1. BASIC - 4Key (1,49 stars, 485 notes)
2. HARD - 4Key (3,02 stars, 1144 notes)
3. MEDIUM - 4Key (2,08 stars, 809 notes)
4. SPECIAL - 4Key (4,02 stars, 1433 notes)

Critical_Star | KeppSado

Unpredictable | error_exe777

[B A D] wrote:

FIRST MOD YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA
Hi, my name is Jeff
LET'S GO
You told me note to mod Hitsound diff but I'm a rebel so

Hitsound

Nah, too lazy lul

Quick mod on Basic

Basic

00:03:687 (3687|0) - Remove this actually nope. its to indicate the start emphasis rearrange something around here tho
01:29:443 (89443|1) - Missing note :/ intended tbh. percussion focused
No more problem

Next diff

Medium

00:27:066 (27066|1,27285|1) - Ghost note ummm its a bell noise
00:48:621 (48621|3) - Not actually a ghost note but i would recommend to remove it nope. if I do that then it'll inconsistent with the rest of this section whereas this notes are meant to follow the lead melody. and covering the percussion on some parts as well
The following list is the "Recommend making this a double" compilation:
00:49:237 (49237|3)
00:50:059 (50059|0)
00:50:881 (50881|1)
00:51:703 (51703|0)
00:52:525 (52525|2)
00:53:347 (53347|1)
00:54:169 (54169|3)
And so on I see what are you getting at, but i dont want the pattern to be so dense here. so therefore I only use double when there's a clap or cymbal crash. Kick stays single noted
01:00:744 (60744|0,60950|3,61155|0,61361|3) - Change these to beautiful normal notes The following Long noises seems to disagree :>
01:06:909 (66909|2) - This LN should be started from 01:06:703 sounds true but - 01:06:909 - is where the second pitch lies on. Tho it does revolve around one kind of noises but there's a difference in pitch. this way, people could approach the LN more appropriate
01:06:703 (66703|0) - Remove this note since I didnt do above, so nope :u
01:29:443 (89443|2) - Missing note same explanation as BASIC

Sorry, short mod because the map is too perfecto
Hope this help and GL for ranking

1. 00:08:302 (8302|1,8648|2,10148|1,10379|2) - These got same melody, so I'd recommend to re-arrange the second one. Also, make 00:10:725 (10725|0,10840|2) - these into LNs
2. 00:33:526 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7758172 How about this?
3. 00:48:197 - Add a note here?
4. 00:50:830 - 00:51:446 - 00:52:885 - 00:56:326 - 01:04:597 - 01:06:035 - 01:12:816 - There are melody sound
5. 01:12:868 - Add a note here?
6. 01:43:861 - These could be LNs

1. 00:10:148 (10148|3,10379|1) - Same reason as above
2. 00:21:225 - Add a note for cymbal

Lude wrote:

Lude's M4M
1 / 2 / 3 / 4

[SPECIAL]

1. 00:08:302 (8302|1,8648|2,10148|1,10379|2) - These got same melody, so I'd recommend to re-arrange the second one. Also, make 00:10:725 (10725|0,10840|2) - these into LNs #1 yep #2 nope. I think its better to keep it single note since the noise doesnt exist that long
2. 00:33:526 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7758172 How about this?
3. 00:48:197 - Add a note here?
4. 00:50:830 - Hmm cant hear anything here tho - 00:51:446 - 00:52:885 - 00:56:326 - think i'll let this to focus on the percussion for a while- 01:04:597 - 01:06:035 - 01:12:816 - There are melody sound
5. 01:12:868 - Add a note here?
6. 01:43:861 - These could be LNs want to keep this one. imo its better reflect emphasize this way

[HARD]

1. 00:10:148 (10148|3,10379|1) - Same reason as above
2. 00:21:225 - Add a note for cymbal

Wow there's pretty much almost nothing to point out ;w; if you wish you don't have to mod mine since this is too embarrassing for m4m
Or I'll just mod the 6th one xp Nah no worries. I probably might find a hard time finding something on your map as well so xD

PS. I'll change the m4m map for this: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/516824 if you still wanna mod it!

1. 01:19:049 (79049|0,79223|2,79393|1,79563|3,79734|0,79904|2) - jgn alternate atuh bpmnya seginimah:'
2. 01:42:248 (102248|2,102409|1,102571|3,102732|1,102893|2,103055|0,103216|3,103377|1,103539|2,103700|0,103861|3,103861|1) - ini juga
3. 01:43:861 (103861|3) - ln-able
   kebanyakan alternate sama knp ada 1/4snap di basic yawlaaaa

1. 00:26:847 (26847|3,27066|1,27285|1) - keknya remove ajadeh, soalnya sebelumnya fokus ke kick. kalo applied, 00:26:956 (26956|0,27175|3) - ini bisa dijadiin double.
2. 00:30:460 (30460|2,30679|2) - suaranya beda shay
3. 00:32:759 (32759|0,32978|3) - ini juga remove aja kalo fokusnya kik doangmah
4. 00:38:124 (38124|3) - ln maybe?
5. 00:39:000 (39000|0,39109|1,39219|2) - eh tapi kenapa disinimah beda ama yg atas wwkwk
6. 00:54:991 - double shay
7. 01:06:703 (66703|0) - ini jg bisa dijadiin ln
   udh ah takut nazi mod huehuehuehuehue

1. knp nama file nya ga soft-hitwhistle buat kick, soft-hitclap buat clap, soft-hitfinish bisa diganti ke normal-hitfinish, LR2_Clapblabla ke normal-hitclap, ringing ke normal-hitwhistle. jadinya kan garibet ganti2 timing custom blablabla cmn tinggal gnti sampe set ae
2. eheuheu
3. 00:30:241 (30241|3,30350|2,30460|2,30679|1,30898|2,31117|1,31555|2,31993|2) - tebalik tempatnya:u
4. 00:21:891 (21891|3,22336|3,22447|3,22780|3,22891|3,23002|3,23113|3,23447|3,23558|3,23891|3,24000|3,24109|3,24219|3,24328|3,24766|3,24876|3,24985|3,25095|3,25204|3,25423|3,25642|3,25752|3,25861|3,25971|3,26080|3,26190|3,26299|3,26409|3,26518|3,26628|3,26737|3,26956|3,27175|3,27394|3) - too lmao gapenting bgt ini yawla yule:'D
5. maaf modnya mengaco, aku juga sedang mengaco:'D
6. eh kyknya ngaruh deh posisi every note di diff hs kalo di copas gitu. soalnya (contoh diff hard) 00:03:687 (3687|0,3687|1) - malah jd 30% 30%. hmm yhaa.. u know..

32650,-49.0196078431373,4,2,1,35,0,0
32677,-147.058823529412,4,2,1,35,0,0
32759,-73.5294117647059,4,2,1,35,0,0
32869,-49.0196078431373,4,2,1,35,0,0
32896,-147.058823529412,4,2,1,35,0,0
32978,-73.5294117647059,4,2,1,35,0,0
33088,-49.0196078431373,4,2,1,35,0,0
33115,-147.058823529412,4,2,1,35,0,0
33197,-49.0196078431373,4,2,1,35,0,0
33224,-147.058823529412,4,2,1,35,0,0
33307,-49.0196078431373,4,2,1,35,0,0
33334,-147.058823529412,4,2,1,35,0,0
33416,-49.0196078431373,4,2,1,35,0,0
33443,-147.058823529412,4,2,1,35,0,0
33526,-73.5294117647059,4,2,1,35,0,0
33745,-33.3333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
33772,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
33854,-33.3333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
33881,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
33963,-33.3333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
33991,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
34073,-33.3333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
34100,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
34182,-33.3333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
34210,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
34292,-33.3333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
34319,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
34401,-73.5294117647059,4,2,1,35,0,0

60333,-33.3333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
60359,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,35,0,0
60436,-33.3333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
60462,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,35,0,0
60539,-33.3333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
60564,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,35,0,0
60642,-33.3333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
60667,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,35,0,0
60744,-55.5555555555556,4,2,1,35,0,0

74717,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
75128,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
75539,410.958904109589,4,2,1,35,1,0
75539,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
75949,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
76360,400,4,2,1,35,1,0
76360,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
76760,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
77130,389.61038961039,4,2,1,35,1,0
77130,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
77519,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
77849,379.746835443038,4,2,1,35,1,0
77849,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
78038,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
78208,370.37037037037,4,2,1,35,1,0
78208,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
78393,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
78567,361.44578313253,4,2,1,35,1,0
78567,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
78747,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
78875,348.837209302326,4,2,1,35,1,0
78875,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
78962,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
79049,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
79136,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
79223,340.909090909091,4,2,1,35,1,0
79223,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
79308,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
79393,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
79478,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
79563,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
79649,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
79734,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
79819,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0

Leonita wrote:

ripal owo
[Basic]

1. 01:19:049 (79049|0,79223|2,79393|1,79563|3,79734|0,79904|2) - jgn alternate atuh bpmnya seginimah:' y udh stair biasa aja xd
2. 01:42:248 (102248|2,102409|1,102571|3,102732|1,102893|2,103055|0,103216|3,103377|1,103539|2,103700|0,103861|3,103861|1) - ini juga
3. 01:43:861 (103861|3) - ln-able nah. pgn emphasis aja disini
   kebanyakan alternate sama knp ada 1/4snap di basic yawlaaaa kan masih E icon :'

[Medium]

1. 00:26:847 (26847|3,27066|1,27285|1) - keknya remove ajadeh, soalnya sebelumnya fokus ke kick. kalo applied, 00:26:956 (26956|0,27175|3) - ini bisa dijadiin double.
2. 00:30:460 (30460|2,30679|2) - suaranya beda shay
3. 00:32:759 (32759|0,32978|3) - ini juga remove aja kalo fokusnya kik doangmah sebenernya sih kan kalo suara bel arah stairnya keluar, kalau kick stairnya masuk. its pretty doable imo
4. 00:38:124 (38124|3) - ln maybe? emm gk kayaknya
5. 00:39:000 (39000|0,39109|1,39219|2) - eh tapi kenapa disinimah beda ama yg atas wwkwk nah lo xd
6. 00:54:991 - double shay okeh mb :3
7. 01:06:703 (66703|0) - ini jg bisa dijadiin ln rada gk cocok sih xdxd
   udh ah takut nazi mod huehuehuehuehue aing hitler :v

[Hitsound]

1. knp nama file nya ga soft-hitwhistle buat kick, soft-hitclap buat clap, soft-hitfinish bisa diganti ke normal-hitfinish, LR2_Clapblabla ke normal-hitclap, ringing ke normal-hitwhistle. jadinya kan garibet ganti2 timing custom blablabla cmn tinggal gnti sampe set ae mlz lol. makanya pake HS diff supaya bisa ngecopy ke difflainnya lebih cepet xd. soalnya software buat ngecopy HS nya gk support kalo HS nya cuma C W F doang :v
2. eheuheu ahuehuehu
3. 00:30:241 (30241|3,30350|2,30460|2,30679|1,30898|2,31117|1,31555|2,31993|2) - tebalik tempatnya:u
4. 00:21:891 (21891|3,22336|3,22447|3,22780|3,22891|3,23002|3,23113|3,23447|3,23558|3,23891|3,24000|3,24109|3,24219|3,24328|3,24766|3,24876|3,24985|3,25095|3,25204|3,25423|3,25642|3,25752|3,25861|3,25971|3,26080|3,26190|3,26299|3,26409|3,26518|3,26628|3,26737|3,26956|3,27175|3,27394|3) - too lmao gapenting bgt ini yawla yule:'D yaela wkwkw ini diff cuma buat referensi HS tolong :'D
5. maaf modnya mengaco, aku juga sedang mengaco:'D butuh pelukan :'D
6. eh kyknya ngaruh deh posisi every note di diff hs kalo di copas gitu. soalnya (contoh diff hard) 00:03:687 (3687|0,3687|1) - malah jd 30% 30%. hmm yhaa.. u know.. ya kalo di diff HS ada 60%, tapi di diff hard ada dua note, nanti softwarenya otomatis ngopynya 30% x 2 (kan seimbang tuh jadinya :v

okii gdluck:D

laughingcomet wrote:

Waow another one cause sv's i guess lol

Special

00:32:650 - ~ 00:33:526 - looks super weird imo i can't really say why
i guess making them more aggressive and adding sv's here 00:33:745 - 00:33:854 - might make it better?
smt like this maybe?

32650,-49.0196078431373,4,2,1,35,0,0
32677,-147.058823529412,4,2,1,35,0,0
32759,-73.5294117647059,4,2,1,35,0,0
32869,-49.0196078431373,4,2,1,35,0,0
32896,-147.058823529412,4,2,1,35,0,0
32978,-73.5294117647059,4,2,1,35,0,0
33088,-49.0196078431373,4,2,1,35,0,0
33115,-147.058823529412,4,2,1,35,0,0
33197,-49.0196078431373,4,2,1,35,0,0
33224,-147.058823529412,4,2,1,35,0,0
33307,-49.0196078431373,4,2,1,35,0,0
33334,-147.058823529412,4,2,1,35,0,0
33416,-49.0196078431373,4,2,1,35,0,0
33443,-147.058823529412,4,2,1,35,0,0
33526,-73.5294117647059,4,2,1,35,0,0
33745,-33.3333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
33772,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
33854,-33.3333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
33881,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
33963,-33.3333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
33991,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
34073,-33.3333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
34100,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
34182,-33.3333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
34210,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
34292,-33.3333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
34319,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
34401,-73.5294117647059,4,2,1,35,0,0

Honestly i still prefer my current SVs as they still readable. your current SVs doesnt normalize it to 1, making the scrool looks slower than it should be

01:00:333 - MOAR AGRESSION >:C

60333,-33.3333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
60359,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,35,0,0
60436,-33.3333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
60462,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,35,0,0
60539,-33.3333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
60564,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,35,0,0
60642,-33.3333333333333,4,2,1,35,0,0
60667,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,35,0,0
60744,-55.5555555555556,4,2,1,35,0,0

Maybe? think i could agree on this one xd

change 01:07:987 - and 01:08:090 - to x1 maybe? eh no. its still the part of the stutter

01:14:717 - sv's maybe?

74717,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
75128,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
75539,410.958904109589,4,2,1,35,1,0
75539,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
75949,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
76360,400,4,2,1,35,1,0
76360,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
76760,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
77130,389.61038961039,4,2,1,35,1,0
77130,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
77519,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
77849,379.746835443038,4,2,1,35,1,0
77849,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
78038,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
78208,370.37037037037,4,2,1,35,1,0
78208,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
78393,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
78567,361.44578313253,4,2,1,35,1,0
78567,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
78747,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
78875,348.837209302326,4,2,1,35,1,0
78875,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
78962,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
79049,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
79136,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
79223,340.909090909091,4,2,1,35,1,0
79223,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
79308,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
79393,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
79478,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
79563,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
79649,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0
79734,-50,4,2,1,35,0,0
79819,-10000,4,2,1,35,0,0

uh nope for now xd but i'll keep this in mind
the rest looked fine i think? Gl with the map :3

Rivals_7 wrote:

Leonita wrote:

[Hitsound]

1. knp nama file nya ga soft-hitwhistle buat kick, soft-hitclap buat clap, soft-hitfinish bisa diganti ke normal-hitfinish, LR2_Clapblabla ke normal-hitclap, ringing ke normal-hitwhistle. jadinya kan garibet ganti2 timing custom blablabla cmn tinggal gnti sampe set ae mlz lol. makanya pake HS diff supaya bisa ngecopy ke difflainnya lebih cepet xd. soalnya software buat ngecopy HS nya gk support kalo HS nya cuma C W F doang :v
   pake copier apa? aku support2 aja eh.-. malah kalo pake c w f lebih gampang imo, volume nya jg gk kebagi2
2. eheuheu ahuehuehu
3. 00:30:241 (30241|3,30350|2,30460|2,30679|1,30898|2,31117|1,31555|2,31993|2) - tebalik tempatnya:u
4. 00:21:891 (21891|3,22336|3,22447|3,22780|3,22891|3,23002|3,23113|3,23447|3,23558|3,23891|3,24000|3,24109|3,24219|3,24328|3,24766|3,24876|3,24985|3,25095|3,25204|3,25423|3,25642|3,25752|3,25861|3,25971|3,26080|3,26190|3,26299|3,26409|3,26518|3,26628|3,26737|3,26956|3,27175|3,27394|3) - too lmao gapenting bgt ini yawla yule:'D yaela wkwkw ini diff cuma buat referensi HS tolong :'D
   iyaa tapi ntar pas di copy ada yg ketubruk gitu(?) teserah sih, biar lebih rapi aja imo. jd gak ada yg ke double2 hitsonnya.
5. maaf modnya mengaco, aku juga sedang mengaco:'D butuh pelukan :'D
   peluk ama rido tapi:'D
6. eh kyknya ngaruh deh posisi every note di diff hs kalo di copas gitu. soalnya (contoh diff hard) 00:03:687 (3687|0,3687|1) - malah jd 30% 30%. hmm yhaa.. u know.. ya kalo di diff HS ada 60%, tapi di diff hard ada dua note, nanti softwarenya otomatis ngopynya 30% x 2 (kan seimbang tuh jadinya :v
   gaboleh shay kalo mau di rank mah. 2 note gabisa setengah2. tanya deh temen2 yg lain, da gaboleh uwu

okii gdluck:D

Umo- wrote:

1-4

Medium

00:27:832 - why not add doubles here every 1/1 snap like you did at the beginning of the song? the beginning has snare and kick coming each other. the second only has kick (and low snare). considering the second song still has a calm nature, i dont want this to be really dense.
+ some of the notes are placed in 1/4 roll so its to give more flexible playability
00:33:745 - add note to 1 to make it double because there is some kind of crash sound hmm was intended for the distort vocal overall tho
00:38:343 - make this double because the vocal suddenly get stronger at that part
01:29:443 - missing note? kinda intended since the kick structure arent like before ( - 01:28:124 (88124|0,88289|3,88454|2) - )
01:42:087 (102087|0) - this note sounds like that it should start around somewhere here 01:42:060 -
01:48:151 - missing note?
01:50:405 - ^ ^ only highlighting the piano roll
01:57:515 (117515|2) - meybe make this a LN and extend it to 01:57:862 - because the snare sound fades out uh dont think so. its kinda weird
02:11:561 (131561|2) - when I listen to that note it sounds diffrend from this note 02:11:388 (131388|2) - so meybe move 02:11:561 (131561|2) - to 4?

hard

01:06:909 - meybe like this? i'll consider this later i guess
01:08:142 - make this triple because sound suddenly gets louder at that part the movement is quite awkward tho. i prefer not to

Special

00:20:302 (20302|1,20302|3,20302|0) - meybe make that triple diffrend from this one? 00:19:840 (19840|0,19840|3,19840|1) - it'll make quite an unecessary jacks. would keep this for now
00:47:759 (47759|2,47759|3,47869|2,47869|3,47978|3,47978|2) - I dont really think that pattern is necessary because this double 00:47:869 (47869|3,47869|2) - sounds diffrend from other 2 so meybe move 00:47:869 (47869|3,47869|2) - to 1 and 2 those are the same claps sound.

Nice map
Good Luck

OwenF04 wrote:

hello

i'm hoping to mod this before anyone snabs the spot on your mod queue lol

special

out of all the notes in this section, 00:07:263 (7263|0) seems to be the only ghost note

00:07:263 (7263|0) - there should be more LN's as there is more to the sound. this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8719622 too little to get an attention so would like to not add it. to keep things consistent with the rest of the section

00:47:212 (47212|0,47212|1) - CTRL+H..? it works, and shows the differ between the sounds better. if you do then CTRL+H these 00:47:759 (47759|2,47759|3,47869|2,47869|3,47978|3,47978|2,48088|0,48197|3) - thats kinda uncomfy to me imo. would keep this for now

00:57:662 (57662|1) - why didn't you do the thing like this 00:52:833 (52833|1,52885|2,52936|3) ?

01:10:813 (70813|2) - ^^

02:15:896 (135896|3) - why don't you extend it to 02:20:058 ? it's literally only another 2 seconds guitar strings end there.

Hard

00:45:131 (45131|2) - ghost..? no sound uh vocals

00:45:788 (45788|3,46007|0,46226|2,46445|1) - what are these representing? if it's the vocal thing, only the first two are needed, and if it's the other sound that i can't describe then they weren't presented as sliders before its represent both vocals and long melody

01:29:278 - i don't see any point behind this gap. even if there is, it suits better with it mapped different kick structure. see - 01:28:124 (88124|1,88124|0,88289|3,88289|2,88454|1,88454|0) -

02:15:810 (135810|2) - avoid the jack somehow lol shield pattern=/= jacks lel

02:15:896 (135896|3) - again i recommend extending this like in special same

Basic

00:30:241 (30241|3,30350|2,30460|1) .1/4 stairs in an easy? even though it's quite slow, i think it's too hard

02:15:896 (135896|0) - extend like before same

good luck!

error_exe777 wrote:

shit happened in 10 months

WARNING: This map needs over 12 Star Priority BEFORE it should be considered for ranking/bubbling
Please focus your modding on maps which have higher star priorities first! sp :thinking:

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[General]

1. aimod in hard and medium fixed
   
   
2. i assume you got metadata from somewhere from this btw. sounds ok to me, its also where i got my 4th kac meta as well but i might ask on metadata heap i think just for sure
   
   else fine

[SPECIAL]

00:07:610 - it's not a problem but, any reason why you ended up phasing in the LNs despite the sound being present right from the start?

00:26:956 (26956|0,26956|3,27066|2,27175|1,27175|0,27285|2) - pattern here is behind a quite held out chime sound so it could make sense to have them more LN based over the typical jumpstream you have here e.g. http://prntscr.com/jgpskl or likewise agree. do it a lil different

00:40:314 (40314|2,40423|3,40533|2) - more for flow, could move the trill here from completely on the right hand to having it between both, kinda like http://prntscr.com/jgq3pu

00:46:226 (46226|0,46226|1) - confused as to why this is a double LN, since the two below i assume have the vocals representing the extra LN when this one doesnt have an LN here. id personally just opt for having it as a single LN

00:54:091 (54091|2) - the 1/4th notes are covering the melody but theres no sound for the melody here, so should probably delete. could then have it flow into the next part with an LN like so http://prntscr.com/jgq5vr maybe mmh i think i heard something like a build-up melody alongside the main melody. guess i'll keep it for now

01:13:714 (73714|1,73714|0) - i mean, since the reverb ends at around the blue tick i would've extended it to there and have it shield with the notes above (shouldn't flow bad since bpm is low) i'd say i prefer this reverb to be unmapped. they're not so important thing to be mapped imo

01:27:135 (87135|3,87135|1,87135|0,87135|2) - hmm, quads for a cymbal isnt something i can agree with. since the cymbal is barely audible here compared to the rest of the sounds, a quad probably places a bit too much emphasis on the sound there. id go for the triple which shows the cymbal effectively without so much emphasis isnt the cymbal is actually loud? at least i think it is, hence the quad

01:30:102 (90102|2,90102|3,90267|0,90267|1,90762|3,90926|0) - why'd you have these different? im sure the sounds are the same intensity so i would've had them either both as double LNs or both single LNs.

01:43:834 (103834|2,103834|0,103834|1,103834|3) - could be cool to have these as LNs and then have them end at 01:44:963 - progressively as the sounds fade, eg http://prntscr.com/jgqatf i particularly like this kind of emphasizing rather than have them all LN. i think that captures the feelings more better

02:10:975 - not particularly a fan of skipping the sound here, id suggest adding it since the sound is present here

02:15:917 (135917|0) - idk if you'd be up for it, but an idea would be to also make this an LN extending out after the existing one, and ending at 02:20:079 - where it begins to fade out? (that being said spread is a problem but /s)

[HARD]

00:54:091 (54091|2) - similar to top diff, im almost certain there isnt a note in the melody to support this ^

00:59:947 (59947|0,59947|3,60153|3,60153|0) - i would actually prefer if these were a different pattern since [14] was used at 01:00:769 - for a difference sound so it'd help differentiate the two

01:21:531 - since theres more emphasis on this sound than on 01:21:778 (81778|0,81778|3) - , i would rearrange the objects similar to so http://prntscr.com/jgs4em to give that emphasis

01:36:899 (96899|1,96899|2,97060|2,97060|3) - why'd you suddenly break consistency here? you seem to just have the 1/2 jumptrills for the kicks like these so it would make sense to keep consistent

01:43:834 (103834|2,103834|3,103834|0) - perhaps a similar suggestion to top diff here? same as well

02:02:738 - here, since the sounds are pretty muffled, i would overlap some of the LNs to represent that in a way http://prntscr.com/jgs5cp , and then phase back into normal LNs as they because less muffled

02:12:969 (132969|1,133056|0,133143|2,133230|1,133316|0,133490|2,133663|0,133750|1,133837|2,133952|0,134068|1,134183|2,134299|1,134415|0,134530|2) - patterns here seems awfully left hand biased,unless it was intended i'd try to balance it out a bit more

[MEDIUM]

01:26:476 (86476|3,86641|1,86806|3,86970|1,87135|3) - not a massive problem, but the transition into the double here is a bit uncomfortable due to this trill here

01:37:544 - i meannnnn, hard is full 1/2 rhythms here and you've just got the basic LN here. to aid with some sort of spread, you could add notes every 1/1 along with the LNs to close it slightly

01:43:834 (103834|3,103834|0) - yeah same suggestions here as well, but less complex uhhh same

01:57:536 (117536|2) - how about moving this to col 1? the [14] pattern will place more emphasis on the sound over the closed [12] like patterns and it would fit since the sound is more intense

[BASIC]

diff feels really distant spread wise from medium, but i guess its not a massive problem yea its quite hard to maintain the layering in-between because the SR algorithm is meh xd and i really want this to be below 1.5* to be beginner friendly

00:26:956 - how about adding an LN here for the chimes? like http://prntscr.com/jgs8vv

01:07:345 (67345|3,67756|1) - could be cool to have these overlap in cols [23] to give some differentiation between the more muffled LN below

01:43:834 (103834|1,103834|3) - yeah same here LNs aa eeee tooo .3.

02:02:738 (122738|1,123085|2) - maybe overlap these two as well?

hitsounds with re-checks™

error_exe777 wrote:

[HITSOUND]

make sure you delete all storyboard hitsounds when applying them over

00:38:562 (38562|1) - clap instead?

01:46:785 (106785|3) - as for these ringing sounds, i kinda feel they are slightly loud and kinda overpower the song in this section. id reduce to smth like 30-40% vol

01:57:536 (117536|3,117536|2) - any need to have 2 claps here? if you want it louder id just increase the volume of it to 100% and have the one o right it shouldnt be there. keep it as one @70%

02:06:206 (126206|1) - missing finish

02:15:224 - 02:15:917 - how about adding the ringing sound here? same vol suggestion as well hmmm doesnt sounds fit imo so i'll keep it

[SPECIAL]

01:29:773 (89773|3,89773|2,89855|1,89855|0,89937|2,89937|3,90020|0,90020|1) - now that i think about it, shouldnt these also be minjacks like 01:30:432 - , or vice versa actually i'd prefer this. mainly because for variation sake

else is cool

Unpredictable wrote:

alright sorry for delaying this for god knows how long, let me see how much i could get done here.

first off, let me just say that i believe Leniane is right here. unsure how noticable it is at lower scroll speeds, but you can tell its a bit faster when playing at higher scroll speed like 30. would fix this as soon as possible.

General

Looks pretty good, i would just add "konami bemani" to the tags since they are affiliated with the game itself.

BASIC

- 01:06:728 - how about adding a note on column 2 here since that fade-in sound is pretty noticeable as well. i'm not really favoring 5 consecutive notes in basic so uhh i think its pretty okay to leave a break

- 01:46:785 (106785|0,106785|3) - how about deleting a note and then from 01:46:253 - to 01:46:785 - adding a LN between the two points i mentioned. I think there should be some sort of build up that leads up to 01:46:785 (106785|0,106785|3) - , preferably nothing too big but I think an LN from 01:46:253 - to 01:46:785 - should be ok. i guess i'll pass this to keep consistent with the higher diffs.

- how about just ctrl + h 01:54:935 (114935|2,115108|3) - these notes. i think it looks better aestehetically (lol) but i find the 1/1 stack you have to be a bit unnecessary imo did things here

- 01:00:769 (60769|3,60975|2) - and 01:01:180 (61180|0,61386|1) - it would be cool if you made each of them a 1/2 stack since they're same sound. i dont think that would fit this diff in particular.

- 01:30:926 (90926|1,91091|2,91256|0,91421|1,91751|3,91915|2,92080|1,92245|0,92382|3,92383|2,92705|1) - hmm how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11367630 ? I basically ctrl + h most of it with some exception of moving some notes. I just felt like the LNs were a bit too left hand oriented and so with this pattern im offering, it can offer LN usage to columns 3 and 4 as well. did my own fix

- 01:40:770 (100770|3,101092|0,101253|1,101415|3,102060|0) - instead of this, how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11367708 ? i thought it could kinda mimic 01:29:773 (89773|1,90102|3,90267|2,90432|0,90762|3,90926|1,91091|2) - where the LNs are on columns 1 and 2 and the ones mentioned could be on 3 and 4. also the rhythm between the two are quite similar. decided to do it similarly like - 01:30:936 - for consistency. i forget this one xd

MEDIUM

- 01:21:201 (81201|1) - i would just honestly just delete this because I don't think you need two LNs for a drumroll, 1 is just fine. But I think you could add notes here 01:21:696 - and 01:21:531 - since the sounds on these notes are a bit more accentuated. fixed in my way. also i just realized the spread gap is kinda big so did that too

other than that, this diff looks good yo

HARD

- this is a tad bit weird but the difficulty name in the song setup box is "Hard" but the diff name shown on the website and in-game is "HARD"..? unsure whats the deal but maybe you might want to recapitalize the diff name in the song setup box so there isn't any complications osu is a weirdo because everytime i type HARD it decapitilize it lol. so to alter it I add a space after HARD so its "HARD "

- 02:12:160 (132160|1,132218|0) - i think it would be better if you got rid of these. these sounds here are extremely subtle to the point you can them out of a diff like this. it would just be better if they were just in the top diff imo.

pretty clean and simple for the most part.

SPECIAL

nothing yet

haven't finished check yet since i have some stuff irl to finish up (sorry), ill be looking at the special and hitsounds a bit more in detail for the next time. although on first glance, the patterns in special seem fine.

ill either edit this post or make a new one, depending on when you respond

Unpredictable wrote:

Ok let me fully finish this :3 (no kudos for this post ofc)

SPECIAL

So overall, the patterning is pretty solid imo.

If I had to say anything on the patterning, it would be:

- 01:27:135 (87135|3,87135|1,87135|0,87135|2) - i would honestly just make this a triple because I think a quad is a bit overdoing it on this tick. idk i think its kinda fit to emphasize those

- 02:12:160 (132160|2,132218|3) - so these notes, im not to sure in tbh and if it were me, i would personally get rid of them. For one, 02:12:160 (132160|2) - im pretty sure this on the 1/8 tick but 02:12:218 (132218|3) - im sure this doesn't even have a sound correlated with this note. i think you're ok just leaving them out imo because they are quite unnoticeable (even if there is sound there) to the point I would just ignore it. i think i just realized that they are 1/4th piano similar to others so yeah i fix to that. (completely rid them in HARD tho)

01:59:964 - add a note here? you have a LN and a note on the hard diff so i think its appropraiate to add one here on this diff as well. also if you add it, make sure to add a kick hitsound w/ 60% volume

Now my main concerns would be the SVs on this diff, not too many but theres two SV parts I felt like that are a bit... aggressive (wasn't sure how to describe it lol).

- 00:32:978 - to 00:33:526 - i felt like the SVs were a bit overwhelming here, i kept playing this part over and over and its not like its impossible to hit, but i feel like you can make some values a bit more comfortable to where it doesn't feel like the SV isn't totally jumping out at the player idk it feels like it is just normal. its a 1,5 0,5 thing (with normalization ofc) so i assume no one will have an issue. maybe the pattern is a bit tricky but the SVs is totally common

- 01:00:769 - to 01:01:488 - same deal here. the sv values here i felt like can be lowered a tad bit. this is 2x ->1x which is kinda intended to give the "repeating" feeling since the song sounds like that.

Hitsounds

- To starts things off, I know you had set your kick hitsound to a certain volume level on each note, but would it be possible to amplify it in audacity maybe..? I feel like it has a ton of potential making the map even more awesome than it is :3, but it really does get drowned out by just your regular hitnormal. (for ex. 00:32:650 - to 00:33:416 - ) the only times i actually hear the kick when there are two kicks or more on one tick, but even then, its still a bit hard to hear imo. is when i think if you could fix this, then I think your hitsounds could all be on some equal volume level. amplified 2 db.

SPECIAL: 00:06:456 (6456|0) - pretty sure you would want another kick here, you have two kick hitsounds here on other diffs too woops :u

feel free to pm me when you're done looking at this

Maxus wrote:

the one at 00:23:891 - need another +10 offset here, as the kick is noticeably early at all the section with the same BPM.

Maxus wrote:

01:15:539 - should be +15ms

01:16:360 - Should be -14ms

01:17:130 - Should be -18ms

01:17:849 - Should be -10ms

01:18:208 - Should be -10ms too

01:18:567 - Should be -20ms

01:18:875 - Should be +10ms

Maxus wrote:

01:19:223 - I don't know if you take this BPM from game / you time it yourself, but either way, i still think the BPM for this should be 180 BPM. Because you can notice the chord at 01:19:734 (79734|0,79734|3,79734|2) - suddenly becoming too late even when the initial chord of BPM changes actually already fit, it is usually a firm indication that the BPM is wrong. I tested 180 BPM and it actually far more fits.

Maxus wrote:

01:32:383 - The offset is actually too early by around 20ms, it should be started at 01:32:403 - . The most noticeable way to hear that is to listen towards the kick sound in the entire jumpstream section, which is very early to the point it's really noticeable to play.

Maxus wrote:

Hmm, I'm not sure about the offset and timing of this map, seems a lot going wrong somehow.

the one at 00:23:891 - need another +10 offset here, as the kick is noticeably early at all the section with the same BPM. +10 seems to be placed in almost at the tail end of the kicks somehow. practically my current one is rather more accurate since its placed in where the kick starts to get in. covering the whole sequence rather than taking only its peak. probably more accurate for acc players but i dont mind having this fixed anyway since its like small differences

From 01:15:539 - until 01:18:875 - There's quite a lot of offset being wrong from what i listen. I will list it one by one.

01:15:539 - should be +15ms similar reason ^

01:16:360 - Should be -14ms I think of -25 on this. likewise to above

01:17:130 - Should be -18ms

01:17:849 - Should be -10ms

01:18:208 - Should be -10ms too

01:18:567 - Should be -20ms

01:18:875 - Should be +10ms likewise to above

01:19:223 - I don't know if you take this BPM from game / you time it yourself, but either way, i still think the BPM for this should be 180 BPM. Because you can notice the chord at 01:19:734 (79734|0,79734|3,79734|2) - suddenly becoming too late even when the initial chord of BPM changes actually already fit, it is usually a firm indication that the BPM is wrong. I tested 180 BPM and it actually far more fits. the more i heard it i feels its more to 182 instead ok psure it is indeed 182. original Quaver only had 182-186 on their version so i assume there shouldnt be any 180 on this

01:32:383 - The offset is actually too early by around 20ms, it should be started at 01:32:403 - . The most noticeable way to hear that is to listen towards the kick sound in the entire jumpstream section, which is very early to the point it's really noticeable to play. i cant tell so i tend to actually agree lol

Feel free to discussed about it if you think it's already fit, but i'm really sure about the mis-timing here, as it's noticeable even in gameplay.

Rivals_7 wrote:

the one at 00:23:891 - need another +10 offset here, as the kick is noticeably early at all the section with the same BPM. +10 seems to be placed in almost at the tail end of the kicks somehow. practically my current one is rather more accurate since its placed in where the kick starts to get in. covering the whole sequence rather than taking only its peak. probably more accurate for acc players but i dont mind having this fixed anyway since its like small differences
From what i heard, the sound doesn't even started when it's 10ms earlier. Usually when you tried to do offset and also hear the other sound at one section within the same BPM, you need to try stop the sound at exact point and hear whether there's sound on the beginning point or not, which doesn't happened here. so i'm really concerned about this. I still really recommend to fix this one.

From 01:15:539 - until 01:18:875 - There's quite a lot of offset being wrong from what i listen. I will list it one by one.

01:15:539 - should be +15ms similar reason ^ ^same

01:16:360 - Should be -14ms I think of -25 on this. likewise to above t's around -15 / 20ms at best imo , but yeah, i recommend around that range.

01:17:130 - Should be -18ms

01:17:849 - Should be -10ms

01:18:208 - Should be -10ms too

01:18:567 - Should be -20ms

01:18:875 - Should be +10ms likewise to above ^same.

01:19:223 - I don't know if you take this BPM from game / you time it yourself, but either way, i still think the BPM for this should be 180 BPM. Because you can notice the chord at 01:19:734 (79734|0,79734|3,79734|2) - suddenly becoming too late even when the initial chord of BPM changes actually already fit, it is usually a firm indication that the BPM is wrong. I tested 180 BPM and it actually far more fits. the more i heard it i feels its more to 182 instead ok psure it is indeed 182. original Quaver only had 182-186 on their version so i assume there shouldnt be any 180 on this fair enough, i'm fine with 182.

01:32:383 - The offset is actually too early by around 20ms, it should be started at 01:32:403 - . The most noticeable way to hear that is to listen towards the kick sound in the entire jumpstream section, which is very early to the point it's really noticeable to play. i cant tell so i tend to actually agree lol

Feel free to discussed about it if you think it's already fit, but i'm really sure about the mis-timing here, as it's noticeable even in gameplay.

else is yeah.... i dont think i have anything to against that so woosh