tainaka ritu wrote:

卍nice map卍

Garven wrote:

Alright then, recheck~

[Normal]
Offset is different! Please change it to 732 like the other two difficulties.Fixed
01:09:573 (3) - New combo .Fixed
Also, maybe at this part instead of just doing a constant 1/1 rhythm, try something different. Just feels weird to keep having the beat pounding away to a held note. Maybe something like this?.Fixed

02:29:153 (6) - New combo.Fixed
02:34:205 (4) - ^.Fixed

[Hard]
02:52:205 (1) - Hrm, maybe have this start closer to the center of the spinner end? It's kind of far out there for a one-beat post-spinner note at 190 BPM. You'll have to think up a new pattern if you do this, though.ok.I put new pattern
Overmapped, but okay.Thank you XD

[Insane]
00:20:310 (1,2,3,4) - Grrrah, I always miss these. Maybe do a new combo on 3?ok. I put new combo on 3
01:10:837 (1) - I keep expecting this slider to start on 01:10:679 - .Fixed
01:15:889 - Maybe extend the start of the break to here? You can click and drag the start of the break time..Fixed
02:16:521 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - So many new combos still. @_@.I put Re new combo 1.2.1.2.1.2~

lalarun wrote:

:oops:

James2250 wrote:

Try and keep kiai time consistent on every difficulty and make sure they are all snapped (normally looks better on white/red ticks)
Just kiai snap.Fixed
Normal:
Audio lead-in isn't needed Fixed
01:03:258 (2,2) - could look neater if not overlapped It leave.Fixed
01:09:573 (1,2) - sounds odd compared to the songok.on the white line1/4
01:11:310 (1) - I would extend this out slightly and fade out the audioI did fade-out of the sound of the spin.Fixed
01:51:258 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - could be more interesting if not all stackedok,not all stack.Fixed

Hard:
Add some hitsounds to the start to make it more interestingFixed
00:17:626 (7,8) - avoid hidden repeatsFixed
00:22:679 (8,9,10) - ^Fixed
02:20:310 (3,1,2) - spread out more?Fixed

Insane:
Add some hitsounds to the start to make it more interestingFixed
Some kind of confusing spacing at timesI reduced a strange jump
00:33:574 (3,4,5,6,7) - move so repeat isn't hiddenFixed
00:22:995 (6,1) - odd place for a jumpI made it stack.Fixed
00:36:889 (2,3,1) - spacingFixed
01:29:626 (5,1) - space out furtherFixed

Some confusing patterns in Insane and could prob look slightly neater in general but not too bad XD
Have a star~

abalee wrote:

Insane:
I guess... move the timing section at 156,732ms 1/4 forward? in the current setting you have a stacked timing note...oh@@ miss take timing line D;Fixed
00:07:995 (4,5) - I prefer swap these two note, it seems more smooth while playingI put it at equal distance.Fixed
00:13:995 (4,5,6) - could it have a better placement...?I put it at equal distance.Fixed

Hard:
same timing section problem as InsaneXD

Grassvalley wrote:

nice map! ☆あげ↑あげ↑まんぞく

Garven wrote:

[Hard]
02:36:731 (1,2) - !!omg!!!D;Thank you

Don't kudosu, please.

marimarimari wrote:

nice map!

Garven wrote:

Little more IRC modding to touch up on some minor things, and here we go!

Thite wrote:

for my soul~♪

yaya wrote:

hmmm . really hard. map is fine. ranked