NatsumeRin wrote:

random mod.

[Normal]
01:09:574 (1) - spinner is too long Fixed
01:39:258 (1,2,3) - spacing Fixed
02:08:942 (1) - use a soft-hitnormal for this note (volume 60~70), could get the feel of the music better. Fixed
02:26:626 & 02:26:942 - add notes. Fixed

[Hard]
01:06:732 (8,1) - spacing Fixed
01:34:837 (6) - remove finish Fixed
01:53:784 (2,3) - new combo? the effect should be nice. Fixed
02:08:942 (1) - same as [Normal] Fixed
why not map the last part? Fixed

[Insane]
00:18:100 (3) - clap missed oh...miss take XD Fixed
00:48:732 (1) - really hard to read this part = = Though it is difficult, but I love this
00:57:574 (5,6) - not perfect stacked Fixed
01:08:942 (7,8,9) - nazi thing, should be 1 grid leftFixed
01:56:863 (1) - start at 1/4 later (white line)Fixed
02:05:153 (1) - add whistle to the slider (also could get it a better shape?)Fixed.I became beautiful on the coattails of you
02:49:679 - add a note? (just stack it is ok)Fixed
02:58:205 (7) - remove Fixed

Astom wrote:

[Normal]
-Looks fine Thank you

[Hard]
-Some parts are a little crazy but it's fine, I think. Thank you

[Insane]
-ok here is the real thing... the placement looks good, but is WAYYyyy too over-mapped can you see something here?

SPOILER

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The diff. looks good and all, but can you pass it at least? if you can't, think about the people who is gonna play this, they haven't mapped the song, how are they gonna get noticed of hidden circles? playing the song like 30 or 40 times? for me isn't fun, sometimes I play songs like 100 or 200 or 300 times maybe because I like the song or the diff. is hard, but I play it with some hope of get FC at least, with this diff. I haven't hope. I think is clear what I mean.
So, my opinion is, get this diff. approved or remap it, if you want keep the diff. I warn you now: this is gonna be rly hard of get ranked and maybe never be ranked, I already played songs like this and they never get ranked and them had a loot of support from many players and sometimes MATs and BATs but is useless if the song don't respect a minimal criteria.

How I say, only opinions, you can always ignore them like most of the other mappers~

tainaka ritu wrote:

卍nice map卍

Garven wrote:

Alright then, recheck~

[Normal]
Offset is different! Please change it to 732 like the other two difficulties.Fixed
01:09:573 (3) - New combo .Fixed
Also, maybe at this part instead of just doing a constant 1/1 rhythm, try something different. Just feels weird to keep having the beat pounding away to a held note. Maybe something like this?.Fixed

02:29:153 (6) - New combo.Fixed
02:34:205 (4) - ^.Fixed

[Hard]
02:52:205 (1) - Hrm, maybe have this start closer to the center of the spinner end? It's kind of far out there for a one-beat post-spinner note at 190 BPM. You'll have to think up a new pattern if you do this, though.ok.I put new pattern
Overmapped, but okay.Thank you XD

[Insane]
00:20:310 (1,2,3,4) - Grrrah, I always miss these. Maybe do a new combo on 3?ok. I put new combo on 3
01:10:837 (1) - I keep expecting this slider to start on 01:10:679 - .Fixed
01:15:889 - Maybe extend the start of the break to here? You can click and drag the start of the break time..Fixed
02:16:521 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - So many new combos still. @_@.I put Re new combo 1.2.1.2.1.2~

lalarun wrote:

:oops:

James2250 wrote:

Try and keep kiai time consistent on every difficulty and make sure they are all snapped (normally looks better on white/red ticks)
Just kiai snap.Fixed
Normal:
Audio lead-in isn't needed Fixed
01:03:258 (2,2) - could look neater if not overlapped It leave.Fixed
01:09:573 (1,2) - sounds odd compared to the songok.on the white line1/4
01:11:310 (1) - I would extend this out slightly and fade out the audioI did fade-out of the sound of the spin.Fixed
01:51:258 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - could be more interesting if not all stackedok,not all stack.Fixed

Hard:
Add some hitsounds to the start to make it more interestingFixed
00:17:626 (7,8) - avoid hidden repeatsFixed
00:22:679 (8,9,10) - ^Fixed
02:20:310 (3,1,2) - spread out more?Fixed

Insane:
Add some hitsounds to the start to make it more interestingFixed
Some kind of confusing spacing at timesI reduced a strange jump
00:33:574 (3,4,5,6,7) - move so repeat isn't hiddenFixed
00:22:995 (6,1) - odd place for a jumpI made it stack.Fixed
00:36:889 (2,3,1) - spacingFixed
01:29:626 (5,1) - space out furtherFixed

Some confusing patterns in Insane and could prob look slightly neater in general but not too bad XD
Have a star~

abalee wrote:

Insane:
I guess... move the timing section at 156,732ms 1/4 forward? in the current setting you have a stacked timing note...oh@@ miss take timing line D;Fixed
00:07:995 (4,5) - I prefer swap these two note, it seems more smooth while playingI put it at equal distance.Fixed
00:13:995 (4,5,6) - could it have a better placement...?I put it at equal distance.Fixed

Hard:
same timing section problem as InsaneXD

Grassvalley wrote:

nice map! ☆あげ↑あげ↑まんぞく

Garven wrote:

[Hard]
02:36:731 (1,2) - !!omg!!!D;Thank you

Don't kudosu, please.

marimarimari wrote:

nice map!

Garven wrote:

Little more IRC modding to touch up on some minor things, and here we go!

Thite wrote:

for my soul~♪

yaya wrote:

hmmm . really hard. map is fine. ranked