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Congrats on 4-digit posts!Underforest wrote:
Thanks Swegmec
lol thanks
I am sorry wou that I couldn't correct my map.
I had no internet and now I have no time. I will my GD as soon as I can.
Sorry D:
I had no internet and now I have no time. I will my GD as soon as I can.
Sorry D:
#whatamidoingwithmylife
General
Asteriks
Hopefully this was helpful, some were hard to explain so PM me if they didn't make much sense or no sense at all.
GL friend.
General
Be weary of the spacing of the jumps.
Asteriks
00:09:191 (7,8) - Space the 8th note out about 1.0x DS. looks like it should be on the blue tick but isnt.
00:26:606 (1,2,3) - No need for a NC
00:26:752 (2,1) - Stack on the end of the slider, feels/looks better
00:27:923 (1,2) - Same deal, no need for a NC and stack the first note on the red tick onto the slider.
00:33:777 (1,2,3,4) - I can definitely hear a beat here, try adding a note on the red tick to stack with notes 1 and 2.
00:35:386 (8) - NC
00:35:386 (8,1) - Same as before try adding another note onto the stack.
00:37:435 (1,2) - New combo on the second note, change the first to be on the previous combo. So from this to this.
00:39:191 - Try adding a note onto the stack to match the beat of the vocals, from this to this.
00:39:630 (4,6) - If you agree with the suggestion above, move the what would be 4th note onto the 6th note which would now look like this with notes 1, 2, and, 3 being stacked.
00:54:411 (5,3) - Grab these 2 and pull them up with 2.0x DS
00:55:582 (1,2,4) - Space this out more and/or stack the 4th note onto the end of the slider
00:56:460 (6,1) - Either stack onto the end of the slider or space it out further, blue tick issue as before.
01:00:996 (1,2) - ^
01:03:338 (1,2) - ^
01:04:216 (4,5,6) - ^
01:12:704 (1,2) - ^
01:14:313 (2,3) - ^Try stacking the 3rd note onto the 5th
01:21:191 (6,1) - Same issue.
00:26:606 (1,2,3) - No need for a NC
00:26:752 (2,1) - Stack on the end of the slider, feels/looks better
00:27:923 (1,2) - Same deal, no need for a NC and stack the first note on the red tick onto the slider.
00:33:777 (1,2,3,4) - I can definitely hear a beat here, try adding a note on the red tick to stack with notes 1 and 2.
00:35:386 (8) - NC
00:35:386 (8,1) - Same as before try adding another note onto the stack.
00:37:435 (1,2) - New combo on the second note, change the first to be on the previous combo. So from this to this.
00:39:191 - Try adding a note onto the stack to match the beat of the vocals, from this to this.
00:39:630 (4,6) - If you agree with the suggestion above, move the what would be 4th note onto the 6th note which would now look like this with notes 1, 2, and, 3 being stacked.
00:54:411 (5,3) - Grab these 2 and pull them up with 2.0x DS
00:55:582 (1,2,4) - Space this out more and/or stack the 4th note onto the end of the slider
00:56:460 (6,1) - Either stack onto the end of the slider or space it out further, blue tick issue as before.
01:00:996 (1,2) - ^
01:03:338 (1,2) - ^
01:04:216 (4,5,6) - ^
01:12:704 (1,2) - ^
01:14:313 (2,3) - ^Try stacking the 3rd note onto the 5th
01:21:191 (6,1) - Same issue.
Hopefully this was helpful, some were hard to explain so PM me if they didn't make much sense or no sense at all.
GL friend.
Just happened to be passing, LOL.
[General]
[General]
- I found a picture of unused the name file is A1G, please delete it
- I found the widescreen support in diff Az's Extra, remove please.
- 00:10:508 (4) - Change position to x:153 y:281 or stack the head on the tail of 00:09:630 (1)
- After move ^ , Blanket this 00:10:508 (4,5)
- You miss some note here 00:36:411 and 00:36:557 - try add some note please
- 00:38:606 (5) - You miss some note/hitsound in the red tick
- The same problem, try add some note here 00:39:484 and here 00:40:216
- 00:55:874 (2) - Stack the head on the tail of 00:55:143 (3)
- 00:56:167 (3) - The same problem ^ , try stack the head on the head of 00:53:094 (7)
Actually, I found many shortage of note in 00:33:777 to 00:39:484
- 00:26:899 (3,4) - Try change this to slider
- 00:31:143 (4,5) - To me, if you agree, this is too pushy if this note like this. Why not try to replace it, for example, 5 to 4, 4 to 5 like this
- 00:52:801 (1,2) - Too sloppy, from the position and why you 00:52:801 (1) - make the tail on the blue tick ?
- 00:56:899 (4,5) - ^
- 00:57:484 (1,2) - ^
- 01:22:069 (8) - Please delete it, since there is no sound here
- 01:22:801 (1,2) - Please move the note 2 toward another position
- 01:09:630 (3,4,5,6,7) - Lots of hitsound whistle, like someone was farting lol
It seems there is no problem. Good job fuyuyu-
Topic Starter
Ambient
Ambient wrote:
#whatamidoingwithmylife
GeneralBe weary of the spacing of the jumps.
Asteriks00:09:191 (7,8) - Space the 8th note out about 1.0x DS. looks like it should be on the blue tick but isnt.
00:26:606 (1,2,3) - No need for a NC
00:26:752 (2,1) - Stack on the end of the slider, feels/looks better
00:27:923 (1,2) - Same deal, no need for a NC and stack the first note on the red tick onto the slider.
00:33:777 (1,2,3,4) - I can definitely hear a beat here, try adding a note on the red tick to stack with notes 1 and 2.
00:35:386 (8) - NC
00:35:386 (8,1) - Same as before try adding another note onto the stack.
00:37:435 (1,2) - New combo on the second note, change the first to be on the previous combo. So from this to this.
00:39:191 - Try adding a note onto the stack to match the beat of the vocals, from this to this.
00:39:630 (4,6) - If you agree with the suggestion above, move the what would be 4th note onto the 6th note which would now look like this with notes 1, 2, and, 3 being stacked.
00:54:411 (5,3) - Grab these 2 and pull them up with 2.0x DS
00:55:582 (1,2,4) - Space this out more and/or stack the 4th note onto the end of the slider
00:56:460 (6,1) - Either stack onto the end of the slider or space it out further, blue tick issue as before.
01:00:996 (1,2) - ^
01:03:338 (1,2) - ^
01:04:216 (4,5,6) - ^
01:12:704 (1,2) - ^
01:14:313 (2,3) - ^Try stacking the 3rd note onto the 5th
01:21:191 (6,1) - Same issue.
Hopefully this was helpful, some were hard to explain so PM me if they didn't make much sense or no sense at all.
GL friend.
Yuuki
Thanks for mod [quote="Yuuki Akamatsu"]Just happened to be passing, LOL.
[General]
[General]
- I found a picture of unused the name file is A1G, please delete it
- 00:10:508 (4) - Change position to x:153 y:281 or stack the head on the tail of 00:09:630 (1) Nah
- After move ^ , Blanket this 00:10:508 (4,5) Nah
- You miss some note here 00:36:411 and 00:36:557 - try add some note please
- 00:38:606 (5) - You miss some note/hitsound in the red tick
- The same problem, try add some note here 00:39:484 and here 00:40:216
- 00:55:874 (2) - Stack the head on the tail of 00:55:143 (3)
- 00:56:167 (3) - The same problem ^ , try stack the head on the head of 00:53:094 (7)
Actually, I found many shortage of note in 00:33:777 to 00:39:484
Hi, I re-mapped my entire diff and also fix some issues
Please, re-update
Please, re-update
nya
osu file format v14
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50972
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0
[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1
[Metadata]
Title:Brand-new World
TitleUnicode:Brand-new World
Artist:Shiena Nishizawa
ArtistUnicode:西沢幸奏
Creator:Wou
Version:Forest's Easy
Source:学戦都市アスタリスク
Tags:Gakusen Toshi Asterisk The Academy City on the Water op theme tv size Underforest fuyuyu- Azulae
BeatmapID:846900
BeatmapSetID:387647
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KAKERO
Placehold because Avatar: Himeno Sena
User page: full of Kurashina Asuka
Placehold because Avatar: Himeno Sena
User page: full of Kurashina Asuka
And you forgot to update my diff thought ;_;
Topic Starter
Sorry if i forgot to update your diff...Underforest wrote:
And you forgot to update my diff thought ;_;
coz, i'm changing a bit of my diff
Topic Starter
KuranteMelodii wrote:
KAKERO
Placehold because Avatar: Himeno Sena ♥♥♥
User page: full of Kurashina Asuka lol :v
Himeno Se- *slapped*
good luck~
[Asterisk]
NC problems
- 00:06:118 (6) - NC, big white tick
- 00:06:557 (1) - remove NC
- 00:07:289 (6) - NC
- 00:08:167 (1,2) - swap NC
- 00:10:801 (5) - NC
- 00:11:533 (1,3) - swap NC
- 00:15:191 (3) - NC
- 00:16:655 (6) - ^
- 00:18:996 (4) - ^
- 00:21:045 (3) - ^
- 00:24:850 (5) - ^
- 00:31:874 (8,1) - swap NC
- 00:33:045 (6) - NC
- 00:33:777 (1) - remove NC
- 00:34:216 (3) - NC
- 00:35:240 (8) - ^
- 00:35:679 (1) - remove NC
- 00:36:557 (5) - NC
- 00:38:899 (6,1) - swap NC
- 00:42:411 (7) - NC
- 00:44:752 (4) - ^
- 00:45:923 (6) - ^
- 00:52:801 (6) - ^
- 00:53:679 (1) - remove NC
- 00:55:143 (3) - NC
- 00:56:460 (4,1) - swap NC
- 00:57:484 (3) - NC
- 00:58:069 (1) - remove NC
- 00:58:508 (5) - NC
- 01:01:728 (1) - remove NC
- 01:02:167 (2) - NC, SV changes
- 01:04:655 (5,1) - swap NC
- 01:05:825 (4,1) - ^
- 01:06:850 (3) - NC
- 01:07:435 (1) - remove NC
- 01:09:338 (4,1) - swap NC
- 01:20:899 (5) - NC
- 01:21:484 (1) - - remove NC
- 01:22:801 (1) - ^
- 00:04:508 (1) - Make it clickable plz
- 00:05:825 (5) - Overlap, i think it should put it a little bit left to blanket 00:05:240 (2) -
- 00:07:582 (7) - Overlap
- 00:08:167 (1) - ^
There's so many overlapping problems, try to not make those slider overlap each other so the map is neater, but some overlap like 00:21:923 (2,4) - is acceptable, better ask someone what is a great overlap. - 00:23:094 (1) - Make the end clickable by shortening it into 3/4 and add a note at the white tick, no i am not applying my style but i think this is the best way to map with the vocal hold
- 00:27:923 (4) - should stack with 00:27:191 (1) - head
- 00:29:240 (7,1) - that just a little bit, but the stack is off.
- 00:32:752 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I personality don't like this kind of anti jumps, they're too hard yet uncomfortable to play
- 00:33:338 (8,2,6,1) - Stack, this is too messy
- 01:02:460 (3) - Overlap again, i am mentioning this because i think i need to screenshot to adjust the pattern later on.
- 01:08:606 (2) - That doesn't change much but... symmetry with 01:08:167 (1) -
I also personalty don't let sliders end on white tick unless the previous red tick is stronger and it's a 1/1 slider, i don't know does it unrankable
good luck~
re-upload
The beatmap download is working fine, so no needultimatrix117 wrote:
re-upload
Wow, first post
Underforest wrote:
Wow, first post
from #modreqs
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01:01:728 (3) - ^
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01:02:606 (5) - ^
01:03:191 (6) - ^
01:03:777 (7) - ^
01:04:655 (1) - ^
01:10:216 (3) - ^
01:10:801 (1) - ^
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01:00:557 (1) - Wrong positioned claps.
01:01:143 (2) - ^
01:01:728 (3) - ^
01:02:313 (4) - ^
01:02:606 (5) - ^
01:03:191 (6) - ^
01:03:777 (7) - ^
01:04:655 (1) - ^
01:10:216 (3) - ^
01:10:801 (1) - ^
01:11:386 (2) - ^
01:12:264 (3) - ^
01:12:557 (4) - ^
01:13:143 (5) - ^
01:13:582 (6) - ^
Topic Starter
Azulae wrote:
Can you maybe take out my difficulty please?
Thanks
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