1. Infidelity (5.13 stars, 796 notes)
2. optimist (4.37 stars, 518 notes)
3. remap (3.85 stars, 56 notes)

General

Optimist

1. The very first patterns are inconsistent, as the blanket you use in 00:00:856 (2,3,4) - is not the same as in 00:02:478 (2,3,4) - and on, keep that more consistent while the rhythm is the same.
2. 00:09:371 (1,1) - these two sounds you map as single circles here are pretty much the same as those immediately after them like in 00:10:181 (1,2) -, again, try to keep more consistent. Same comment on 00:15:856 (6,7) -
3. 00:15:856 (6,7) - just like before, try to fill this gap, as there is music still in the background and the vocals still hold a bit.
4. Rhythm and structural inconsistency in this 00:19:910 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern and the rest coming just after. Try to use 2 of them through that section, as you will need to vary, but not that much.
5. 00:31:059 (1) - Use a slider to fill the gap here, as the vocals are still ongoing.
6. 00:32:073 (4,1) - Talking about the 1/1 inconsistencies here, this one would feel great as a fully overlapped circle
7. 00:50:721 (1,2,3,4) - This section here is too calm for such big spacing
8. Kiai should have more fillers, as like it is now it feels uncomfortable and with useless starts and stops, with those fillers you should use the playfield more evenly and use some movement to the corners of the screen, as it is lacking now.
9. Sliderart is pretty nice, but I dont know if this is allowed anymore 01:29:235 (3) -
10. 01:45:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again, spacing seems too big for the section.
    
    Check the same stuff again in the second half of the song, as the mistakes are pretty much the same, as there is a really big rhythm inconsistency during the vocals.
    
11. The idea in 02:21:127 (8,9,10,11,12) - is pretty good, but you should use a NC in 10 to give the player a hint that the rhythm is now gonna be 1/2 instead of 1/1.
    
    The ideas in the kiai overall are pretty good and a modder can get the idea pretty good, could be cleaner but it's pretty nice as it is in my opinion
    
12. 02:51:532 (3,4) - This should either have a filler or a full overlap. The idea of the section is pretty good, but I think it could be better developed with some jumps instead of the stacks. It is up to you after all.
13. Overmapped in 03:01:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - as the sound is unnoticeable, but the second part is correctly developed.
    
    The sliderarts, once again, are pretty nice, yet you should not disregard rhythm as you did in the first one, as there are notes that you should have mapped out of the sliderart rather than skip it due to the slider.
    
14. 03:27:613 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - Same comment about jumps instead of stacks.
    
    Last comment, please use a capital O in the difficulty name, as it is now it hurts me.

MrMenda wrote:

Hi! Mod coming from my Queue!

General

This map has some unrankable issues, to start up with find a bg, set some combo colours and check AIMod for some unsnapped Sliderends and Objects.

Apart from that, 1/1 rhythm gaps have unequal treatment in similar sections, please try to make those more consistent.

Optimist

1. The very first patterns are inconsistent, as the blanket you use in 00:00:856 (2,3,4) - is not the same as in 00:02:478 (2,3,4) - and on, keep that more consistent while the rhythm is the same. fixing the first point. as for the second, and this applies for the whole map, my ideas came from pattern variation but i understand where you're coming from.
2. 00:09:371 (1,1) - these two sounds you map as single circles here are pretty much the same as those immediately after them like in 00:10:181 (1,2) -, again, try to keep more consistent. i disagree. not only are the sounds different but the slider feels better than a continuous 1/1 over 4 notes Same comment on 00:15:856 (6,7) -
3. 00:15:856 (6,7) - just like before, try to fill this gap, as there is music still in the background and the vocals still hold a bit. im using simplified rhythm to emphasise the pause made by the vocalist. i think it sounds p. neat instead of a slider head on the 1/2
4. Rhythm and structural inconsistency in this 00:19:910 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern and the rest coming just after. Try to use 2 of them through that section, as you will need to vary, but not that much. ya i agree. 00:21:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6) is remnants of an old pattern that i was too lazy to update,
   but the kick sliders are mapped onto the drummer's sounds
5. 00:31:059 (1) - Use a slider to fill the gap here, as the vocals are still ongoing. i disagree, i specifically changed 00:29:235 (7) to a slider to emphasise 00:31:059 (1).
6. 00:32:073 (4,1) - Talking about the 1/1 inconsistencies here, this one would feel great as a fully overlapped circle agreed, i'll change the slider head and tail to hitcircles
7. 00:50:721 (1,2,3,4) - This section here is too calm for such big spacing agreed
8. Kiai should have more fillers, as like it is now it feels uncomfortable and with useless starts and stops, with those fillers you should use the playfield more evenly and use some movement to the corners of the screen, as it is lacking now. mm, i always had problems utilising the whole playing field. however i kinda like the starts and stops
9. Sliderart is pretty nice, but I dont know if this is allowed anymore 01:29:235 (3) - aw man :/
10. 01:45:654 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again, spacing seems too big for the section. i agree but in a different stance. i should increase the spacing of 01:44:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6) so that the change doesn't feel as dramatic as it does now
    
    Check the same stuff again in the second half of the song, as the mistakes are pretty much the same, as there is a really big rhythm inconsistency during the vocals.
    
11. The idea in 02:21:127 (8,9,10,11,12) - is pretty good, but you should use a NC in 10 to give the player a hint that the rhythm is now gonna be 1/2 instead of 1/1. dam i never even thought of that. i always used nc for song-specific sections, not map-specific
    
    The ideas in the kiai overall are pretty good and a modder can get the idea pretty good, could be cleaner but it's pretty nice as it is in my opinion ya the whole map could be polished lo
    
12. 02:51:532 (3,4) - This should either have a filler or a full overlap. The idea of the section is pretty good, but I think it could be better developed with some jumps instead of the stacks. It is up to you after all. i put a smiley face here because he is mr brightside :^) but ya i agree the hitcircles are rly janky
13. Overmapped in 03:01:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - as the sound is unnoticeable, but the second part is correctly developed. i get where you're coming from, but i think it only sounds overmapped cuz the mp3 quality is shit
    
    The sliderarts, once again, are pretty nice, yet you should not disregard rhythm as you did in the first one, as there are notes that you should have mapped out of the sliderart rather than skip it due to the slider. agree sorta
    
14. 03:27:613 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - Same comment about jumps instead of stacks. disagreed. this section is mapped accordingly since it's at the climax of the song
    
    Last comment, please use a capital O in the difficulty name, as it is now it hurts me.

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