you still couldn't ammend his mistakes, I'll offer a better revision to it while retaining the original meaning to it.
"Sadly, the use of less conventional words and sentences does not necessarily correlate to someone's intellect or their ability, especially around people who are below one's intelligence as it would most definitely end up backfiring horribly. Perhaps you are trying to overwrite the certain truth that you are unfortunately, maidenless."
fixed the punctuations.