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Nishizawa Ayumu (CV: Takahashi Mikako) - Kimi Fan

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bossandy
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2019年9月2日 at 下午 06:22:01

Artist: Nishizawa Ayumu (CV: Takahashi Mikako)
Title: Kimi Fan
Source: ハヤテのごとく！！
Tags: Hayate no Gotoku 2nd season hayate no combat butler ms0543724 Empao Kyle Y Kyle_Y Japanese Anime Character Song Short Version
BPM: 177
Filesize: 3801kb
Play Time: 02:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.9 stars, 166 notes)
  2. EmPao's Hard (3.37 stars, 348 notes)
  3. Insane (4.33 stars, 355 notes)
  4. Ky's Normal (2.21 stars, 246 notes)
Download: Nishizawa Ayumu (CV: Takahashi Mikako) - Kimi Fan
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy by me
Ky's Normal by Kyle Y
EmPao's Hard by EmPao
Insane by me
Hitsounds 100% by me

Remap after 8 years POG
Last edited by bossandy , edited 88 times in total.
Uan
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Uan
老大!!GO!!
Hellzero
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Hellzero
Little mod
Insane
Distance snap 1,0x? or 1,1? I can't understand :(
00:09:851 (4) - 1 grid right and 4 down
00:07:818 (6,7) - spacing
00:11:206 (9) - 1 grid down
00:19:342 (2) - ugly slider
00:22:054 (2,3,4) - ^
00:33:071 (1,2,3,4) - spacing (i don't know what distance snap you use plz recheck all map)
00:39:173 (1,2) - - may be like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/63136
00:44:596 (1,2) - ^
00:45:952 (3,4) - ^
01:29:003 (8) - try move this note under slider (5)
01:50:359 (7) - ^ (4)
02:49:851 (8) - 1 grid down
03:15:783 (5) - move under (2)
03:16:122 (6) - ^ (3)
03:16:461 (7) - symmetrically of (2)

Recheck spacing and maybe give sliders more sweet form.
I like Hayate no gotoku :3 star~
When you finish map send me PM I will recheck :3
Allen
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Allen
GOOD SONG!!
STAR~
Komeiji Yuki
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Komeiji Yuki
✰⡓⡓⡢⡥⡶⡶⠗⠒⠂(פ'д 'פ) <shoot
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Berncastell
star
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Nagae-Iku
star :)
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MisakaMikoto
star 8-)
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Keroze
star ~ :P
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8-)
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MoeCirno
=3=
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yut_old

bossandy wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年3月6日 at 下午 11:08:52

Artist: Ayumu Nishizawa
Title: Kimi fuan
Source: Hayate the combat butler 2nd Season
BPM: 177
Filesize: 5673kb
Play Time: 04:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4.93 stars, 569 notes)
  2. Normal (3.19 stars, 163 notes)
Download: Ayumu Nishizawa - Kimi fuan
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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It's a good song~ enjoy~
Normal 56.4%
Insane 100%
Taiko Help me!!!!
sunny day
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sunny day
star~
madaoB
madaoB
STAR~ :D
Selee
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Selee
猪猪太善良了 接了mod于是我来mod...

[General]

  • Artist: Mikako Takahashi
    Title: Kimi Fan (Use viewtopic.php?f=25&t=33919 to change title and artist)
    Source: Hayate no Gotoku Season 2
    Tags: add "Ayumu Nishizawa Character Song" "the combat butler"

    Offset: 529 (It would be the same as yours, but since the song start here...I think it's a better offset to choose.)

    You need a preview point (Timing--Set current position as Preview point)

    spinner-circle.png resize to 666*666? (otherwise it would exceed the boundary)

    spinner circle
[Normal]

Volume +10%? I can't hear the hitsounds..

  • 00:08:665~00:17:987 (T) - I really don't like the way you silence slider tick..Could you change to normal-slidertick2.wav to a soft-slidertick or something like that?
    00:16:130 (4,5) - remove 5 and extend 4 for 1/2 beat..
    00:33:410 (1) - Clap end is a lot better than begin due to the vocal
    00:54:597 (1) - Shorten 1/1 beat? Also...add finish?
    01:23:071 (5) - hmm, I suggest to not follow vocal here...move 1/2 beat forward?
    01:56:461 (8) - Try rhythm like this?
    02:26:970 (2,3) - Stacking (Use 0.0x spacing and disable grid snap)
    02:35:783 (3) - it touches the HP bar...rearrange like this?
    02:44:427 (1) - Finish?
    02:45:953 (1,2) - ..don't use 1/4 beats like this..it would be really hard for normal players to hit 02:46:631 (2) properly if you use a 1/4 beats slider before...Try this?
[Insane]

Follow too much vocal imo..so I really feel kinda overmapped...

  • 00:47:986 (5,6) - Stacking
    00:53:410 (1) - Shorten 1/1 beat?
    01:10:953 (X) - add a note?
    01:26:884 (3) - Delete?
    01:30:020 (9) - New combo
    01:54:427 (5,1) - Stacking
    02:09:342 (3) - new combo
    02:32:054 (3,4) - Spacing
    02:46:037 (X) - add a note?
    03:43:580 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Disable grid snap..then arrange these..
    03:45:275 (X) - add a note here!
    03:47:987 (X) - ^
    03:59:851 (1) - Shorten 1/2 beat and move 1/2 beat forward?
    04:08:665 (9) - New combo?
Not bad overall~Star
Inamaru
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Inamaru
Nice :D
star~
soulfear
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soulfear
star
tsuka
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tsuka
normal:
00:33:410 (1) - remove clap and add the clap on the end of slider
00:34:088 (2) - no clap

Insane:
00:38:495 (6) - newcombo
00:38:834 (7) - use finish instead of whistle as 03:19:851 (1) -
01:30:020 (1) - newcombo
04:08:665 (1) - ^
03:30:698 (1) - add a circle on it
03:38:834 (9) - ^

General:
delete the .osb file in the folder
you forgot to set preview time (first find out a timing point which your favorite then Timing -> set current position as preview time point on all diffi)

good map
think about to building a new diffi below 3.00 star as easy if you purpose to rank
LKs
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LKs
i have looked through this map, surely not bad one
as what tsuka said: make one or some more easier diff as an easy for an appropriate diff arrangement

be careful of spacing, do your best to make them more accurate
bossandy
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bossandy
各位大大~用中文回我好嗎?
我英文不是很好>_<
DeadAlready
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DeadAlready
[General]

觸卡說要加preview point 我看你的主帖已經說謝謝mod好像也上傳過了 可是還是沒有preview point...?
是忘記加/看不懂/不知道preview point是什麼嗎?xD
如果是最後一個的話看這個:
SPOILER
preview point就是你在選歌列表的時候 選到這首歌便會從這首歌的preview point開始播放 沒設的話預設是40%處
也是網頁上的試聽播放點設置處. 移到你想要放preview point的時間點按這張圖上的那個選項就好了xD

可以的話作一個3星以下的難度吧 3.42星雖然不是絕對不能rank 但是有風險:

[Normal]

insane的countdown有關掉 可是normal卻沒有?
統一一下吧 如果我建議的話我覺得兩個難度都關掉比較好xD

00:18:156~00:27:647(break) & 02:08:834~02:17:478(break) -
之前上面有說了可以的話作星數更少的難度 你也可以考慮把這些break拿掉譜出一些節奏比較疏的pattern
這樣星星就會變比較少xD


.__. 大概這樣而已吧 我也沒看到什麼東西好挑的...(而且三個裡還有兩個是上面講過的囧)
star~
Selee
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Selee
翻译.别kds

上面的artist title应该看懂了吧 =w=

恩 Offset 529..是因为歌从那里开始 而且你现在的话 是有note在offset之前.. 虽然是小问题 改了更好

Preview Point..就是点中你歌曲开始自动播放的地方..用Edit里面的Timing菜单的最后一项添加

Spinner Circle..666*666的原因是..比这个大的话就超过转圈的边界了 有人会挑

[Normal]

总体音效+10%? 似乎有些小

不是很喜欢你给tick静音的方法..把那个tick换到soft之类的? 这样要有声tick时换下soft来打

00:16:130 (4,5) - remove 5 and extend 4 for 1/2 beat..
删5 给4拉长1/2 ?
00:33:410 (1) - Clap end is a lot better than begin due to the vocal
Clap尾 似乎要好听一些..(别提24
00:54:597 (1) - Shorten 1/1 beat? Also...add finish?
加个finish再减少1拍?
01:23:071 (5) - hmm, I suggest to not follow vocal here...move 1/2 beat forward?
我建议在这别跟人声 拉长1/2?
01:56:461 (8) - Try rhythm like this?
试试这样的节奏? 链接在原帖
02:26:970 (2,3) - Stacking (Use 0.0x spacing and disable grid snap)
叠加问题..没叠好..关了grid snap之后用0.0x的距离来叠
02:35:783 (3) - it touches the HP bar...rearrange like this?
太高了..碰到HP棒了...像这样重新摆一下?
02:44:427 (1) - Finish?
Finish?
02:45:953 (1,2) - ..don't use 1/4 beats like this..it would be really hard for normal players to hit 02:46:631 (2) properly if you use a 1/4 beats slider before...Try this?
别这样用1/4的滑杠..对于Normal难度玩家很难连..试试这样的节奏 ?

[Insane]

跟太多人声了..有时候按节奏来下会好一些

00:47:986 (5,6) - Stacking
叠加问题..
00:53:410 (1) - Shorten 1/1 beat?
减少1/1拍?
01:10:953 (X) - add a note?
加个note?
01:26:884 (3) - Delete?
删?
01:30:020 (9) - New combo
New combo? 按Q你就明白了
01:54:427 (5,1) - Stacking
叠加
02:09:342 (3) - new combo
02:32:054 (3,4) - Spacing
距离
02:46:037 (X) - add a note?
加个note?
03:43:580 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Disable grid snap..then arrange these..
关了grid snap再来摆..间距都不同
03:45:275 (X) - add a note here!
加个note!
03:47:987 (X) - ^
同上
03:59:851 (1) - Shorten 1/2 beat and move 1/2 beat forward?
减少1/2拍 然后往前挪1/2拍?
04:08:665 (9) - New combo?
按下Q..new combo

Not bad overall~Star
总体来说不差~ 给星

怎么说呢..这里作图是必须要学些英文的..毕竟要个一些说英语的玩家交流..
其实百度一下再想想都能明白...╮(╯▽╰)╭

加油咯

如果我的mod有帮助的话 希望你能评下分 ↓ =w=
Firce777
Elite Mapper
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Firce777
太鼓完成~ :)
順便給個星

Download: Mikako Takahashi - Kimi Fan (bossandy) [Firce777's Taiko].osu
gdeath
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gdeath
[Normal]
00:19:173 --->> 00:29:427 和insane同样的建议
00:33:410 (5) - new combo

[Insane]
00:19:173 --->> 00:29:427 感觉这个部分用soft会比较好，音效的drum用soft-whistle或者normal-hit.
00:51:884 (6) - new combo (最好不要把combo超过13为好，除了stream以外)
01:14:088 (1) - remove new combo
01:14:427 (2) - new combo
01:19:173 (1) - remove new combo (单独一个slider用new combo感觉有点不和谐x.x)
01:55:613 (6) - new combo
02:50:020 (1) - remove new combo
02:50:698 (2) - new combo (用new combo为了高亮这个蓝线节奏, 让玩家更容易分清这里节奏的变化)

/me shoots a star.
bossandy
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bossandy
謝謝各位的mod或star!
我會繼續加油的!!
bossandy
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bossandy
All fixed~ Thx everyone ^_^
ZHSteven
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ZHSteven
nice map~
some parts of the rhythm is a little..weird, but i think it doesnt matter~
star~
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