - ^
03:45:006(6) - ^
03:48:588(6) - ^
03:55:752(7) - ^
04:07:394(5) - ^

Tiny:

00:02:917(7) - NC
00:06:499(7) - ^
00:27:991(5) - ^
00:32:469(6) - ^
00:35:155(4) - ^
00:57:096(5) - ^
01:03:812(6) - ^
01:09:185(5) - ^
01:14:558(7) - ^
01:18:588(5) - ^
01:21:723(5) - ^
01:46:797(7) - ^
01:53:066(5) - ^
02:04:036(7) - ^
02:08:290(8) - ^
02:11:872(8) - ^
02:15:902(8) - ^
02:19:036(9) - ^
02:24:185(8) - ^ and Aline this to the previous circle
02:26:200(6) - NC
02:33:364(8) - ^
03:48:588(5) - ^

This is the best i can do. GL

Star!!~ I don't know what exactly is wrong with your map!!

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