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*Storyboard elements cannot be over 800x600. But actually, since this is full-screen, you could size it down to around 640x480. (Since the image is square, just get the height below 600 or 480 when cropping).
*Also, the scaling at 01:05:670 could be a bit bigger (and perhaps with a fade). Right now it just seems a bit rushed/quick.
General Advice
*Kiai should be consistent throughout your difficulties. It's alright if a guest diff is different, but at least keep your own the same.
*Why is there a 1 second audio lead-in? The intro of the map is already long enough without it. oxo
*lennox's name should be in the tags for all difficulties.
*nico douga tags aren't needed since they're part of the artist.
*You have a bit of a jump in difficulty between Easy and Hard. I suggest adding a Normal to fill in the gap.
*Kiai should start on 00:34:170 (in the difficulties that have kiai here) instead of the blue tick.
*Kiai should start on 01:06:170 instead of a white (or blue) tick before it.
*Actually, a general guideline is one kiai toggle per minute of beatmap length. So, if you have ~2 minute song, then ~2 kiai toggles should be enough. However, there are between 3 and 6 on each difficulty. Try to find 2 or three nice sections for the song and place kiai there instead of randomly spread around (an extra fountain at the end might be alright, too).
Easy:
*Why is the offset different from the other diffs?
*I recommend using a larger circle size, and lowering the Drain/Overall Difficulty by one tick each.
00:02:170 - Not sure why you have an inherited (green) section on top of an uninherited (red) one. If you want to change the volume, then change the red line's one.
Hard:
*Maybe lower OD one tick.
Speed:
*jaka jan tags are missing.
Overall, the distance spacing on Easy/Hard could be improved greatly. I see lots of confusing spacings that are really difficult to read. Jaka Jan/Speed are a bit better, but I see hidden sliders that shouldn't be used. I suggest moving your mapset to WIP and getting more mods before moving back to Pending. Good luck!
Autoplay need to get at least 2k
