place zz
recheck m4m thin g yea
[insane]
00:43:143 - u need to reduce the density of this entire section, i know spacing is lower but it is literally 1/2 spam everywhere. plz add 1/1 sliders
00:13:711 (2) - nc should b here cuz this is where u change instrument. also having all of 00:12:785 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - be the same rotation direction really kills your emphasiss on 2-3, you should make 2-3 a direction change instead.
00:16:118 (1,3) - kicksliders here would be cute for the guitar and also not too intense considering it comes out of a long repeat slider and no percussion support
00:08:155 (3,4) - 1/1 slider sounds a lot nicer here with the melody~
00:20:007 (6) - wtf is this overlap lol looks so ugly
00:39:451 (5,6,7,8) - imo nc and separate these from 00:38:896 (2,3,4) - cuz different instrument. it isnt visually separated enough
01:03:155 (3) - this looks so bad - _ -
01:06:859 (1,2,3,4,5) - why spacing is so low on the kiai? like this is rly easy compared to random stuff in buildup to kiai
01:34:081 (3,4,5,6) - 2 1/2 sliders plz..
01:36:118 (6,7,1) - ?? u never use 1/4 jump like this. ever. just stack 7 on 1 or something
01:43:155 (3,4,5,6) - nice pp jump
[hard]
00:33:525 (7) - add whistle?
01:05:933 (7,1,2,3,1) - too confusing. unstack 123 from 7 and 1.
01:32:414 (3,1,2,3,1) -
[meep]
00:20:007 (2) - delet
00:33:525 (7) - whistle
add whistles to the offbeat sliders in the kiai thx
01:30:562 (1) - w
01:48:340 - add circle
countdown
[normal]
ar 6
01:35:192 (3,4,5) - just circle circle 1/1 on the red tick where 4 is is better...
[easy]
add some hitsounds on slider heads in the 2nd and 3rd section thx
and in the kiai
u have more finishes on ends and repeats than clickable lol
too lazy to suggest rhythm chnges for all of them but can u make some of them clickable at least thx