mod upon request~
great song, the ranked version used to be one of the few in my collection when i started playing osu~
Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommendedRed is unrankable[General]
delete .osb file if not planning to make storyboard[Normal]
tbh i was surprised by such a high sv on the lowest diff of the song...you might want to consider making something easier for the real newbies to play
00:34:588 (5) - clap on slider head
00:40:588 (4) - lower this to avoid overlap with 00:38:117 (1), and also NC should be on this note instead of 00:40:941 (1)
00:49:059 (1) - finish on slider head
00:57:529 (3) - NC
01:14:470 (1) - finish
01:45:529 (3) - make this blanket 01:46:588 (4) plays better
02:03:882 (1) - finish on slider head
02:12:353 (3) - NC
02:29:294 (1) - add finish
[Hard]
00:19:411 (1,2) - this flow is a bit awkward here, curving 00:19:411 (1) the other way would be better
00:34:058 (1) - add finish
00:49:411 (2) - adjust for better flow
01:14:470 (1) - add soft finish
01:34:588 (2) - this plays better if stacked on where 01:33:529 (4) was, and then move 01:34:764 (3) lower to get a good spacing
01:46:411 (4,1) - whoa this overlap, maybe curve 01:46:411 (4) to blanket 01:46:059 (2) instead
01:48:882 (1) - add finish
02:14:470 (4) - curve this the other way without overlapping 02:14:029 (2) looks better imo
02:23:470 - add a note here? feels a bit empty
[Insane]
00:12:000 (4,5,6) - I would make a stream here (add note at 00:12:088 (5) and 00:12:264 (6))
00:43:764 - add a note here and stack on 00:43:235 (4), plays surprisingly well imo
00:53:117 (5) - the overheld slider kinda sound awkward here, just end it on the white tick or end on the red to replace 00:53:470 (6)
00:55:411 (3,5) - Ctrl+G flows better imo
01:14:470 (1) - finish
01:32:735 - add note
01:37:941 (1,2,3) - troll >< use normal spacing or jumps would suit better
01:48:882 (1) - finish
01:57:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - do clock-wise spin so the jump to 01:58:235 (1) is smoother
02:06:706 (3) - NC here instead of 02:06:353 (1) (if ur concerned abt the stack its actually quite readable, but i would move it out of stack in this scenario)
02:08:470 (8,10) - Ctrl+G plays better imo
02:19:941 (4,5) - use the slider first and then the note makes more sense with the music
Thats about all, im gonna leave a star here because this map is amazing for someone who havent had a ranked map yet, so good luck on ranking~