hi m4m return
I can see you're rather new so I'll talk about general things more than map specific paterns.
00:00:299 (1) - well you start this spinner even before the timing point you made at 00:01:715 - . better put the redline at 00:00:382 - and start the spinner from there
BPM is really weird just set it to 180, because right now the timing becomes off in the end . don't forget to resnap notes after you do this ( timing -> resnap all notes)
using 100 % volume is too much, stick with 70 % at moreintense parts and 50-60 at less intense parts
00:03:213 (4) - don't put hitsound on the whole slider like that, you can put them on the slider head, tail and repeat arrows seperatelly if you double click them and they are marked with red circle
as far as your object placement goes it's really random, at first I'd suggest you use DS more to make it look more clean and try to stick with the similar spacing in all sections 00:08:548 (4,5,6,7) - 00:06:549 (5,6,7,1) - etc are spaced completely differently when intensity is the same
00:09:048 (7) - you will generally want to avoid slider end on downbeats ( big white ticks )
00:32:214 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this is pure overmap, don't put streams where the music doesn't support it
01:10:377 (10) - you use a lot of sliders that are extremely curved. they neither look or play well
01:16:377 - this hole is random just put a note here and it solves the polarity issue and you won't ignore the strog beat
01:23:418 (1) - you snapped this object to 1/8 . better avoid that as new mapper. for more snap problem AI mod will tell you when you press ctrl shift a
01:26:042 (2,4) - if you want to blanket make it pretty and not random
http://i.imgur.com/Gw8W7eP.png01:28:709 (3,5) - etc looks really sloppy...
http://i.imgur.com/D08W3XP.png you can fix it to be like
http://i.imgur.com/N5zXJum.png02:36:371 (1) - yea um this is unreadable since you don't know which way the slider will go at first
03:11:202 (1,1,1) - this nc spam is not needed
I suggest you create a few more maps and try learning a bit from other new maps to improve your skills before you try to rank something. Today's quality is pretty high so you need some more experience. Hope this helps, hf mapping!