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Obrigado danichan
Shou e eu somos a mesma pessoa lala~
Eu uso essa cor para SUGESTÕES. Só mude se você quiser.
Essa cor é para PROBLEMAS. Seria uma boa ideia você corrigir estes, mas se você tiver um bom motivo pode deixar do jeito que está.
Essa cor é para ERROS. Você TEM que arrumar estes!
<Geral>
• Sua mp3 tem uma bitrate de 320 kbps. Isso não é permitido. Por favor consiga reduzir para 192kbps ou menor.
• Timing: 03:45:602 (1) - Por quê tem uma timing section aqui? Remova ela. (a linha vermelha)
<Hard>
• 00:34:550 (4) - Ah, por que você quebrou o ritmo dos Claps aqui xD?
• 00:37:707 (2) - ^
• 00:41:918 (2) - ^^
• 00:46:128 (2) - ^^^ Ta... você já entendeu, os próximos ficam por sua conta.
• 00:47:444 (5,6) - Eu tiraria Claps do 6 e colocaria na última nota do 5
• 00:49:286 (2,4,6) - Claps no 2, segunda nota do 4, e no 6 em ambas as notas.
• 00:54:023 (5,7) - Semelhante ao de cima ^ Mas dessa vez no fim do 5 e no 7 inteiro.
• 01:06:655 (3,4,5) - Essas batidas ficariam muito legais se você utilizasse uma ITS com áudio do tipo Normal
• 01:08:760 (1,2,3) - ^
• 01:20:339 (1,5) - Eu usaria claps neles~
• 01:26:655 (2) - Remova claps da última nota desse slider.
• 01:27:707 (3,4,5) - De novo, essas batidas ficariam muito legais se você utilizasse uma ITS com áudio do tipo Normal
• 01:39:812 (4) - Claps aqui junto do finish
• 01:42:971 (1) - Claps ia bem :3
• 01:48:234 (4) - Claps aqui junto do finish ~
• 02:00:076 (2) - Essa claps no fim não ficou legal. Coloque na primeira nota do slider seguinte (E uma no fim dele também)
• 02:11:918 (1) - Claps + finish? ou então: 02:11:918 (1,2,3) - Faça o mesmo esquema de usar som normal
• 02:14:023 (9) - Som normal de novo~
• 02:44:023 (10) - Mantenha o ritmo. Use whistle.
• 02:48:234 (10) - ^ Use claps
• 02:52:707 (10) - ^
• 03:04:549 (14) - Claps no fim.
• Aqui vai uma sugestão interessante: Tá vendo a timing section(ITS) na frente de 03:10:865 (8) ? Então... mova ela para o 8 e transforme o som em Normal. Na minha opinião soa melhor.
• Alías, desse momento em diante, acho melhor só usar o som normal.
Comentários: Cara.. gostei do mapa. É um dos poucos que eu dou estrela no primeiro mod xD! Continue assim. Só achei que faltou um ritmo constante nas hitsounds, por isso apontei várias. E acho que o fim ficaria ótimo com som normal ao invéz de soft. Spacing ok.
Boa sorte.
Eu uso essa cor para SUGESTÕES. Só mude se você quiser.
Essa cor é para PROBLEMAS. Seria uma boa ideia você corrigir estes, mas se você tiver um bom motivo pode deixar do jeito que está.
Essa cor é para ERROS. Você TEM que arrumar estes!
<Geral>
• Sua mp3 tem uma bitrate de 320 kbps. Isso não é permitido. Por favor consiga reduzir para 192kbps ou menor.
• Timing: 03:45:602 (1) - Por quê tem uma timing section aqui? Remova ela. (a linha vermelha)
<Hard>
• 00:34:550 (4) - Ah, por que você quebrou o ritmo dos Claps aqui xD?
• 00:37:707 (2) - ^
• 00:41:918 (2) - ^^
• 00:46:128 (2) - ^^^ Ta... você já entendeu, os próximos ficam por sua conta.
• 00:47:444 (5,6) - Eu tiraria Claps do 6 e colocaria na última nota do 5
• 00:49:286 (2,4,6) - Claps no 2, segunda nota do 4, e no 6 em ambas as notas.
• 00:54:023 (5,7) - Semelhante ao de cima ^ Mas dessa vez no fim do 5 e no 7 inteiro.
• 01:06:655 (3,4,5) - Essas batidas ficariam muito legais se você utilizasse uma ITS com áudio do tipo Normal
• 01:08:760 (1,2,3) - ^
• 01:20:339 (1,5) - Eu usaria claps neles~
• 01:26:655 (2) - Remova claps da última nota desse slider.
• 01:27:707 (3,4,5) - De novo, essas batidas ficariam muito legais se você utilizasse uma ITS com áudio do tipo Normal
• 01:39:812 (4) - Claps aqui junto do finish
• 01:42:971 (1) - Claps ia bem :3
• 01:48:234 (4) - Claps aqui junto do finish ~
• 02:00:076 (2) - Essa claps no fim não ficou legal. Coloque na primeira nota do slider seguinte (E uma no fim dele também)
• 02:11:918 (1) - Claps + finish? ou então: 02:11:918 (1,2,3) - Faça o mesmo esquema de usar som normal
• 02:14:023 (9) - Som normal de novo~
• 02:44:023 (10) - Mantenha o ritmo. Use whistle.
• 02:48:234 (10) - ^ Use claps
• 02:52:707 (10) - ^
• 03:04:549 (14) - Claps no fim.
• Aqui vai uma sugestão interessante: Tá vendo a timing section(ITS) na frente de 03:10:865 (8) ? Então... mova ela para o 8 e transforme o som em Normal. Na minha opinião soa melhor.
• Alías, desse momento em diante, acho melhor só usar o som normal.
Comentários: Cara.. gostei do mapa. É um dos poucos que eu dou estrela no primeiro mod xD! Continue assim. Só achei que faltou um ritmo constante nas hitsounds, por isso apontei várias. E acho que o fim ficaria ótimo com som normal ao invéz de soft. Spacing ok.
Boa sorte.
Topic Starter
Dragvon/Shou, seu MOD foi extremamente eficiente com quase 100% de aproveitamento, se fosse possível eu te dava 2 KudosuDragvon wrote:
Shou e eu somos a mesma pessoa lala~
Eu uso essa cor para SUGESTÕES. Só mude se você quiser.
Essa cor é para PROBLEMAS. Seria uma boa ideia você corrigir estes, mas se você tiver um bom motivo pode deixar do jeito que está.
Essa cor é para ERROS. Você TEM que arrumar estes!
<Geral>
• Sua mp3 tem uma bitrate de 320 kbps. Isso não é permitido. Por favor consiga reduzir para 192kbps ou menor.
• Timing: 03:45:602 (1) - Por quê tem uma timing section aqui? Remova ela. (a linha vermelha)
<Hard>
• 00:34:550 (4) - Ah, por que você quebrou o ritmo dos Claps aqui xD?
• 00:37:707 (2) - ^
• 00:41:918 (2) - ^^
• 00:46:128 (2) - ^^^ Ta... você já entendeu, os próximos ficam por sua conta.
---------------------------------------------------------FIXED---------------------------------------------------------------------------
• 00:47:444 (5,6) - Eu tiraria Claps do 6 e colocaria na última nota do 5
---------------------------------------------------------FIXED---------------------------------------------------------------------------
• 00:49:286 (2,4,6) - Claps no 2, segunda nota do 4, e no 6 em ambas as notas.
---------------------------------------------------------FIXED---------------------------------------------------------------------------
• 00:54:023 (5,7) - Semelhante ao de cima ^ Mas dessa vez no fim do 5 e no 7 inteiro.
---------------------------------------------------------FIXED---------------------------------------------------------------------------
• 01:06:655 (3,4,5) - Essas batidas ficariam muito legais se você utilizasse uma ITS com áudio do tipo Normal
---------------------------------------------------------FIXED, ficou muito bom!
• 01:08:760 (1,2,3) - ^
---------------------------------------------------------Eu ja fiz em tudo
• 01:20:339 (1,5) - Eu usaria claps neles~
---------------------------------------------------------FIXED---------------------------------------------------------------------------
• 01:26:655 (2) - Remova claps da última nota desse slider.
---------------------------------------------------------FIXED---------------------------------------------------------------------------
• 01:27:707 (3,4,5) - De novo, essas batidas ficariam muito legais se você utilizasse uma ITS com áudio do tipo Normal
---------------------------------------------------------FIXED---------------------------------------------------------------------------
• 01:39:812 (4) - Claps aqui junto do finish
---------------------------------------------------------FIXED---------------------------------------------------------------------------
• 01:42:971 (1) - Claps ia bem :3
---------------------------------------------------------FIXED---------------------------------------------------------------------------
• 01:48:234 (4) - Claps aqui junto do finish ~
---------------------------------------------------------FIXED---------------------------------------------------------------------------
• 02:00:076 (2) - Essa claps no fim não ficou legal. Coloque na primeira nota do slider seguinte (E uma no fim dele também)
---------------------------------------------------------FIXED---------------------------------------------------------------------------
• 02:11:918 (1) - Claps + finish? ou então: 02:11:918 (1,2,3) - Faça o mesmo esquema de usar som normal
---------------------------------------------------------FIXED---------------------------------------------------------------------------
• 02:14:023 (9) - Som normal de novo~
---------------------------------------------------------FIXED---------------------------------------------------------------------------
• 02:44:023 (10) - Mantenha o ritmo. Use whistle.
---------------------------------------------------------FIXED---------------------------------------------------------------------------
• 02:48:234 (10) - ^ Use claps
---------------------------------------------------------FIXED---------------------------------------------------------------------------
• 02:52:707 (10) - ^
---------------------------------------------------------Com Clap vai perder o sentido de eu mudar o ritmo.----------------
• 03:04:549 (14) - Claps no fim.
---------------------------------------------------------FIXED---------------------------------------------------------------------------
• Aqui vai uma sugestão interessante: Tá vendo a timing section(ITS) na frente de 03:10:865 (8) ? Então... mova ela para o 8 e transforme o som em Normal. Na minha opinião soa melhor.
• Alías, desse momento em diante, acho melhor só usar o som normal.
---------------------------------------------------------FIXED, Muito bem.
Comentários: Cara.. gostei do mapa. É um dos poucos que eu dou estrela no primeiro mod xD! Continue assim. Só achei que faltou um ritmo constante nas hitsounds, por isso apontei várias. E acho que o fim ficaria ótimo com som normal ao invéz de soft. Spacing ok.
Boa sorte.
EDIT
• Timing: 03:45:602 (1) - Por quê tem uma timing section aqui? Remova ela. (a linha vermelha)
NÃO TINHA VISTO ISSO, FIXED
Hi~
all my suggestion,so you can be ignored as well:3
[normal]
00:50:602 (3) - spacing
00:51:918 (4) - spacing or add new combo
01:12:444 (3) - add new combo
01:17:181 (4) - add new combo
01:56:128 (4,5) - spacing
02:20:339 (4) - add new combo
02:28:760 (4) - ^
02:32:707 (2) - spacing
02:37:707 (5) - add new combo
[insane]
00:31:392 (3) - spacing
00:32:181 (5,6,7) - add new combo
00:42:971 (4) - spacing
00:49:813 (4) - add new combo
00:54:023 (5) - ^
01:01:918 (4) - ^
01:10:076 (4) - ^
01:10:865 (1) - remove new combo
01:12:444 (2) - add new combo
01:27:707 (3) - ^
01:40:602 (5) - ^
01:53:234 (5) - ^
02:09:286 (3) - ^
02:17:707 (3) - ^
02:24:813 (5) - ^
02:28:760 (4) - ^
03:03:234 (9) - ^
03:25:076 (6) - ^
03:38:497 (7) - ^
03:57:444 (4) - ^
04:16:654 (7) - ^
all my suggestion.
nicemap star~
all my suggestion,so you can be ignored as well:3
[normal]
00:50:602 (3) - spacing
00:51:918 (4) - spacing or add new combo
01:12:444 (3) - add new combo
01:17:181 (4) - add new combo
01:56:128 (4,5) - spacing
02:20:339 (4) - add new combo
02:28:760 (4) - ^
02:32:707 (2) - spacing
02:37:707 (5) - add new combo
[insane]
00:31:392 (3) - spacing
00:32:181 (5,6,7) - add new combo
00:42:971 (4) - spacing
00:49:813 (4) - add new combo
00:54:023 (5) - ^
01:01:918 (4) - ^
01:10:076 (4) - ^
01:10:865 (1) - remove new combo
01:12:444 (2) - add new combo
01:27:707 (3) - ^
01:40:602 (5) - ^
01:53:234 (5) - ^
02:09:286 (3) - ^
02:17:707 (3) - ^
02:24:813 (5) - ^
02:28:760 (4) - ^
03:03:234 (9) - ^
03:25:076 (6) - ^
03:38:497 (7) - ^
03:57:444 (4) - ^
04:16:654 (7) - ^
all my suggestion.
nicemap star~
Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.
General
You didn't read queue rules huh? I guess i said there that i'm not modding unfinished maps.
However my thought's from what i saw:
Map works really fine as a Normal stage, however i'm pretty sure that MAT's BAT's will complain without a reason, that Star Difficulty is 3,25. And every mapset should have at least one stage below 3 stars. High Star Difficulty in your stage is caused mostly by high Slider Velocity.
[Insane]
Hard Approach Rate x3, but no complains here.
Actually map is rly good. Just finish that Normal xD And remember what is said there about difficulty. If You don't decrease it to at least 3 stars, you'll need to make Easy stage, or MAT's will scratch you. xD
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.
General
- Set Prevew Points at both stages.
You didn't read queue rules huh? I guess i said there that i'm not modding unfinished maps.
However my thought's from what i saw:
Map works really fine as a Normal stage, however i'm pretty sure that MAT's BAT's will complain without a reason, that Star Difficulty is 3,25. And every mapset should have at least one stage below 3 stars. High Star Difficulty in your stage is caused mostly by high Slider Velocity.
[Insane]
Hard Approach Rate x3, but no complains here.
Actually map is rly good. Just finish that Normal xD And remember what is said there about difficulty. If You don't decrease it to at least 3 stars, you'll need to make Easy stage, or MAT's will scratch you. xD
ainda nao tinha dado star? ._.
Hi!
I found it in #modreqs. It seems that you wrote "mod4mod". So if you want, mod this map or pick one from my signature.
[Normal]
00:34:549 (4) - add finish?
00:51:918 (4) - spacing error? remove useless inherit section and change it.
01:16:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - these overlaps aren't very friendly for easiest difficulty
01:16:392 (1,2,3) - this spacing unfriendly too - place it in stack, maybe?
01:19:286 (7) - add new combo
01:27:707 (6) - add new combo
01:28:760 (1) - remove NC
01:29:550 (3) - add NC
01:31:655 (6,7) - spacing error? also 01:32:971 (7) - strange slider
01:50:865 (1) - add NC
01:54:549 (1,2,3,4) - make spacing equal?
01:56:128 (4,5) - spacing error?
02:07:181 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - this is a total mess. Unrankable, imho. 02:15:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6) is much better
02:07:707 (7) - add NC
02:14:023 (6) - move to 1 grid down (this overlap is cool, but can be difficult for newbies)
02:16:918 (3,4,5,6) - make something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/71534
02:19:550 (1,2,3) - place in stack?
02:27:971 (1,2,3) - ^
02:26:392 (7) - remove finish at the end?
02:31:918 (1,2) - spacing error?
02:37:707 (5) - add NC
02:45:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - strange placing ang too short spacing, imho. Maybe try 0.75x section or make sliders longer..
03:06:655 (5) - add NC
03:13:234 (4) - add NC?
03:17:444 (5) - add NC?
03:22:971 (8) - add NC
03:22:444 (7,1) - spacing error?
03:24:549 (2,3) - ^
03:30:339 (7,8) - ^
03:30:865 (9,10) - ^
03:30:076 (6) - add NC
03:31:128 (5) - remove finishes? - sound strange
03:31:918 (1) - add finish?
03:33:760 (7) - add NC
03:38:497 (5) - ^
03:42:181 (5) - ^
03:47:971 (4) - ^
03:52:181 (4) - ^
03:54:023 (1,2,3) - overlap again
04:16:655 (3) - add NC?
It's not very "normal" - all these slowdown sliders, jumps, long combos, overlaps. You need to fix some of that or rename this diff into hard.
[Insane]
nice insane, I can't find anything wrong here. Only few things:
00:26:392 (8,1) - zOMG ~4x jump on a start of the song
00:53:234 (1,2,3) - a bit confusion after 00:49:023 (1,2,3) - place in stack, maybe?
00:56:918 - remove this mini break?
01:02:444 (5) - add new combo?
01:36:918 - remove this mini break?
02:26:392 (10) - remove finish at the end?
update (song folder checking):
- you need to re-encode your mp3 to 192kbps (use this tutorial or ask me)
- it's be better, if image will have 1024x768 or 800x600 dimensions
btw, good song, star
I found it in #modreqs. It seems that you wrote "mod4mod". So if you want, mod this map or pick one from my signature.
[Normal]
00:34:549 (4) - add finish?
00:51:918 (4) - spacing error? remove useless inherit section and change it.
01:16:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - these overlaps aren't very friendly for easiest difficulty
01:16:392 (1,2,3) - this spacing unfriendly too - place it in stack, maybe?
01:19:286 (7) - add new combo
01:27:707 (6) - add new combo
01:28:760 (1) - remove NC
01:29:550 (3) - add NC
01:31:655 (6,7) - spacing error? also 01:32:971 (7) - strange slider
01:50:865 (1) - add NC
01:54:549 (1,2,3,4) - make spacing equal?
01:56:128 (4,5) - spacing error?
02:07:181 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - this is a total mess. Unrankable, imho. 02:15:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6) is much better
02:07:707 (7) - add NC
02:14:023 (6) - move to 1 grid down (this overlap is cool, but can be difficult for newbies)
02:16:918 (3,4,5,6) - make something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/71534
02:19:550 (1,2,3) - place in stack?
02:27:971 (1,2,3) - ^
02:26:392 (7) - remove finish at the end?
02:31:918 (1,2) - spacing error?
02:37:707 (5) - add NC
02:45:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - strange placing ang too short spacing, imho. Maybe try 0.75x section or make sliders longer..
03:06:655 (5) - add NC
03:13:234 (4) - add NC?
03:17:444 (5) - add NC?
03:22:971 (8) - add NC
03:22:444 (7,1) - spacing error?
03:24:549 (2,3) - ^
03:30:339 (7,8) - ^
03:30:865 (9,10) - ^
03:30:076 (6) - add NC
03:31:128 (5) - remove finishes? - sound strange
03:31:918 (1) - add finish?
03:33:760 (7) - add NC
03:38:497 (5) - ^
03:42:181 (5) - ^
03:47:971 (4) - ^
03:52:181 (4) - ^
03:54:023 (1,2,3) - overlap again
04:16:655 (3) - add NC?
It's not very "normal" - all these slowdown sliders, jumps, long combos, overlaps. You need to fix some of that or rename this diff into hard.
[Insane]
nice insane, I can't find anything wrong here. Only few things:
00:26:392 (8,1) - zOMG ~4x jump on a start of the song
00:53:234 (1,2,3) - a bit confusion after 00:49:023 (1,2,3) - place in stack, maybe?
00:56:918 - remove this mini break?
01:02:444 (5) - add new combo?
01:36:918 - remove this mini break?
02:26:392 (10) - remove finish at the end?
update (song folder checking):
- you need to re-encode your mp3 to 192kbps (use this tutorial or ask me)
- it's be better, if image will have 1024x768 or 800x600 dimensions
btw, good song, star
irc mod + star 
BG help and online mod. :*
[General]
*mp3 should be resized due to guidelines (consider to make it <192 Kbps).
*Increase offset of +5ms, don't forget to resnap all notes
*Disable the countdown, please!
[Normal]
00:35:339 (1) - New combo / 00:37:181 (1) Remove new combo
00:56:918 (x) - I'd add a hitcitcle here
00:58:234 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1/1 rhythm is not really enjoyable to play. I suggest you to make something like this:
01:14:023 (1,1,2,3) - Really a counfusing part for a Normal (and easier diff). Time recovery between the spinner and the next hitobjects is too short. Consider to make the spinner 1/1 shorter. Also, next three hitobjects have an atypical stack, which is not reccomended for an easier diff, so please replace them in another way. Same issue here: 02:19:550 (1,2,3)/02:27:971 (1,2,3)
01:20:339 (4,5) - Not a really good position, it may confuse a new player...
01:21:392 (1,2,3,4) - Why did you follow the instrumental voice when in the previous pattern you followed the vocal one?
01:31:655 (4,5) - Unexpected 0,50x sections. try with 0,80 or something like that, I bet it would be better Same issue here 03:31:128 (10) and othe sliders at the end
02:32:707 (2) - Spacing please
02:37:707 (1) - I reccomend a New combo when you are using some patterns with another spacing
03:26:128 (11) - Unexepected normal section, since you used slow section in the last pattern
most of these are suggestions, but since you don't have an easy diff you should follow them in my opinion.
[Insane]
02:56:655 (1)/03:03:234 (1) - New combo
01:56:655 (3) - I don't really agree with these speed changes but since you used things like this in all the map it seems that it's part of your style. Btw that's not a real problem considering that this is an Insane
Oh, also.. why don't I see black borders in Normal diff?
*mp3 should be resized due to guidelines (consider to make it <192 Kbps).
*Increase offset of +5ms, don't forget to resnap all notes
*Disable the countdown, please!
[Normal]
00:35:339 (1) - New combo / 00:37:181 (1) Remove new combo
00:56:918 (x) - I'd add a hitcitcle here
00:58:234 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1/1 rhythm is not really enjoyable to play. I suggest you to make something like this:
01:14:023 (1,1,2,3) - Really a counfusing part for a Normal (and easier diff). Time recovery between the spinner and the next hitobjects is too short. Consider to make the spinner 1/1 shorter. Also, next three hitobjects have an atypical stack, which is not reccomended for an easier diff, so please replace them in another way. Same issue here: 02:19:550 (1,2,3)/02:27:971 (1,2,3)
01:20:339 (4,5) - Not a really good position, it may confuse a new player...
01:21:392 (1,2,3,4) - Why did you follow the instrumental voice when in the previous pattern you followed the vocal one?
01:31:655 (4,5) - Unexpected 0,50x sections. try with 0,80 or something like that, I bet it would be better
Same issue here 03:31:128 (10) and othe sliders at the end02:32:707 (2) - Spacing please
02:37:707 (1) - I reccomend a New combo when you are using some patterns with another spacing
03:26:128 (11) - Unexepected normal section, since you used slow section in the last pattern
most of these are suggestions, but since you don't have an easy diff you should follow them in my opinion.
[Insane]
02:56:655 (1)/03:03:234 (1) - New combo
01:56:655 (3) - I don't really agree with these speed changes but since you used things like this in all the map it seems that it's part of your style. Btw that's not a real problem considering that this is an Insane
Oh, also.. why don't I see black borders in Normal diff?
Topic Starter
Thank you for modding Armin... I'm not on my PC at the moment, but I will fix it later.
IRC mod. IRC nazimod. This map is pretty neat. Have a star!
sam tsui <3
star 
-General-
offset: 24550
-Insane-
you always following the vocal but not following the rhythm =_= following the vocal is good, but you must following the rhythm too!
such as:
00:38:234~00:41:128 - in this part, make your rhythm like this will be better imo:
also, it's a insane diff. long slider(such as 00:51:392 (6) ) is too easy here I think. how about try this:
00:36:918 (5) - this jump looks strange ~_~
01:29:813 (5,1) - remove the to notes and add a circle at 01:29:944
-Normal-
first, check your spacing. i see many wrong spacing in this mapset.
for example: 01:18:234 (6) , 02:20:339 (4) etc.
next you need fix the random notes like the Insane diff. following the rhythm or make your own rhythm, don't following the vocal all the time.
just point out the mistakes(or my suggestions) that i have found. you'd better recheck your whole mapset, and make your map better.
good luck.
EDIT:999th post
offset: 24550
-Insane-
you always following the vocal but not following the rhythm =_= following the vocal is good, but you must following the rhythm too!
such as:
00:38:234~00:41:128 - in this part, make your rhythm like this will be better imo:
also, it's a insane diff. long slider(such as 00:51:392 (6) ) is too easy here I think. how about try this:
00:36:918 (5) - this jump looks strange ~_~
01:29:813 (5,1) - remove the to notes and add a circle at 01:29:944
-Normal-
first, check your spacing. i see many wrong spacing in this mapset.
for example: 01:18:234 (6) , 02:20:339 (4) etc.
next you need fix the random notes like the Insane diff. following the rhythm or make your own rhythm, don't following the vocal all the time.
just point out the mistakes(or my suggestions) that i have found. you'd better recheck your whole mapset, and make your map better.
good luck.
EDIT:999th post
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding, I thing my map is good, but it you decidesxierbaliti wrote:
-General-
offset: 24550 Fixed
-Insane-
you always following the vocal but not following the rhythm =_= following the vocal is good, but you must following the rhythm too!
such as:
00:38:234~00:41:128 - in this part, make your rhythm like this will be better imo: Good idea
also, it's a insane diff. long slider(such as 00:51:392 (6) ) is too easy here I think. how about try this:
00:36:918 (5) - this jump looks strange ~_~ No jump bro
01:29:813 (5,1) - remove the to notes and add a circle at 01:29:944
-Normal-
first, check your spacing. i see many wrong spacing in this mapset.
for example: 01:18:234 (6) , 02:20:339 (4) etc. FIXED
next you need fix the random notes like the Insane diff. following the rhythm or make your own rhythm, don't following the vocal all the time.
just point out the mistakes(or my suggestions) that i have found. you'd better recheck your whole mapset, and make your map better.
good luck.
EDIT:999th post
-Normal-
too hard for beginners imo, you may need a easier diff~_~
01:32:971 (5) - spacing
01:41:655 (7) - move to 01:41:392 (1/2 beats are hard to beginners)
01:42:181 (8) - move to 01:41:918
01:44:813 (3,4,5) - ^
01:49:023 (1,2) - ^
the following(1/2 beats) will be left out
02:27:971 (1,2,3) - 2 grid up
02:39:023 (4) - hard to read.
02:41:128 (1) - ^
02:43:234 (5) - ^
02:45:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
look at this picture:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/79883. i don't know which note is circle and which is slider when i'm playing.
02:54:023 (1) - spacing
-Insane-
ohh looks much better now~
00:32:181 (5) - new combo here?
00:34:550 (4) - using a slider with a repeat here like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/79862
00:38:760 (3) - 1 grid right
00:47:181 - add a note here.
00:47:444 (5) - shouldn't be start at 00:47:707? how about try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/79864 (don't look at my spacing )
00:58:497 (2) - move this note to 00:58:628 will be better imo.
01:20:865 - add a note here
01:28:497 (5) - 1 grid right
01:30:076 (1,2) - remove 2 circles and add a circle at 01:30:207 or move 01:30:076 (1) to 01:30:207
01:42:971 (1,2,3,4) - really don't like this part. at least you should remove clap from 01:43:760 (3) and add whistle.
02:02:181~02:03:760 - try this? (just suggestion) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/79878
02:22:707 (6) - move to 02:22:839?
02:26:392 (10) - don't like this jump
02:58:234 (7) - needs new combo here
03:13:234 (4) - ^
03:17:444 (1) - ^
03:41:128 (5,6) - spacing
03:43:497 (7) - remove this circle and add a slider here (end it to 03:44:023)
too hard for beginners imo, you may need a easier diff~_~
01:32:971 (5) - spacing
01:41:655 (7) - move to 01:41:392 (1/2 beats are hard to beginners)
01:42:181 (8) - move to 01:41:918
01:44:813 (3,4,5) - ^
01:49:023 (1,2) - ^
the following(1/2 beats) will be left out
02:27:971 (1,2,3) - 2 grid up
02:39:023 (4) - hard to read.
02:41:128 (1) - ^
02:43:234 (5) - ^
02:45:339 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
look at this picture:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/79883. i don't know which note is circle and which is slider when i'm playing.
02:54:023 (1) - spacing
-Insane-
ohh looks much better now~
00:32:181 (5) - new combo here?
00:34:550 (4) - using a slider with a repeat here like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/79862
00:38:760 (3) - 1 grid right
00:47:181 - add a note here.
00:47:444 (5) - shouldn't be start at 00:47:707? how about try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/79864 (don't look at my spacing
)00:58:497 (2) - move this note to 00:58:628 will be better imo.
01:20:865 - add a note here
01:28:497 (5) - 1 grid right
01:30:076 (1,2) - remove 2 circles and add a circle at 01:30:207 or move 01:30:076 (1) to 01:30:207
01:42:971 (1,2,3,4) - really don't like this part. at least you should remove clap from 01:43:760 (3) and add whistle.
02:02:181~02:03:760 - try this? (just suggestion) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/79878
02:22:707 (6) - move to 02:22:839?
02:26:392 (10) - don't like this jump
02:58:234 (7) - needs new combo here
03:13:234 (4) - ^
03:17:444 (1) - ^
03:41:128 (5,6) - spacing
03:43:497 (7) - remove this circle and add a slider here (end it to 03:44:023)
Replaced every beat for you. And you went around and fixed it. Good luck with what I ruined for you, anyway.
- wrong resultion of Background must be 4:3 (800 x 600 ~ 1024 x 768)
- not sure about title.
[Normal]
Such low AR and OD. Plays much better if use these settings: AR4, HP3, OD3, Circle Size 1.
Slow Downs on Normal, nuh, better to use 0.75x not 0.5x. I highly suggest to change, if you are going to change, don't forget to respace and all notes in that section, also check sliderlength.
00:58:234 (1,2,3) - avoid blue ticks on normal. Suggestion: Make a slider or repeat slider.
01:00:339 (5,6,7) - ^
01:06:655 (1,2,3) - ^
01:08:760 (5,6,7) - ^
01:27:707 (1,2,3) - ^
02:05:602 (3,4,5) - ^ etc.
01:25:536 - another kiai burst. For what? I don't think that this is so funny and "fire" song, so extra kiai burst dose not fit at all. remove.
02:08:497 (3) -
replace this slider, start is completely hidden.
02:20:339 - kiai mod start is not snapped perfectly. It must be perfectly on tick.
02:37:181 - ^ 1 ms off.
03:27:707 ~ 03:44:549 - useless kiai section.
[Insane]
00:26:655 (1) - heavy jump, dose not fit. Reduce please.
00:59:023 (3,4) - second slider repeat is hidden'd by "4". replace "4".
- not sure about title.
[Normal]
Such low AR and OD. Plays much better if use these settings: AR4, HP3, OD3, Circle Size 1.
Slow Downs on Normal, nuh, better to use 0.75x not 0.5x. I highly suggest to change, if you are going to change, don't forget to respace and all notes in that section, also check sliderlength.
00:58:234 (1,2,3) - avoid blue ticks on normal. Suggestion: Make a slider or repeat slider.
01:00:339 (5,6,7) - ^
01:06:655 (1,2,3) - ^
01:08:760 (5,6,7) - ^
01:27:707 (1,2,3) - ^
02:05:602 (3,4,5) - ^ etc.
01:25:536 - another kiai burst. For what? I don't think that this is so funny and "fire" song, so extra kiai burst dose not fit at all. remove.
02:08:497 (3) -
replace this slider, start is completely hidden.02:20:339 - kiai mod start is not snapped perfectly. It must be perfectly on tick.
02:37:181 - ^ 1 ms off.
03:27:707 ~ 03:44:549 - useless kiai section.
[Insane]
00:26:655 (1) - heavy jump, dose not fit. Reduce please.
00:59:023 (3,4) - second slider repeat is hidden'd by "4". replace "4".
Topic Starter
Xierbaliti's mod fixed
Louis Cyphre's mod fixed
Louis Cyphre's mod fixed
para de ponhar nome gay em diff , pqp.
Muda pra Omega x Katsuri Truth (ou omega x katsuri normal)
Muda pra Omega x Katsuri Truth (ou omega x katsuri normal)
Topic Starter
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Bubble this now!
Bubble this now!
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game
General
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game
General
- Why don't you add at least another diff ? The mapset would be a lot better...
- Your map is really very long .-.
- 00:30:865 (4,5,1) - Spacing issue: they are spaced the same way but the time gap isn't the same.
- 00:58:234 (1,2,3) - Such rhythms are quite hard to catch for new players... So you should use sliders at least a few times before using circles, so that the player gets used to the rhythm.
- 01:04:550 (4) - This slider is rather nice =o but you can make it a perfect blanket (that's very nazi of me though but I like perfection =p)
- The kiai needs more hitsounds imo... It really sounds bland right now.
- 01:27:707 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is very confusing: the spacing of the circles is very similar, but the rhythm isn't. Try using a repeat slider for the first three circles.
- 01:53:234 (1) - Nice slider again, but you can make it perfect =o (yes I'm nazi). Place a hitcircle in the center, then using 1/8 snap divisor, move the circle in the timeline so that the approach circle matches the inner border of the slider, and move the sliderpoints to make the curve perfect.
- 02:07:707 (2,3) - The idea is nice and the pattern flows well, but I really hate this overlap, it looks bad ingame...
- 02:28:365 (2) - Isn't this note misplaced ? Nothing in the song requires a beat here, it should be on the previous red tick.
- 02:36:918 (4,1) - Very bad spacing idea: I understand the slow down and stuff, but the spacing here looks like the notes are 1/2 apart, when they aren't. What you should do is space (4) and (1) normall, then replace (1,2) with a slider to show the slowdown and make the spacing after it less confusing.
- 02:40:339 (6,7,1) - Spacing issue: they are spaced the same way, but the time gap isn't the same.
- 03:13:234 (5) - Nice elbow =o
- This difficulty overuses anti-jumps (and they aren't even well placed in my opinion), so it makes the actual spacing hard to read (mainly the 1/4 - which don't make sense to the song either imo).
- Set tick rate 2 so that the speed changes are readable. (03:22:971 (1,6) - these)
- 00:32:181 (5) - A new combo to mark the spacing shift would be nice.
- 01:27:707 (3,4,5) - Confusing and unexpected anti-jumps, especially with this weird rhythm.
- 03:57:444 (4) - Add a new combo ?
Topic Starter
Odaril wrote:
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game
GeneralNormal
- Why don't you add at least another diff ? The mapset would be a lot better... Will think about it.
- Your map is really very long .-.
Thanks :3
- 00:30:865 (4,5,1) - Spacing issue: they are spaced the same way but the time gap isn't the same. Fixed
- 00:58:234 (1,2,3) - Such rhythms are quite hard to catch for new players... So you should use sliders at least a few times before using circles, so that the player gets used to the rhythm. Okay
- 01:04:550 (4) - This slider is rather nice =o but you can make it a perfect blanket (that's very nazi of me though but I like perfection =p)
- The kiai needs more hitsounds imo... It really sounds bland right now. :3
- 01:27:707 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is very confusing: the spacing of the circles is very similar, but the rhythm isn't. Try using a repeat slider for the first three circles. Fixed
- 01:53:234 (1) - Nice slider again, but you can make it perfect =o (yes I'm nazi). Place a hitcircle in the center, then using 1/8 snap divisor, move the circle in the timeline so that the approach circle matches the inner border of the slider, and move the sliderpoints to make the curve perfect. Made it!
- 02:07:707 (2,3) - The idea is nice and the pattern flows well, but I really hate this overlap, it looks bad ingame... Changed Patterns
- 02:28:365 (2) - Isn't this note misplaced ? Nothing in the song requires a beat here, it should be on the previous red tick. Okay
- 02:36:918 (4,1) - Very bad spacing idea: I understand the slow down and stuff, but the spacing here looks like the notes are 1/2 apart, when they aren't. What you should do is space (4) and (1) normall, then replace (1,2) with a slider to show the slowdown and make the spacing after it less confusing. Sorry, fixed
- 02:40:339 (6,7,1) - Spacing issue: they are spaced the same way, but the time gap isn't the same. Fixed.
- 03:13:234 (5) - Nice elbow =o
InsaneAdded :3
- This difficulty overuses anti-jumps (and they aren't even well placed in my opinion), so it makes the actual spacing hard to read (mainly the 1/4 - which don't make sense to the song either imo). Will work on it.
- Set tick rate 2 so that the speed changes are readable. (03:22:971 (1,6) - these) Okay :3
- 00:32:181 (5) - A new combo to mark the spacing shift would be nice. Added
- 01:27:707 (3,4,5) - Confusing and unexpected anti-jumps, especially with this weird rhythm. LOL, fixed.
- 03:57:444 (4) - Add a new combo ?
This map needs some more work. It's not there yet, but it can become a good map with enough mods. Keep trying ! I'll double check it, learned more patterns, will apply on my map! Thanks Odaril.
Good Song. Star
General
Your map is really very long
OMG Don't ever look back <3
Truth
00:30:865(start)> 00:31:918(end)
00:35:339 > move to>00:35:076
00:35:865 > move >00:35:602
00:36:128 > Circle here ?
00:43:760 > move >00:43:497
00:44:286 > Move >00:44:023
00:44:550 > Circle here.
01:58:248 > Circle here
02:49:550 > I dont like slider :S
02:56:128 > Circle here
Sorry Im bored cuz very long map
Star
Your map is really very long
OMG Don't ever look back <3Truth
00:30:865(start)> 00:31:918(end)
00:35:339 > move to>00:35:076
00:35:865 > move >00:35:602
00:36:128 > Circle here ?
00:43:760 > move >00:43:497
00:44:286 > Move >00:44:023
00:44:550 > Circle here.
01:58:248 > Circle here
02:49:550 > I dont like slider :S
02:56:128 > Circle here
Sorry Im bored cuz very long map
Star
Topic Starter
NoHellDawn wrote:
General
Your map is really very long
Truth
00:30:865(start)> 00:31:918(end)
00:35:339 > move to>00:35:076
00:35:865 > move >00:35:865
00:36:128 > Circle here ?
00:43:760 > move >00:43:497
00:44:286 > Move >00:44:023
00:44:550 > Circle here.
01:58:248 > Circle here
02:49:550 > I dont like slider :S
02:56:128 > Circle here
Sorry Im bored cuz very long map
Star
Hi, and sorry for the delay
Lie - Insane
I think you overused slow downs. While playing I was totally lost due to this. I dont really like them >:
00:59:023 (3,4) - doesn't match with the music, what about something like this: http://puu.sh/2rWo
01:33:234 (2,3,4,5) - How about stack each pair?
01:40:602 (5) - it would be good if you add new combo here
01:50:865 (1,2,3,4) - (1,2,3) - messy combo there, perhaps you could find better positions for those sliders.
01:54:286 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - I think this should be in the same combo
01:58:497 (4,5,6,1,2) - same here
02:00:865 (3) - is confusing when you use slow downs like this, cuz the length and shape of the slider is exactly the same of previous sliders that are in normal velocity. To make a slow down more predictable you can either add a new combo and change the shape of the slider, or do both for better results ^^
02:23:497 (9,1) - this jump doesn't fits, it would fit if you jump from here: 02:23:234 to here: 02:23:497, listen to the song and you will understand why.
02:56:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest to keep consistence in distance here, a jump from this combo to the other could be great thou ^^
Remove the kiai from break time
04:10:865 - 04:19:286 - I think you should have follow the main voice in this part, not the BG voice
fun map <33
Truth - Normal
00:30:865 (4) - end in next white tick?
00:35:339 (1,2) - doesn't really fit well with the music in my opinion, move it half beat later
00:43:760 (1,2) - same here
01:20:602 (1) - the start point of this slider doesn't match with the music, I missed it ;_;
01:44:813 (2) - same ><
02:00:865 (5) - the end of the slider doesn't match the song >:
02:03:497 (1,2) - why not do here, what you did here: 02:14:023 (6) - fits a lot better
02:17:707 - add note?
02:29:550 (4) - fix the spacing there, it noticeable while playing
02:41:128 (1) - wrong distance, should be closer, I totally messed up there
02:43:234 (5) - same
03:08:497 (5,6,7) - spinner till: 03:10:339? :3
04:14:550 (1) - too close from prev note, look at time line, it should be farther
False - Easy
02:17:444 (3,4,5,6) - confusing pattern for an easy
01:29:813 (5,6) - move half beat later, i think sounds better, same for the other like this
02:26:392 (7) - move to next white tick? do this for all cases like this
02:37:181 (1) - not sure about this with x0.5 velocity ;_; is endless @.@ I was like: please end!!
04:14:549 (4,1,2) - 4 should be in the same combo with 1 and 2
Also what's up with the difficulties name? why not just False, Truth and Lie, and specified in the main post which one is what~~ ><
cya~~
Lie - Insane
I think you overused slow downs. While playing I was totally lost due to this. I dont really like them >:
00:59:023 (3,4) - doesn't match with the music, what about something like this: http://puu.sh/2rWo
01:33:234 (2,3,4,5) - How about stack each pair?
01:40:602 (5) - it would be good if you add new combo here
01:50:865 (1,2,3,4) - (1,2,3) - messy combo there, perhaps you could find better positions for those sliders.
01:54:286 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - I think this should be in the same combo
01:58:497 (4,5,6,1,2) - same here
02:00:865 (3) - is confusing when you use slow downs like this, cuz the length and shape of the slider is exactly the same of previous sliders that are in normal velocity. To make a slow down more predictable you can either add a new combo and change the shape of the slider, or do both for better results ^^
02:23:497 (9,1) - this jump doesn't fits, it would fit if you jump from here: 02:23:234 to here: 02:23:497, listen to the song and you will understand why.
02:56:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest to keep consistence in distance here, a jump from this combo to the other could be great thou ^^
Remove the kiai from break time
04:10:865 - 04:19:286 - I think you should have follow the main voice in this part, not the BG voice
fun map <33
Truth - Normal
00:30:865 (4) - end in next white tick?
00:35:339 (1,2) - doesn't really fit well with the music in my opinion, move it half beat later
00:43:760 (1,2) - same here
01:20:602 (1) - the start point of this slider doesn't match with the music, I missed it ;_;
01:44:813 (2) - same ><
02:00:865 (5) - the end of the slider doesn't match the song >:
02:03:497 (1,2) - why not do here, what you did here: 02:14:023 (6) - fits a lot better
02:17:707 - add note?
02:29:550 (4) - fix the spacing there, it noticeable while playing
02:41:128 (1) - wrong distance, should be closer, I totally messed up there
02:43:234 (5) - same
03:08:497 (5,6,7) - spinner till: 03:10:339? :3
04:14:550 (1) - too close from prev note, look at time line, it should be farther
False - Easy
02:17:444 (3,4,5,6) - confusing pattern for an easy
01:29:813 (5,6) - move half beat later, i think sounds better, same for the other like this
02:26:392 (7) - move to next white tick? do this for all cases like this
02:37:181 (1) - not sure about this with x0.5 velocity ;_; is endless @.@ I was like: please end!!
04:14:549 (4,1,2) - 4 should be in the same combo with 1 and 2
Also what's up with the difficulties name? why not just False, Truth and Lie, and specified in the main post which one is what~~ ><
cya~~
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