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Nishizawa Ayumu (CV: Takahashi Mikako) - Kimi Fan

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bossandy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2019年9月2日 at 下午 06:22:01

Artist: Nishizawa Ayumu (CV: Takahashi Mikako)
Title: Kimi Fan
Source: ハヤテのごとく!!
Tags: Hayate no Gotoku 2nd season hayate no combat butler ms0543724 Empao Kyle Y Kyle_Y Japanese Anime Character Song Short Version
BPM: 177
Filesize: 3801kb
Play Time: 02:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.9 stars, 166 notes)
  2. EmPao's Hard (3.37 stars, 348 notes)
  3. Insane (4.33 stars, 355 notes)
  4. Ky's Normal (2.21 stars, 246 notes)
Download: Nishizawa Ayumu (CV: Takahashi Mikako) - Kimi Fan
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy by me
Ky's Normal by Kyle Y
EmPao's Hard by EmPao
Insane by me
Hitsounds 100% by me

Remap after 8 years POG
Uan
老大!!GO!!
Hellzero
Little mod
Insane
Distance snap 1,0x? or 1,1? I can't understand :(
00:09:851 (4) - 1 grid right and 4 down
00:07:818 (6,7) - spacing
00:11:206 (9) - 1 grid down
00:19:342 (2) - ugly slider
00:22:054 (2,3,4) - ^
00:33:071 (1,2,3,4) - spacing (i don't know what distance snap you use plz recheck all map)
00:39:173 (1,2) - - may be like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/63136
00:44:596 (1,2) - ^
00:45:952 (3,4) - ^
01:29:003 (8) - try move this note under slider (5)
01:50:359 (7) - ^ (4)
02:49:851 (8) - 1 grid down
03:15:783 (5) - move under (2)
03:16:122 (6) - ^ (3)
03:16:461 (7) - symmetrically of (2)

Recheck spacing and maybe give sliders more sweet form.
I like Hayate no gotoku :3 star~
When you finish map send me PM I will recheck :3
Allen
GOOD SONG!!
STAR~
Komeiji Yuki
✰⡓⡓⡢⡥⡶⡶⠗⠒⠂(פ'д 'פ) <shoot
Berncastell
star
Nagae-Iku
star :)
MisakaMikoto
star 8-)
Keroze
star ~ :P
AnikiG4
8-)
MoeCirno
=3=
Muffy
Star
yut_old

bossandy wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年3月6日 at 下午 11:08:52

Artist: Ayumu Nishizawa
Title: Kimi fuan
Source: Hayate the combat butler 2nd Season
BPM: 177
Filesize: 5673kb
Play Time: 04:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.93 stars, 569 notes)
  2. Normal (3.19 stars, 163 notes)
Download: Ayumu Nishizawa - Kimi fuan
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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It's a good song~ enjoy~
Normal 56.4%
Insane 100%
Taiko Help me!!!!
sunny day
star~
madaoB
STAR~ :D
Selee
猪猪太善良了 接了mod于是我来mod...

[General]

  • Artist: Mikako Takahashi
    Title: Kimi Fan (Use viewtopic.php?f=25&t=33919 to change title and artist)
    Source: Hayate no Gotoku Season 2
    Tags: add "Ayumu Nishizawa Character Song" "the combat butler"

    Offset: 529 (It would be the same as yours, but since the song start here...I think it's a better offset to choose.)

    You need a preview point (Timing--Set current position as Preview point)

    spinner-circle.png resize to 666*666? (otherwise it would exceed the boundary)

[Normal]

Volume +10%? I can't hear the hitsounds..

  • 00:08:665~00:17:987 (T) - I really don't like the way you silence slider tick..Could you change to normal-slidertick2.wav to a soft-slidertick or something like that?
    00:16:130 (4,5) - remove 5 and extend 4 for 1/2 beat..
    00:33:410 (1) - Clap end is a lot better than begin due to the vocal
    00:54:597 (1) - Shorten 1/1 beat? Also...add finish?
    01:23:071 (5) - hmm, I suggest to not follow vocal here...move 1/2 beat forward?
    01:56:461 (8) - Try rhythm like this?
    02:26:970 (2,3) - Stacking (Use 0.0x spacing and disable grid snap)
    02:35:783 (3) - it touches the HP bar...rearrange like this?
    02:44:427 (1) - Finish?
    02:45:953 (1,2) - ..don't use 1/4 beats like this..it would be really hard for normal players to hit 02:46:631 (2) properly if you use a 1/4 beats slider before...Try this?
[Insane]

Follow too much vocal imo..so I really feel kinda overmapped...

  • 00:47:986 (5,6) - Stacking
    00:53:410 (1) - Shorten 1/1 beat?
    01:10:953 (X) - add a note?
    01:26:884 (3) - Delete?
    01:30:020 (9) - New combo
    01:54:427 (5,1) - Stacking
    02:09:342 (3) - new combo
    02:32:054 (3,4) - Spacing
    02:46:037 (X) - add a note?
    03:43:580 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Disable grid snap..then arrange these..
    03:45:275 (X) - add a note here!
    03:47:987 (X) - ^
    03:59:851 (1) - Shorten 1/2 beat and move 1/2 beat forward?
    04:08:665 (9) - New combo?
Not bad overall~Star
Inamaru
Nice :D
star~
soulfear
star
tsuka
normal:
00:33:410 (1) - remove clap and add the clap on the end of slider
00:34:088 (2) - no clap

Insane:
00:38:495 (6) - newcombo
00:38:834 (7) - use finish instead of whistle as 03:19:851 (1) -
01:30:020 (1) - newcombo
04:08:665 (1) - ^
03:30:698 (1) - add a circle on it
03:38:834 (9) - ^

General:
delete the .osb file in the folder
you forgot to set preview time (first find out a timing point which your favorite then Timing -> set current position as preview time point on all diffi)


good map
think about to building a new diffi below 3.00 star as easy if you purpose to rank
LKs
i have looked through this map, surely not bad one
as what tsuka said: make one or some more easier diff as an easy for an appropriate diff arrangement

be careful of spacing, do your best to make them more accurate
Topic Starter
bossandy
各位大大~用中文回我好嗎?
我英文不是很好>_<
DeadAlready
[General]

觸卡說要加preview point 我看你的主帖已經說謝謝mod好像也上傳過了 可是還是沒有preview point...?
是忘記加/看不懂/不知道preview point是什麼嗎?xD
如果是最後一個的話看這個:
SPOILER
preview point就是你在選歌列表的時候 選到這首歌便會從這首歌的preview point開始播放 沒設的話預設是40%處
也是網頁上的試聽播放點設置處. 移到你想要放preview point的時間點按這張圖上的那個選項就好了xD

可以的話作一個3星以下的難度吧 3.42星雖然不是絕對不能rank 但是有風險:

[Normal]

insane的countdown有關掉 可是normal卻沒有?
統一一下吧 如果我建議的話我覺得兩個難度都關掉比較好xD

00:18:156~00:27:647(break) & 02:08:834~02:17:478(break) -
之前上面有說了可以的話作星數更少的難度 你也可以考慮把這些break拿掉譜出一些節奏比較疏的pattern
這樣星星就會變比較少xD


.__. 大概這樣而已吧 我也沒看到什麼東西好挑的...(而且三個裡還有兩個是上面講過的囧)
star~
Selee
翻译.别kds

上面的artist title应该看懂了吧 =w=

恩 Offset 529..是因为歌从那里开始 而且你现在的话 是有note在offset之前.. 虽然是小问题 改了更好

Preview Point..就是点中你歌曲开始自动播放的地方..用Edit里面的Timing菜单的最后一项添加

Spinner Circle..666*666的原因是..比这个大的话就超过转圈的边界了 有人会挑

[Normal]

总体音效+10%? 似乎有些小

不是很喜欢你给tick静音的方法..把那个tick换到soft之类的? 这样要有声tick时换下soft来打

00:16:130 (4,5) - remove 5 and extend 4 for 1/2 beat..
删5 给4拉长1/2 ?
00:33:410 (1) - Clap end is a lot better than begin due to the vocal
Clap尾 似乎要好听一些..(别提24
00:54:597 (1) - Shorten 1/1 beat? Also...add finish?
加个finish再减少1拍?
01:23:071 (5) - hmm, I suggest to not follow vocal here...move 1/2 beat forward?
我建议在这别跟人声 拉长1/2?
01:56:461 (8) - Try rhythm like this?
试试这样的节奏? 链接在原帖
02:26:970 (2,3) - Stacking (Use 0.0x spacing and disable grid snap)
叠加问题..没叠好..关了grid snap之后用0.0x的距离来叠
02:35:783 (3) - it touches the HP bar...rearrange like this?
太高了..碰到HP棒了...像这样重新摆一下?
02:44:427 (1) - Finish?
Finish?
02:45:953 (1,2) - ..don't use 1/4 beats like this..it would be really hard for normal players to hit 02:46:631 (2) properly if you use a 1/4 beats slider before...Try this?
别这样用1/4的滑杠..对于Normal难度玩家很难连..试试这样的节奏 ?

[Insane]

跟太多人声了..有时候按节奏来下会好一些

00:47:986 (5,6) - Stacking
叠加问题..
00:53:410 (1) - Shorten 1/1 beat?
减少1/1拍?
01:10:953 (X) - add a note?
加个note?
01:26:884 (3) - Delete?
删?
01:30:020 (9) - New combo
New combo? 按Q你就明白了
01:54:427 (5,1) - Stacking
叠加
02:09:342 (3) - new combo
02:32:054 (3,4) - Spacing
距离
02:46:037 (X) - add a note?
加个note?
03:43:580 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Disable grid snap..then arrange these..
关了grid snap再来摆..间距都不同
03:45:275 (X) - add a note here!
加个note!
03:47:987 (X) - ^
同上
03:59:851 (1) - Shorten 1/2 beat and move 1/2 beat forward?
减少1/2拍 然后往前挪1/2拍?
04:08:665 (9) - New combo?
按下Q..new combo

Not bad overall~Star
总体来说不差~ 给星

怎么说呢..这里作图是必须要学些英文的..毕竟要个一些说英语的玩家交流..
其实百度一下再想想都能明白...╮(╯▽╰)╭

加油咯

如果我的mod有帮助的话 希望你能评下分 ↓ =w=
Firce777
gdeath
[Normal]
00:19:173 --->> 00:29:427 和insane同样的建议
00:33:410 (5) - new combo

[Insane]
00:19:173 --->> 00:29:427 感觉这个部分用soft会比较好,音效的drum用soft-whistle或者normal-hit.
00:51:884 (6) - new combo (最好不要把combo超过13为好,除了stream以外)
01:14:088 (1) - remove new combo
01:14:427 (2) - new combo
01:19:173 (1) - remove new combo (单独一个slider用new combo感觉有点不和谐x.x)
01:55:613 (6) - new combo
02:50:020 (1) - remove new combo
02:50:698 (2) - new combo (用new combo为了高亮这个蓝线节奏, 让玩家更容易分清这里节奏的变化)

/me shoots a star.
Topic Starter
bossandy
謝謝各位的mod或star!
我會繼續加油的!!
Topic Starter
bossandy
All fixed~ Thx everyone ^_^
ZHSteven
nice map~
some parts of the rhythm is a little..weird, but i think it doesnt matter~
star~
yongtw123
Keep poking me XDDD

Overall
三大點
1.音效
SPOILER
整體都不錯就只差音效
這clap下的有些亂
我拿[Normal]來說
00:10:020 (3) - 要clpa的應該是slidertick而不是結尾
簡單說 如果要"有規律"的下clap 通常是第二和第四白線穩定的下
要不然聽起來不自然
再舉個例子: 01:28:665 (3) - 這就對了

另外[Insane]所用的音效組合和[Normal]不太一樣
甚至音量都有差
建議兩個難度都調整為一樣的
(我比喜歡[Normal]的)

在你修完音效之前我這次掀不會看音效
I won't be modding hitsound this time until next time you fixed it.
2.難度分配
SPOILER
最簡單的難度3點多顆星
規則裡面有一條是最簡單的難度必須低於三顆星
(除非你有超棒的理由超過)

我是建議將[Normal]下修
然後加個中繼難度
3.Skin
SPOILER
要不要來個專屬的spinner background?
目前雖然是和BG一樣 但是位置有點微妙不同看起來就...(略

另外
pause-overlay 和 fail-background的比例不太正確
都瘦瘦的

[Normal]
00:16:122 (4,5,6) - spacing錯了很明顯喔
00:30:698 (1) - 這combo太長了 適時加new combo吧
01:08:665 (1) - ^
01:23:240 (5,6) - 最好別這樣擺 對初學玩家太tricky了
01:56:461 (8) - 算是個小jump...應該ok吧@@
02:09:342 (1) - 呃 這邊開始用soft音效好點吧?
02:35:783 (3) - 這真的有點太上面了...

[Firce777's Taiko Oni!!!]
雖然我沒玩太鼓所以也不能說什麼
但是我覺得連打太多了...節奏感不佳@@

[Insane]
00:29:003 (10) - new combo? (另外要不要從這裡就開始x1.2BPM?
00:30:359 (1) - combo好長
00:33:071 (1) - ^
00:58:156 (4) - new combo? (請適時加new combo... 這mod我不重複了 後面自己判斷吧~)
01:56:800 (5,6,7,8) - 唔哇聽起來...(ry
01:59:681 (8,9) - ^
02:37:817 (7) - 離(6)太近了!
02:58:495 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 這邊跟歌詞我覺得好點...
03:27:986 (1,1) - 我是建議去掉這兩個break, 要不然就到song setup--> 勾掉letterbox during breaks
03:47:986 (2) - 之前在slider底下的都是1/8音, 現在出現1/16會混淆

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我覺得還差一些
所以給星就等之後囉~
加油!
Topic Starter
bossandy
謝啦~yongtw123~
wmfchris
[general]
-Preview time not unique.
-audio lead-in of taiko diff +500
-BG image @ 1023*767, though it's a bit nazi, but it's highly recommended to change into 1024*768
-failed- image in wrong resolution

[Taiko]
...
D:
-I think it's too streamful. The whole song remains the 1/2 beat only, so it's absolutely not suitable to put soooo many 1/4 inside. (so of them don't even fit the music)
-Maybe mainly 1/2 is better.
-A big difficulty gap from (taiko mode of) Insane from this one...
-End this with the same time as Insane (04:08)?

Not going to mod this in detail, plx remake them a bit then ask for recheck? :3
kanpakyin
I won't mod the W.I.P map
PM me when you move to pending.
gowww
8-)
Orange
star~
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