Thanks for the mod~Nevo wrote:
meow m4m thing
Salvation
00:23:328 (6) - the jump to this slider seems kinda lacking in comparison to the jumps before 00:22:842 (4,5) - and the angle feels like super sharp so maybe make it a little bit more wide and further I want to make 00:23:004 (5,6) - a combination together hence they are closer together, but to address some of the angle I rotated them, I also adjusted the spacing for 00:23:004 (5,6,5,6) - to make it similar to the previous similar tune
00:31:437 (1) - maybe adjust this slider so 00:31:112 (5) - leads more directly into it maybe something like https://puu.sh/zhuH1/d8b61c7305.jpg just so the jump is more smooth puush failed but I guess I could rework the pattern, so faced the slider the other way and changed the follow objects
00:40:518 (9) - you could like make this a 1/2 slider to reflect the sound better and give a move smooth transition into 00:40:842 (10,11,12,13,1) - sure, 00:40:680 was just to lead in anyway
00:43:599 (2,3,4) - maybe adjust rhythm here so the slider heads are on the white ticks so they reflect the instruments instead of the vocals because thats what you were following earlier the earlier part was also to the vocals though, that was what I was trying to focus on
00:46:356 - i would adjust rhythm here so this beat is clickable I prefer the slider held with the vocal, the underlying percussion doesn't stand out that much
01:01:923 (4) - having this underneath the head of 01:01:599 (3) - makes this area seem pretty cluttered with notes and it feels kinda awkward in play shifting it away doesn't really make sense though, this is also the only stack in this section
01:01:923 (4,5) - i would definitely make these two sliders 1/4 kicks its more easily readable and i think follows the song better i don't mind doing so
01:02:247 (6) - i would make this a 1/2 slider to reflect the should sound and also delete 01:02:410 (7) - this also give a pretty easy transition into the new section I'd rather keep the triplet as a clickable, dragging 6 through just complicates it, doesn't sound like something drags on there either
01:23:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe tone down the spacing since here it seems kinda overkill for such a calm section it is using the toned down spacing of the map, because I do agree this part is less intense than other parts
01:25:923 (1,2) - maybe ctrl g this to give emphasis to the down beat and have the vocal be clickable it makes it a little odd because of the note leading up to each strong emphasis 01:26:410 (3,5) -
01:27:383 (2,3,4,5) - spacing here seems pretty big in comparison to other parts of the song shifted 01:27:545 (3,4) - closer
01:59:896 (2,3) - maybe try a rhythm like https://puu.sh/zhwku/ba161490c4.png to reflect the song a bit better I tried to map down to the obvious synth, so this was as basic as I could do to map the rhythm
02:45:058 (1,2,3) - stacking these makes it feel kinda weird and could be misread as a triple I really don't want to give these beats that much of a spacing from each other, because it just doesn't seem right for the repeat 3 beats, I made it close overlaps and hopefully that doesn't make a reverse effect
02:47:815 (2,3,4) - this feels like a kinda random wide angle since youve been mostly using sharp angles in places like 02:50:410 (2,3,4,5) - I reduced the angle
03:01:923 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - in this jump section i feel you could follow the song a little better like 03:03:058 (8) - could be a slider to reflect he different sound and patterns like 03:02:896 (7,8,1) - doesn't really reflect song intensity and switching to a wide angle with 03:03:545 (3,4,5) - seems kinda random since nothing really changes in the song xd maybe adjust these jumps so its also less cluttered the synth rhythm would kill the anticipation here, the slider would break the mood so I went for all the circle 1/2 beats, but I tried to rework each 4 1/2 beat pattern to make phrasing much clearer
03:06:220 (4) - i dont really hear a beat here it's the same ones at 03:05:977 (1,2,3) -
03:22:518 (8,1) - maybe adjust the visual spacing of these to make it more obvious its a 1/1 gap between the two circles made the circle be under 03:23:004 (2) - in the y-axis I guess
04:20:410 (3,4,5,6) - i think this would be better as just a stream having a bunch of kicksliders feel kinda weird in play imo stream would not make the same feeling of seperating each tone at every 1/2 beat the same way
04:26:896 (1) - i dont think the held whistle sound on this slider was intentional can't really hear what difference it made but I just removed it from the body either way
04:45:707 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the jumps here seem kinda random and they dont reflect intensity of the song as they're all the same size just about the constant movement in a single direction is part of the build ups for the subsequent stream once the 1/2 beat rhythm was over, the only jump is at 04:46:842 (8,1) - for the entry of the new 4/1 bar, 1.5x below are the normal fixed spacing used..
04:54:139 (4,1) - ctrl g sounds better imo emphasizing the sound at 04:54:626 though
05:16:193 (2,3,4,5) - for such a calm section these jumps seem kinda big they are bigger than some of the kiai jumps so maybe nerf them a little moved them closer together, I tried making them bigger than normal because of it being the highest pitch reached for the piano
the end of the map seems pretty overkill for such a calm section which to me basically is the biggest issue with the whole map. To me it doesn't really follow the song all that well and some parts seem really overdone such as sections like 03:01:923 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I adjusted some spacing, I don't know why my fixed constant spacing of around 1.3-1.5x seems to be considered too harsh so often lol, but will see for more awkward angles