probably[ Space ] wrote:
i'll probably do a full check tommorow but uh shouldn't source be just "RWBY"?
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Jeff Williams - Die (feat. Casey Lee Williams) [Osu|OsuMania
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Really sucks this is now graveyarded D:
Such a good map to not be ranked, or even qualified.
Such a good map to not be ranked, or even qualified.
I don't normally mod maps anymore but this song is too fucking good I'll make an exception. Although it seems like throughout most difficulties the main problem i see is rhythm choice so keep that in mind
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[Loli's Retribution]
00:01:390 (6,7,1) - consider moving this stack to the right a bit more to avoid overlap with 00:00:285 (1) -
00:37:390 (3) - this slider looks way different than the others, it would be justified if it emphasized a certain sound but it doesn't, it could easily give the same message with a straight slider, etc
00:44:337 (1) - here there is a reason to use a slider with anchors etc due to the change in music, although wouldnt making 00:46:863 (1) - match 00:44:337 (1) be more reasonable due to them being the same sound because you do it here as well 00:49:390 (1) -
01:00:127 (3) - why is this curved when all the others are straight? There is no distinct sound separating them
01:34:390 (3) - ^
01:58:864 (1,2) - these just dont sound right, but idk how you could find a better solution
02:33:285 (2,3) - this overlap is kinda random, there is no distinct sound necessary for such a change
02:38:495 (3,4) - ^
02:41:811 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - consider lowering the DS slightly since this is the calmest part of the song
[Extra]
overall work on your rhythm choices because at times they make no sense
00:04:390 (2) - this is a rather ugly slider imo
00:27:916 (5,3,4) - Normally you want the player to click the important sounds in a slider, but consistently throughout the map you have the sliders end on important sounds which isn't very good imo, might want to consider changing that 00:27:127 (2,3) - are correct while 00:27:916 (5) - isnt
01:00:916 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is a very sudden change, the song hasn't stopped the whole part which you mapped a stream, it's very weird to play because you expect the stream to finish but it abruptly changes into a jump section?
01:43:706 (2,3) - i understand that there is a sound during 2 but it really doesnt play well, you could try replacing 2 with a slider into 3 or making 3 start where two is
01:50:337 (3) - there is really no need for this to be a slider? it's fine as a circle
01:56:495 - 01:57:600 I find it strange that this isnt mapped
00:01:390 (6,7,1) - consider moving this stack to the right a bit more to avoid overlap with 00:00:285 (1) -
00:37:390 (3) - this slider looks way different than the others, it would be justified if it emphasized a certain sound but it doesn't, it could easily give the same message with a straight slider, etc
00:44:337 (1) - here there is a reason to use a slider with anchors etc due to the change in music, although wouldnt making 00:46:863 (1) - match 00:44:337 (1) be more reasonable due to them being the same sound because you do it here as well 00:49:390 (1) -
01:00:127 (3) - why is this curved when all the others are straight? There is no distinct sound separating them
01:34:390 (3) - ^
01:58:864 (1,2) - these just dont sound right, but idk how you could find a better solution
02:33:285 (2,3) - this overlap is kinda random, there is no distinct sound necessary for such a change
02:38:495 (3,4) - ^
02:41:811 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - consider lowering the DS slightly since this is the calmest part of the song
[Extra]
overall work on your rhythm choices because at times they make no sense
00:04:390 (2) - this is a rather ugly slider imo
00:27:916 (5,3,4) - Normally you want the player to click the important sounds in a slider, but consistently throughout the map you have the sliders end on important sounds which isn't very good imo, might want to consider changing that 00:27:127 (2,3) - are correct while 00:27:916 (5) - isnt
01:00:916 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is a very sudden change, the song hasn't stopped the whole part which you mapped a stream, it's very weird to play because you expect the stream to finish but it abruptly changes into a jump section?
01:43:706 (2,3) - i understand that there is a sound during 2 but it really doesnt play well, you could try replacing 2 with a slider into 3 or making 3 start where two is
01:50:337 (3) - there is really no need for this to be a slider? it's fine as a circle
01:56:495 - 01:57:600 I find it strange that this isnt mapped
Topic Starter
[Extra]
overall work on your rhythm choices because at times they make no sense
00:04:390 (2) - this is a rather ugly slider imo sexiest slider ive ever seen
00:27:916 (5,3,4) - Normally you want the player to click the important sounds in a slider, but consistently throughout the map you have the sliders end on important sounds which isn't very good imo, might want to consider changing that 00:27:127 (2,3) - are correct while 00:27:916 (5) - isnt remapped
01:00:916 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is a very sudden change, the song hasn't stopped the whole part which you mapped a stream, it's very weird to play because you expect the stream to finish but it abruptly changes into a jump section? will fix later
01:43:706 (2,3) - i understand that there is a sound during 2 but it really doesnt play well, you could try replacing 2 with a slider into 3 or making 3 start where two is fits imo
01:50:337 (3) - there is really no need for this to be a slider? it's fine as a circle tru but i'll keep it as a slider for now
01:56:495 - 01:57:600 I find it strange that this isnt mapped i dont
overall work on your rhythm choices because at times they make no sense
00:04:390 (2) - this is a rather ugly slider imo sexiest slider ive ever seen
00:27:916 (5,3,4) - Normally you want the player to click the important sounds in a slider, but consistently throughout the map you have the sliders end on important sounds which isn't very good imo, might want to consider changing that 00:27:127 (2,3) - are correct while 00:27:916 (5) - isnt remapped
01:00:916 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is a very sudden change, the song hasn't stopped the whole part which you mapped a stream, it's very weird to play because you expect the stream to finish but it abruptly changes into a jump section? will fix later
01:43:706 (2,3) - i understand that there is a sound during 2 but it really doesnt play well, you could try replacing 2 with a slider into 3 or making 3 start where two is fits imo
01:50:337 (3) - there is really no need for this to be a slider? it's fine as a circle tru but i'll keep it as a slider for now
01:56:495 - 01:57:600 I find it strange that this isnt mapped i dont
just some fixes that could make top diff better:
00:07:863 (1) - this slider is kinda weird, maybe make it horizontal like 00:07:074 (2,3) - too?
00:13:232 (2,4) - blanket (you should look at whole map and fix some of them, will take you like 5-10mins)
00:15:916 (2,3,4) - here you followed song, 00:14:021 (1,2) - here vocal. I feel like you could follow vocal here too, especially that next part is double copy-paste that fits well.
01:25:548 (4,1) - I think you will know what I mean here
*there are also some sliders that art could get improved: 01:32:337 (1) - / 01:51:285 (1) -
01:58:864 (1) - this slider should end on 01:59:495 - and you can also add circle here 02:00:127 (4) - rhythm won't be weird anymore here.
02:49:390 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - and there are also some unnecessary overlaps that could get fixed
this map is really fun to play, but look through the whole map and fix some ugly sliders/blankets/overlaps.
good luck, hope you can rank it :^)
00:07:863 (1) - this slider is kinda weird, maybe make it horizontal like 00:07:074 (2,3) - too?
00:13:232 (2,4) - blanket (you should look at whole map and fix some of them, will take you like 5-10mins)
00:15:916 (2,3,4) - here you followed song, 00:14:021 (1,2) - here vocal. I feel like you could follow vocal here too, especially that next part is double copy-paste that fits well.
01:25:548 (4,1) - I think you will know what I mean here
*there are also some sliders that art could get improved: 01:32:337 (1) - / 01:51:285 (1) -
01:58:864 (1) - this slider should end on 01:59:495 - and you can also add circle here 02:00:127 (4) - rhythm won't be weird anymore here.
02:49:390 (1,2,3,5,6,7) - and there are also some unnecessary overlaps that could get fixed
this map is really fun to play, but look through the whole map and fix some ugly sliders/blankets/overlaps.
good luck, hope you can rank it :^)
Great Map
it's getting modded heaps because that's a really old map of mine LOL, I've already moved on from this set
can we get this thing moved
Topic Starter
I GIVE UPpuxtu wrote:
can we get this thing moved
If you ever revive this set, call me to remap my diff. It's pretty bad now against my current mapping skills LOL
damn what a shame, is a really fun set /:
Loved Soon! TM
Well I guess i'll have to live with that easy forever then XD
Well I guess i'll have to live with that easy forever then XD
lmao nice