Well, first of all, cute bg <3~ And whoa, take all those things as suggestions. Sorry for mentioning some stuff that are just obvious for you, buut maybe you forgot about them, so ><)
[General]
Hmm.. Wasn't your Easy mapped by CDFA? His nickname is missing on tags D:
And shouldn't there be an epilepsy warning? D: This sb is kinda.. really flashy. ><
[CDFRAVE]
00:49:734 (3) - new combo? to me it sounds like the rhythm changes >_<
00:52:477 (1) - ^
01:07:562 (1) - ^
01:46:991 (1) - making it like this http://puu.sh/1n5w sounds better imo D:
01:49:391 (x) - if you changed the last suggestion, consider placing a note here
02:04:134 (2) - i think like this http://puu.sh/1n5K it'd sound better
02:05:848 (x) - if you changed last suggestion, consider placing a note here
[BUBBLEGUM RAVE!]
00:40:477 (x) - add a note here? sounds a little weird to me without it D:
01:22:991 (5) - new combo?
01:46:991 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - all this notes sounds so.. off to me o3o but i'm probably only paranoid XD
02:23:334 (4) - changing this normal beat to a slider that finishes at 02:23:505 sounds better imo (or adding a note at the time the slider would end)
[LILYPOPRAVE!]
Hmm.. I guess this was supposed to be a Hard diff, right? D: If that's the case, wouldn't it be better to raise a little HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty?
And well, I guess this diff isn't over yet XD If you want me to check it when it's finished just call me
[CANDYRAVE!]
00:09:448 (1) - ohwell.. this is really reeeeally only a suggestion D: but i think this shape for this slider would look better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/71198
01:58:305 (2) - new combo?
02:44:934 (1) - hmm.. personally i'd remove this last spinner and keep only the previous one D: somehow i get the feeling that people while playing would stop playing on that one, missing this last D: well, up to you anyways ^^
I hope it's useful for you >_<" And well, now I guess I can see why people don't mod your maps anymore. There isn't much wrong on them. XD Nice job here ^-^~
[General]
Hmm.. Wasn't your Easy mapped by CDFA? His nickname is missing on tags D:
And shouldn't there be an epilepsy warning? D: This sb is kinda.. really flashy. ><
[CDFRAVE]
00:49:734 (3) - new combo? to me it sounds like the rhythm changes >_<
00:52:477 (1) - ^
01:07:562 (1) - ^
01:46:991 (1) - making it like this http://puu.sh/1n5w sounds better imo D:
01:49:391 (x) - if you changed the last suggestion, consider placing a note here
02:04:134 (2) - i think like this http://puu.sh/1n5K it'd sound better
02:05:848 (x) - if you changed last suggestion, consider placing a note here
[BUBBLEGUM RAVE!]
00:40:477 (x) - add a note here? sounds a little weird to me without it D:
01:22:991 (5) - new combo?
01:46:991 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - all this notes sounds so.. off to me o3o but i'm probably only paranoid XD
02:23:334 (4) - changing this normal beat to a slider that finishes at 02:23:505 sounds better imo (or adding a note at the time the slider would end)
[LILYPOPRAVE!]
Hmm.. I guess this was supposed to be a Hard diff, right? D: If that's the case, wouldn't it be better to raise a little HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty?
And well, I guess this diff isn't over yet XD If you want me to check it when it's finished just call me
[CANDYRAVE!]
00:09:448 (1) - ohwell.. this is really reeeeally only a suggestion D: but i think this shape for this slider would look better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/71198
01:58:305 (2) - new combo?
02:44:934 (1) - hmm.. personally i'd remove this last spinner and keep only the previous one D: somehow i get the feeling that people while playing would stop playing on that one, missing this last D: well, up to you anyways ^^
I hope it's useful for you >_<" And well, now I guess I can see why people don't mod your maps anymore. There isn't much wrong on them. XD Nice job here ^-^~