Obrigado pelo MOD wiinter
Dragvon/Shou, seu MOD foi extremamente eficiente com quase 100% de aproveitamento, se fosse possível eu te dava 2 KudosuDragvon wrote:
Shou e eu somos a mesma pessoa lala~
Eu uso essa cor para SUGESTÕES. Só mude se você quiser.
Essa cor é para PROBLEMAS. Seria uma boa ideia você corrigir estes, mas se você tiver um bom motivo pode deixar do jeito que está.
Essa cor é para ERROS. Você TEM que arrumar estes!
<Geral>
• Sua mp3 tem uma bitrate de 320 kbps. Isso não é permitido. Por favor consiga reduzir para 192kbps ou menor.
• Timing: 03:45:602 (1) - Por quê tem uma timing section aqui? Remova ela. (a linha vermelha)
<Hard>
• 00:34:550 (4) - Ah, por que você quebrou o ritmo dos Claps aqui xD?
• 00:37:707 (2) - ^
• 00:41:918 (2) - ^^
• 00:46:128 (2) - ^^^ Ta... você já entendeu, os próximos ficam por sua conta.
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• 00:47:444 (5,6) - Eu tiraria Claps do 6 e colocaria na última nota do 5
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• 00:49:286 (2,4,6) - Claps no 2, segunda nota do 4, e no 6 em ambas as notas.
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• 00:54:023 (5,7) - Semelhante ao de cima ^ Mas dessa vez no fim do 5 e no 7 inteiro.
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• 01:06:655 (3,4,5) - Essas batidas ficariam muito legais se você utilizasse uma ITS com áudio do tipo Normal
---------------------------------------------------------FIXED, ficou muito bom! ------------------------------------------------
• 01:08:760 (1,2,3) - ^
---------------------------------------------------------Eu ja fiz em tudo ---------------------------------------------------------
• 01:20:339 (1,5) - Eu usaria claps neles~
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• 01:26:655 (2) - Remova claps da última nota desse slider.
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• 01:27:707 (3,4,5) - De novo, essas batidas ficariam muito legais se você utilizasse uma ITS com áudio do tipo Normal
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• 01:39:812 (4) - Claps aqui junto do finish
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• 01:42:971 (1) - Claps ia bem :3
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• 01:48:234 (4) - Claps aqui junto do finish ~
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• 02:00:076 (2) - Essa claps no fim não ficou legal. Coloque na primeira nota do slider seguinte (E uma no fim dele também)
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• 02:11:918 (1) - Claps + finish? ou então: 02:11:918 (1,2,3) - Faça o mesmo esquema de usar som normal
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• 02:14:023 (9) - Som normal de novo~
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• 02:44:023 (10) - Mantenha o ritmo. Use whistle.
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• 02:48:234 (10) - ^ Use claps
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• 02:52:707 (10) - ^
---------------------------------------------------------Com Clap vai perder o sentido de eu mudar o ritmo. ----------------
• 03:04:549 (14) - Claps no fim.
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• Aqui vai uma sugestão interessante: Tá vendo a timing section(ITS) na frente de 03:10:865 (8) ? Então... mova ela para o 8 e transforme o som em Normal. Na minha opinião soa melhor.
• Alías, desse momento em diante, acho melhor só usar o som normal.
---------------------------------------------------------FIXED, Muito bem. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------
Comentários: Cara.. gostei do mapa. É um dos poucos que eu dou estrela no primeiro mod xD! Continue assim. Só achei que faltou um ritmo constante nas hitsounds, por isso apontei várias. E acho que o fim ficaria ótimo com som normal ao invéz de soft. Spacing ok.
Boa sorte.
Thanks for modding, I thing my map is good, but it you decidesxierbaliti wrote:
-General-
offset: 24550 Fixed
-Insane-
you always following the vocal but not following the rhythm =_= following the vocal is good, but you must following the rhythm too!
such as:
00:38:234~00:41:128 - in this part, make your rhythm like this will be better imo: Good idea
also, it's a insane diff. long slider(such as 00:51:392 (6) ) is too easy here I think. how about try this: Fixed
00:36:918 (5) - this jump looks strange ~_~ No jump bro
01:29:813 (5,1) - remove the to notes and add a circle at 01:29:944 it looks so strange ):
-Normal-
first, check your spacing. i see many wrong spacing in this mapset.
for example: 01:18:234 (6) , 02:20:339 (4) etc. FIXED
next you need fix the random notes like the Insane diff. following the rhythm or make your own rhythm, don't following the vocal all the time.
just point out the mistakes(or my suggestions) that i have found. you'd better recheck your whole mapset, and make your map better.
good luck.
EDIT:999th post
Odaril wrote:
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game
GeneralNormal
- Why don't you add at least another diff ? The mapset would be a lot better... Will think about it.
- Your map is really very long .-.
Thanks :3
- 00:30:865 (4,5,1) - Spacing issue: they are spaced the same way but the time gap isn't the same. Fixed
- 00:58:234 (1,2,3) - Such rhythms are quite hard to catch for new players... So you should use sliders at least a few times before using circles, so that the player gets used to the rhythm. Okay
- 01:04:550 (4) - This slider is rather nice =o but you can make it a perfect blanket (that's very nazi of me though but I like perfection =p)
- The kiai needs more hitsounds imo... It really sounds bland right now. :3
- 01:27:707 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is very confusing: the spacing of the circles is very similar, but the rhythm isn't. Try using a repeat slider for the first three circles. Fixed
- 01:53:234 (1) - Nice slider again, but you can make it perfect =o (yes I'm nazi). Place a hitcircle in the center, then using 1/8 snap divisor, move the circle in the timeline so that the approach circle matches the inner border of the slider, and move the sliderpoints to make the curve perfect. Made it!
- 02:07:707 (2,3) - The idea is nice and the pattern flows well, but I really hate this overlap, it looks bad ingame... Changed Patterns
- 02:28:365 (2) - Isn't this note misplaced ? Nothing in the song requires a beat here, it should be on the previous red tick. Okay
- 02:36:918 (4,1) - Very bad spacing idea: I understand the slow down and stuff, but the spacing here looks like the notes are 1/2 apart, when they aren't. What you should do is space (4) and (1) normall, then replace (1,2) with a slider to show the slowdown and make the spacing after it less confusing. Sorry, fixed
- 02:40:339 (6,7,1) - Spacing issue: they are spaced the same way, but the time gap isn't the same. Fixed.
- 03:13:234 (5) - Nice elbow =o
InsaneAdded :3
- This difficulty overuses anti-jumps (and they aren't even well placed in my opinion), so it makes the actual spacing hard to read (mainly the 1/4 - which don't make sense to the song either imo). Will work on it.
- Set tick rate 2 so that the speed changes are readable. (03:22:971 (1,6) - these) Okay :3
- 00:32:181 (5) - A new combo to mark the spacing shift would be nice. Added
- 01:27:707 (3,4,5) - Confusing and unexpected anti-jumps, especially with this weird rhythm. LOL, fixed.
- 03:57:444 (4) - Add a new combo ?
This map needs some more work. It's not there yet, but it can become a good map with enough mods. Keep trying ! I'll double check it, learned more patterns, will apply on my map! Thanks Odaril.
NoHellDawn wrote:
General
Your map is really very long OMG Don't ever look back <3
Truth
00:30:865(start)> 00:31:918(end)
00:35:339 > move to>00:35:076
00:35:865 > move >00:35:865
00:36:128 > Circle here ?
00:43:760 > move >00:43:497
00:44:286 > Move >00:44:023
00:44:550 > Circle here.
01:58:248 > Circle here
02:49:550 > I dont like slider :S
02:56:128 > Circle here
Sorry Im bored cuz very long map
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