Venix wrote:
hello
general
- the green line on the end of kiai isn't snapped correctly
- seems like those hitsounds have a delay more than 5ms:
drum-hitfinish.wav
soft-hitclap.wav
soft-hitnormal.wav
soft-hitwhistle.wav
normal
00:16:486 (2) - this slider is probably missing a clap at the end.
00:17:320 (3) - seems like you should use here 1/2 slider like 00:12:875 (3) - here to keep consistency across the diff. it also sounds better on the actual rhythm.
00:46:486 (1) - this slider shape should emphasize sound in another way to 00:45:653 (3) - this one because there's another kind of rhythm and it looks a bit overgeneralized.
00:52:875 (2) - you are probably missing an important sound in the middle of this slider (00:53:153 - here). focusing vocal
00:55:375 (2) - you are missing one here too, i'd prefer to use repeat slider here because it would fit rhythm nicely here.
01:03:153 (1) - whistle on the head of this slider seems kinda random in comparison to other ones in this part.
01:12:042 (1,1,1) - same as above.
01:16:486 (1) - it would be nice to make this slider in perfect symmetry with the X axis (look for ctrl+h). too minor and not noticeable
01:32:042 (1) - maybe try to make this shape stack perfectly at the end with 01:29:820 (1) - this one, because it looks a little bit weird when the head is stacked but the end isn't.
01:36:486 (1) - a hitsound at the end of this spinner is a bit overmapped, i'd prefer to replace it with a bit quieter and more fitting one.
insane
00:15:653 (1) - there's very important downbeat here so i think spacing 00:15:098 (5,1) - here should be higher than one 00:14:542 (4,5) - here on your actual rhythm following.
00:21:209 (4,5,1) - same as above i prefer to keep it like this
00:23:431 (4,5,6,1) - using the same spacing between these notes looks a bit flat so i'd prefer to focus on something here. but i don't see reasons to not doing this
00:26:764 - using the same spacing between every note on this part looks a bit undermapped, you should focus on something in this part. // something similar 01:18:709 - here. in this part, i decided to focus on density instead of spacing to show the intensity of the music
00:34:264 (3) - 00:35:653 (1) - overlap here looks unpolished, i know there's a star pattern 00:35:098 (1,2,3,4,1) - here, but i think you can rotate it to obtain a stack on those sliders. no overlaps were intended
00:43:431 (4,5,6,7,1) - on every pattern like this except this one you were using the highest spacing between last kickslider and next downbeat so i'd prefer to do this here too. when you look at distance snap, there is no issue, and i think it plays smoothly so i prefer to no fix
01:03:153 (1) - it would be cool to make the second circle in this slider more circular, like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10129907 this is already circular
01:36:486 (4) - you should place an nc here because you placed it on literally every big tick excluding this one.
here some hitsounding problems from normal diff are repeating too.
@Kotori-Chan, I'll let you fix the hitsounding
anyways, good set. good luck~ thanks <3
Sharu wrote:
yo
love birds
00:09:820 (2,3) - blanket avec la wave du slider
00:12:875 - pourquoi faire un changement aussi drastique de rythme? aucun changement dans la musique et pourtant le rythme est plus intense, je pense que tu devrais garder le même qu'avant pour emphasize encore plus le changement dans la musique ici 00:17:875 - la voix devient plus intense a ce moment-la
00:20:931 (4,5,6) - fait un vrai triangle equilateral avec une rotation des slider de 120°, oublie pas de garder une equidistance entre les sliders ils sont déja triangulaires o:
00:35:098 (6,7,8,9) - je pense que ce jump pourrait être plus agréable à jouer, je te propose de ctrl g ça 00:35:236 (7,9) - puis ça 00:35:375 (8,9) -
00:40:098 (1,2,3) - equidistance ça passe
challenging
00:09:820 (2,3) - 00:12:042 (2,3) - 00:14:264 (3,4) - améliore blanket
00:53:709 (6) - 01:24:820 (5) - bof, je pense que deux 1/4 sliders iraient mieux je trouve que ces sliders passent bien, ça montre d'une autre manière que les notes sont liées entres elles, et puis ça ajoute de la diversité de pattern
Franchement tu devrais pas avoir de problème à rank ça, les diffs sont assez clean ^^merci frero <3
BOUYAAA wrote:
mv1 ew
General stuff :
I think soft-hitnormal is quite loud and unfitting in some parts of the song. especially in the calm/quiet parts it sounds quite overwhelming. Especially where you map dense stuff 00:18:709 (3,4,5,6) - it sounds bad because music is nowhere near as dense as 1/4 spam. Using softer custom hitsounds and using the tom sounds as additions would make more sense. I think a soft whistle like sound would probably fit better with how intense the song really is too.
Hard Insane :
00:08:986 (1) - Prolly better to end the slider on the blue tick since i think vocal lands here. Just like in this part it lands on the blue tick too 00:13:848 (2) - i don't agree with it, it sounds too weird to have the slider ending on the blue ticks imo
00:18:709 (3,4,5,6,7) - 00:20:653 (3,4,5,6) - i do'nt think patterns as dense as this fit the intesity or even what happens in the music. kinda overmapped in some places ;(. Also it's mentionned above but if you want to map the backgrounds 1/4 stuff the tom sound is too loud and using some softer, les spammy hitsound fits better i agree with the hitsounding, though i prefer to keep the 1/4 slider, since i mostly made it based on clickable beats on the 1/4 sliders. i'll fix the hitsounding
00:24:542 (1,2,3) - idk how much you're willing to change but i think some parts would benefit from differentiation due to how the music emphasizes things. Vocals get more intense here for a brief moment, expressing that with a sv increase is prolly a good idea
00:47:598 - same here where things get gradually more intense and reach a climax in the last few notes 00:54:264 - you could reflect that with sv stuff. added more sv in the end of the kiai
01:03:153 (1) - you can do any slider that has a constant curve by using just 3 white anchors, avoids the headache of randomly using 323434521 red and white anchors :p http://puu.sh/zRABP/204ef0e8ed.jpg
Ez insane :
00:08:986 (1) - same thing as insane, prolly better to end on 00:09:403 - prefer to keep the thing like this for the moment, if someone else complain i'll change (same for love birbs diff)
merci bro