pls don't use the compressed version .-.
FruityEnLoops wrote:
From my queue!
[centre][Sinnoh's Normal]
SV seems a little bit too high. Fine though.
00:12:455 (4) - This one is almost out of the playfield. Move the head a little bit to the left with these 00:13:232 (1,2) - but it's not out of the playfield
00:31:496 (5,1) - You should resnap it to be closer to 1x distance snap. kk
00:50:926 (2) - Would look & flow better like this. 1. rip triangle 2. flow matters way less in a normal 3. slider shap variety
01:20:460 (1) - You should use grey combo, like in the Easy difficulty. there's no colour hax in this set as far as I can tell
01:55:045 (4) - You could rotate this slider so it doesn't overlap with 01:53:685 (2) - . if the slider was extended to 1/1 it would make an oval shape,
01:55:822 (1,2,3,4) - Isn't this1/43/4 blue rythm too much for a Normal? ya but camellia is bonkers
but srs I've introduced a lot of 3/4s throughout the easy section before, I use specific slider shapes only on 3/4. There's enough to help the player read the 3/4
- titan wrote:
normal
00:16:341 (1,3) - these feel really close move (3) down or something idk kk
00:33:050 (3) - hard to read imo (stack it or like move it out from under that slider) fixed
00:45:486 (3,1) - blanket no it's my style
Kyle Y wrote:
Normal
- 00:21:781 (4,5) - 00:24:890 (4) - why not keep consistent? bc if i made it consistent an experienced modder would ask why I didn't make them different
- 00:33:050 (3) - will it hard to read for new players? alr changed
- 00:39:657 (3) - beat sound is on blue tick actually, will you consider to change into 3/4 reversed slider?+ good point for rhythm, but in terms of level design I want to introduce 3/4s in the easier section with less going on.
- 00:41:211 (1,2) - rhythm here is same as 00:47:429 (1,2) - , could you map it consistent? 00:48:983 (3) - has many violin sounds, 00:42:765 (3) - doesn't.
Raising rhythm density on first one means more contrast, better emphasis on the 1/1 as one sound, rather than mapping multiple in next kiai- 00:45:874 (1) - remove nc, you used nc for every 2 beats, why nc put here? ctb habits xP
- 00:54:715 - I think this beat is weak, and I would just ignore it becasue it is a claim part, it is better to keep rhythm as simply as you can. 3/4 introduction, keeping consistent with 00:57:532 (2) -
- 00:55:978 - this beat is quite strong, will it better to have clickable objects? All object are 1/2 apart aside from final one, keeps normal diff easy while using harder rhythms
- 01:15:408 (1,2) - I prefer to have map just a simple 3/2 slider becasue it can make comparison with 01:16:962 (3) - . If you put the rhythm simpler before, and denser at 01:16:962 (3) - , players will feel 01:16:962 (3) - is much more stronger than 01:15:408 (1,2) - , which fit songs more. ok, but used 1/1
- 01:51:936 (5,6) - it is a little bit hard to catch, but I like this rhythm.
ReFaller wrote:
NM from my queue.
[Sinnoh's Normal]
From rhythmical way seems good, but failed a bit with hitsounding.
00:17:118 (2) - you should listen Nerova's difficulties how he used drum-hitnormal sample as a kick. For this one sampleset should be default on white tick.
A few more examples where you made same mistake: I don't want to use the whistle because it doesn't suit the song, it sounds very weird to play with only hitsounds on the slider repeat/tail, so I added to the head to simplify for the sake of low difficulty.
00:18:672 (4)
00:20:227 (2)
00:21:781 (4) - even for circles
But check whole difficulty to find all of them, i am not going to do this, but i will check results of your work for it at last when you will going to fix.
01:22:403 (2) - 0,9x DS with previous note, gg this is 0.96, DS can be slightly variable for better aesthetics/playability. I used smaller distance because this section felt harder to play
box
Only pasting the bottom half bc my computer can't handle japanese characters
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