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Overall some of the difficulties are quite messy, so my mod here will just be a quicker overview. Only modding the two hardest difficulties because I feel there are more issues there and they probably extend to the lower ones.
[Lv.35]
General / Awkward patterns
- This map tends to be quite over-chorded. For example, the pattern at 00:31:129 - 00:31:543 - doesn't seem to make any sense. Why are there triples there? How does the sound at 00:31:543 - warrant a quad? etc.
- Further example: 00:48:094 - This is just way too much. Holding down LNs already decreases the mobility of the hands and you want to have random jacks in there as well. Way over-chorded, the triplets seem to just be placed at random.
- 00:51:301 (51301|3,51405|3,51612|3,51715|3) - Space jacks are not good.
Odd use of LNs
- In this difficulty the LNs just seem to appear and disappear at will. For example near the start you have LNs in groups of 4 (like at 00:28:646 (28646|1,28750|4,28853|2,28956|4) - ) when the LN sounds are really present throughout.
- A lot of LNs could be replaced by normal notes for just the same effect, the sounds don't even really sound like LNs.
- Sections like 00:40:232 - 00:41:474 - are really really weird to me because why is there an LN wall there
- 01:26:267 - 01:27:818 - as above
- 01:45:612 - around this point it seems like you're just throwing out LNs without being aware of the repercussions. Can you even play this? (I'll be honest: I can't)
- You also have a lot of weird release times for LNs, like this one 01:50:370 (110370|1) -
[Lv. 24]
Awkward patterns
00:28:232 - Patterns in this stream part are kind of awkward, for example:
- spacebar usage like here 00:30:094 (30094|3,30301|3,30508|3,30715|3) - .
- bracket patterns like these 00:32:267 (32267|5,32370|4,32370|6) - are somewhat awkward to play.
- this section tends to feel somewhat empty and a little boring, since it's just the whole 3/1/1/1/3/1/1/1/... thing repeated.
- anchors are annoying like 00:35:681 (35681|1,35681|0,35784|2,35887|1,35991|2,36094|1) - is too hard for a 4.09* map imo.
- patterns like these: 01:09:612 - to 01:10:232 - extremely awkward to play for a 4.09* map. consider revising so there are less jacks.
- 01:42:715 - the anchors here (02:08:163 (128163|4,128267|5,128370|4,128474|5,128577|4,128681|5) - ) are just like uuuuuuugh
Odd use of LNs
- 01:14:577 - This section is very LN-heavy, when normal notes (I feel) would have the same effect or a very similar one without making it so much harder to play. For example the pattern at 01:37:750 - sounds similar and is much more comfortable to play.
- 01:35:681 (95681|5) - LNs like these are sometimes used when the sound doesn't really sound like an LN. Can be quite annoying while playing.
- 01:42:715 - Here we go again. The shorter LNs could easily be replaced by normal notes.
Overall: Currently, your map seems to have a lot of patterns which are rather awkward positioning-wise to play. More playability would be nice.
Overall some of the difficulties are quite messy, so my mod here will just be a quicker overview. Only modding the two hardest difficulties because I feel there are more issues there and they probably extend to the lower ones.
[Lv.35]
General / Awkward patterns
- This map tends to be quite over-chorded. For example, the pattern at 00:31:129 - 00:31:543 - doesn't seem to make any sense. Why are there triples there? How does the sound at 00:31:543 - warrant a quad? etc.
- Further example: 00:48:094 - This is just way too much. Holding down LNs already decreases the mobility of the hands and you want to have random jacks in there as well. Way over-chorded, the triplets seem to just be placed at random.
- 00:51:301 (51301|3,51405|3,51612|3,51715|3) - Space jacks are not good.
Odd use of LNs
- In this difficulty the LNs just seem to appear and disappear at will. For example near the start you have LNs in groups of 4 (like at 00:28:646 (28646|1,28750|4,28853|2,28956|4) - ) when the LN sounds are really present throughout.
- A lot of LNs could be replaced by normal notes for just the same effect, the sounds don't even really sound like LNs.
- Sections like 00:40:232 - 00:41:474 - are really really weird to me because why is there an LN wall there
- 01:26:267 - 01:27:818 - as above
- 01:45:612 - around this point it seems like you're just throwing out LNs without being aware of the repercussions. Can you even play this? (I'll be honest: I can't)
- You also have a lot of weird release times for LNs, like this one 01:50:370 (110370|1) -
[Lv. 24]
Awkward patterns
00:28:232 - Patterns in this stream part are kind of awkward, for example:
- spacebar usage like here 00:30:094 (30094|3,30301|3,30508|3,30715|3) - .
- bracket patterns like these 00:32:267 (32267|5,32370|4,32370|6) - are somewhat awkward to play.
- this section tends to feel somewhat empty and a little boring, since it's just the whole 3/1/1/1/3/1/1/1/... thing repeated.
- anchors are annoying like 00:35:681 (35681|1,35681|0,35784|2,35887|1,35991|2,36094|1) - is too hard for a 4.09* map imo.
- patterns like these: 01:09:612 - to 01:10:232 - extremely awkward to play for a 4.09* map. consider revising so there are less jacks.
- 01:42:715 - the anchors here (02:08:163 (128163|4,128267|5,128370|4,128474|5,128577|4,128681|5) - ) are just like uuuuuuugh
Odd use of LNs
- 01:14:577 - This section is very LN-heavy, when normal notes (I feel) would have the same effect or a very similar one without making it so much harder to play. For example the pattern at 01:37:750 - sounds similar and is much more comfortable to play.
- 01:35:681 (95681|5) - LNs like these are sometimes used when the sound doesn't really sound like an LN. Can be quite annoying while playing.
- 01:42:715 - Here we go again. The shorter LNs could easily be replaced by normal notes.
Overall: Currently, your map seems to have a lot of patterns which are rather awkward positioning-wise to play. More playability would be nice.