Hey from my m4m queue, take/leave what you choose.
Insane
hard
advanced
I hope this helps some!
Insane
SPOILER
00:23:823 (1) - consider turning this into two separate notes to make the downbeat clickeable, like this maybe http://puu.sh/sPLh2/5499ffe587.jpg . Then you would make this 00:23:999 (1) - the NC.
00:26:117 (4) - move slightly to x 480 y 196 for better spacing consistency
00:26:294 (5) - try x 436 y 116 also
00:30:705 (4,1) - separate just a bit to look better.
00:57:882 - this should probably be a clickeable sound.
01:12:705 (2,3) - you could separate these a little visually, they look too close imo.
01:04:941 - you could probably end the break and start mapping here again, feels like too long of a break for such a short song, and this part has lots of sounds so there is nothing preventing you from it.
01:16:411 (2,3,7) - I think if the curvature of the cursor for these notes was a little more linear would be better.
01:22:146 (4) - I don't like how far to the right this note is. Some people might think otherwise, just my opinion.
01:36:705 (7) - overlap with 01:35:294 (5) -
01:39:352 (6) - move this note closer to the next slider, looks weird and the spacing should be more consistent since nothing changed.
01:45:882 (1,1) - you could find a better position for this sliders, or maybe make them notes. this part is kind of monotonous anyways I think.
01:49:411 (3,4) - separate just a bit or change to angle of (4) to feel like they are not so close.
01:52:941 (1,1) - these could be separated more
00:26:117 (4) - move slightly to x 480 y 196 for better spacing consistency
00:26:294 (5) - try x 436 y 116 also
00:30:705 (4,1) - separate just a bit to look better.
00:57:882 - this should probably be a clickeable sound.
01:12:705 (2,3) - you could separate these a little visually, they look too close imo.
01:04:941 - you could probably end the break and start mapping here again, feels like too long of a break for such a short song, and this part has lots of sounds so there is nothing preventing you from it.
01:16:411 (2,3,7) - I think if the curvature of the cursor for these notes was a little more linear would be better.
01:22:146 (4) - I don't like how far to the right this note is. Some people might think otherwise, just my opinion.
01:36:705 (7) - overlap with 01:35:294 (5) -
01:39:352 (6) - move this note closer to the next slider, looks weird and the spacing should be more consistent since nothing changed.
01:45:882 (1,1) - you could find a better position for this sliders, or maybe make them notes. this part is kind of monotonous anyways I think.
01:49:411 (3,4) - separate just a bit or change to angle of (4) to feel like they are not so close.
01:52:941 (1,1) - these could be separated more
hard
SPOILER
In general The sliders are a bit too fast for this difficulty. And I think it is a bit overmapped.
00:18:352 (1) - this slider is not very intuitive, up until this point you only had sliders that repeated once.
00:18:882 (3,4) - this doesn't work, please change it. This whole are could be re done imo 00:18:352 (1,2,3,4) -
00:24:617 (4,2) - overlap, and make changes on the nearby notes to adjust
00:26:823 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - thats too crouded, too much stuff.
00:29:647 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:18:352 (1,2,3,4) -
00:47:823 - missing note
00:47:999 (1) - only have this slider repeat once and map the sounds here 00:48:882 - 00:49:058 - 00:49:147 - 00:49:235 -
The comment about the break can be for all difficulties*
01:19:588 - missing note. and there is a sound here also 01:19:676 -
01:19:764 (4) - make this 1/2 slider instead , since this sound is too strong to be in the sliderbody 01:19:941 -
01:34:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - make some sliders here. Its too much for this difficulty.
01:36:176 (4,5) - separate a bit
01:37:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - too much again
01:42:352 (2,1) - ugly overlap
01:52:588 (2,1) - separate a bit. Don't let the distance spacing fool you, since you changed SV
00:18:352 (1) - this slider is not very intuitive, up until this point you only had sliders that repeated once.
00:18:882 (3,4) - this doesn't work, please change it. This whole are could be re done imo 00:18:352 (1,2,3,4) -
00:24:617 (4,2) - overlap, and make changes on the nearby notes to adjust
00:26:823 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - thats too crouded, too much stuff.
00:29:647 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:18:352 (1,2,3,4) -
00:47:823 - missing note
00:47:999 (1) - only have this slider repeat once and map the sounds here 00:48:882 - 00:49:058 - 00:49:147 - 00:49:235 -
The comment about the break can be for all difficulties*
01:19:588 - missing note. and there is a sound here also 01:19:676 -
01:19:764 (4) - make this 1/2 slider instead , since this sound is too strong to be in the sliderbody 01:19:941 -
01:34:588 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - make some sliders here. Its too much for this difficulty.
01:36:176 (4,5) - separate a bit
01:37:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - too much again
01:42:352 (2,1) - ugly overlap
01:52:588 (2,1) - separate a bit. Don't let the distance spacing fool you, since you changed SV
advanced
SPOILER
00:22:588 - note here, since you were mapping the drums up until this point, this slider 00:22:764 (1) - following the high pitch noise feels unintuivtive
00:25:058 - ^
00:46:941 (2) - you are better off making this slider 2 separate notes, deleting this note 00:47:647 (4) - , and move this one 00:47:294 (3) - to 00:47:470 (3) - instead. Follows the important notes better.
01:19:058 (3) - end at 01:19:411 -
01:19:588 - make a note here
01:38:470 (3) - make the downbeat clickeable
01:44:470 (1,2,3,4) - either change this section to be like 01:41:647 (1,2,3,4,5) - , or viceversa.
I don't think the slowing down at the end is necesary since the song doesn't actually slow down any more past 01:41:647 - . (this applies to all difficulties also)
00:25:058 - ^
00:46:941 (2) - you are better off making this slider 2 separate notes, deleting this note 00:47:647 (4) - , and move this one 00:47:294 (3) - to 00:47:470 (3) - instead. Follows the important notes better.
01:19:058 (3) - end at 01:19:411 -
01:19:588 - make a note here
01:38:470 (3) - make the downbeat clickeable
01:44:470 (1,2,3,4) - either change this section to be like 01:41:647 (1,2,3,4,5) - , or viceversa.
I don't think the slowing down at the end is necesary since the song doesn't actually slow down any more past 01:41:647 - . (this applies to all difficulties also)
I hope this helps some!