Hanjamon wrote:

Hello Akemi, from my modding queue.

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

[General]

1. All seems okay.

[HarmOni]

1. 00:05:180 - it feels a bit weird ignoring this sound as you followed in 00:04:085 - , i suggest adding a k in 00:05:180 - ,change 00:05:399 - to k and
2. 00:05:618 - to d? it fits good imo and makes a mirror pattern? it's really nice. :3 fixed.
3. 00:07:589 - same as ^ add notes in 00:07:589 - and 00:07:808 - as you did in 00:05:180 - , if you add the notes, how about k d d d or k d k d? fixed too. changed to 'k d k d'.
4. 00:10:436 - swap this note with 00:10:874 - ? K D fits better imo as 00:10:436 - has a higher pitch. (also it makes a bit of consistency with 00:14:377 - ) fixed.
5. 00:18:319 - swap with 00:18:538 - ? k d fits better with the instrumental. I used d k for emphasize strong piano sound, but It's better follow drum imo. so change to k d.
6. 00:22:808 - personal suggestion here, change this note to d? i think ddkdkkk fits very well there. hmm.. okay~ lol
7. 00:26:202 (19,20,21,22,23,24) - change to d d k k d k? it fits good if you want to follow the vocals as you did in 00:28:830 - . Thank you~ fixed.
8. 00:50:180 - add a d here? ddkkd fits really good with the vocals there. okay~
9. 00:51:823 - this is actually 1/4 but fits good as 1/6 xD (same thing i did in my loveless world with a ddk before the kiai). Thank you~ lol I love your lovelive map.
10. 00:53:794 - if you want to follow the vocals more accurately i suggest moving this note to 00:54:012 - . your suggestion is nice, but I hope this mixed style(vocal + drum).
11. 01:10:436 (7,8,9,10,11) - this part is too calm and doesn't provide any sound, i suggest deleting this 5plet. I feel accompaniment vary in this part, so used kkddk. but your suggestion is good for me. I think this hugh break is better.
12. 01:23:137 - change this note and 01:24:122 - to k? (kdd k d kkd) fits very well with the vocals imo. okay~
13. 01:41:750 - add a inherit with x0.95 of sv, it creates a better transition with the slowdown. fixed. Thanks~!
14. 01:51:385 - add a d here? i think fits good with the vocals. okay~
15. 01:55:874 - delete this note and change 01:55:983 - to finisher? it gives a good impact. fixed.
16. 01:56:202 - as you did at the start of the map, for a better follow of the piano add a d in 01:56:202 - 01:56:421 - and change 01:56:640 - to k. I hope give a break because we changed previous note - K. I want to this break for emphasize previous finisher. so just changed 01:56:640 - k.
17. 01:57:735 - same here, add a d in 01:57:735 - 01:57:954 - and change 01:57:516 - to k for the piano? fixed.
18. 02:06:275 - to 02:07:151 - make d k k d k? fits better with the vocals. fixed.
19. 02:11:312 - change to k, is the same as 02:10:874 - . (and probably these two k fits good with finisher) fixed. It's nice.
20. 02:13:502 - change this note to k and 02:13:721 - to d? follows better the vocals imo. fixed.
21. 02:29:702 - change this d k d to k d k? fits better with the instrumental and the vocal. I focused on piano this d k d, but follow drum is better. so changed.
22. 02:36:275 - as i suggested before, delete this 5plet (kkddk) as it doesn't provide any sound and it's a calm part. fixed.
23. 02:46:129 - delete this note and make it doublets and consistent as you did in the first kiai 01:20:071 - . fixed.
24. 02:49:085 - made it like 01:23:137 - ? then will be more consistent. no change this part for diversity of pattern. :3
25. 03:07:589 - as suggested in the first kiai, add a inherit point here with x0.95 of sv for a better transition. fixed.
26. 03:33:538 - add a k here? kkddk fits good imo. fixed.
27. 04:04:961 - make this kdd a kkk? since this part is too calm i think fits good. fixed.
28. 04:10:217 (7,8) - swap these notes? k k d k fits better. fixed.
29. 04:19:195 - change this note to K like i suggested in 00:10:436 - ? if applied change 04:19:633 - to D too. fixed.
30. 04:40:436 - for a better transition like other kiais, add a inherit point with x0.95 of sv in 04:40:436 - , x0.96 in 04:40:326 - , x0.97 in 04:40:217 - , x0.98 in 04:40:107 - and x0.99 04:39:998 - . very nice. Thank you~ :3
31. 04:49:633 (163,164,165,1) - i think fits better as a k d d k. fixed.
32. 04:47:443 - inherit with x0.95 of sv here for a good transition. fixed.

Good luck~

Kith190 wrote:

Hi NM as asked here
the map is already so good so I will try to mention some notes that imo could sound better in a different way

HarmOni

00:23:137 - change to d (?) fixed.
00:48:319 (99,100) - control g (?) fixed.
00:55:764 - change to d fixed.
01:17:443 (29,30,31,32,33) - what about change to k d k k d ? (29), (33) has drum sound. so I want to make them k. :3 so no change.
02:21:166 (177,178,179) - change to k k d (?) fixed.
02:27:078 - change to d fixed.
02:45:910 (299,300,301,302) - what acout cchange to d k k d k ? no change for now, because of consistency with 1st kiai part.
02:48:100 - change to d(?) fixed.
03:25:326 - change to d fixed.
03:34:961 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - no mistakes here, i just whanted to say that i like this point particularly, gg ;D Thank you~ ><
03:48:100 - d is better but I think that k would give a better ouch-feeling I don't like this consecutive k. :3 I hope maintain this d for better flow k-d-k.
03:55:326 (42,43,44,45) - what about change from d d k d to d k k d ? changed previous pattern kkd myself. so no same pattern now.
05:01:458 (35,36) - control + g no change for consistency with similar part. and it's almost same burst used. so I hope make them all K.
05:08:027 (2,3,4,5,6) - here imo d k k k d would fit better hmm.. (4),(6) has high bell sound. so I want to make them k. so changed ddkkk. I hope it's better.

btw really nice song! Good luck for rank!! ;D

Karee Pan wrote:

Hello there M4M.
Sorry if i try to nerf it too much, just tell me to piss off if i do. lol

[HarmOni]

00:29:706 (32,33) - Kind of want to Ctrl-g these for the vocal pitch rise to come at ~30:00. I feel vocal pitch gap is not big. so I think it's better to use k for drum. :3
00:33:429 (43) - Sounds better as a k to me ? fix.
00:47:662 (97) - Consider deleting this and making the next note d to keep following the strong melody only. add d 00:33:648 instead for consistency.
00:58:173 (31,50) - We could add a few more breaks in this slower section by deleting these, (32) should be k then though. hmm.. I think break-time is enough now. but considering that. thank you for suggestion. anyway, change to (31) - d, (32) - k.
01:20:071 (1,2,3,4) - I like it, but it kind of stands out as the sole 2/2. I would probably just add d to 01:20:290 okay~
02:01:020 - I feel this is too many notes for this quiet part, I would go as far as deleting all (100,101,103,106,107) I feel that sound need stream. lol.. so maintain for now.
02:11:093 - add d okay~
02:22:480 (185) - Could delete for consistent breaks, 02:23:137 (190) - is k then though. we can hear vocal that point. so just change to (190) - k.
02:23:794 (193) - Maybe k again for the vocal ? fixed.
02:24:560 (196) - Would delete this to emphasize the violin coming fixed.
02:32:334 (234,235) - I'd prefere Ctrl-g to keep the snare flowing, 02:32:772 (236) - K , 02:32:991 (237) - Delete. (237) - has bell sound. so I hope to keep that. other things fixed.
02:46:129 - add d, if you applied 01:20:290 sure~
02:58:064 (365) - Delete to stay consistant and emphasize the strong vocal. fixed.
03:15:472 (459) - k no change for emphasize (458) - vocal & drum.
03:26:531 - 03:29:925 (47) - You could keep the earlier doubles going for this part ? previous doublet has vocal, but next part is not. so I think doublet is not fit here.
03:43:173 - 03:46:677 - Definately could keep them going here at least ? add note 03:46:677, because we can hear weak drum sound. rest is not maybe. :3
03:39:122 - Are you sure you want to ignore a sound this strong ? hmm.. okay add note there.
04:11:750 (9,10,11) - Its dkd everywhere else. change this part. for follow bell-sound.
04:34:633 (85) - I want to delete this and make 04:34:742 - onward a kdddkdk Thank you for your suggestion. I concern about this. I'll change this part maybe soon.
05:45:253 - 05:47:881 - Could add d's add them~


Nice song, great map already. Good Luck bud!